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46 year old woman in NC. Just here to read stories!
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515055
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
What a cliffie! I hope you will be updating soon! Please let James get captured before he hurts someone!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James
Yes! Finally some action against James. Well, it is time, since he got away from his earlier capture.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
Yay! I finally figured out how to set an alert for new chapters, so I got a notification about this chapter promptly!!
Good chapter. I was kinda surprised by Bella's being so calm locked in the trunk, but I guess she just KNEW that she had to be strong for Victoria. (Once I was traveling with a friend who was sorta high strung and excitable. We had a flat, and I tried to be especially calm since I did not want to upset her. Once I had unloaded the truck to get to the spare tire, I had no idea what to do next, but someone stopped just then to help us! I guess Bella was doing the same calming thing for V.)
James to Aro -- that sounds good! Will give some insight into Aro.
Keep up the good work!
Emory
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
Wow! James REALLY got his come-uppance! I am thinking that this is the end of him, but if you want to tell more about his FATE in the next chapter, that is fine with me!
This has been an amazing ride.
Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.
Banner by Mkystich
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144852
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great start! This was rec'd to me by dlpash.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I hope you enjoy the rest of it!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
All 8 of them are doctors! That is unusual, but I like it!
Keep up the good work!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
E & B are perfect together. I hope Jacob does not hurt anyone, but that would be good for drama....
keep up the good work.
France 1830
After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
"Enter" He voiced and his steward, Aro Volturi, ---- I like that Aro is a servant! He is usually the bad guy, but Edward deserves not to have Aro as his enemy for once.
Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick
You just keep on upping the hotness! How do you come up with this stuff?
I knew someone was going to get Bella! I figured it was going to be Eric. I hate to think what Ang will do! SHE probably set B & E up at the ball and the hotel so she would know exactly where they were!
Please update soon!
Author's Response:
We have to bring the hotness it's a must for our story. So we threw you a curve ball. You thought it was Eric but it was crazy Ang. We are writing the next chapter. It's all most done. Then it goes to our betas.
Thank you for another awesome review BB!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2
You made that super hot! The way you described so precisley what Bella was doing made me afraid that at any minute, Eric would leap out and get her! THANKS for not going there!
I do think that Eric bought the tickets and sent them there. I hate to think what he has in mind. But what do I know? Maybe I am 100% off base, and he will never be a problem again! *crosses fingers*
Author's Response:
LOL we can't tell you if your right or wrong. We thought Kitten and Spartan need some one on one time. Dont you :)
Thank you so very much for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection
Uh, oh. I am afraid something bad has gone down between Bella and Laurent. BUt I think the next chapter has his name as the title, so I should find out!
You have Angela way OOC in this story! Good job!
I have never heard of one of these kinds of parties!
Author's Response:
yah i had a client tell me about this type of party....so i told ari the story and we went from there
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent
In the prior chapter, I thought Edward passed Laurent in the hall on the way to the room. In this one, Edward appeared in the room and pulled L off of B. Maybe the next chapter will help me understand.
SO SAD! I of course hate to see Edward suffer! Please treat him well!
I had to go back and check these lines from Ch. 1. I was thinking she said it was a 4 hour drive, and I was thinking, there is NO WAY! ----- I hate my country style house that's in the middle of fucking nowhere. I work in downtown Seattle for god's sake. Why would I want to live in Timbuktu? Well that's how I feel every morning and night when I make the hour drive back and forth to work. If I had my way, I would be living in the core of downtown Seattle, maybe in a penthouse in the tallest high-rise.
Author's Response:
yah he past laurent in hall and got hit in the head...while edward was out laurent went to bella....hope it made sense...xoxoxoxo and yah she doesnt live that far but for someone like me that thinks 10 min drive is far i call everything timbukto hahahahha
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think
Ang is messing things up for B & E!! I trust you to give them a HEA, though!!
I am glad that that B & E finally know who each other is.
I wonder if there will be anymore parties since they now know each other in real life!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy
Good job! All 4 of them on a date --- Wild!
Jealous Bella is funny! I expect to see more of her!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness
So Bella is going to leave Eric. I knew that would happen!
I had forgotten about Ben, but I still think that Ang and Eric will end up together!
I trust that next chapter will be Edward!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings
How in the world did he do that much damage in such a short time? Poor Bella --- her quilt!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Some funny stuff has been going on! Good job!
I am so ready for them to be together! Bella dumped Eric; now Edward and Ang need to split. Maybe with Edward being in Bella's room that will happen soon!
Author's Response:
:) We're so glad you like it so far. We all are ready for them to be together. Keep your fingers crossed!
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's
Edward under the bed -- too good! And what he had to hear? Priceless!
Ang mentioned Ben, but it did not seem that Edward questioned either B or A about him.
Angela is so clueless, but I guess that will make things easier for B & E.
I can't wait for B & E to be together all the time.
At this point, is Edward still in the period when he told Emm he would be away from the office for a few days?
Good job!
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Use Somebody
You have some amazing "banners" for your chapters! Impressive!
"The E must stand for Elmo!" --- Dream on Edward. LOL!
"The way her hair was pulled up, exposing her long neck, made me want to bite and suck on for breakfast." --- Edward is thinking vamp-like!
Did Ang figure it out? If so, how??
You just won't let me stop reading for the night, will you? I have to know what happens next!
Author's Response:
:) We're glad you like our banners. LOL E for Elmo I love it. Yes he was channeling in inter vamp LOL. Nope we want you to keep reading :) Reviews makes us very very very happy!
Thank you so much for your awesome review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Don't You Put it in Your Mouth --- TOTALLY bizarre! But I see why it was funny....
GREAT lines!!! ---- Angela, quite frankly, is a witch. Possibly scarier than the wicked witch of the west. I knew that from now on every time I see her coming, I'm going to think of the song that played in Wizard of Oz. And, every time I watch it I will see Angela on the bike, pedaling like a psycho bitch to, tada- tada-ta- da-da.
I guessed I missed this: How did Ang track down B & E, and how did she get to the hotel? Emm didn't pick her up, did he? Or did she SAY she knew where Edward was to trick Emm to say where he was? I def didn't get it all!
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2
Hot Christmas! I hope they get to Emm's house sometime!
Ang is being a pain! I think Eric is making those disturbing phone calls!
I look forward to seeing where you take the story next.
Author's Response:
Yes they go to Em's house...keep reading heheh.....xoxox thanks for reviewing and wait till u see who's calling.........
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period
I really hope that Ang is not going to create too big a problem.
Good job! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Were so happy ur enjoying so far.....xoxoxoxoxo thank you for reviewing....DLIR AND ARI
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies
I have been hoping that Edward would have a show-down with his mother. That should be good!
I hope his mother is Elizabeth and not Esme.....
Go Jess, keeping B & E's secret a SECRET! I didn't know she had it in her!
Keep up the good work. This is quite a story. I feel so sorry for Bella! Hang in there, girl.
Author's Response:
:) well the chapter should be back from our Beta's this weekend so it should up soon enough. What happens with his mother is great, Ari wrote it well. Hope you enjoy it xoxoxoxoxoxo
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
My mother has more money than brains! What's that's dudes name from those vampire movies? Robert Peterson…Robert Peckerson? Oh well anyways, I bet his house isn't half the size as my mother's house. --- LOL!! That is my kind of humor!
ESME is SO OOC! I thought I would hate it, but it is really kind of fascinating!
And NOW to know she is not E's mother??? Unreal! What a twist! Good job!
Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much and yah Ari is hilarious....I always Laugh out loud the first time I read her part of the chapter...hahah...Peckerson hahahhaha...oh man.....and Esme not being his mother....was a great twist we threw in and isnt the last xoxoxoxoxo heres a teaser xoxoxo
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance
Weird Al?? I can't believe that, but for Emm in THIS story, I guess it is perfect!
Carlisle has been shot?? Say it ain't so!
I hope no one ELSE was just shot. Unless it was Esme.
I can't believe I said that! I have NEVER read of an Esme who is THIS evil!! That is some MAJOR OOC!! And fascinating!
You keep writing cliffies so I can't stop reading for the night! I hope you don't keep me up until 3 am.
Keep on keeping on!
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale
You have killed off a BUNCH of people!
I have gotten SO far behind in this story!! I have really missed it! But I am about to be caught up so keep up the good work!
Please get E & B together quickly!
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Weeping Willow
A dream? How can you throw me an E & B DREAM??? I need them REALLY back together! Please post that next Chapter, like, YESTERDAY!
Edward is being unreasonable in being so mad at Bella. It is true that Bella and Angela had a major traumatic event together, like was said earlier. Both of them were threatened with death, and Edward needs to get over himself!!
You may decide to still have B & E yell at each other, but I predict they will be together and lemoning the first time they see each other!
BTW, please POST!
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Weeping Willow part 2
Edwrad had a very bad time. So sad. But at least he finally let Bella be with him. He had to know in the back of his mind they would work out!
I did get a little confused with the Esme thing: I know she was the mother figure in his life, but did he think she was actually his mother? It seemed that he never knew that his real mother had died when he was a child.
This was the funeral; now I want the wedding of E & B!!!
Keep up the good work!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Home
So, he who shall not be named will be called, him. God, I'm pathetic. ---- Sounds familiar. Voldemort? LOL!
Sweet. SO glad B & E have worked things out. Living there sounds like a good idea.
Will you give us a wedding?
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Good Lawyer
Good job! Great proposal!
But did Bella ever get a divorce through? Doesn't that need to be done before another weddding??
I hope that they copy the log cabin but make it much BIGGER! They have to be ready for all of those babies!
Please update again soon!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: I was his. Always and Forever.
There I said it; those three hussies took her phone so I couldn't talk to her. Then they turned theirs off so they are all on my dislike list now. --- Stephen Colbert would say Edward put them on the notice board. LOL!
That was a beautiful wedding and a fabulous honeymoon. I am looking forward to hearing more about both of them.
I was reminded of Bella & Edward in their wedding in the trailer for Breaking Dawn.
Great job!