Reviews by tuggerpie
Summary:

Facing certain death for defending Bella’s honor, Jasper finds himself depending on Bella making the ultimate sacrifice; her complete surrender to the dark and dangerous Edward. But is the price too high? Will she succumb to Edward's persuasive calling?


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9579 Read Count: 8935
[Report This] Published: 02 Nov 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2010
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward is very inpatient, after waiting 3 years whats a few more days or weeks? Lol. Very good chapter!

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Getting really good. I hope Edward doesn't blow it! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Pets: Bebe by Maren Smith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade.  But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.

Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters.  She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life.  She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves.  And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

I am so happy you decided to post here and continue your Pets series.  Poor Bebe, pets never fare well when a baby arrives!  I like the little twist of Pets only being born into capitivity now, perhaps Bach had something to do with this after discovering Pani's intelligence.  I am so looking forward to see what happens to Bebe and would like to think that Pani made here way back to her Papa!  ; )



Author's Response:

SPOILER ALERT!

 

Bach did have something to do with it.  In the original books, after sending Pani back to Earth, Bach uses his influence with old superiors to have humans declared an endangered species.  Collection from the 'wild' is no longer allowed, our solar system was declared a forbidden zone and captive breeding is the only method by which human pets can be maintained.

Also in the original books, Pani did get back to Bach. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the series.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Oh, this is going to be good.  Bebe must be scared of the wild humans as I am sure she has never seen such behavior for a human before.  Can't wait to find out more about Tral.  He seems so kind hearted compared to the others.  Totally looking forward to the next chapter!!!

 

On a side note, I am a complete dork.  I went back and read the last couple of pages of Bach's story and loved Pani demanding he come get her right then and there!  I must of got sidetracked when I was ending book 1 because I left off right after he dropped her off on the ship and then after reading book 2 where she made her way back and was reciting her property number, to me it was a perfect set up for a sequel.  So thinking back, it was a really nice ending to book 2 since I was not aware at the time that she officially made it back to Bach.  The ending of book 2 would have been ruined for me had I read the ending of book 1 first.  I feel like I just had a Who's on First conversation with myself.  Anyways, now that I have confused even myself, thank you for being so kind as to point out what I missed as I would not have gone back had you not said something.  So even though everything in Bach's world is tied up with a nice bow, I still have hope that someday you will continue their story even if it is just a one shot outtake!

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying this story, and that you enjoyed Bach and Pani.   Their one-shot, so to speak, is coming up in a few. ;)

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

What a lovely surprise to have Bach be Tral's uncle!  Can't wait for him to show up in the morning, hopefully Pani is with him and can communicate with Bebe too.  Tral is going to keep Bebe right????  I really hope so!  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

lol, thank you for the compliment.  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Bad Bebe indeed! I absolutely love this world you have created! I adore Bach and Pani (Pani is so funny) but Tral has captured my heart! He is so sweet! Can't wait to see how he will progress once he has Bebe back.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Hopefully, I won't disappoint. :)

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Poor Bebe! She must be so confused and scared. Thanks for providing so many answers about the wild humans. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

I'll do my best to get the next chapter up here.  Hopefully before Thanksgiving, but I'm not making promises! lol

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Thank God! Tral showed up just in the nick of time in more ways than one! Although I do find the wild human pack fascinating, Bebe does not belong with them. I do have a question about the Preserve, were the humans placed there for observation purposes? Is the observation by the government only or can anyone visit like they would a wild animal park? Oh and have I told you lately how much I love your stories, because I really do!

Author's Response:

Your questions will all be answered in the next chapter, which should go up today.  LOL, I'm glad you like the story!  Thanks so much for the reviews.  They keep me on track!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Oh that poor little thing!  Bach was right, Tral is an idiot (sometimes).  How could he think humans are stupid after watching them survive for years in the Preserve with absolutely nothing? Even doing his job half-assed you would think a few things sunk in to Tral's thick skull regarding their capabilities.  I am so happy he can communicate with Bebe now. 

Please tell me that this story is not almost over!!!!  I am so addicted and feel like this adventure just began.

 



Author's Response:

Neanderthal man survived for hundreds of thousands of years with very primative tools, clothes, and everything I've given Ben and the wild pack.  And still, our popular consensus is that they were only possessed of a very basic intelligence.  It is really, really easy to look at a lesser developed being and think they are little better than animals.  Taking an example from our own history, look at how the Europeans handled their perceived superiority when they set foot on African soil and saw all the'lesser developed' Africans running around.  Our arrogance climbed to all sorts of heights over the next several hundred years, and we still haven't fully recovered from the side effects.

I'm glad you like the story, but sadly, is it almost over.  A few more chapters left to go.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Loved this chapter immensely! Bach married Pani!!!! I would have loved to see Tral start to actually have feelings for Bebe and more development between the two before his male hormones took over.  Bebe didn't seem frightened or confused so I assume that this was not her first time.  I got the impression that she had only been "petted" a few times before but not sexually active.  Now to be honest, I am not exactly sure how I feel about the end of that chapter.  I am scared for Pani and Bebe and I am pretty sure Bach is going to flip out since Tral didn't sit tight like he asked him to.  But most importantly, this signals the end of the Pets in more ways than one.  I am going to be so heartbroken when this is all over! 



Author's Response:

Bebe hints at sexual abuse by the guards who dragged her out of her cell in the Awful Place, so this is not her first time.  However, she would have seen it both between Sir and Ma'am, and of course when Pani and Bach were going at it.  I think if Pani had had a miserable time of it, Bebe would not have been so eager. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really cute so far! : )

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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awww, swoon!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So sweet, loved it!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Aww so sweet, loved it!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awww, so sweet!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter! I know there are only a couple of chapters left, but I am going to really miss these guys when you are done.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So sad to see this end

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great ending!

Planet Twilight by melanieintn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time,

where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.

No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:

Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.

AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E

Story Blog: http://planet-twilight.blogspot.com/

 

image made by GSRgirlforever

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174480 Read Count: 187900
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Edward's Special Place and Addy's Tea Party

Now I want a unicorn to go with my cottage : )

Author's Response:

LOL, that may be a little more difficult to find. Thanks again!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage

I so want a get away cottage! : )

Author's Response:

It would be nice.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books

Interesting twist! Glad to see Carlise has a heart. He had me worried for a bit because it seemed like all he did was bark out orders to everyone!

Author's Response:

He just had to get the bluff in on the girls, so they wouldn't try to run away.  He warms up as the story progresses.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Binding Ceremony

Great chapter, loved it!

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks, as always, for the review and rating!

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Morning Lovin'

Hot!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked it and thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya

Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion

Awww, so sweet! Loved the pics : )

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked it and thanks for the review and rating!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Reception Part Three

WOW! : )

Author's Response:

Tanya's brain has jumped off the deep end.  Thanks again for the review and rating!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Meet Addy, Meet Jane and Alec, House Tour

Cute chapter! : )



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it and thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter

This is one crazy planet with all the crossbreds.  Really enjoying your story.  It is very unique and your brain must hurt from all the creavity you put into this crazy planet, LOL! 



Author's Response:

Planet Twilight wants to increase their population and they are doing it with any humanoid species that is available to them.  Thanks again for the review and rating!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Reception Part Two

Can't wait to find out what the hell is going on : )

Author's Response:

LOL, the next chappy will tell you.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Reception Part One

Rut Roh!

Author's Response:

LOL, that's right.  Thanks so much for your reviews and ratings!  I really appreciate them!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Edward's Rape

WOW! Didn't see that one coming! : )

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: First Taste

: ) : ) : ) : ) : )

Author's Response:

Loved all the smiley faces and rating!  Thanks!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The New Age Begins

Very interesting so far. At first as I was worried it was ripping off the Pets series with the large aliens but I definitely saw enough differences by the end of the first chapter! Looking forward to see where you take this! : )

Author's Response:

I haven't read the Pets series.  I will have to check it out.  I am have been writing this on Fanfiction and they have been down all weekend.  I decided to upload it to this site.  Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

Really enjoying!

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: He Picked Me

Rose can never stay quiet, LOL! "Loving" it so far.

Author's Response:

Rose will be Rose!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Edward's POV of 1st Day

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Author's Response:

Thanks for the smiley face!

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Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown

Fun chapter, liked the progress! : )

Author's Response:

Your great for reviewing every chapter!  Thanks so much!

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Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Tattoos and Gowns

Looking forward to the conversation with Rose

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past

Interesting chapter. At first I didn't understand why Rose had such a problem since she had 4 years to adjust, but now it makes perfect since she was holding out to be rescued.

Author's Response:

Rose is just being Rose.  She was living the good life back on Earth and feels like her choices have been taken away from her.  She isn't as easily satisfied as Alice and Bella.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns

Very interesting, thanks for giving more "planet" details.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and I try to be as detailed as I can be, sometimes I am a little too detail oriented.  I need to find a happy balance.  Thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction

It's getting crazy, but Tanya always brings the crazy : )

Author's Response:

Yep, got to have some bad guys or gals in the story, though...lol.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter! Poor Edward, I hope Bella gets to him first.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Glad Bella has some help with Edward. Love how this story is turning out : )

Author's Response:

Thank you for all your support by reviewing.

Here is your teaser

A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So sad : (

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awwww, loved it.  So happy she is finally teaching him how to communicate with words!!!!  : )

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Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Amazing chapter! I say she keeps him! : )

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The title caught me and I am so happy I read your first two chapters.  Very intriguing so far and the plot is very original to Twilight fan fic.  Can't wait for more info like Edwards background, the Wolves and look forward to seeing where this story goes.  : )



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.

 

 Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Amazing chapter!  Too funny trying to mount her, LOL but what we you expect.  You have done a great job capturing Savageward's demeanor due to his upbringing. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I just look at my dog, and go with it. LOL

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Edward! Can't wait for them to be reunited!

Author's Response:

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh no! I agree, Edward stay! Amazing chapter!

Author's Response:

The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter. Love this story, it is refreshingly unique

Author's Response:

Thank you

 

 

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter! She needs to put him in front of the tv again. He picked up rather quickly when he was watching that soap opera : )

Author's Response:

LOL, maybe she should show him some porn.

 

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love it!  Can't wait to see where her next stop is.  : )



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So sad! I can't believe he survived that long with no other human contact. Absolutely love this story!

Author's Response:

He had his wolves. : )

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter, I was so happy you updated!!!  I love that Edward is trying to speak more and the tent collapsing made me giggle.  Can't wait for the next chapter!  : )



Author's Response:

I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!

Here is your teaser

The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river.  Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.

 

Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop.  He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too.  Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh, he remembers! So sad. Another amazing chapter. Thank you so much for updating, it made my day! : )

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Here is your teaser

Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.

 

Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get.  Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Here is your teaser

Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.

“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.

“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.

“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love the progression of the storyline! Amazing chapter, can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Here is your teaser

When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love.  The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture.  They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.

 

“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular.  They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”

 

“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Another amazing chapter! Can't wait for Edward to see his new home!

Author's Response:

I really appreciate you reviewing.

Here is your teaser

Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs.  He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.

 

When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.

 

“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”

 

Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Love it! Boy does Bella have her work cut out for her, LOL!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.

Here is your teaser

Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside.  But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.

 

There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do.  She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

What??? OMG please update soon!

Author's Response:

I really appreciate your review!

Here is your teaser

With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter once again.  How sweet, can wait to see his reaction to the wolves!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing, here is your teaser

 

Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh how sad but true to an animals nature.  Great chapter.  If you ever do any outtakes, you should do one of Emmett working with Edward on fixing the fence.  I can only imagine..... LOL. 



Author's Response:

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

 

Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

A Kingdom Reborn Banner 1

Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Lacking

So far I am intrigued!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad I've at least gained your interest.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Resolving

:)

Author's Response:

Glad you like it!
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Coercing

Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it and I'm sorry you'll have to wait for the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing!
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Apologising

Oh poor Bella!  Not only is her family horrible to her but now her husband and king are slapping her around as well not to mention he might as well have just raped her considering how thoughtless and careless he was while taking her virginity.  So sad, not even a friend to comfort her. 



Author's Response:

Bella's situation is definitely a sad one and it will get worse before it gets better for the poor girl. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Crying

He should have had to beg for forgiveness but it was about time he did it right :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31184
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

Heart wrenching!  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Major heart fail until then :)

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story

Oh WOW!!!!  Didn't see that coming :)  So glad he went to her and referred to her as his wife.  Swoon worthy!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Connections

Yummy!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini

Really like it so far, can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two

Loved it!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir

:)

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

Interesting twist! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Take Two

Loved it but I hope this doesn't mean the end is near :)

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

Loved it but so sad it's almost over!

Summary: Past Featured Story



Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

Thanks very much to Cared for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 123074
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Damn that was close...

Author's Response: more excitement to come. Thanks!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ahhhhh!!! This can't be good! Hoping someone thinks about getting hitched for real before anyone catches up with them there won't be a damn thing anyone can charge them with!

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Go Izzy & Jack and let the snuggling begin!!!

Author's Response: lol Thanks very much!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Sweet chapter!

Author's Response: glad you liked it. Thanks very much!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh there is definitely something wrong with his head, LOL. Poor confused boy!

Author's Response: lol it would appear so. Thanks!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Rut roh! Well now he has to make an honest woman out of her :)

Author's Response: lol we shall see. THanks!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Too sweet for words! Loved it :)

Author's Response: thanks so much!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awww so cute! Loved the chapte! I'm having problems with leaving reviews. I've left one for each chapter but some only show the rating I left. Well I hope you get this one because I am really enjoying your story. Can't wait to see where this journey takes us

Author's Response: I've been getting the reviews, so no worries. Thanks very much!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Cute chapter! Hopefully she will get her turn at seeing him nekkead! Lol

Author's Response: lol that may be. Thanks!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Now I am very intrigued! Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thanks very much! lots more to come

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Smart boy! :)

Author's Response: sometimes! lol Thanks very much!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nicely done, made me choke up a bit :)

Author's Response: Thanks very much! glad you like it.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love the "rustic" feel of the writing :)

Author's Response: thanks again!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

:)

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

The boy better stake his claim soon :)

Author's Response: I have to agree! Thanks!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awww, so sweet! I got a lighter Jake can borrow to start that fire under Ed's a$$ :)

Author's Response: hahaha..Thanks!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Woo Hoo!!!! :) :) Made me a happy camper

Author's Response: lol Thanks!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Smart girl!

Author's Response: THanks!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Aghhh, no! This is not good ;)

Author's Response: true. Thanks!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I totally heart Jack!

Author's Response: me too. Thanks!