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What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5222 Read Count: 100410
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
I LOOK FORWARD TO A SPEEDY UPDATE ( HE HE HE ) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
JUSTV LEAVE US HANGING HERE WANTING MORE. READ YOU SOON. NO!! SOONER!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
SINCE WE ARE TO EXPECT A LONG WAIT I HOPE IT'S A MUCH LONGER CHAPTER IN ORDER TO MAKE UP FOR THE LONG WAIT. I SUPPOSE ONE CAN ONLY HOPE... RIGHT?? READ YOU SOON.
Bella always worked hard and thought things through before acting on them. She always thought she was a good person with morals. Unlike her mother who had none and only thought of herself. But she began to question her believes In what was right and wrong, when she met a married Edward Cullen.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68789 Read Count: 84709
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I JUST STARTED READING AND SO FAR SO GOOD!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
HE HE HE!!! OF COURSE IT'S ROSE!!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
"CHANGE" YEAH RIGHT CHANGE IS CUMING ALRIGHT.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
OOOOOOOOOO!!!! THE NAILS ARE CUMING OUT.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I'M SURE SHE'LL FIND A WAY TO TRICK HIM BECAUSE THAT'S THE CLICHE WAY TO THESE STORIES. BUT..... I'LL KEEP READING IN HOPES FOR A STRONGER BELLA AND EDWARD.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I'LL GET SICK TO SLEEP NEXT TO HIM.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
KISSING???? I WANT A KISS TOO!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
MMMMMMMMM!!!! I WANT MORE THAN A TASTE!!
Author's Response:
Glad you like the story so far.
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 29
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATES. READ YOU SOON!
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 49
really????????????????????
Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94759
Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
OK!!!!! NOW I WANNA KNOW DO WE HAVE A TRAIN HERE IN LA??????? CAUSE I WANT TO RIDE WITH EDWARD TOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ) HE HE HE ) OH YEAH!! I HAVE MISSED YOU! TRULY A PLEASURE READING SO FAR. I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Hey you!!! Oh, Bobbysgirl, just you wait. I turned myself on, just writing it!!! LOL. Thanks for always being here, and thanks for the tea cups. You know I loves me the cups. I missed you too girl and it's really good to hear from all of you again!! xoxxoxo
Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
BELLA IS QUITE THE WANTED LADY OF THE HOUR IS'NT SHE NOW???? POOR EDWARD HAS HIS WORK CUT OUT FOR HIM. OF COURSE WE ALL KNOW WHO SHE BELONGS TO BUT THE JOURNEY GETTING THERE IS SO WORTH THE WAIT. GO EDWARD!!!!!!! READ YOU SOON,
Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I HAVE MISSED YOU!!!!!! I JUST CAME ACROSS YOUR NEW STORY AND SO FAR IT'S OFF TO A GREAT START. I AM SO HAPPY YOUR BACK!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey you!!!! Welcome back, eh? Glad to see you again and also for your lovely tea cups!!!! Thanks so much and I hope you like this one!!! xooxox
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
THIS CHAPTER FELT A LITTLE TOO SHORT BUT... THAT'S JUST ME ALWAYS! WANTING MORE!!!! I HOPE EDWARD CUMS BACK GUNS LOADED ( NOT LITERALY..OR YEAH! MAYBE I DO MEAN LITERALY )LOL READ YOU SOON.
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
FIRST I'M SORRY I'M FALLING BEHIND BUT RL HAS BEEN A TRUE BITCH BUT UNFORTUNATELY IT IS WHAT IT IS. NOW CH 3&4 WERE SO MUCH FUN TO READ MAKING ME REALISE.... HMMMM!!! I NEED TO START RIDING THE METRO HERE IN LA BECAUSE I'M MISSING ME SOME TRAIN ACTION OBVIOUSLY!!!!(LOL) I LOOK FORWARD TO NEXT WEEKS UPDATE AS ALWAYS. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
TANTRA CHAIR HUH??? I THINK I NEED ME ONE OF THOSE AND AN EDWARD TOO! WOW!! I'M STILL...... OK GOTTA GO ORDER ME A CHAIR AND SEARCH FOR MY HUBBY. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
LOL ... you're too funny, Bobbysgirl. And as usual, thanks for the tea cups!!!! xoxoxxo
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
HMMMMM !!!!!!! HMMMMM!!!!!!!! WOW!! IF I WERE BELLA I'D BE LOOKING FORWARD TO LOTS AND LOTS AND LOTS!!!!OF SELF PLEASURE. AFTER BEING LEFT LIKE THAT THE THOUGHT OF THOSE FINGERS, OH AND LET'S NOT FORGET THAT TONGUE WOULD BRING ME TO MY KNEES. ( MOP PLEASE!! LOL ) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Hey you! Tee hee. I love it when you guys get into it. So many have bounced me because they can't handle it!!!! Thanks for the many cups sweetie. xoxox
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
OH YEAH "THE CHAIR" BEST THING I'VE EVER ASKED FOR IT'S STILL NEW SO I'M STILL LEARNING TOO. (THANKS FOR THE IDEA) I READ THIS CHAPTER TWICE BECAUSE IT SEEMED TOO SHORT BUT THAT'S JUST ME ALWAYS WANTING MORE. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Hey, Bobbysgirl!!!! That chair is the bestest everrrrrr. Everyone should have one!!! I'm so glad you love the story and as usual, thanks so much for the tea cups!!!! xoxox
Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
WOW!! I'M GLAD HIS HEART IS FEELING THAT WARMTH THAT LET'S US KNOW WHEN THAT CERTAIN PERSON MEANS SOMETING MORE EVEN IF HE'S NOT SURE EXACTLY WHAT HE'S FEELING. WELL DONE! I HOPE YOUR DAY WAS FULL OF LOVE YOU DESERVE IT. THANK YOU FOR MY MOTHER'S DAY SMILE. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Bobbysgirl! Always glad to see your review AND the cups!!!! xoxoxxo
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I HATE THAT YOU HAVE HATERS WHO DON'T UNDERSTAND THE CONCEPT OF "FANTASY" WE READ TO GET AWAY FROM THE NORM AND SOME OF US CRAZIES ( I WON'T MENTION ANY NAMES....ME LOL) EVEN TRY SOME OF THE CRAZY SHIT WE READ. SO DON'T FRET OVER PEOPLE WHO LIVE TO PUT OTHERS DOWN. IT'S NOT WORTH YOUR PRECIOUS TIME. NOW... AS FOR THIS CHAPTER IT WAS TOO SHORT FOR MY LIKING BUT AS YOU KNOW I'M A DISHIE WHORE I'M NEVER SATISFIED I ALWAYS WANT MORE! MORE!! MORE!!! (LOL) I'M GLAD EDWARD IS CUMING TO REALISE SOONER (HOPFULLY) RATHER THAN LATER HIS FEELINGS FOR BELLA ARE REAL. SMILE SWEETIE LIFES TOO SHORT TO LET SHIT GET TO YOU. :) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 24 May 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
SHORT BUT TO THE POINT! THANKS FOR MY SATURDAY "SMILE" I REALLY NEEDED IT. WOW! I TRULY HOPE IT ALL STARTS GOING IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION FOR EDWARD AND BELLA. MAYBE THE MORE THEY SEE OF EACHOTHER SHE WILL MAKE THE CONNECTION AND MESS WITH HIM IN A TEASINGLY WAY INSTEAD OF BEING UPSET ABOUT SOMETHING SHE WAS EQUALLY TO BLAME FOR. ONE CAN HOPE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I'M GLAD YOU'VE SHOWN HIS SOFTER SIDE AND THAT BELLA HAS HAD A CHANCE TO SEE IT BEFORE SHE FINDS OUT HIS OTHER IDENTITY. ALTHOUGH FROM YOUR OPENING A/N YOU'VE HINTED THAT TROUBLE IS... CUMMING??? (NOT TOO MUCH ANGST PLZ!!!) I WAS HOPING SHE'D FIGURE IT OUT AND MAYBE MESS WITH HIS HEAD BUT NOT BE TOTALY UPSET SINCE SHE DID ALLOW IT TO HAPPEND. BUT... THAT'S JUST ME. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
I hope you like how it's written, Bobbysgirl. Thanks so much for the cups as well. See you soon. xox
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
HE HE HE!!! SOMEONE GIVING YOU SHIT? SWEETIE JUST PLAY ALONG AND LAUGH AT IT. YOU KNOW AND I KNOW THAT NOT EVERY STORY IS FOR EVERONE. I!!! HAVE YET TO DISLIKE A STORY OF YOURS AND I'M SURE I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE. SO DON'T LET ANYONE GET TO YOU!!!!!! NOW! I REALLY LIKED THIS CHAPTER IT WAS SWEET AND IT GAVE THEM BOTH SOME TIME TO GET TO KNOW EACHOTHER. IT APPEARS OUR EDWARD HAS A SOFT, SWEET, LOVING SIDE TO HIM. I CAN UNDERSTAND WANTING TO LET ANTHONY OUT TO PLAY FOR HIS/HER PHYSICAL NEEDS OR MAYBE PUTTING AN END TO ANTHONY SO EDWARD CAN BE HIMSELF. BUT... ONLY YOU KNOW THE ANSWER TO THAT. NOW DON'T YOU???
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
OH! NO! YOU! DID'NT!!!!!! JUST LEAVE US WET AND WANTING!! REALLY!!! YOU! YOU MEANIE!!!! I'M GLAD "SHE" ENDED IT WITH ANTHONY AND IS CONCENTRATING ON EDWARD BUT I STILL FEAR THE TRUTH IS'NT GONNA BE PRETTY WHEN IT FINALLY CUMS OUT. AS FOR YOU MISSY I HOPE LIFE'S BEING GOOD TO YOU AND YOUR WORRIES A FEW :) :) :) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
WELL...AT LEAST HE WAS HONEST ABOUT HIS FEELINGS FOR HER AND ADMITTED HE'S LOVED BEFORE. GOOD FOR HIM BUT WHAT WILL BELLA REVEAL. HMMM!!!! THANK YOU FOR THE EARLY UPDATE. THEY SEEM TO BE HEADED IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION BUT KNOWING YOU TROUBLE IS JUST AROUND THE CORNER FOR THEN (LOL) ENJOY YOUR TIME IN QUEBEC. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
LOL ... you know me well, don't you? You know I can't leave well enough alone. Thanks for always reading and reviewing Bobbysgirl!!! And especially for the cups. xoxo
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I HOPE YOUR TIME AWAY WAS GOOD. AS ALWAYS A VERY ENJOYABLE CHAPTER. I LIKE THAT HE'S REALLY TAKING HIS TIME LETTING BELLA GET TO KNOW "EDWARD" SO VICTORIA HUH? WELL THAT CAN ONLY MEAN ONE THING "D R A M A !!!" (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I'VE MISSED YOU BUT I HOPE YOUR HAVING FUN. NOW AS FOR THIS CHAPTER...BELLA HANDLED HERSELF PERFECTLY WITH VICTORIA. AS FOR THERE FIRST TIME AS EDWARD AND BELLA HMMM!!! ALMOST PERFECT. I SAY ALMOST BECAUSE I'M NOT A CONDOM PERSON. (NOT THAT I!! WEAR THEM) BELIEVE ME I UNDERSTAND THE REASONS FOR CONDOMS AND THEY ARE GOOD REASONS TO USE THEM BUT PERSONALLY I'M JUST NOT A FAN AND WHEN I READ I'D RATHER FOCUS ON THE ROMANCE AND NOT THE POSSIBILITY OF STD'S. IT KINDA KILLS THE MOOD BOTH LITERALY AND PHYSICALY. (LOL) IT'S FICTION AND.... OK I'M RAMBLING. YOU GET MY DRIFT (HE HE HE ) READ YOU SOON
Author's Response:
LOL, I totally agree with you on the condom thing. I have never used one before and believe it's a mood breaker. BUT, I only put this in the story because the fandom will call me on it without a doubt. Eventually they will quit using them as they become more comfortable with each other. So glad you like the story, though Bobbysgirl!! and as always, thanks for the teacups!!! Love you girl!!!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I AM SO GLAD BELLA TOLD EDWARD WHAT REALLY HAPPEND WITH PHIL AND THAT PHIL'S STUPIDITY DID'NT CAUSE PROBLEMS BETWEEN THEM. I SO WANTED EDWARD TO SAY THOSE THREE LITTLE WORDS! OH HELL MARRYING HER IN ITALY WOULD HAVE BEEN GREAT! THEN ONCE SHE FOUND OUT HE WAS OR SHOULD I SAY IS ANTHONY HE'D ALREADY BE HER HUSBAND BUT THEN THAT WOULD BE TO EASY WOULD'NT IT???? (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
HMMMM!!!! IT STARTED WITH SEX AND DECLARATIONS OF LOVE FOR EACHOTHER THEN HIS EX MAKES A PLEA. MMMM!!! MMM!!! WELL NOW WE HAVE TO WAIT AND SEE WHERE YOUR MAGIC TAKES THEM NEXT. READ YOU SOON.
Banner by: DeebelleOnefic
This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways. What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 479034
Date: 09 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
BUT... YET THE END IS NEAR. SO SAD!
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
ABSOFUCKINLUTELY STILL ENJOYING. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
THANKS!! NOW I CAN GO TO BED WITH A SMILE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
READING THAT LIST OF NICKNAMES IS A STORY IN AND OF ITSELF. (LOL) I'M STILL TRYING TO PICK MY TONGUE UP OFF THE FLOOR. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 23 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OFF TO A GREAT START!!!! AS ALWAYS.READ YOU SOON.
Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I HATE CUMMING TO THE END OF THE CHAPTER CAUSE I WANT MORE!!!!!!! READ YOU SOON.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
FUNNY! FUNNY!!! FUNNY!!!!! READ YOU SOON.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I WAS REALLY GETTING TOTALY AND COMPLETELY ABSORBED WHEN YOU DECIDED TO PULL THE RUG RIGHT FROM UNDER US. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
LEMONS ARE ALWAYS WELCUM BUT I LOOK FORWARD TO YOU SHARING IN YOUR GIVEN TIME. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
thank you for my smile today. i truly needed it read you soon.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
SHORT BUT INFORMATIVE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
MY THOUGHTS ARE...... I TRUST YOUR MAGIC AND LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
HAPPY EASTER!!!! ( MAYBE THE EASTER BUNNY WILL BE GOOD TO US AND LEAVE US SOMETHING SWEET TO READ TOMORROW HMMMM?????????????????
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I WAS WAITING FOR THIS UPDATE. THANK YOU! NOW...... I CAN GO HUNT FOR EASTER EGGS. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
YOU ENJOY TORTURING US DON'T YOU????? READ YOU SOON.
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I'M GLAD THEY TALKED. I LOOK FORWARD TO WHAT TOMORROW BRINGS. READ YOU SOON
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I WOULD NEVER!!! QUESTION YOUR MAGIC, I JUST READ IT, LOOK FORWARD TO IT AND ENJOY IT. GREAT CHAPTER. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
:) THANK YOU FOR THE SMILE AND THE UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I HAVE AN IDEA BUT I'LL LET YOU INFORM US ON YOUR TERMS. YOU DO THE MAGIC AND I ALONG WITH EVERYONE ELSE JUST READ. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
IT'S GOOD TO SEE THEM SPENDING TIME TOGETHER BOTH AS A FAMILY AND AS A COUPLE. THERE WAS EVEN TALK ABOUT HAVING A BABY.... A POSSIBLE SUPER BABY. HMMM!!!! READ YOU SOON.
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
CAN'T COMPLAIN SO THAT SHOULD BE GOOD...NO? READ YOU SOON.
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
MANY THOUGHTS BUT I'LL WAIT FOR YOURS. READ YOU SOON.
Bella, America's young sweetheart on screen, is starring in her first R-rated film. Her co-star is Edward Cullen, Hollywood's reputed playboy, and he won't give her the time of day. Will they fizzle onscreen as Bella attempts to turn up the heat in her first erotic scene, or can she cause a reaction powerful enough to burn through his arrogant, impassive facade?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39631 Read Count: 6257
Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I AM ONE OF THOSE READERS WHO ENJOY A FAST PACE AND TO THE POINT STORY BUT I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE. SO YOUR OFF TO A GOOD START SO FAR. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
I'd almost suggest this is more like a mystery or suspense story--what is Edward's problem and why is he like this? There are a lot of layers and "clues," and I sorta hope that once someone finishes the story, she wants to go back and read it again after learning about his past. :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M
Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.
Banner by: Beffers87
Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56115
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
TOMMOROW CAN'T CUM FAST ENOUGH!!!! ( LOL )
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
WOW!!! REALLY!!!!! WET HUH???? (HE HE HE) READ YOU SOON.
Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201984
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!
I'M ON MY WAY OVER TO READ THE O/S. SWEET CHAPTER. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks and thank you for reviewing. :) As always your reviews were a huge ego boost for me. :* The next chapter should be up on Tuesday. Take care. Ann
Date: 28 May 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter-28: The Geek and His Nerd
SO WHY DOES EDWARD CONTINUES TO REFFER TO BELLA AS HIS WIFE IF THEY DON'T KNOW EACHOTHER VERY WELL AND SHE CONTINUES TO SEE THEM AS NOTHING MORE THAN FRIENDS???????? HMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!! (LOL) SO IS EDWARD SUPPOSE TO BUY HIS FRIEND A BIRTHDAY GIFT OR HIS WIFE? DECISIONS! DECISIONS!!!
Author's Response:
That's why I said, "Poor Edward." :P
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be out by Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter- 42: New Year, New Beginning
NOW THAT'S HOW YOU START OFF A NEW YEAR WITH A BANG. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
LOL! I thought you might enjoy it. :D
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter- 41: Move Into My Heart
CHRISTMAS IN JULY WAS COZY. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter-21: Back to Square One
DOES BELLA NOT UNDERSTAND THE MEANING OF " MARRIAGE " REGUARDLESS OF HOW OR WHY THEY GOT MARRIED SHE AGREED!!!!!!!!!!!!! UNLESS SHE HAS A MENTAL DISORDER SHE OF HER OWN FREE WILL AGREED TO ENTER INTO A MARRIAGE AND EVERYTHING IT ENTAILS. SHE'S ACTING LIKE AN IMMATURE CHILD!!!! I SURE HOPE SHE GROWS UP SOON AND EITHER GETS THE MARRIAGE ANULLED OR ACCEPTS "RESPONSIBILITY" FOR HER OWN DECISIONS. THIS CHAPTER WAS VERY FRUSTRATING!!!!!!! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Can I say calm down? Okay I know it was frustrating but that was the last of it... sort of... at least for now.
Thanks for the review.
Don't worry they'll start talking real soon.
The next chapter will be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life
OH SWEETIE I AM SO GLAD YOU'VE DECIDED TO CUM HERE WITH YOUR STORY. THE EASE AND "TEA CUPS" WILL BE WORTH POSTING HERE. I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR MAGIC HERE AND WAIT PATIENTLY FOR YOU TO BRING THIS STORY UP TO WERE YOUR AT OVER AT FFN. READ YOU SOON!!!
Author's Response:
HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's so good to see you here. I have posted Change My Mind here because a community in ffn said it was not properly rated... (insert eye roll here... :-P) and then thought of posting OTC here as well in case they think it's too adult-like for M rating. Because I am definitely going to put dirty stuff in this one... even if at the very end. After the next few days of daily updates hopefully TWCS will be parallel to ffn so that I can post at both sites at the same time.
P.S. Chapter -16 is almost done... ;-)
Ann
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius
OK! FIRST I AM SORRY IF SOUNDED MEAN OR RUDE IN THE LAST REVIEW I TRULLY WAS'NT TRYING TO BE... I WAS FRUSTRATED WITH BELLA AND HER IMMATURITY. AS FOR THIS CHAPTER IT WAS A START IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Hey, relax. We're good! You weren't rude... I was frustrated with the last chapter myself but I swear, it wrote itself... I just needed to give them another hard push before reeling them in. I'm EVIL! :P
Yeah, this chapter was kind of a stepping stone for their growth as a couple... they're gonna have to learn how to be a part of a whole (since they both have pretty much non-existant dating history), how to communicate, how to support each other... and maybe they can even fall in love in the end! ;)
So, for the forseeable future I don't see anymore of Edward-Bella fighting... :)
The next chapter will be up on Tuesday.. hopefully.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 06 May 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Tentative Friendships
I AM SO GLAD EDWARD FOUND HIS BALLS AND FINALLY!! EXPRESSED HIS FEELINGS TO BELLA. NOW! THERE BEHAVING LIKE "ADULTS" LET'S HOPE IT CONTINUES. (STUDY HARD AND GOOD LUCK) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the good luck wish! :)
I am halfway through with my exam... I just have to appear for a viva voce tomorrow and then back to fic-world! :D
Oh they'll continue behaving like adults... unless some freaky idea comes into my mind... :P
But as far as I can see there's gonna be bonding time for now. :)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter will be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Decepticons Prepare for Battle
HMMMM!!!!! CAN'T WAIT! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. :)
I cannot tell you what's going to happen... but it's gonna be hilarious! ;)
I know I'm EVIL for making you wait. :P
The next chapter will be up by Friday.. hopefully.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?
HMMMM!!!!THIS STORY IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES AND I LOOK FORWARD TO EACH AND EVERY UPDATE BUT IT'S ALSO THE MOST FRUSTRATING!!!!!!! I GUESS IT'S HARD FOR ME TO UNDERSTAND WHY THEY CAN'T GET PAST ACTING LIKE KIDS. I'M A TRUE BELIEVER IN "LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT" YES IT'S POSSIBLE TO FALL IN LOVE WITH ONE LOOK. YES IT'S POSSIBLE TO HAVE SEX SOMTIMES THAT FIRST DAY YOU MEET (ALTHOUGH I DID WAIT APPROX 2 MONTHS) BUT I KNOW FOR A FACT THAT LOVE CAN AND DOES HAPPEN WITH ONE LOOK. I SAW MY HUSBAND WHEN I WAS AROUND 10 OR 11 YEARS OLD AND FELT AN INSTANT CONNECTION. WE STARTED SEEING EACHOTHER (9/21/76) WHEN I WAS 15 HE ASKED ME TO MARRY HIM (10/09/76) DO THE MATH. ALMOST 38 YEARS LATER AND I STILL LOVE HIM. OK! OK! ENOUGH ABOUT ME... IT'S JUST FRUSTRATING THAT BELLA AND EDWARD CAN'T SEEM TO GET PASSED THE "BE MY FRIEND" STAGE WHEN THEY ARE ALREADY "MARRIED" (LOL) LITTLE RANT OVER...... READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
First, thank you for your review. I actually enjoy reading your little rants. :D
Second, Your RL love story made me go 'AWWW' for a few minutes. All I can say is lucky you! :)
I believe in love at first sight, but I also love to frustrate to hell out of people... including myself. ;)
I also believe friendship is the first step of falling in love. For Edward and Bella in OTC, this is a story about how they fall in love bit by bit with each passing day. So their friendship is the first step of their something more... for me.
Arranged marriages are the norm in my society and honestly, I see so many couples being together, yet not knowing each other in their whole lives. Because they are not each other's friend and I wanted to focus on that first. But things are starting to move faster in OTC now. :)
All right, I guess I ranted a bit as well, sorry! :P
The next chapter will be up of Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Lonely Beds and Miserable Hearts
IN READING YOUR AUTHORS RESPONSE AND RE-READING YOUR PROFILE THE LIGHT BULB FINALLY WENT ON. I NOW UNDERSTAND WHY I COULD'NT QUITE GRASP YOUR INTENTIONS FOR THIS STORY AND NOW I DO. IT'S BECAUSE WE VIEW LIFE IN TOTALY DIFFERENT WAYS. ME BEING FROM THE USA AND YOU BEING FROM SOUTH EAST ASIA I'M SURE WE WERE RAISED WITH DIFFERENCES NOT ONE BEING BAD OR BETTER THAN THE OTHER JUST DIFFERENT. OK.... NOW I'M GOING TO TRY TO SEE THINGS FROM YOUR POINT OF VIEW. GOT IT!!! (WELL NOW YOU KNOW I'M A HORNY PERV LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
LOL! I am constantly trying to visualize things from your point of view. But yeah, it is different in my side of the world. I tried to incorporate both sides in my writing. :)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
P.S. I am a perv too. So no worries. Your secret is safe with me. ;)
Date: 24 May 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Who Said First Dates Should Be Awkward?
HMMM!!! FROM WHAT I'VE HEARD MOST FAMOUS MAKE-UP ARTIST SAY "BLUE EYESHADOW" IS THEE #1 NO NO. I LIKE DARK NAVY EYELINER BUT THAT'S JUST ME. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Meh, who cares about makeup artists? I personally am not a big fan of eyeshadows but eyeliners are a totally different matter. I have 4 dark navy ones that are NOT the same shade... despite what my mom says. :P
The next chapter should be out on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter-29: A Little Piece of Me
A BIT OF A FILLER BUT ENJOYABLE NONE THE LESS. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Yes, it was a filler but it lays the ground work for the next one. Besides, I really wanted to write a chapter showing Rosalie and Bella's school mischiefs. :)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter will be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter-30: What? How? WOW!
WAS HE TRYING TO RECAPTURE HER SWEET SIXTEEN FOR HER????? SWEET YES BUT A LITTLE ON THE IMMATURE SIDE FOR THERE AGE AND STATIS. I AGREE IT WAS A SWEET GESTURE ON HIS PART BUT C'MON SHE'S NOT A TEENY BOPPER ANYMORE IT SHOULD HAVE ENDED IN A MORE MATURE WAY. HE SEEMS TO WANT TO REGRESSS AND WORK HIS WAY BACK BUT IT'S TOO LATE IN THE GAME FOR THAT BUT THAT'S JUST ME. THE ENDING WAS A LITTLE DISAPPOINTING BUT MAYBE SOON THEY'LL REALISE THEY'RE NOT TEENAGERS ANYMORE ALTHOUGH IT IS FUN ACTING LIKE TEENAGERS ONCE IN A WHILE. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
I am trying to make them amp up the heat but they won't listen, I swear! :P
The next chapter should be up by Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter-31: Who the Fuck is Ian?
IF YOUR MAN BUYS YOUR MONTHLY NEEDS WITHOUT BITCHING.... HE'S A KEEPER! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Hmm, might have to keep that in mind for future references. ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter-32: Two L-Words
HMMM!!!! INTERESTING CHAPTER... INFORMATIVE AND ENLIGHTENING BUT LEFT A QUESTION TO BE PONDERED SO IT SEEMS. LOVE OR LUST??? THE TRUTH IS YOU CAN'T HAVE ONE WITHOUT THE OTHER WHEN IT CUMS TO FALLING IN LOVE. YOU SEE WHEN IT CUMS TO OUR FAMILY OR OUR PETS OR EVEN A GOOD BOOK WE CAN LOVE THEM WITH ALL OUR HEART BUT NEVER DO WE FEEL LUST! (OR I HOPE NOT...EWWW!!!) WHEN OUR HEARTS TAKE OVER IT'S INVOLUNTARY IT JUST HAPPENDS SURE WE CAN DECIDE AGAINST IT BUT IT DOES'NT CHANGE THE TRUE FEELING. IT DOES'NT MATTER WHICH CUMS FIRST BE IT LOVE OR LUST. YOU NEVER HAVE ONE WITHOUT THE OTHER BECAUSE IT'S WHAT DRAWS YOU TO SOMEONE. IS LUST WRONG??? ONLY IF IT'S YOUR FAMILY, YOUR PET OR A GOOD BOOK (HE HE HE) OK! OK!! I KNOW I'M A TRUE BELIEVER IN LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT. (LOL) READ YOU SOON
Author's Response:
First of all, let me join in your corus of EWWWWWWWWWWW!!! :P
I know you are a true believer. :)
These two will see the light too... soon, I hope. ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
The next update should be on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter-33: Halloween Horror Stories
AS I BEGAN THIS CHAPTER I REALISED... SHE HAS'NT BEEN ACTING LIKE A TEENAGER, SHE'S ACTING LIKE A TWELVE YEAR OLD!! ALICE AND JASPER ARE SEEING EACHOTHER. ROSE AND EMMETT ANNOUNCE THEIR MUTUAL AFFECTION FOR EACHOTHER ALL WHILE BELLA'S GATHERING "MENTAL NOTES" FOR WHEN SHE'S READY FOR SOMETHING MORE THAN KISSING. REALLY!!!! AND SHE DOES'NT WANT TO SOUND LIKE THE SCARED "LITTLE VIRGIN" EVEN ROSE TOLD HER TO "JUST FUCK" SO THEY REVEALED SOME PASSED HISTORY I GUESS IT MADE HER FEEL BETTER ABOUT... WHAT???? HONESTY???? WHICH ONE OF THEM HAS BEEN TRULY BEEN "HONEST" WITH THE OTHER HMMM????? IT STILL MAKES ME LAUGH WHEN SHE REFFERS TO HIM AS "HER HUSBAND" LOL! LOL! FUNNY SHIT!!! THIS CHAPTER. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Okay... I thought she was starting to act more mature than before but... :/
Anywho, thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life
THAT KINDA EXPLAINS WHY THEY CAN'T GROW UP. THEY HAVE DEEP SEEDED MOMMY AND DADDY ISSUES. HMMMM!!!! YUP! IT EXPLAINS ALOT! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing.
A lot more explaining is about to come soon. :)
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter-35: Let’s Create New Memories, Baby!
FINALLY!! SOMETHING THAT SAYS... HEY THEIR NOT TEENYBOPPRES THEY ARE TRUE BLUE GROWN ASS ADULTS. MARRIED ADULTS. DUH!!! READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
I thought you might appreciate this one. ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
The next chapter should be out on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter-36: My Vampire Girl
ATHE START OF THIS CHAPTER BELLA WAS SAYING "WE'RE NOT THERE YET" I WAS JUST WONDERING...WHERE IS THERE??? HELOOOOOO IT DOES'NT TAKE A GENIOUS TO FIGURE OUT..... WET PUSSY HARD DICK YOUR "THERE" THEN SHE ENDS WITH " I THINK WERE READY " OK! SOMEONE NEEDS A LITTLE PROZAC. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
I read your review... went back and read the whole chapter but failed to find where she said "We're not there yet." But anyways, she's inexperienced, so I think we can forgo the Prozac for now. :)
Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter-37: Sprinkle of Love
FINALLY!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL. I was actually thinking that's what you're gonna say... ;)
Thank you for reviewing.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter-38: A Taste of Coffee and Bella
NO GUESSES I TRUST YOU TO DO YOUR MAGIC. THIS WAS A SWEET CHAPTER BUT HAD IT BEEN ONE OF US AMERICANS WE WOULD HAVE BEEN GOING AT IT LIKE TWO ENERGISER BUNNIES AT LEAST FOR THE FIRST WEEK (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Aww... thank you. :*
I'm sorry for the late reply and for not updating last Tuesday. I was pretty sick.
Oh trust me, they're gonna go at it... I'm just not writing all of it. But you're free to use your imagination! ;)
The next chapter should be up soon.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter-39: The Titanium Wall
I THANK YOU FOR THE LONG PEACE OFFERING WELL DONE. I'M GLAD YOUR FEELING BETTER AND LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
You're welcome. :)
Thanks for reviewing.
The next chapter should be up on Tuesday.
Take care.
Ann