Beautifully written! You did an absolutely wonderful job on this story. I think you have a good knack for writing this ;) From reading, it seems like it came naturally, even if you thought it was hard. 

I loved Edward's tough demeanor while at work, yet his willing to completely give over in the bedroom. And Bella's shy demeanor at work, but her commandingness in the bedroom. They both know just where to give and take. 

I felt bad for him when he thought Bella was playing him. But her willingness in the contract was a huge sign of commitment :) I loved it.

You did awesome, hun! I adored it and you wrote it beautifully! x