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Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Sweet! And their outing has only just begun. Supper and the ride home under the stars is sure to be something I'm so excited for more!

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Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Yippee!!!  I so knew it wasn't Jasper (yet, hehehehe) and I so knew Bella jumped on the horse before Edward even knew what was happening!  THANK YOU for not letting Edward go alone.  Bella was not there to protest so I was going to do it for her, but thank goodness Jasper is in his right mind!  Can't wait til next week's update!  Hope you have a great Holiday weekend!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Lonesome Hearts

Lovely little chapter.  Jasper is so freaking funny!  He needs to just man up already, LOL!  Alice is probably feeling rejected and worried about what will happen to her now, poor thing!

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Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Woo Hoo! It's fixed!

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Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

So the plot thickens!!!! I'm thinking maybe it's James but I really don't feel it is.  Only time will tell!  Edward is so cute even if he only thinks of himself as a cowpoke.

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Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

OMG, best chapter ever! Ok I am a little biased but still totally awesome. Edward's crooked smile makes me swoon too and also spreads warmth to my... LOL! Seriously though your updates make me a very happy camper. See you in the forum!

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Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

After a very long and stressful week I finally found time to read your updates and I have to say this chapter made me swoon!  The Emmett and Edward shower scene, hysterical!!!!!  But the little Edward and Bella reunion was very sweet.  I thought the initial carving on the rose was a very romantic touch.  I am so happy to see Edward thinking about the future instead of worrying about the past!!!!

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

OMG, that's not just a cliffhanger, that is the MOTHER of all cliffhangers!!!!!!!  Although he has been a bad Bear (I am totally giggling right now cuz my cat Buddy Bear who we call "Bear" gets told he is a bad Bear all the time!) I know Jasper wouldn't shoot him, well just yet anyways!  I can't wait to find out what the hell is up with Alice!!!!

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Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Carmen makes me laugh!  I knew Emmett wasn't getting a drink, but I thought she might throw it on his wound for cleansing purposes.  I was totally waiting for it and expected him to squeal like a girl.  LOL!!!  Glad Bella is still thinking about the shooter out there even though no one else is.  Jasper was so excited about Alice he completely forgot (way to go Sheriff) about the danger lurking outside!  Thank you for letting Carmen smack Emmett upside the head, but I think she still gets to do it at least one more time since he has yet to have a much needed conversation with Alice.  Pretty please??????

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Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I've known people like Jessica and all I can say is Aggghhhhhhhhh!!!!!  Go Jasper!  Love how he is not taken no for an answer.  Can't wait to find out what the heck her deal is......

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Aww man we missed the steamy kiss.  I scream outtake!!!!!!

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Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Considering how biased you know I am, this is my favorite chapter thus far! Lol! Thank you for a sweet ending to a craptastic week!

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Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Cute chapter, but you know I live a little E&B but LOVE lots of E&B!!! : )  What exactly are those boys up to with Bella's gift and what does the blacksmith have to do with it?????  James lurking in the shawdows is giving me the creeps.  I hope his fascination is more with Edward (past history) then with Bella). 

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Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

A horse!!!  Of course.....  why else would you need the blacksmith!  Lol, cute name for the horse too.  I have a horrible feeling something is going to happen while Edward and Bella are on their way back to the ranch.  No bueno : ) just kidding, I know the angst is coming.

Your updates are the highlight of my day, thanks for keeping my spirits up!!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

You have know idea how much I love you right now and yes you are ALL KINDS OF AWESOME!!!!  I am having the worst week ever and the extra little update today was so freaking awesome!!!!  Yay for writers block!!!!!  LOL.  You know I have all kinds of mad love for your Edward and Bella and the progress today was simply beautiful.  I am so happy Edward is finally going to share his past with Bella (totally didn't see that little twist coming and can't wait to hear the rest of the story).  I hope he carves their initials in the tree by his parents, that would be so sweet!  So THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!  And LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Wow! Great backstory!!! Loved the chapter and the I love you was very sweet!

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Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Oh my fair Damsell you are too kind!!!!  I miss you guys too and will come out to play in the forums real soon!  Even though I can't participate like I want to right now, I hope you realize how much I love this story and can see that I have made an effort to review each chapter.  You have made me one very happy girl lately with all of the Edward and Bella romancing, not to mention extra chapters!!!!!

Wow, who knew a fully clothed bump and grind make-out session could be so HOT!!!!!!

 

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I love Carmen, very cute chapter!!!  I thought it fit in great with your story.  To me, an outtake should be something in the past to explain a part of the current story or something in the future that alludes to what the characters are up to now.  For example, Carmen's comment "we'll talk later" would make a perfect outtake as it is alluded to in the current story but not necessary to keep the story going.  Can't tell you enough how much I love this story and look forward to each chapter.

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

WOW, can't wait for the back story there!!!!  I wouldn't necessarily call this a cliffie since you gave us so many answers as to what is going on with Alice.  Now if you would have ended before telling us what was on the paper she stole from Jasper's desk, that would have been evil!!!!!

You are the only reason I ever look forward to Mondays!!!!!!

 

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Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

I'm sorry to hear you are not feeling well. Ear infections are the worst! Thanks for the extra chapter this weekend. It was a lovely surprise. Both boys made me swoon. Now you said "pairs of eyes" meaning two and it's to late for it to be any of the students. This can not be good! Hope you feel better soon! : )

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Yippee, a double treat this weekend. Oh I love your Edward. He is so romantic! I hope Esme makes it to the end. I can't imagine it being very common for someone if her age that has never given birth before to do so. I thought of those two brats but given the time of day, I ruled them out. Well, it looks like Jasper got himself a bride. Lol!!!

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Wow, awesome chapter! I knew Jasper wouldn't care about her past. I loved the fact she smacked him around some too. Please have someone in a future chapter ask him how he got a shiner. Too funny! Would love to see them make a trip to the Big E ranch to officially announce their engagement.

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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

OMG, I am so excited! See you in the forum in a couple hours

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I am sick with anticipation!

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Cute chapter! Good to see the girls together again. Can't wait for Alice & Jasper to visit but am a total nervous nelly knowing bad things are going to start happening. Hopefully nothing will happen to proposalblock Edward! I was worried Alice & Jasper' announcement would make Edward wait, so I was glad the girls kept it a secret for the time being.

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Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

You know I always thought Jasper kinda sucked with is trying to eat Bella and all but I was seriously going to have to hurt him for proposal blocking. Since the rest of the chapter and the proposal was so sweet, I will let him live, for now anyway! LOL See you in the forum in a bit!

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Thanks for giving a little more to the Carmen and Eleazar back story.  Of course it left me wanting more but you have a way of doing that to me!!!   Given that sweet little moment between the two, I am very fearful something will happen to one or the other in the very near future.  : (  Gosh, I hope I am way off.

Hahaha, more fun at Jasper's expense!!!!  Love it!  I suppose Emmett went to go get his women(well, I am hoping anyway). 

Congratulations for being featured and earning a blue coffee cup, you deserve it!!!!  See you in the forum (soon!)

 

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Oh no, they planned all the boys leaving to tend to the herds so they could do this. Thank God
Alice is there to help out.

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

OMG! Heart failure.... Poor Carmen & Eleazar, : ( I HATE James! I am going to go cry in peace now, people are giving me funny looks.

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

OMG! How the heck are they going to break the news Edward? Between Bella & Eleazar, he is going to go ballistic. Do you hate me? Because I think you are trying to kill me with anticipation! : )

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Eleazar is still alive!!! Oh I can almost breathe again. Almost! I hope Carlise makes it to Eleazar soon.

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Go Alice! She is my new hero. : ) Can't wait for Rosie to show!

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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

It's official, you hate me! You are killing me woman! Still love you bunches : )

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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

I love you!!! Thanks for giving a junkie her fix! Go get'um Rosie!

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Congrats, you deserve it! Poor Edward, he will never forgive himself if something happens to her.

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Go Rosie! Woot Woot Woot!!! The Big E Ranch is never going to be the same

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

OMG!!!  James is so f'ing creepy.  And you let him use Edwards shirt to wipe off his nasty filth?  How could you?   LOL!  I think you are going to give Gwen a heartattack with this last chapter!!!!!

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

My heart was pounding the entire time! Poor Bella! Poor Edward! Poor Me!!! Forget Gwen, (sorry ( : ) I'm going to have a heart attack!!!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

LOVED IT!!!!  I wish I could have seen that fight first hand, hahaha!!!!!

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Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Yea! (insert fist pump) We are getting closer to a rescue! I knew Rosie & Carmen would band together & be a force to be reckoned with!

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Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Loved it!  Loved it!  Loved it! 

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Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

James is so going down!!!!! Loved the update, thank you!

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Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

OMG, I think you are trying to kill me and Gwen, LOL.  I would be needing some heavy drink right about now if I didn't have a clue as to what is still to come. 

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Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Totally wasn't expecting that!  The last chapter was full of action and left with a cliffie so I didn't get where you were going with it until I reached towards the end of the chapter and figured out you jumped way ahead.

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Too Funny!!!!  I am glad they got caught before they went all the way so their wedding night is still special!  Besides I think poor Edward is going to have a hard time (pun totally intended) getting it up after he explains to Bella what Emmett caught him doing, LOL!  Gotta love Rosie for covering for Bella!!!  : )

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Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Yeah! Edward gets some of his land back! Loved the chapter!

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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Awww, so cute!  And it's going to be a Boy!!!

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

No apology necessary Doc! Lovely chapter!

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Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

I loved it! It was absolutely perfect!

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Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue

It was lovely but I am going to go cry now!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen was brought up in a world where responsibility to your family and class was everything. Tired of the endless pursuits of women he becomes more and more jaded. That is until, he meets his match…..

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113881 Read Count: 18955
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2010 Updated: 03 Dec 2010
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: 28: We Are All Fools In Love

Loved it!  Great chapter!!!!  Sad it's almost over : (



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and your review. I am so glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: 29: The Joining of Two Hearts

Absolutely lovely!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Beautiful ending!  I really enjoyed your story and am going to miss it.  I love period pieces and you did a wonderful job of creating the perfect backdrop for this story.  Thank you for sharing!

Summary:

Here are some outtakes that I promised for my story Lonesome Hearts.  Please refer to that story first!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3033 Read Count: 1203
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Drunken Cowboys

a279;I absolutely LOVE it!   That was awesome!  I don’t know which part I laughed at the hardest between Carmen throwing the boys outside, Jasper having a heart to heart with the goat or Naked Edward and the cow incident.  That was just great, it made everything fall in place, from Bella witnessing what she
thought was the boys making fun of her to Edward running around naked.  You are beyond awesome and amazing!!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Emmett & Rosie's first meeting

That was such a cute first meeting! I love the "what kind of man do you think I am" line. As a woman there is only one type of man in my opinion as they are all the same!

Adesse Olympus by Billiegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Separated at twelve, childhood friends grow up in different worlds.  Bella waits for her soul-mate to return to his roots and to the mountain ranch she and her brother have built from scratch.  Somebody or bodies will go to any length to make sure they don't get their happy ever after.  AH, cannon pairs.  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140161 Read Count: 30119
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I haven't reviewed every chapter but I am really enjoying your story. I really like your characterization of the characters. Especially Jake. Very refreshing!

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I just finished and thoroughly enjoyed it and had a very hard time putting it down. That means I am extremely tired due to lack of sleep. : ) I really liked your take on the characters and how you woved them into the story. I thought it had the perfect amount of drama, suspense, action and lemons! Thank you for sharing!

Author's Response:

Gosh, darn, shucks!  Though, I'm sorry you lost sleep. ;)  Thank you for taking your precious time to read it and for leaving such a nice review.  I can't tell you how flattered I am that people actually do that.  It blows me away.  

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

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Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well things are definitely going to start getting heated! Great chapter! : )

Author's Response:

Yes they are slowly but surely...like a campfire you got let the embers get hot. LOL

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Everyone seems to be moving forward in making the necessary arrangements to get hitched! They may want to start building though, LOL. Even when Alice leaves after marrying Jasper, there will still be two heads of the house between Edward and Emmett. And that would mean two women of the house.

Can't wait for all the good stuff coming up! Hopefully it won't be a long engagement.

Author's Response:

Finally!! There will have to be a lot of work done to keep up with the couples...Thanks for reviewing go to fictionators.com Monday for a teaser

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Off to a good start

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.. I am posting a chapter tomorrow and have outline done up to chapter 8

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good chapter leading to their move out West.

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter! : )

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Really enjoying, can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it

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Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter! : )

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Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter! Hope you feel better soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you..still sneezing but much better!  Your promised tease...

Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.

I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awww, poor Edward!!!! Sorry you are still not feeling well.  Thanks for the quick chapter!  Hope you feel better soon!!!!  : )



Author's Response:

Thank you..I am feeling better today..Stupid cold :(   Next chapter up soon

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter! Can't wait for their walk! : )

Author's Response:

thank.. me either!

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Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter! Loved the progress. Evil cliffy...

Author's Response:

I love evil cliffies..well except when I read them! ;)  It's all in good fun! Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Fun at poor Eddie's expense, too funny! Great chapter! : )

Author's Response:

Poor Eddie needs a little fun at his expense, nothing like making him work for it! :)

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter, totally worth the wait! ; )

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Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter! Where is Jasper to give my husband advise when I need him???? LOL Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I know he is always the voice of reason, that is what I love about Jasper! Thank you

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Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Really cute chapter! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I liked the Rosalie part.

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Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter! : )

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Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter, loved it!

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Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Now how am I supposed to enjoy turkey when you leave us hanging with that evil cliffie???  LOL!  Thank God James was paying attention and hopefully is not that far behind them.



Author's Response:

Im so sorry tuggerpie! How about if I promise to post the day after Thanksgiving, will that help the turkey go down easier? LMAO

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Creepy! But it would be even more creepy if he took advantage of her while she was passed out!

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Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

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Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awww, that was sweet.  I think this is the first story ever that I actually like James.  Mostly he is always made out to be the bad guy.  There have been a few where he grew on me but he was always somewhat shady in those stories.  I loved how you switched it up!!  So yeah for the bad guys being dead and the good guys all surviving, but I hope that does not mean the end of the story is near!!!  There is still so much to do and see!!!!!  Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I really do like my James. He is so nice! We still have a bunch of chapters too go! I cant let this story go just yet!

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Cute chapter! Edward should have just had Pastor Webber marry them right then and there and then moved her into his bedroom instead. : )

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loved it!

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Poor foolish Bella, will she ever learn to have a little faith in her man?  Totally looking forward to the proposal and them getting hitched already. I am so impatient ; ) Happy Holidays to you too!



Author's Response:

See is just a little naive and young but she has more issues with herself than Edward I think..Happy Holidays

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

It was perfect! I loved it, Happy New Year!

Author's Response:

Thank you...writing that proposal made me nervous..glad you liked it. Happy New Year

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

So glad you are back, I missed you! Can't wait for more : )

Author's Response:

Thanks Missed you all too...glad the block is gone! working on next chapter so hopefully next weekend....

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Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

So sweet! You know in today's society, another bride to be wouldn't take to kindly to being upstaged, lucky for Alice it is Bella we are talking about and a party she didn't ask for. I have missed your updates!

Author's Response:

that is true..today the future bride would flip out!Im sure Bella wouldnt be like that at all..thanks for the kind words

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Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh how I have missed you and this sweet story. Thank you for the chapter. Good luck in your move! : )

Author's Response:

Thank you...this move is soooo much work! GAH I have missed all of you too! thank you for reviewing

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Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Glad to have you back. Really cute chapter, thank you for updating! Looking forward to the wedding : )

Author's Response:

thank you for reviewing as always.. Its good to be back. 

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Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Aww it was beautiful! Well done : )

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Rut-roh! You would think she would have learned something from being kidnapped!

Author's Response:

You would think huh? But since Newton is gone she doesn't think about that. I think they both overreacted...we will see 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Yay, there is going to be a little bambino! Great chapter!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Yay! Love it!!! Thanks for the update

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

:) looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Thanks for updating. Hope you feel better soon!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Awesome!!! The ending totally made me swoon :)

Prophecy by VampaliciousCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Prophecy

Can Bella overcome the destiny that has been laid out for her and find the Promised One in time?

The Prophecy

The one with balance will seek out the Promised one.
She shall find him in a forest of rock and steel.
This warrior is a child of the Goddess, yet will be raised far away.
He will return and aid his people in sweeping the darkness from the land.
He will place the one with balance upon her throne and will stand by her side for many years.

OOC for some characters

Some Human, Many Mythological creatures, not the world you are used to.

Complete 01/07/2011: Prophecy; Part One

Up Now: Part Two; True North

Character List for Part One & Two

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103125 Read Count: 31122
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2011
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: C1 Prologue

What a fabulous start!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, hope u enjoy the new chapter :)

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: C2 Fates Collided

Great chapter, can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, hope u enjoy the new chapter :)

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: C3 10 Years Later

Very interesting, can't wait for more. : )

Author's Response:

glad that you like it :) thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

Facing certain death for defending Bella’s honor, Jasper finds himself depending on Bella making the ultimate sacrifice; her complete surrender to the dark and dangerous Edward. But is the price too high? Will she succumb to Edward's persuasive calling?


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9579 Read Count: 8935
[Report This] Published: 02 Nov 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2010
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh she is a feisty little thing! Great chapter!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

: )

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great 1st chapter, so very intriguing!  Historical and Vamp, love it!!!!  And to think, she almost ended up as his dinner!  Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters you have posted later tonight!!!