Reviews by pamspastime
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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Great story.....Thank You :)



Author's Response:

I apologize for the lateness of this response.  I think I felt like some of my readers who waited to read the final chapter-if I didn't answer the last set of reviews right away, it wouldn't be over yet.  I want to thank you for taking this journey with me.  I know at times it was hard, but you stayed with me, and I can't tell you how much that means to me.  Thank you!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 5 (Part 3)

Wow a thousand dollars a day!!!!! 

I hope Bella takes the job....it should get interesting with all of them under the same roof...

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Milk Money

Aww great chapter....Charlie getting the hang of nursing and Bella already thinking of next time....can't wait to see what happens now....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 5 (part 5)

That master room is gorgeous.....as is Charlie's room....one of them needs to think of the idea of Bella and her daughter moving in .....he does have all those unused bedrooms after all....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 10 Part 4

Awww....it's almost like a real family.....we just need to get rid of excess baggage......

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 3 (part 1)

A blow out....LOL....Charlie is starting to get enough food to make waste.....that's great! Edward better get him some nose plugs ....



Author's Response:

doesn't smell that bad as breast milk.

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 2 (part 4)

What a unusual concept for a story.....It's very good so far.....Poor Charlie having a mother that doesn't care whether he thrives or not...I hope she doesn't stay in the picture seeing as she doesn't deserve to be....

I know from your other stories you use photos ....which I love.....are you going to do that in this one also ? Either way the story is great....

I have a feeling once Bella actually sees Charlie she'll want to help him as much as possible....

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 2 (part 6)

That's bound to be a relief to Edward....but he's probably not convinced yet after trying so many other milks.....can't wait to see how the relationship between Bella, Edward and baby Charlie plays out....

Love the added pics.....can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Glad you like the pics!

 

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 3 (part 4)

Glad everything is working out for everyone....Charlie getting to eat and get better and Bella being able to pay for School....can't wait to see how this continues to work between them......Love the pic by he way :)

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 3 (part 5)

Now he's starting to get smart....get rid of the useless mother....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 4 (part 1)

Bella will probably become tabloid fodder as Edwards new mystery girl.....Edward should offer her a job as full time wet nurse/nanny and pay her more than she makes at the pub plus she could bring her daughter along....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 4 (part 2)

I love how Bella just didn't wait at the door......please say that the girl wasn't the worthless mother....if so I hope it's to gather her things to leave for good....

Bella is going to have to get more intimate with Charlie soon if her milk is going to not dry up....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 4 (part 3)

I hope Charlie takes to nursing it's not easy sometimes.....Bella won't be able to help but form a bond with Charlie once she does.....I hope Edward gets to see his son being feed like he should have all along and finally gets rid of Tanya...

I think an extra chapter would be great :))

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

Oh man how are they going to fix this one....Bella didn't even get to say she has no husband....can't wait to see how this plays out....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 5 (Part 9)

Tanya can not go fast enough....

sounds lie Charlie could get attached to Bella real easy by him nursing him....he will probably think Bella is his Mother.....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 6 Part 1

Congrates on being the featured story.....it's a great read and deserves this....

looking forward to Edward and Bella's talk...

the pics are great  :)

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 6 (Part 3)

I hope he's going to ask her to bring Elizabeth to his house for them to stay....and be safe from the reporters....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 7 part 3

Awww a cute nickname ....bumblebee.....she found out that Tanya is nothing like her characters she plays......

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 7 part 5

And now he knows.....no father in the picture.....I think we will have a happy Edward....now we just need to lose the useless baby mama....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 8 Part 2

The picture of baby Elisabeth is beautiful......and I can so picture her saying Mama with her hand out .....I love that she's already calling Charlie her baby......sweet....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 10 Part 1

Aww that was cute picturing Edward playing with Elizabeth......we need to get Tanya to come back so she can leave for good.....lol...

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 10 part 2

LOL....poor embarrassed Edward .....but I'm sure he's wishing he had gotten a better look....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 10 Part 3

Bella's about to find out just what kind of mother Tanya is....a bad one....

charlie won't know any mother besides Bella....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 10 part 7

LOL.....Edward finally got a peak....

The wicked witch is home.....time for her to go for good.....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 11 Part 2

I figured seeing Bella nurse would get to him....and I'm sure this is not a one time occasion for them seeing as Bella lives there and nurses his son....

now we just need to get rid of the problem....Tanya.

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 07 May 2015 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 11 Part 3

Well this should be interesting......Tanya will probably want Edward to get rid of Bella, Elizabeth and Alice .....not caring that Charlie needs Bella......or she won't care in the least and just takes off again.....can't wait to see what happens....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 11 Part 6

It's about time he gets rid of Tanya.......that'd be funny if she woke up in a rash from eating a meatball and had to walk the RC......

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 12 part 1

I guess Alice will need a fancier dress....

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella is an English woman, trying to escape a marriage she doesn't want. Edward is a Scottish Laird, with a soft spot for a damsel in distress and a hate for the English Redcoats that pursue her, but what does he do with her now that he has saved her? He has no choice, other than to bring her home, but he wasn't counting on falling for the lass on the journey to Castle Menzies.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32098 Read Count: 136771
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2015 Updated: 07 Jun 2015
Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Really great story so far.....you've managed to combine a few things that I love with Twilight a little Outlander and Garwood......

pic love the characters.....can't wait to see how this goes once they reach Edwards home....



Author's Response:

Thank you. I love all three of those things too. Thanks for the reviews x x

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Such a scary thought to be in a strange place not knowing anyone or understand what most are saying to you.....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I hope Jasper's leaving Bella alone in a strange place wasn't a bad idea.....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh my !!!!! Things are starting to heat up.....can't wait for next chapter....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Looking forward to the wedding.....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This should be an interesting wedding night.....can't wait to see how it goes....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I don't think I'd be a fan of having no door either.....poor Bella must be frightened....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Realy good....I think Bella's going to like that part of married life....can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I see the first married fight brewing....that should be good.....loving this story so much..

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

She needs to tell him what she's really mad about....him not saying bye when he left or where he was going.....but it's their first fight so they need to make up now....lol

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I hope Edward returns unharmed....glad Bella told him about being upset over him not saying goodbye when he leaves....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Someone's about to be angry when she finds out Edward is married.....that probably won't be good either.....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh no....wonder who that could've been ? Edward I hope....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I was also thinking maybe it was a woman instead of a man.....can't wait to see who it was.....

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Caught ogling her husband....lol...

looking forward to next chapter....



Author's Response:

Hello! I just wanted to say a huge thank you for all your wonderful reviews on my story. I  read and treasure every single one of them. x x

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28879
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm thinking since they both come from Forks that maybe Esme or Carlisle may have been behind Bellas winning the contest and all the extra perks......matchmaking for Bella and Edward.....

Sharp Left Turn by fyrebyrd89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 295]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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In an instant your life can take a sharp left turn. Can you find the strength to lose it all and gain the unknown? Lives will be shattered, including your own.  

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155558 Read Count: 62544
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2016
Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Slippery When Wet

Leave it to the kids to solve all the problems.....if they marry no need for separate beds.



Author's Response:

LOL, yeah the kids think of things in simple terms. Bella has some reservations though and we'll find out more about that soon. The family descends next! See you Friday :)

Fyre

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99372
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

Thanks for this one time EPOV because it helped to get a feel for him and learn his story.....the pictures of the guys are HOT!!!!

now I'm wondering what Bella has picked to get tattooed and where.......I hope it's somewhere that drives Edward even more crazy .....lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I loved the pictures, too!  When Bella does get the tattoo, I have a picture of where it is, and what it is ;)

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Bella's Background

The sooner the better so I vote Sat. :)

i love it so far and I love all the pictures you post with the story.....looking forward to more....



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much!  The pictures help me, too!  When I write/read, it plays like a movie in my head.  So, any visual to help the readers "see" that "movie" is great!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

Glad we get to see the tattoo.....and can't wait to read how Edward does while seeing part of her body and trying to focus on working.....lol



Author's Response:

;) :D  Thank you!

Crowned by cristina Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

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A playboy prince and an unwilling princess. An unusual match, brought together by strange circumstances. Will they find love or are they doomed to hate each other? 

Banners made by  the very talented StillDreaming85 and FallingSnow Winter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35361 Read Count: 32511
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2015 Updated: 04 Oct 2015
Reviewer: pamspastime Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Very intriguing start ......so many questions to be answered ? Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.