Reviews by Bobbysgirl
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201984
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter-40: Fucking Dogs and Fake Talons

READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. :)

The next chapter should be up on Friday.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter- 44: Bottomless Love

INSATIABLE IS ABSOLUTLY RIGHT! READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response: LOL! The song was suggested by a friend of mine and when I listened to it, all I could think about was this... ;) Thank you for the review. :) The next chapter should be up on Friday. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter- 45: When The Cookie Doesn't Come To You

I CAN UNDERSTAND HER FEELING LIKE SHE NEEDS TO DO IT RIGHT WITH ALL THE BELLS AND WHISTLES SHE OBVIOUSLY MISSED OUT ON. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :) The next chapter should be up in a few minutes. Take care. Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Successful Lawyer Edward Cullen and college student Isabella Swan both have very dark and extreme appetites for pleasure. The two meet one afternoon and the attraction is instantaneous. Certain that the other will never accept their personal lifestyle choices, they fight the almost irresistible draw to one another not realizing that they both have more in common than they realize. NC-17 for a very good reason. Multiple partnering, non-canon kind of.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué, Romantic Comedy, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 223504 Read Count: 137458
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Jul 2016
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

YOUR "OFF" TO A GREAT START!! THAT'S FOR SURE. 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm glad that you are enjoying it.

Summary:

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 When Edward Cullen invites his friend Renee and her daughter to stay over while Renee files a divorce, Edward finds out his wife Tanya was cheating after all. Bella goes to comfort him. When Bella and her secret adult lover get caught and arrested how will there world crumble before them? A/H - BxE -*TRIGGER WARNINGS!*


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5876 Read Count: 3765
[Report This] Published: 10 Apr 2014 Updated: 10 May 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Expect the unexpected

OKAY!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH! I'D WATCH A MOVIE WITH HIM. REALLY GOOD. 



Author's Response:

AwwThanks! 



Author's Response:

AwwThanks! 



Author's Response:

AwwThanks! 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Uh Oh

17 AND 21 = GOOD FUCKING!



Author's Response:

:3 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

THIS IS A GREAT START TO MY DAY.... JUST WHAT I NEEDED.



Author's Response:

Thank you! 



Author's Response:

:3 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

THIS IS TRULYY EVERY TEENS SECRET DREAM AND THE ONLY BAD THING IS THAT AT 17  SADLY...MOST END UP GETTING HURT BECAUSE IT'S LUST THAT WINS. VERY FEW FIND TRUE LOVE IN THEIR TEENS. ( ALTHOUGH I DID! )



Author's Response:

Mhm. But dont worry! 

Judgment Day by 2amlovesick2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 113]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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This fabulous banner was created by debzdezins. Thank you so much!

Three innocent people, each surviving day by day until their lives intersect. One man accused of a crime he didn't commit. A second man setup to save another. A young woman whose life is threatened, hiding from a killer on the loose. Connections are made. Bonds are formed. Each living with the hope to see their own Judgment Day. Canon pairing AH M for violence and adult content.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 314922 Read Count: 30029
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2014 Updated: 14 Mar 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

INTERESTING!



Author's Response:

Say Something by cookiedough95 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

How do you fix something you've broken? Two children and one divorce later, Bella is pregnant again. Only the problem is, it's her ex-husband's.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2399 Read Count: 1237
[Report This] Published: 23 Apr 2014 Updated: 23 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM SO GLAD YOU POSTED HERE. NOW ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS POST UP TO WERE YOU LEFT OFF AT FFn. READ YOU SOON.

My Daddy by Kitacullen89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

My name is Isabella Swan and this is my story about me and my daddy


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27756 Read Count: 38350
[Report This] Published: 03 May 2014 Updated: 04 May 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Baby Bella Gets Caught

I SO LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. GREAT START DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response: 😃 Thank you for reading

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When you're Almost a Shooting Star, eventually over time, you turn into a One Hit Wonder. Follow Edward Cullen and his trials and tribulations as he finds the one woman who stole his heart. Can time bring the pair back together? Or were they a One Hit Wonder themselves?



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25887 Read Count: 1220
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2014 Updated: 05 May 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 06 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Against the Wind

POOR EDWARD... WHAT A WAY TO MEET YOUR SON. HUH?

Summary:

 

Two lonely people, living in New York City, having dirty conversations via Tumblr. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19361 Read Count: 5130
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2014 Updated: 01 Dec 2020
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 28 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

FUN START. READ YOU SOON,



Author's Response:

LOL Thansks! 

Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126212
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

FUCK IS RIGHT!!!!! (LOL) GREAT START I HOPE YOU UPDATE FREQUENTLY. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yes let the games begin. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IT'S TORTURE WAITING. READ YOU SOON.

Summary:

edward is a feared and respected mob boss with no emothional ties to anyone, big b is emmetts sister and shes scared to let anyone in. but one thing is certain edward can't stop thinking about her and her big bambi eyes, could this be a recipe for disaster or love 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 73 Read Count: 2890
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2014 Updated: 07 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Ti penso. (i think of you)

WOW! TOTALY OFF TO A GREAT START. I LOOK FORWARD TO SPEEDY AND FREQUENT UPDATES. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Ti penso. (i think of you)

VERY ENVELOPNG. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Ti penso. (i think of you)

PLEASE!!!! UPDATE SOONER RATHER THAN LATER. READ YOU SOON.

Summary:

When their space station is attacked, physicist Isabella Swan and space technologist, Edward Masen, face the most intelligent and dangerous man deemed to have lived on earth in the last two hundred years. This is the story of how they hold on to the love that's been blossoming for months as they struggle for survival. Can their love and radioactivity mesh together to create the perfect weapon of destruction? AH. Rated for language and adult themes.

 

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9022 Read Count: 804
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Radioactive Love

YOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!! READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

Aww... did I tell you that I love reading your reviews? If I didn't, then believe me, I do. After a whole day of work, it feels amazing to see you loved what I wrote. :)

Thank you.

See you in OTC. Take care.

xo

Ann

Summary:

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Born as a Roman slave, Eduardus serves a depraved mistress and learns that he is nothing. Stolen into a world of violence, Eduardus slakes his thirst without remorse, and learns that he is a monster. Fleeing to a world of asceticism, Edward finds relief in oblivion and learns that life is pain. But in rescuing his Singer, Edward learns that he must live.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55208 Read Count: 6107
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2014 Updated: 12 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Lamia

I LIKE!!! YOUR OFF TO A GREAT START AND I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review - it means a lot! Gla you're enjoying it so far. :) xo, Linda (Cullenboyz)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

MORE PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Inflammare

UPDATE SOON.



Author's Response:

Yes, ma'am! :D  Actually, I'm gonna post another one right now. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146715
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Support System

2 WEEKS FEELS LIKE FOREVER!! ( LOL ) READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm sorry, but it takes me 2 weeks to write a chapter :(. See you Monday after next ;).

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame

TEASER NO TEASER. 10 DAYS 14 DAYS DOES/NT MATTER I'LL WAIT. (LOL) SERIOUSLY I DO LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. I'D RATHER THE CHAPTERS BE LONGER BETWEEN WAITS BUT OVERALL STILL WORTH THE WAIT. READ YOU SOON!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I promise, from chapter three on they will be longer. For now, my chapters vary between 2,500 and 5,000 words. Next chapter is about as long as this one but after that, it gets longer ;). See you then.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

OK!! SOUNDS WORTH A TRY.



Author's Response: Thanks! I'll do my best to make sure you won't regret it.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale

AWWW!!!!! I TRULY LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER. YOUR RIGHT I FIND IT HARD TO READ EDWARD SLEEPING AROUND ON BELLA EVEN IF THEY ARE'NT TOGETHER YET. IT'S JUST WRONG!! I CERTAINLY HOPE EDWARD CARES ENOUGH FOR BELLA TO ALWAYS STAND UP TO HIS FATHER. WEAK EDWARD NOT COOL. I WISH THE CHAPTERS WERE LONGER AND MUCH MORE FREQUENT BUT THATSUP TO YOU. I JUST HAVE TO WAIT (LOL) READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response: Thanks! I promise, Edward won't sleep around. And yes, he'll soon find a reason to finally stand his ground with his father ;). The chapters will be longer soon. There will still be ones around 3,000 words but I just finished chapter 7 and I think it's around 6,000 words. So there are longer chapters to come for sure. See you in Bella's head next time.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate

I'LL LEAVE THE STORY TELLING TO YOU CAUSE YOUR DOING A GREAT JOB SO FAR. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response: Thanks! It's good you're leaving things to me since I've already written nine chapters. If I'd let someone else have a say now, there could be some problems ;). CU next chapter.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News

EDWARD WAS SHOCKED BUT UNDERSTANDING NO SUPRISE THERE....AND BELLA SEEMS OPEN TO TRYING TO BE GOOD PARENTS "TOGETHER" I GUESS THE PROBLEM WILL BE CARLISLE SINCE HE HAS SNOOTY WANTS FOR EDWARD. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Who wouldn't have been shocked? But Edward reacted very well. Yeah, Carlisle will sure be a problem, but before that, there will be some other things to handle. See you next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082171
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

can't wait!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

IF I LEAVE YOU SOME LOVE WILL IT GET ME ANOTHER UPDATE????? LOL READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

THANK YOU FOR THE LONG CHAPTER. HAD IT BEEN SPLIT IN TWO YOU PROBABLY WOULD HAVE DRIVEN US NUTS.(LOL) READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

It would have been cruel to have split it up. That's why I leave it to my discretion to have longer chapters. The next long chapter will be more citrusy. *Scouts honor!*

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

EMMETT TO THE RESCUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

PAIN!!! SOMEONE HURT BELLA?????

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH! AS ALWAYS YOU ARE OFF TO AN AWESOME START. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OOOOOO!!!!!!! NEW FRIENDS TO LOOK FORWARD TOO. I WONDER WHO???????? (LOL) 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

:) :) SUCH A JOY TO READ.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

MUCH LOVE!!!!!! THANK YOU IT WAS NICE CUMMING HOME TO ANOTHER UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

LOVE! LOVE!!! LOVE!!!!! ASLWAYS LOVE FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

MORE! MORE! MORE!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

read you soon!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

CAN'T WAIT!!! READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

too short to decide.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

ALL MY LOVE TO YOU ALWAYS!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

WE NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEND NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!! (LOL) SERIOUSLY NOW PLEASE!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

THANK YOU!!!!!!!! READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

NOW YOU LEFT ME HUNGY!!!!! (LOL) READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

LOOKING FORWARD THE NEXT UPDATE. THANKS READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OK!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

BELLA HAS A BABY NOW!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

ONLY YOU KNOW THE ANSWER TO THAT MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

 like a good girl i'll wait!!!( lol ) read you soon

At His Command by dpdp2317 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary:

 

Isabella Swan, 21, a student at NYU, spends a passion filled night with billionaire Edward Cullen, 31. The next morning, he tells her that he wants her to be his submissive. She finds herself thrust into the world of BDSM, where pain is pleasure, and less is more. Follow Bella on this kinky journey, as she tries to be Edward's perfect little pet. But, is there more to the story?

Thank you BE1965 for the wonderful banner. 

I'm ever grateful to RAH07890 who is painstakingly beta'ing every chapter. She is an essential to the story, and I'm so thankful to her.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26137 Read Count: 26179
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I LIKE!!!MOST DEFINATELY! 

End of Innocence by pappy73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary:

They say what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger. Being an Italian Godfather will not stop a Sicilian Principessa from murdering him, it will only make her more determined. We love hard and fight harder that's just who we are, but when faced with the largest obstacle of our life, can we come out of it togther or will it tear us apart?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 106618 Read Count: 14018
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2014 Updated: 10 Mar 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

HERE I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE DEALING WITH HEALTH ISSUES AND UNFORTUNATELY A RECENT DEATH IN THE FAMILY. REAL LIFE SUCKS!!! BUT WE'LL GET THROUGH IT.  I LIKE THE LONG CHAPTER IT WAS ENLIGHTENING TO SAY THE LEAST. UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN. AS ALWAYS I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry Bobbysgirl! My thoughts and prayers are with you always! RL does suck, that's why I'm glad I do have this one outlet, ya know? Pushing through is the only option I guess. LOL  Thank you for reading doll...

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I'M A LITTLE DISAPPOINTED YOU REMOVED THE ORIGINAL VERSION I REALLY LIKED RE-READING IT. AS FOR THIS VERSION I SEE YOU REMOVED THE INTIMATE ACT THAT OCCURED IN THE LIMO... CALL ME CRAZY BUT I KINDA MISSED IT (LOL) SINCE YOUR RE-WRITING THIS STORY MY HOPES ARE THAT YOU WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE THE LONG CHAPTERS I PREVIOUSLY ENJOED IMMENSLY AND I HOPE UPDATES WILL BE MORE FREQUENT SINCE IT IS SOMEWHAT PRE-WRITTEN. INOW AS FOR THIS VERSION I LIKE THE SUBLE CHANGES I HOPE YOU KEEP THAT SAME FEEL AND NOT BE SOFT ALL THE TIME CAUSE I ACTUALLY LIKED THE ROUGHNESS THE ORIGINAL HAD. DON'T DOUBT YOUR MAGIC YOU ARE AMAZING AT WHAT YOU DO.SOOOOOO!!!!!!  WELCUM BACK! GOOD LUCK! AND I LOOK FORWARD TO READING YOUR MAGIC THIS TIME AROUND. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. NO! SOONER!!! ( HE HE HE ) READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your lovely and engouraging words. As you probably know the main reason why I did pull it was the hate I was getting from the original version. I do plan on keeping the rough, possessive and controlling Edward,but Isabella will also have tendencies of being the same. I do hope you enjoy the new version of End of Innocence as much as I have enjoyed re-writiing it.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

NOW I UNDERSTAND WHY YOU REMOVED THE SEX ACT IN THE LIMO FROM THE FIRST CHAPTER. IT'S BECAUSE THIS TIME SHE'S NO LONGER A VIRGIN AND YET SHE WAS SOLD AS " IN TACT " MEANING  " A VIRGIN " I'M A LITTLE CONFUSED HERE.  HMM!! CALL ME CRAZY BUT I'M MISSING THE ORIGINAL VERSION. I'M STILL LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

If your confused about her being sold as a virgin, I REALLY wish I could explain that part, but sadly it's part of the story. I've had a lot of people tell me they miss they original version, but they think I've outdone myself with the rewrite. IDK, I'm satisfied with the rewrite I guess. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

WELL DONE! I LIKE THE DIRECTION YOUR TAKING THE STORY SO FAR. I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE HOPFULLY IT WILL CUM MUCH QUICKER SINCE IT IS A RE-WRITE. ( ONE CAN ONYL HOPE... RIGHT???) LOL READ YOU SOON.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Sometimes what you are looking for happens to be right in front of you. A little face-to-face confrontation with reality is said to be good for bringing everything in perspective. Can a near-death experience bring similar results for CSIs Bella and Edward? Rated M, AH, OOC, Canon pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6364 Read Count: 1937
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2014 Updated: 23 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Trust Me, Love Me

THIS!!! IS THE PROLOGUE TO YOUR NEXT CHAPTER STORY.  IT TRULY IS WORTH CONTINUING. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response: Aww... that's so sweet of you. :* Although I kind of have my next story already plotted out, so maybe I'll see what I can do about continuing this li'l one later. But that being said, there's still hope. ;) Thanks for reviewing. Take care. Ann

40 Something by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 267]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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This is about a older Edward and Bella 40 somethings. The story starts with a very unhappy Bella and her husband Jacob . Edward and Bella have yet to meet so bare with me for a while.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70470 Read Count: 57329
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 13 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hmm!!! interesting!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.