Reviews by Bobbysgirl
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Young women can act silly, but men... Men make bold gestures." I opened the trunk for Bella. The man inside ended up on the pavement. Bella's eyes widened, and she covered her mouth.

 

* Period fic. Takes place in 1958/GangsterWard. 

 

*Not so canon couples, but a few are. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115343 Read Count: 76968
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2013 Updated: 20 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

AWESOME!

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281133
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOVE IT!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

THE QUESTIONS OUT OF THE MOUTHS OF BABES HMMMM!!!!! MAKE YOU WONDER... DON'T THEY?????????????? ( HE HE HE ) UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

IT HAS BEEN A WHILE BUT... WELL WORTH IT. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I REALLY LIKE TIS STORY. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

GREAT STORY BUT PLEASE DON'T LEAVE US HANGING FOR LONG UNTIL YOU UPDATE AGAIN.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

SOON!!! CAN'T CUM FAST ENOUGH.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY! THANK YOU!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I HAVE NO DOUBT YOU WILL SATISFY OUR SEXUAL FANTASIES WITHOUT ANY HELP FROM ANYONE. UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

YES IT'S DIFFICULT WAITING BUT ALWAYS SO WORTH IT. TIL NEXT TIME.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

thank you!! i hope your thanksgiving was good. read you soon!!! i hope.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!! AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR GIFT ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

THANK YOU FOR CUMING BACK!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

fuck the complaints or bitching some negative people like doing.  sweetie you do your magic and don't worry about the negative shit. loyal readers will continue to read your stories. update soon!! ( sorry if i cum off harsh but enough is enough )

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

THANK YOU FOR ANOTHER GREAT UPDATE. LOOIKNG FORWARD TO THE NEXT.

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Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW THAT'S THE EDWARD AND BELLA WE ALL KNOW AND LOVE.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

LIKE THE PHOTO. SKELETONS HUH!!! OK LOOKING FORWARD TO SKELETONS. UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

YOUR RIGHT NOW! WERE GETTING SOMEWHERE.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

FIRST AND FOREMOST GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR MID-TERMS. IT'S BEEN A WHILE SINCE YOUR LAST UPDATE BUT STUDIES ALWAYS CUM FIRST. THIS CHAPTER WAS SHORT BUT INFORMATIVE. READ YOU NEXT WEEK.

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Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'M GLAD BELLA IS BEING A STRONG BELLA AND LETTING EDWARD'S FAMILY KNOW THAT SHE IS'NT TAKING ANYONES SHIT THIS TIME AROUND. GOOD FOR HER!! READ YOU SOON!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

good luck with finals. read you soon.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

THANKS!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 29 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

THANK YOU FOR SHARING. READ YOU SOON.

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272699
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

YOU MAKE IT SOUND AS IF A SCREW UP IS EXACTLY WHAT WE SHOULD EXPECT IN THE NEXT CHAPTER. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

PLEASE!!! UPDATE SOON!!! TRULY AMAZING.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I TRULY ENJOYED READING IT WAS PERFECTLY WRITTEN. YOU ARE AMAZING AT YOUR MAGIC. THANK YOU!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I ALMOST GAVE UP ON THIS STORY MID WAY IN THIS CHAPTER BECAUSE I COULD'NT TAKE THE PAIN OF THEM NOT BEING HAPPY AND FINALLY TOGETHER. I LIKE RUNNING AWAY TO A HAPPY PLACE IN A GOOD STORY A LITTLE ANGST IS OK BUT REAL LIFE CAN BE A PAIN IN THE ASS AND READING A GOOD LOVE STORY EASES THE UPS AND DOWNS OF LIFE. I HOPE HE MARRIES HER SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

AS YOU CAN SEE I COULD'NT NOT CONTINUE READING. IF I OFFENDED YOU IN MY LAST REVIEW I TRULY AM SORRY IT WAS NOT MY INTENT. FOR SOME REASON WHEN I READ THIS STORY I FEEL BELLA'S PAIN SO DEEP WITHIN ME IT HURTS IN A WAY I DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND SO YOU MUST BE DOING SOMETHING RIGHT. I READ THIS CHAPTER A FEW LINES AT A TIME BECAUSE I FEARED FOR BELLA'S HEART BUT OBVIOUSLY " WE " GOT THROUGH IT. I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER AND AGAIN I APOLOGIZE IF I OFFENDED YOU IN ANY WAY. 

Summary:

What happens when you wake up in Vegas married to someone you don't know? Or do you? Find out what happens when Bella wakes up in Vegas married to someone. Does she know him from somewhere? Find out! A/H HEA


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18547 Read Count: 9966
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2013 Updated: 09 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

IF ONLY YOU COULD SEE MY SMILE. 

Summary:

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When you met the right one nothing else matters but what if he is the undead and you are already in a relationship>


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35801 Read Count: 5629
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Coveted Apple

thank you for the quick update. looking forward to the next.



Author's Response:

This story is fresh in my mind, next update will be in days.  :D

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- When Paths Cross

MORE!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

More is coming I promise!  Working on it now!

Unexpected things by sjdavis84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The accident prone waitress runs in to a jerk. Little does she realize how her life will end up changing, hopefully for the better. The jerk she runs into isn’t so much of as a jerk as he is arrogant and dominant… But Bella doesn’t know that.

 

Thanks AstridGreenEyes for the Awesome banner!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49952 Read Count: 41563
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

CHAPTERS ARE STILL TOO SHORT BUT AS ALWAYS A JOY TO READ. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE.



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

IT'S BEEN TOO LONG I MISSED YOUR UPDATE BUT.... THIS WAS WORT TH WAIT. THANK YOU! READ YOU SOON!



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it, and that you thought it was worth the wait! :) It shouldn't be nearly as long for the next chapter, but no promises.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE. UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

thank you for the update. read you soon!!



Author's Response:

You're welcome!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

NOW I'LL BE WAITING IMPATIENTLY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. UPDATE SOON!!!



Author's Response:

Lol! I am working on it, My goal is to start posting once a week.

Summary: Past Featured Story

mdd

Bella is a divorced English teacher, who doesn't know she has a vampire in her class.

"Please don't push me away, Bella. Isn't it my choice if I want to be with you? I'm not a child in the way I feel."

"I'm not the older woman who's going to spend a season educating a teenage boy so he can go off and remember me fondly. I'm looking for forever."

"How do you know I couldn't..."

" Because you're a boy, Edward, a beautiful, sweet, confused, boy! You've got your whole life ahead of you. This kind of thing doesn't work out."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 453800 Read Count: 81083
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2013 Updated: 30 May 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 Wedding

THANK YOU!!!! I'M NOT READY TO LET GO EITHER. NEVER HAVE I BEEN SO DRAWN TO A STORY LIKE THIS. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your enthusiastic response.  I'm not sure why so many romances end at the wedding.  To me, that's just the beginning.  Maybe it's because so many romances are full of the push and pull of indecision, and the wedding ends it.  There's no indecision here; they're both all in.  Considering all they have to face, that's necessary.   

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Not Fair

I'VE BEEN READING FROM THE BEGINNING THE LAST FEW DAYS AND AM TRULY ENJOYING THE FACT THAT IT IS A LONG STORY SO I WOULD ACTUALLY PREFER THE LONGER CHAPTERS WITH AS MUCH DETAIL AS POSSIBLE. YOU WRITE QUITE ELOQUENTLY. TRULY A JOY TO READ.



Author's Response:

Hah!  Another one I missed responding to.  I don't know how that happens, but I think it's how this site organizes reviews.  Sorry I missed you.  Thank you so much for your kind words.  I've been reorganizing my chapters, to try to get them a little closer to the same length.  I shoot for about 6k words, but some of them went to 12k words, which bugs me.  I think originally I did that to make up for a long time between updates.  I think my chapters are longer than many writers do.  I'm also one of those who writes in too many superfluous details.  In editing, I'm seeing too much, "He turned, she smiled, I looked at him..."  Blech!  Details are great, but they should be good ones, not throw-aways.  I'm always happy to learn to do it better.  

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 18 May 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 Tea for Two (Dozen)

perfect!!!!!



Author's Response:

The doll collection was a risk, but I could absolutely imagine Rosalie with a porcelain and satin army!  Over-achieving on the dinner would also be something these old souls would do.  Thank you for the R&R.  

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 24 May 2014 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70 Ex-In-Laws

TRUE!



Author's Response:

That's a tough lesson some parents learn too late.  

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 24 May 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71 Doctor Cullen

SO TRUE!!!! TIME IS NOT OUR FRIEND.



Author's Response:

I can deal with getting old, and everything my body is doing (or not).  What bugs me the most, is that while I feel like I'm the best I've ever been, the world shifts its focus to the young and beautiful.  While everyone pays lips service to substance, character, and inner beauty, the truth stares us in the face daily; beauty is king.  

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 Tantrums

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE SAY THE END IS NOT NEAR! THIS STORY CAN GO ON AND ON AND ON. IT HAS INFINATE POSSLBILITIES.  PLEASE THINK ABOUT IT. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the enthusiasm!  I already feel like I've dragged the story out further than I should have.  Once I'm finished I can be free to write or post something new.  

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Tied with a Bow

NO! THANK YOU!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm kinda confused.  Is it NO! (the story has ended) and Thank you!! (for posting it).  Or did I do something really wrong?  I hope it's the first.  I'm still working on a chapter of outtakes.  Edward had a bit more to say than I realized.  

Relentless by StillDreaming85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 576]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by OTB

Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185512
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Relentless

YOU CAN MAKE THIS RIGHT BY UPDATING!!!!!! READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Sorry for the slow update & slow reply. I was sick & confined to my bed for over a week. I am more or less back to normal now. The next chapter has been written and sent to my beta. She is busy right now, but hopefully we will have it back in a few days. Thanks for your patience. x

Summary: Past Featured Story

PUTP

Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101887
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I'VE BEEN WAITING ANXIOUSLY FOR THIS UPDATE AND IT WAS WELL WORTH THE WAIT AS ALWAYS. POOR BELLA! SHE SURE DOES NEEDS HELP FROM THERAPY AND A CERTAIN STRONG SHOULDER TO LEAN ON NEVER HURTS. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I NOW LOOK FORWARD TO SATURDAYS WITH JOY.... SO FOR THAT I THANK YOU. I AM SO HOOKED I HATE REACHING THE END OF EACH CHAPTER CAUSE THE WAIT SEEMS LIKE FOREVER. THIS WAS SUCH A SWEET CHAPTER I HATE THE THOUGHT OF WHAT'S COMING NEXT BUT... I'LL BE WAITING WITH MY BOX OF KLEENEX NEXT WEEK. READ YOU NEXT SATURDAY!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

 I ALWAYS UNDERSTAND THE WAIT. WRITERS BLOCK YOU!!!!!! THAT'S HARD TO BELIEVE BUT THATS BECAUSE I BELIEVE IN YOU. SWEET CHAPTER SHORT YES BUT SWEET. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!!!!!!! WONDERFULLY LONG CHAPTER AND THEY FINALLY HAD SOME LOVING. THEY MAY NOT HAVE MADE LOVE YET BUT THEY DID SAY THE THREE LTTLE WORDS "I LOVE YOU" AND WHAT A MOTHER'S DAY THEY SHARED. GREAT CHAPTER!!! PLEASE DON'T BE TOO LONG IN UPDATING. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

 I'M SURE IT WILL BE WORTH READING YOUR OFF TO A GREAT START. UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

AS ALWAYS ANOTHER GREAT STORY TO LOOK FORWARD TOO.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

can't wait please update quick!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

AS ALWAYS ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

10K 20K 100K I WILL READ EVERY WORD. I WAS WAITING WITH MY KLEENEX AND IT WAS'NT AS BAD AS I HAD ANTICIPATED. I'M JUST GLAD BELLA IS FINALLY LETTING EDWARD IN AND THAT'S A GOOD SIGN FOR HER TO ALLOW HERSELF TO LIVE AGAIN. READ YOU NEXT WEEK!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

YOU CERTAINLY CRAMED A LOT IN THIS CHAPTER AND IN THE END YOU FINALLY GOT THEM STARTED ON THERE WAY TO BEING A COUPLE.  AS FOR A REASONABLE GRIEVING PERIOD NOTHING IS SET IN STONE. I ONCE KNEW A YOUNG WOMAN WHO'S HUSBAND PASSED AWAY SUDDENLY LEAVING HER WITH AN 8 YR OLD AND A 2WEEK OLD NEWBORN. A MUTUAL FRIEND OF HERS AND HER LATE HUSBAND WAS THERE FOR HER THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE TIME MAKING FUNERAL ARRAINGMENTS AND HELPING OUT WITH DROPPING OFF HER DAUGHTER AT SCHOOL. LONG STORY SHORT THEY WERE MARRIED BEFORE HER LATE HUSBANDS 1 YR ANNIVERSARY AND ARE STILL HAPPILY MARRIED AFTER NEARLY 20 YRS. SO BELLA SHOULD NOT FEEL GUILTY FOR FINDING LOVE AGAIN. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

it's been a while i hope rl is treating you well. thank you for the longer chapter it truly made up for the long wait. i have complete faith in your magic that i'll wait for the lemons to commence at your pace. read you soon.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

THAT! WAS A FUN FILLED CHAPTER. I LIKE THAT SHE'S FOLLOWING HER HEART AND NOT SOME SELF IMPOSED TIME FRAME. I HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER HAS A FEW ORGASMS THEY NEED IT.  READ YOU SOON. REALLY SOON! (LOL)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

CAN'T WAIT!!!!!! 

The Devil In Me by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

devil

Banner made by Fallingsnow Winter 

 

The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.

 

And StillDreaming85

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52217
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2014 Updated: 19 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

HMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK NOW I'M REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OK! NOW I'M HOT AND BOTHERED. ( HE HE HE ) NOT KIDDING.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

VERY INTERESTING!!!! HMMMMMM!!! I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT UPDATE.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

do you enjoy torturing us??????? (he he he) read you next week.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

IF AT ALL POSSIBLE PLEASE DON'T BE TOO LONG IN UPDATING,

Summary:

He has been alive for hundreds of years and seen many things, she had been alive for 21 years and had been through a tough time. What will happen when the two meet? Can Edward save Bella, and can Bella make Edward live again?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12126 Read Count: 1165
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 28 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I LIKE IT SO FAR. THERE ARE GRAMMATICAL ERRORS BUT OTHER THAN THAT I DO LOOK FORWARD TO READING. I JUST HOPE IT IS'NT TOO MUCH FOR YOU TO UPDATE 2 STORIES AT A TIME ESPECIALLY BEING A MOM. I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE.

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. What errors did I miss? I try to get them all, and so does my beta, but we do miss some. (You can PM me on ff if needed) My goal is to update once a week, I think that is a good goal, and eh.. With being a mom I don't sleep much and do most of my writing once everyone is asleep. Lol! Thanks for reviewing and feel free to contact me on fanficion site, I have the same name there as well. Thanks!

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97779
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

THANKS FOR THE CLIFFY.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OOOOOOOOOOOH !!!!!!!!! C L I F F Y !!!!!!!!  READ YOU SOON!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

GREAT START!!!!!!! I THINK BELLA NEEDS A SPANKING  FOR TRYING TO KILL HER BABY DON'T YOU?  UPDATE SOON!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hmmmmmm!!!!!!!!! interesting. frustrating. infuriating.  take your pick.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

INTERESTING!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I N T E R E S T I N G !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! READ YOU NEXT WEEK!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

HMMMM!!!!!!!!! NOT TO BE MEAN BUT WITH EDWARD AND BELLA NOT BEING TOGETHER THE STORY IS SO SAD.  

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

REALLY!!!!! AFTER SO LONG AND THAT'S ALL WE GET???? WHAT A BUMMER. OH WELL... READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

PLEASE DON'T TAKE SO LONG TO UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Neglected and abused; can Bella find the strength to keep going or will she give in to her darker side.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286221 Read Count: 96619
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2014 Updated: 31 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

MORE PLEASE!!! SOON!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW! THAT'S REALLY SAD. I CAN'T IMGINE CARRYING THAT MUCH PAIN AROUND. I WAS HESITANT TO START READING BUT NOW... I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

awww!!!! don't be too long. read you soon.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

awww!!!!! waiting for the next update is always hard. read you soon.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

SIMPLY AMAZING!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

READ YOU SOON. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

SOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! BABY ON BOARD HUH? I HOPE THEY STILL DECIDE  TO GO ON TO COLLEGE IT CAN BE DONE. IT'S NOT THE END OF THE WORLD!! PREGNANCY IS NOT A REASON TO NOT GO ON AS PLANNED. I HOPE YOU SHOW THE POSITIVE SIDE TO THIS SITUATION. READ YOU SOON.

Twilesque by pienuniek Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 182]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Her grandmother taught her to believe in fairy tales. She was told that one day her Prince Charming would come to save her. But after years of abuse, Bella has nearly given up all hope, until the day the Cullens moved to Forks. Twilight AU, mating connection story.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126196 Read Count: 58163
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2014 Updated: 24 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prelude

INTERESTING START I'M HOOKED. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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It was actress Bella's first love scene and she was nervous. Director Edward tries to encourage her. However, when the scene starts, can Edward keep himself together? Remain professional? And after, keep himself in control?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9798 Read Count: 5198
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2014 Updated: 10 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Director's Cut

YOUR OFF TO A GREAT START. I LIKE THE LONG CHAPTER I HOPE THEY CONTINUE AS SUCH. PLEASE TRY NOT TO LEAVE US WAITING EONS BETWEEN UPDATES I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT. I ANXIOUSLY LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. UPDATE SOON!

Not so Unexpected by RockRaven Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

An unexpected event threw Isabella into Edward's arms. Love, devotion and family loyalty keep her there. 

Sequel to Unexpected.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30328 Read Count: 4932
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2014 Updated: 30 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Teaser

ANOTHER GREAT START!!!!!!! THANK YOU FOR CONTINUING YOUR MAGIC. I LOOK FORWARD TO ENJOYING THE SEQUEL AS MUCH AS I ENJOYED " UNEXPECTED " READ YOU SOON!



Author's Response:

Hi There! I'm so sorry for the late response! I didn't get an alert for your message. :) I'm so happy you liked the teaser. Full chapter is posted now...eeep!!! I'm biting my nails. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Photographs

I WAS ALL INTO THE STORY WHEN IN A BLINK OF AN EYE IT WAS OVER!!!!! IT WAS A SHORT CHAPTER BUT... A GREAT ONE NONE THE LESS. IDEALLY I'D LIKE LONGER CHAPTERS BECAUSE I ENJOY YOUR MAGIC BUT WHATEVER YOU GIVE US IS WELL RECIEVED. READ YOU SOON!!



Author's Response:

Hi, I hope you are enjoying what is going on so far. The chapters will get longer as we move along and get more involved with the family. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5222 Read Count: 100410
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2014 Updated: 15 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

SHORT BUT TO THE POINT. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

YOU NEED LOVE SWEETIE I SEND MUCH LOVE YOUR WAY JUST GIVE ME ANOTHER UPDATE (LOL) READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Mar 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

i just read the last 9 chapters and they were awesome. please update soon!!! i look forward to more. read you soon.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE WEDDING!!! UPDATE SOON.  READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

TRIPLETS HUH??? THAT WAS A SWEET CHAPTER. PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

HURRY BACK AS FAST AS YOU CAN. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

there will possibly be a few more updates but I'm not sure how many.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

OK!!!!!!!!!!!!! JUST LEAVE US HANGING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW I'M NOT GONNA BE ABLE TO SLEEP TIL YOU UPDATE. ( LOL ) READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I THINK YOU LIKE DRIVING US CRAZY!!!! (LOL) READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

I just stop writing when it feels right unfortunatly the last few chapters it's been with cliff hangers

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

it was a good filler. thanks! i truly needed it. read you soon.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LET THEM HAVE THEIR WEDDING AT THE VERY LEAST. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

AS I've said from the begining they will get married it will be a HEA but they need to go through so much pain to get there

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

 OH I DEFFINATELY ENJOYED NOW MY BIGGEST FEAR IS WILL THEY KIDNAP HER BEFORE SHE SAYS..... I DO  

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 23 May 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

MEANIE!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

YOU LEFT US HAGING ON....MELON????? YOU EVIL THING YOU. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.