Reviews by ddiva
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

No such thing as going too far! Great chapter as always!



Author's Response:

Thanks... I was just worried because it was Edward and Rose... Glad to know you liked.

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Even So

Will we ever find out what became of Lucy? Inquiring minds want to know!

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I just devoured all 31 chapters in a little less than 3 hours and here I am BEGGING for more! You can't stop there- that's just cruel! I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing chapter by chapter but I couldn't stop reading long enough to type this out. I hope you take pity on me and update soon!



Author's Response:

OMG... that's so funny... I am writing and editing as we speak.... hehehehe.... I am doing a happy dance right now because your review was so funny... I won't keep you long the next ch will be up either tonight or tomorrow so watch out for it....

Keep the reviews coming....

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

That was just mean, you big tease! Alice has horrible timing haha!!!



Author's Response:

hahahahahahaha!!!!!!!! I said you would want to hunt me down and shoot me..... hehehehe... you have to admit it is funny....

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Letting Go

I thought that the proposal and the timing of it was perfect for them! I also thought it was the perfect way to end part one of this story and it was exactly what I would've done had this been my story but its not, although, I have loved every word you've written. Even when I wanted to strangle he or she for words that were said or should've been. I can't wait to see what you cook up for part two of this most epic love story and I hope you don't keep us waiting long,although I do understand how RL often gets in the way of joyous pursuits. This story has woven its way into my heart and I am dying to see what new adventures awaits them and their loved ones. Til next time:) 

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Value

Your updates are always the best part of my day! Just wanted you to know that I am waiting breathlessly ( but patiently) for Jasper to appear and hope that Alice can work her mojo on him.

We really do appreciate all of the hard work and effort you put in to all of your stories and I know that RL has a bad habit of getting in the way of creativity sometimes, but I just wanted to say THANK YOU for always entertaining us and sucking us into the little worlds you create!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Different

Don't ever think that we are not waiting oh so impatiently for your updates! We are just trying to be polite and not hound you unmercifully for hem when we all know that real life has a bad bait of getting in the way of good ( really good) storytelling. Here is to hoping that you really do realize how much we appreciate all the time and effort you put into these updates and how much wit brightens our days when we see them waiting for s in our inboxes!

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923137
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Great chapter funny and sweet! Do we get sexy times next? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412095
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Beautiful!

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153181
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

This chapter could not have been more perfect! I know you said that there would  no sequel but I do hope you would maye consider a few future takes?  Anyways I am having trouble finding the words to express just w much I have loved this story and how much I ave anticipated each and every update. I can't wait to read whatever stories you grace us with in the future. :)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

That was lovely. :)

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 191: Chapter 191

You have never let us down,so stop worrying. Tend to what you need to,finish up that SU4K story( I am sooo dying to read it) and post another chapter when you can. Words can not express how much we all appreciate how much time you dedicate to entertaining us, and TRUST  ME, we will love whatever you write next! :)

Summary:

 

Bits and Pieces of WYP that didn't quite fit into the story and i loved too much to throw away.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12198 Read Count: 12065
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooh, I have so missed these two! :)

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Loved this chapter. I would like to see them explore their marriage, hopefully get pregnant( I can just imagine Isabella not realizing she is with child and Edward having o explain it to her). 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94859
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

That was hot! Edward needs to relax and enjoy. Can't wait to see how explains what is going on to his daughter. Are fireworks up ahead?



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Edward will relax eventually, he just need a little bit of a nudge from Bella.  She'll convince him he's the man for her.  Oh yeah, definitely fireworks ahead.  She is NOT happy to find her father groping some random woman in their kitchen.

Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate it.

Into The Deep by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After an accident took Bella's parents, she is forced to live with her new guardian, family friend Edward Cullen. She's been drifting through life for the last year in a daze. Will Edward be able to get through to her and wake her from her living nightmare? Will her looming eighteenth birthday separate them, or bring them closer together?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11496 Read Count: 13092
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Dec 2012
Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, you've got me hooked! :)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Bella, so lost,so lonely! My heart aches for her and for Edward who is only trying to help,(I think). Waiting oh so impatiently for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved the backstory here. It helps knowing that Edward understands what Bella is going through. I didn't comprehend just how deep his attraction to Bella goes. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Six years ago he tore her apart, broke her. Bella's a new, take charge woman now. What will happen when Edward walks into her conference room, and back into her life, as her new client? Drabble fic, short chapter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12906 Read Count: 146101
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Wow,just WOW,!  I am totally blown away by this story. I feel so sorry for Bella.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113785
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I have so missed these two!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm so glad you decided to finally continue telling their story! I'm really enjoying it so far and can't wait to see where you take them:)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

How did you know I would panic at the end,LOL! Thanks for the a/n to calm me down. Loved Jackson's convos with jasper and Alexis. Can't wait to see what she and Tiffany Anne dig up.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814518
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hopefully she will smack her for hitch hiking and then say what the hell took you so long!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Do Jacob and Charlie belong to some sick cult or something. These boys seem like bad news. Hope Bella gets out ASAP!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

If I were her I'd start packing and get the hell out of dodge!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

That was sooooo mean! LOL  I demand justice, you can't just tease us like that! ;)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

Awww, you never let us down! This story rocks!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 220: Chapter 220

:) about damn time he realizes that!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An ominous beginning, Bella seems a little hesitant to join her dad and Jacob maybe. Can't wait to see where this story takes us! Thanks for posting!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Those men are certifiable! Justifiable homicide, I tell you! No jury would convict!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

I'm with you, I love this Rose. I hope Edward takes her advise and takes Bella home. And by home I mean his home because I'm pretty sure she won't be safe from Jacob and Charlie at hers!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

Oh snap! Eleazar pissed in Charlie's Cheerios! About time somebody put him in his place. Bella's legally an adult and as such can do whatever she wants. :)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

Go Edward! 

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Her boss was lucky she wasn't hurt worse! Jackass should have made the deposit himself.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Can't wait to meet Edward!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Damn I like Edward already! So much fun watching Bella dig herself a hole! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Never enough updates silly girls! We always want more! Keep'em coming, please!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Go Bella or should I say Silver Blossom?! Show that green eyed god what you got!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

My guess is Edward and Rose:)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

She should have hauled off and smacked the crap out of him for basically calling her a whore! I can't wait til he sees the error of his ways!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

I love how this Bella just tells it how it is, no sugarcoating, no holding back! So refreshing!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Cannot wait to read the next set of chapters, I can't believe you stopped right there! So mean!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 209: Chapter 209

I hope Charlie sees the light and sends Jacob packing. And yay for Edward for sticking up for Bella, it doesn't seem like she's had much of that in her life since her mom died. I hope Charlie realizes just how badly he has treated Bella and what kind of life he tried to subject her to.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

First off I just wanted to say that I hope your doctors appt. goes well tomorrow, Kasi. And I love that Bella's not afraid to take on Angela in defense of her friend. I hope to god that Edward and Jasper were the ones to pull Bella off and I hope Edward sends Angela packing. Hopefully it will open his eyes to what an evil skank she is.  Loving this story, Silverblossom's a lucky girl to have friends like you and Nikky write her such a wonderful story!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

Woohoo Edward to the rescue! I hope Edward and Jasper kick his ass for laying hands on Bella. Hope they kick Charlie's ass too while they are at it! Crazy ass mofos deserve it! Loving this story and can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

I cannot believe someone asked you that question! How rude! Poor person must be intimidated by a little dirty talk.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 261: Chapter 261

Thank you for giving us Edward' background info. I figured there had to be a reason for his behavior but I didn't realize it would be that complex! I'm also glad that Edward is going to see Charlie and I suspect he's going to bring him to the wedding. It makes e smile to know he's doing everything he can to make his little girl happy!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 315: Chapter 315

Awwww, such a sweet epilogue. Can't wait for any outtakes and future takes that you may give us:) thank you so much for sharing Silverblossom's birthday present with all of us, you two created the gift that kept on giving. Silverblossom is very lucky to have such talented and prolific friends! 

Summary:

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He was just doing his sister one last favor by letting one of the girls from her shelter stay with him. He didn't expect her to be so young, he didn't expect her to be so broken, he didn’t expect her to have a link to his past, and he sure as hell didn't expect to fall in love with her. 

Hurt/Comfort/Angst/Romance/Friendship/Drama

 

Banner made by: Astrid 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29165 Read Count: 13525
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Feb 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm intrigued! Mike Newton issuing orders? Hmmmm. Hope the next chapter will be out soon!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by DeeBell1

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30188 Read Count: 106938
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2013 Updated: 12 Jun 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awwww, I <3 this already! Poor Bella does seem to have a back cloud over her head, doesn't she? At least Charlie seems to have her back. I already ate Renee( surprise, surprise). Can't wait for a certain bronze haired boy to make an appearance. 

I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Looking forward to the game!

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Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So it looks like Edward maybe the hottest ball player on the planet, but at least it seems as if he's not a total man-whore! Looking forward to more!:)

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved getting a peek at Edward's past! It seems that neither Edward or Bella had a particularly easy road in life. Can't wait to see what else we have to learn about these two. I'm looking forward to the moment they meet. Will we have love at first sight, sparks flying everywhere? Or will we have animosity and misunderstandings? Really looking forward to finding out!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awe, Edward's a softy!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think Emmett's a walking disaster area and should probably come with a warning label!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Damn, Emmett has terrible timing!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Can't wait to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Charlie is awesome! And go Bella. Waiting to see if Edward's bad luck continues.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

O it seems as if Bella's bad juju might have rubbed off on our boy! Lets hope it's only temporary. How long do you suppose it would ake for Edward to track down our beloved heroine?

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Dare we hope it's Edward at the door? Poor Bella I wouldn't trust that. Run of good luck either.

Summary:

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Bella is a twenty two year old mother of three and a widow. Her husband Emmett gunned down in a shootout with the DEA during an undercover raid. She vows to take her children away from the life, to let them grow up normal but then she meets the new Underboss Edward Cullen who falls for her and her children but refuses to play second to Emmet's ghost. Can she let go of her past?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30219 Read Count: 11772
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2013 Updated: 02 Jan 2018
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh Carlisle is one evil son of a bitch isn't he? Poor Bella, I can't  imagine being widowed so young and to be left with 3 little ones. 

 Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Ok, I want to know how long it's going to be before Edward or Bella or maybe Esme take out Carlisle! I don't know that I've ever wished for he death of a major canon character before, but I guess there is a first time for everything!



Author's Response:

Summary: Past Featured Story

aboaf

 

Bella's life changed all because of a fire and some hot firemen!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18487 Read Count: 13054
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2013 Updated: 15 Oct 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love feisty, confident, take no bullshit Bella! Girl knows how to throw down! You are off to an awesome start and I can't wait to read more! If you hadn't said so I would never think this was your first fic, it's gonna be fabulous!

update soon or I'll beg! ;)



Author's Response:

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285564
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines

Poor Bella, this was the last thing she needed to deal with. I'm so glad she  went to Edward for help. I'm hoping that Jasper was unaware of the tone of the attorney's letter and that they will be able to work it out. I'm sure jane won't let it get to far :). Looking forward to the next chapter...



Author's Response:

thanks for your note.  I plan to post the next chapter tonight.  here's a little teaser of chapter 30 : 

Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones.  Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.

He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest.  “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her.  So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up?  Huh?”

 

He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.

“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do.  She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.  

“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child.  We are their family and we will protect them.”

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This story has me wanting to commit murder! And I have feeling, I'm not the only one who feels that way.



Author's Response:

Many of you are questioning how Jessica knows so much about Bella.  Bella and Jessica are both from Forks.  Jessica is jealous of Bella, because Bella beat her out for valedictorian.  Jessica was always the smartest of her class, until Bella came along.  Several years younger and doesn’t even have to try in order to surpass her academically.  Bella got all the best scholarships and awards, all things Jessica wanted.  When the stuff happened at Harvard, of course Jessica heard about it, and being from Forks she certainly knows Jacob.  A lot of you want retribution in blood or however it can be gotten.  Rest assured that what comes around goes around, but as long as Bella is close enough for them to hurt, Edward will keep his cards close to his chest. 

Things are progressing well, and where this is a slow burn thing will heat quicker now that she lives there.  It’s still a slow burn, but no longer dragging feet pace.  For the record, Edward does want her to go to supper and meet his family, but he is tense about it because his family is very in your face caring and loving and Bella is not used to that type of family interaction.  Edward doesn’t know it yet, but he loves her.  Be patient and you will see this, I assure you.  Next chapter will post on Sunday, see you then. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  “Yes, my girl performed a special dance for me earlier. She said she would, with our approval, teach something similar to Sulpicia.” Aro gets a dreamy look on his face and grins even wider at me.

“Yes, there have been talks about that dance your girl performed since I arrived earlier. If you are in agreement with your girl doing this, then so am—” Aro gets cut off with the ringing of his cell phone. “Speaking of my pet,” Aro says before he answers, “Sulpicia,” he says answering the call. 

Before he says another word he looks to me as if he is concerned. “Yes, I’m with him right now,” he stops talking and has a look of anger coming across his face. “Keep her as calm as you can. Edward and I will be with you both soon.” I look to him as he talks and close his cell.

“Sulpicia is at Bella’s work. From what I can gather, there is some money and belongings that have gone missing.  Her boss checked out the staff lockers and found a laptop that another staff member claims was hers in Bella's locker.”

I nod at him, but I know my girl and she is no thief. It only takes us a short time to reach Bella’s work.  As I walk in my eyes fall on Lauren and Jessica, standing together.  As I look at Lauren, I see she has the laptop I bought Bella.

I smirk and move over to them. “That's my laptop and I don’t believe I gave you permission to touch it.” Both girls look my way and Lauren glares at me.

“No, this is mine. Look, it has my name on it.” I raise my eyebrow at her as she turns it and shows me the stupid sticker displaying her name.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Death is too good for them! I don't know that I've EVER hated Charlie in a fic before. I can't wait to see Edward annihilate Charlie, Jacob, Leah,etc. I think poor Bella is going to need therapy to deal with what just happened never mind what happened at her old school. 



Author's Response:

We knew the reactions to chapter eight would be intense and strong.  We were shocked that some of you actually attacked Bella for being weak, but at the same time it’s not surprising.  Sometimes people who are mentally abused and neglected for years strive only for some sort of love.  I can’t imagine any child not wanting their parent to love them.  We all see love in differing ways, and when you’re raised not feeling that unconditional parental love, it makes you strive to have it—at least it did for me.  Bella will come into her own strength soon, and with the help of Edward and his family she will get better.  We are stoked for you to see the interaction with Bella viewing Esme and the way that Esme treats her children, so a portion of that is your teaser.
Many of you asked why Edward did not just beat Charlie down, or how he could have not stopped the situation, or known Jake was in the kitchen.  Edward is one person, and he was trying to watch out for Leah, Jake, Charlie, Brady and didn’t know if he could trust any of the other five people there as well.  As for when Charlie smacked Bella, he had his attention focused on Leah and Jacob.  As for why he did not punch or beat down anyone, imagine this:  Edward defends Bella by striking someone or several someone’s.  He gets arrested his word against several, one of whom is the police chief.  Meanwhile Bella is unprotected and left with the wolves.  It was best for him to do as he did get her out and safe.  And trust that he will be dealing with this.  The ball has already been rolling on a few things, but this just upped the ante.
I’m sad to say that we have lost some readers, but again we cannot and will not apologize or rose color a story about an abused girl, when a good lot of the abuse she withstands is things that are personal to one of the writers and or other people the writers know.  Abuse happens and the largest form of abuse out there is mental abuse and neglect.  Awareness is a key to making things better.  Bullying is a problem, and awareness is a key.  We are however thankful that we have readers who trust in us to bring things full circle.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  “This is very nice, Esme,” Bella says after taking a bite.

Esme smiles broadly at Bella.  “Thank you, dear.  Edward tells me you're quite a wonderful cook yourself.”

Bella’s blush appears on her face.  “I’m nowhere near as good of a cook as this.”

I shake my head at her.  “Trust me, Bella’s cooking is to die for,” I say as Emmett passes me the wine. I pour some for Esme, Bella, and then lastly for myself.

“What are you going to college for?” Rose asks as she looks at Bella.

“I’m getting a law degree,” Bella answers, but I know the whole table can hear the sadness in her voice.

“And Edward tells us that you’re a dancer, a quite wonderful one at that.”  I look to Alice, smiling that she brought up something that makes my girl happy.

Bella nods at Alice.  “Yes, I love dancing, but I only do it for fun.”

“You’re in the Christmas dance program for the college though, right?” Esme asks as she looks at Bella.

“Yes,” she replies with another blush.

“Carlisle and I have tickets for three of the performances. I’m so looking forward to the show, and seeing you dance, of course.  The dance department director has been bragging to the board of directors about the dances that you have choreographed.” Again Bella blushes more at hearing about the commendations she’s being given.

“That’s got to be the cutest blush ever,” Emmett says in a childish voice, which is followed by a slap from Rose. 

“I love dancing, and the people I’ve been dancing with are all great.  I just hope that no one’s disappointed at the end of the night.”

Esme frowns a little. “I’m sure no one will be disappointed, dear.” My mom smiles at Bella in a way that I can see the mother in her trying to break out and pull Bella in.

The rest of the dinner seems to fly by with everyone talking about what’s been happening.  The more the night goes on, the more Esme became motherly to Bella, but I’ve also noticed Bella becoming uncomfortable with it.  At so many times, she’s looked like she isn’t sure how to react at something Esme has said or done.  She’s remained respectful, but I’ve seen her slowly distancing herself from Esme.

I walk Bella to the car and open the door for her. “I’ll just be a few seconds.” I give her a wink and walk back to house.

As soon as I do, I can hear Esme’s upset voice.  “We really need to do something.  I won’t accept that nothing can be done.”

I hear my father sigh.  “It takes time, dear.”

“No, first those little punks ... I’ll let you and Edward deal with them, but Charlie is mine!”

I chuckle, but feel a little nervous, because I can hear the anger in my mom’s voice. 

 

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I can't wait for Esme to get ahold of Charlie! The way you portrayed the dance was even better than I was expecting! I think I'm going to like your Rose, and I rarely ever like her in a fic. I do hope she rubs of on Bella. Can't wait for what happens next, I'm interested to see what happens when Bella opens her eyes.



Author's Response:

Well it seems the majority of you really liked this chapter.  There was some confusion regarding Edward’s family, they all really love Bella, but have been warned to not be too handsy or huggy with her, because it is nothing she is used too.  Please don’t fret, Edward’s family is there and will be there to support Bella.  Lots of you still want instant retribution for Bella against everyone who has hurt her, but please be patient Rome wasn’t built in a day.  As always our update schedule is every Sunday night/Monday morning, so far I have been able to post every Sunday.  There is a lot of stuff going on and things will be interesting here very soon.  A lot of people were surprised by Bella’s actions of kneeling naked in his playroom, but only Bella knows what she wants.  Edward wants her there is no doubt about that, but he wants her to want him for herself—not just because she thinks this is what he wants.  Edward has a fine line to walk, but he is not stupid and will handle this situation accordingly.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing.  Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:
I glance down at my cell, when it rings seeing that it says Beauty.  I frown, because I know that she should be about to start her last class.

“Beautiful, is everything alright?” I ask worryingly.

“Renee called, I didn’t pick up.  I was unsure if you wanted me to call you first or if it was just Charlie. I’m sorry, I just thought ...”

I smile and sit back down.  “No, Renee wasn’t on the list, but I’m glad that you called.  Please wait until I’m with you before calling her back.  I will make a list of people of who you are not to answer to, it’ll make it easier for you—us.” I hear Bella clear her throat a few times. “Is there anything else, Beautiful?”

I hear a light chuckle. “You know me so well.  Two things, one I want to know what would happen if I skipped my next class, and second, they want me to see Mr. Whitlock, Jasper, sometime today.”  I can hear in her voice there’s something more and I know this may need a face to face talk. “I am on my way to make an appointment with Jasper right now.”

I smile a little and grab my car keys.  “I coming and getting you from Jasper’s office, stay there until I arrive.”

“I will, Sir ... it’s, oh, Jacob,” Bella says.

“Well, hello there, Isabella.”

I move faster towards my car.  “Don’t speak to him.  Go into Jasper’s office and hand Jasper your cell,” I say to her, while Jacob was talking.

“I’m sorry, but he’s blocking my path.”

I let out a sigh, and start my car. 

“Who are you talking to?  Not that old guy?  Is he still fucking you?  I’m surprised he’s been able to keep himself hard around your whore ass.”

I grit my teeth together. “Shout Jasper’s name now,” I say as Jacob rattles on.  When I hear nothing coming from Bella, I put on a firm voice.  “Now, Little Girl, scream for him and hand him your cell.”

“Jasper!” I hear Bella yell.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Don't stop there! That's quite the cliffy you left us with. ;). Can I just say I really like Aro as you have written him. I've never seen the character portrayed in this way and its so refreshing. As far as Jacob, I don't trust him as far as I can throw him. He and Charlie are up to something really bad I think. What it is, I don't know, but I can't wait to get to the bottom of it all. I don't get why they can't leave our Bella alone, why they continue to threaten her and make her life so miserable. So many questions left unanswered. Oh well, it's making for one great story. I so look forward to your updates and it wouldn't hurt my feelings if you wanted to update more often( I know, I'm greedy!). I just wanted to say thanks too for the teasers you send out with the review replies, they make waiting a litte more bare able.



Author's Response:

Well now seems like the major majority of you are all kinds of happy with Bella and Edward and how their progressing together.  We love it, Bella is finding her strength in Edward, but Edward is gaining and coming into a deeper strength too.  Many of you want redemption right away against Charlie and Jacob and the rest of the bad apples, and it will come, it’s still simmering and the dish of revenge is not quite ready to be served.  Next two chapters we will be given the honor of meeting Renee.  The way the story is going on our side there will be no more than 25 chapters total.  We have 18 written, and working on 19 and 20 now.  As soon as we are done, we will start posting faster.  I assure you that wrapping this story is one of our top priorities.   Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  Vicky smiles at me and then looks at Bella. “If you get tired of his old ass, call me,” she says as she hands her number to my girl.

I glare at Vicky.

“Oh, don’t pout, Edward. I will see your girl every Thursday from now on.”

I shake my head at Vicky, who is grinning widely.

I guide Bella out of the office, but then hear Vicky calling out for me. I turn and look at her.

“Tell James I’m ready for my second shot.”

I tilt my head and Vicky wiggles her eyebrows at me.

I smirk, shaking my head. “Will do, Vicky. Have good day.” I walk Bella out and see she’s still holding in her laughter.  “It’s okay, Little Girl, you can laugh. What did you think of Vicky, Little Girl?”

Bella smiles at me. “Sir, your girl thinks she is nice, but she seems like she walks to the beat of her own drum.”

I chuckle. “Little girl, Vicky has her own orchestra.  Let’s go to lunch.”

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So It was Phil! Makes me like him even more. My favorite part of this chapter was definitely Esme handling Renee. Everything about that had me cheering. The second Eleazar said he had met someone, I KNEW it had to be the evil troll. Dare I hope we've seen the last of her? Although I do hope she is held responsible for poisoning Bella with the peanuts.  

Loved the wedding ceremony and honeymoon. Now onto the trials.



Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I thought their weekend went very well. I also think Bella is right to be leery of Tanya. I'm a little afraid of Renee's visit, I just don't want to see Bella crushed again. And what in the hell is Jacob up to?



Author's Response:

Many of you have already figured out that Renee is not quite motherly material. We were laughing and shocked by some of the stuff said about Renee’s pink hair.  Gotta love it.  We think you’ll like the next chapter, we get to see Renee and how she treats Bella, but we will also see how Edward gives Bella the ability to stop letting Renee walk all over her.  We think you will love it, we know we did.  A lot of you are worried about Jake and Charlie as well as Tanya ... with that being said we don’t want to give away anything much, but trust by the end of the story all things will be resolved.  I think you all will enjoy Edward’s protective ways of Bella, now that he knows she is his both casually and contractually.  We hope that you love the teaser, we had to share something juicy with you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:

“I couldn’t tell you for how many years we’ve been married. I know it’s been a few, but it still feels like yesterday.”

I roll my eyes at Renee’s performance, because that’s what she’s doing—performing for them.

“Mr. Cullen, when were you going to tell the world about your marriage to this woman?” one of the paparazzi yells out.

I shake my head at them. “Mrs. Dwyer is not my wife; she’s the mother of my girlfriend. Mrs. Dwyer was talking about her husband, Phil Dwyer, he plays baseball.”

Renee turns and glares at me. “They know who he is. He’s the best baseball player that has ever lived.”

I glance at the paparazzi seeing they’re all trying to figure out which team he plays for. The bright one of the bunch of course starts questioning me again. “Where is the new girlfriend, Mr. Cullen? Do we get to know her name?” I smile and look beside me to see that Bella has moved to stand almost behind me.

“She’s a little camera shy, and her name is Isabella Swan. However, we have to go, her mom and step-father have had a long flight, and it’s been a few months since they’ve had a chance to visit.  As you can imagine, they want to spend some time together, so please excuse us and have a nice day.” 

I start to walk away, but see Renee has failed to move. “Push this for a second, Beautiful,” I say before walking back and grabbing Renee’s arm lightly.  “Time to go.”

She huffs at me and I give her the look which managed to only shut her up for a whole two seconds. She really is obtuse. “Look, I need to do stuff like that with the paparazzi. I know you’re just a newcomer, but I’m famous because of who I’ve married.”

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Phil is definitely a puzzle to be solved, but I think he has good intentions. At least he talks to Bella as if he really truly cares about her as a person whereas Renee talks to her as if she were a servant. I can't tell if Renee is really that callous and selfish or if she is just certifiably delusional. As a side note, I would pay good money to see Rose and Renee locked in a room together for five minutes without Bella present. Rose would either give her a "Come to Jesus" or kill her, either way I'm good! 

It amazes me that Bella has made it this far in life considering who her parents are. Thank God for Edward and his family, Bella can finally experience what a family REALLY is.



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone is pretty much at the same conclusion, that Renee is a POS when it comes to being a mother.  With the way Bella has been raised and the way that she acts, this is not a big surprise.  Some of you have asked why Edward has not yet stepped in to protect her and that as her Dom he should.  Edward has been very clear all along that he wants her to grow and be confident on her own as well.  Now you will see that he is giving her the power to stand up for herself, and as her Dom he is telling her that he expects her to stand up for herself.  Bella is much stronger than most think, including Edward, but have no fear he will see her strengths.  I think that you all will be shocked to see how far Renee will go to maintain her own importance. 

A lot of you mention or talk about earlier authors notes and review replies where I have spoken candidly about my own upbringing.  Not every bad thing that happened or happens to Bella in this story happened to me growing up, but the neglect and the being pushing away and having parents who think only of them was a very prominent part of my childhood.  Both my parents are now gone, and I miss them.  I know that is not easy to understand for some, but even though they treated me like a second class citizen most of the time, they still were my parents.  This is why I maintain that you never know how you’d react in this situation, because unless you’re raised in it, you don’t know. 

As always we will see you next Sunday night — Monday morning with an update.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Teaser:
I smile and look to Renee who looks angry and pissed off, but thankfully, she has finally shut up.

“Edward, can I talk to you?” I turn and look at Phil, and I nod. I take one last look at my girl, before following him away from the kitchen area.

“What can I help you with, Phil?” I ask directing him into my office.

Phil sighs and looks at me. “I love Renee very much, and she’s not always like this.  Normally, at home she’s sweet, loving, and kind. I have only seen her this way a few times, but not too often. I think being here in Washington is bringing this more to the front. I think Charlie did a number on Bella, but he also hurt Renee, too. She has low self-esteem, and some issue with being around younger girls. The whole forgetful memory thing, I think it’s a medical problem.”

I chuckle shaking my head at him. “I’m not really sure I believe that, unless only forgetting a thing concerning your only child is a medical condition.”

“No, she forgets more than things about Bella. I swear it’s gotten to be a medical thing, she really just forgets things,” Phil says.

“He’s right, Edward,” I frown and look at my open office door and see my father standing there.

“What’s that then?” I ask harshly.

“Selfish bitch syndrome,” my father says with a straight face. I look to Phil who just frowns.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh my god, I want to literally kill Renee! I'm starting to think she's actually worse than Charlie. At least Charlie is outright mean and cruel and abusive, whereas Renee is so demeaning and manipulative that she tries to make Bella and others believe it's all Bella's fault. And poisoning her own daughter with the peanut butter? The woman should have attempted murder charges brought against her. I don't believe for one minute that she "forgot" about Bella's allergy. I wonder what Phil really thinks about all of this? It's pretty clear that he truly cares about Bella, just as it's clear that Renee does not. Fir her Bella is just a means to an end. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that Bella continues to have faith in Edward and tells Renee to go to hell. I would like to see Bella and Phil build a stronger stepparent/ stepchild relationship though. I don't see Phil and Renee's relationship lasting after this last stunt, but I'm hoping Phil will choose to continue his relationship with Bella as she lacks any parental presence.



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Death is too good for Renee! Bella's reaction to all the hurt caused by Renee, Charlie, Jacob, Paul, etc. breaks my heart. You can see just how very long she has bottled everything up, hearing her talk about death is horrifying. I can't wait to see what Jenks learns about the account Phil set up for Bella, I'm sure Renee has been a bad,bad girl. I wonder what Phil will gave to say about that. 

I can't wait to read about their first official date.



Author's Response:

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm glad Tanya finally got the boot, woohoo! I'm also thrilled that Bella's Christmas program went of without a hitch, I was afraid someone would try to sabotage all her hard work. 

Edward wins the award for best boyfriend ever after that epic first date. ( I wonder if I'm naughty enough, if he will give me a spanking like that). ;). 

He also wins the award for best hand- me- down Christmas present ever, I can see the dance studio leading to a lot of very good things for Bella.

Phil's phone calls have made me a very happy girl, it's nice to see that someone other than Edward and his family cares about Bella.



Author's Response:

The overwhelming response to the chapters so far have far exceeded what Nikky and I thought this story would generate.  We are both very proud of this story and humbled by your responses.  In lieu of the ‘boycott’ at FFN everyone will be getting Meeting Her Needs in their inbox later today.  We hope that you all will still take the time to leave us your thoughts, especially since this coming chapter is super wonderful, (Well we think so anyway!)  Thanks for trusting in us, and no worries things are really shaping up at the end we’re working on that will leave you all satisfied—we hope.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:
I put on my tuxedo trying hard not to turn and watch Bella get dressed or look in the mirror.

“Edward ...” comes Bella’s voice as I tie my laces and answer her.

“Yes, Beautiful?”

“Two things, is it wrong to go to these balls ... things without under garments on, and could you zip me up, please?” I run through what Bella has said again and turn to her.

“Wh ...” I try to talk, but I’m unable to complete what I’m saying as I look at Bella, whose sheer beauty takes my breath away. The dress only adds to her natural beauty and I feel stupefied as I stare at my beautiful girl.

I look Bella up and down, taking in every part of her body. I slowly look her up, starting at her feet. My eyes trail up how the dress sits on her body like a second skin. I look at how it makes her already large breasts look fuller. I look at her neck that still displays my mark. My eyes go to her lips and I see that they are moving.

I close my eyes and shake my head. “Sorry, I spaced out there, can you say that again, Beautiful?”

Bella chuckles shaking her head at me. “You look really hot, like my own secret agent man. I was asking, because this dress shows every line, so I should I take off my panties, right? I couldn’t squeeze my bra into the bust area; the girls can hardly breathe as it is.”

I look back down her body and see that she's right, she has a panty line. “Remove your panties, Beautiful, no one will know,” I say. I watch intently as Bella wiggles out of her panties and comes over to me and turns around. My eyes trail down her body again and I start to kiss her back. I feel Bella shake and laugh and I look to her.

“I need you to zip me up. I mean, you can carry on doing that, but I think we’ll be late if you do.” I smile giving her one last kiss, open mouthed, at the base of her lovely neck, before pulling the zipper up. With the zipper up it makes the tight dress even more molded to her curves. It fits her like a glove, and I make a mental note to thank my mom.

“Come on, Beautiful, let’s get this over and done with so I can bring you back here and kiss you some more,” I say holding my arm out for her to take.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Christmas and the Ball were amazing and perfect, just as Bella deserved. It was awesome seeing Rose, Emmett, and even Esme tease Bella as if she's always been a member of their family. Phil's revelations through me for a loop, I figured Renee took the money, but somehow I didn't see the affair coming. I figured she was too greedy to give up the posh lifestyle she enjoyed with Phil. I know I've said it before but I can't wait to see Renee get what's coming to her. I only hope that Phil will continue to be in her life. He seems to be the only one from her past who truly cares about Bella for who she is. 

And I hope Charlie and Jacob rot in hell. I know we haven't seen the last of them, but I hope they don't reek too much havoc.



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and review Meeting Her Needs.  Nikky and I are very happy with the amount of pleasure most of you are finding in this story, so THANK YOU SO MUCH.  There haven’t been very many questions or things to touch base on this week, so I’ll try to do it all here.  Someone wanted to know why the lemon wasn’t longer and more detailed.  The lemon was written the way it was because we want this story to be more about the story and less about the lemons themselves.  We had questions and comments regarding the BDSM in this fic too.  The BDSM in this fic and the actions within this fic of the lifestyle in and of itself have come from many conversations with people from the lifestyle.  Not everything is intense tie you up, spank you, kneel and crawl.  It is a matter of respect, choices and trust.  Please don’t ever think that we would want to write a story just for the sole purpose of making someone another person’s punching bag or pet (in the term of treating someone as if they are not human.)  We will continue to post once a week until the story is completely written.  Nikky is currently working on chapter 20 and there are five more after that to write.  If you ever have additional questions, you can find us on FACEBOOK look for the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  You can also email us at our screen name all lower case at gmail.  Thanks and see you Sunday with the update.

Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:  “I–I need ... I can’t sit here. I just need time ...” Bella gets up quickly and almost runs out of the room. 

I sigh looking at Phil. “She’ll be fine—she has to be—we just need to be there for her when she needs us.”

I nod and get up to start looking around for her. I looked throughout the house first, which takes me almost a half hour to do. I was starting to panic that she actually left our home. I open the back patio door and I see her, and instantly I feel myself calm.

“Beautiful,” I say when I approach her, as she works in the dirt of the flower bed she started with my mother. She stops and turns to me and I give her time, knowing she is going to talk to me now.

“Dr. Banner thinks I have been suppressing and curtailing my anger. I’m starting to think that he’s right. I’m just so angry right now, but mainly I’m mad at myself.”

I frown and tilt my head in question at her.

“Edward, I let them—I let them treat me that way. I was always trying to please them. I never asked for anything other than their time. I would always say it was fine, when they forgot my birthday, or anything that was connected to me. I let Charlie push me out of his life. I would always sit back and pretend that didn’t kill me to see him call Leah his princess, or listen to him tell her he was proud of her and loved her. I would say it was me that was to blame for that. I was the broken one. That there must be something wrong with me, and I wasn’t worthy of their love. It’s kind of pathetic when you think about it, huh?”

I shake my head and move to her. “It’s not pathetic to want and desire to be loved.”

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Bad Nikky! That's just mean to stop there, LOL. I very happy to see Bella stand up to Renee on the phone and to see her realize the college path she was on was not for her. I do hope that someday you might post an outtake or two featuring the letters that Bella wrote to those who gave wronged her. So glad to see Phil want to stay in her life and to gave him want to be close by. 

I wonder what Jane is referring to. I'm dying here wondering what Tanya and Jake are up to and I can't wait to see revenge, Cullen style!



Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ooh,evil cliffy! It's gonna be a LONG week,LOL. So little Bella's gonna have a baby! I can just imagine how overprotective Edward's going to be now. Dying to know what Benjamin finds and to see Bella's confrontation with Charlie. It's been a long time coming. And where in the hell are Jacob and Paul? 



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bella's showdown with her family was the highlight of the chapter for me! I can't believe that Charlie actually thought that Leah was his instead of Bella. I almost felt a little sorry for Sue and I still wonder if Charlie isn't abusive towards her as well. I absolutely LOVED Seth encouraging Bella to let loose on the family including him as he felt she had been wronged by everyone, not just Charlie. Thanks for clearing up the question of Charlie and Leah's relationship, I was totally squicked out! I'm glad that Seth has wound up with Bella and Edward and that he sees his family's behavior for what it is, Bullying. I suspected that Aro and Sulpicia were preggo also, fun to have it confirmed. 

Looking forward to the next chapter, Happy Thanksgiving! 



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yeah for Paul and Jacob getting what they deserve. I'm not sure who was beating on Paul - maybe Phil? I'm proud of Seth for sticking up for himself and Bella and I was not at all surprised by the DNA results. Yay for Charlie being arrested, FINALLY! I hope Sue will realize just what a sick bastard she's married to. 

Your James and Vicky may just be my favorite ever. The stunts they pulled on Jessica and Lauren at the spa had me LOL. 

Wondering who Phil's date is and waiting oh so impatiently for the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Let's see, so many things happened in this chapter! Charlie, Leah, and Renee all got what they deserved. Sue got help, although somewhat reluctantly. The baby arrived( loved his name)! And last but not least Aro and Sulpicia became parents to a little girl.  I also laughed my butt off at James and Vicky's antics while Bella was in labor. 

Cant wait to see what's in store for the last two chapters, I can't believe we are this close to the end. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you all for reading and reviewing.  We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said.  Thank you again for everything.  Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation.  Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post.  Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January.  We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect.  We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic.  We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us.  We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page.  The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings.  Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment. 
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked.  I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office.  We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections.  “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.

“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots.  Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say.  I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.

Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”

“But he’s only two months and still small.”

I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.

“I know, believe me, I know.  Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”

Bella nods and lets out a sigh.

“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her. 

Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.

“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever.  They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.

I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.

“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted.  But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public.  Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”

My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.

“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up.  At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.

“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear.  First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing.  So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for.  If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”

My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words.  I start to get up to head over to her.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

So much happened in this chapter and I loved every bit of it! :)

The Affair by ceceprincess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella and Edward are having a torrid affair behind their spouses back or are they?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2676 Read Count: 1765
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2013 Updated: 03 Aug 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy hell, that was hot! Steamy sex, love, and lust that radiated from every word. I wouldn't mind reading about another rendezvous between these two! I've put you on alert, can't wait to read what you write next. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98299
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I like this side of Edward. And Esme cracks me up,"Yay,Babies" indeed. I'm also really glad that Bella's brothers are seeing her interact with Edward and his family on their turf.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

We knew Alice was up to something. Now, I'm pretty sure you two aren't cruel enough to kill Edward without warning us, so I will just sit here on the edge of my seat waiting or the next chapter.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So Alice is a good guy? For some reason I'm still not sure. I figured Edward had a reason for Bella's brothers being there, he knew trouble was brewing. I loved how his first inclination was to protect Bella even though its more than evident she can protect herself, when the gunfire started,his first instinct was to protect her by laying on top of her. I wonder how poor jasper is going to react to the truth about Alice. Hopefully you won't make us wait too long to find out!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Awe they kissed and made up! I wonder what Jasper is going to do/say to Alice. Do I sense fireworks in our near future?

Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Aw wow,I'm gonna be sad to see this story wrap up! The wedding was absolutely perfect for them. I hope you are open to giving us little future takes, little glimpses into their lives as the years pass. I, for one, can not wait to see Edward as the father to at least one little girl, especially one with Bella's spunk! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella Cullen is at home in Washington State. She's a middle school teacher, missing her husband, who is deployed in Afghanistan. It's been over a year since she's last seen her husband and this will be the second Christmas in a row that he will miss, with no luck in sight of his request of leave being approved. Her only wish is for her husband to be safe, in her arms, on Christmas.

Across the globe, Edward Cullen is working his hardest to grant his wife's wish of being home for Christmas. He also wants to tell her, face-to-face, that after his tour of duty is over, that Edward would be returning home. Permanently. Will he be able to make it home to his beautiful wife?

 

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Banner by Chandrakanta!! Thank you! 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Bella's Christmas Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15455 Read Count: 6336
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2013 Updated: 24 Dec 2013
Reviewer: ddiva Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it, thank you!