Reviews by Soni-Angel
First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189018
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 Little League

Hi Amy!

 

Had a blast rereading this hilarious chapter once again and still firmly believe that little Megan has stolen the show. As much as I love Emmett and his pranks his little girl has taken over his number one spot. Not only does she fight for what she believes is hers, she has no qualms to confront the perpetrator but knows that she needs to try and be subtle about it;) 

I love that Edward want's another baby even though they already have four and three are boys. Can't say I blame him for wanting to try for another little girl, especially after being introduced to the enchanting Miss Kayla;) who has her daddy wrapped around her little finger. She is really a princess in the making;)

Just seeing the dynamic that was the adult friendship being replayed in the relationship the kiddies have with each other makes a heart proud. In this day and age that somthing that so often falls by the wayside;P Thank you for such a wonderful story that basically caters to all one's needs. This outtake was just what I needed for my humour fix Nolebucgrl style;) that I had needed;D

Looking forward to the next SC chapter and once again congrats on being ahead of schedule on the original fic;) Can't wait till it is on the store shelves;) Keep well until the next time;)



Author's Response:

Haha that's Megan in a nutshell.  She's an interesting mix of both parents and you just know she has her Dad's ability to talk his way out of trouble 90% of the time.

Edward just loves his big, crazy family and will want as many as she'll give in and let him have.  Kayla definitely is a Daddy's girl and he adores her in every way.

I love that the kids are BFF's just like their parents are.  We had that dynamic in a couple military families we hung with a lot growing up.

Thanks, trying to get some SC written this weekend.  We'll see!  Thanks so much!

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Ruling

Hi Anna-Margaret!

This was a fitting ending to a wonderful story especially considering your health;) Thank you so much for letting me take this journey with your wonderful and sometimes flawed characters;) It was wonderful to see Edward grow up from the selfish, womanizing jerk who only considered his own pleasures to the selfless and wonderfully considerate husband he was to Isabella;)

Isabella's fears that Edward would stop desiring her while her love grew brighter was certainly laid to rest completely and utterly by him. It is so sad just knowing that she had to mourn him for so many years before joining him in their eternal life the engraved plaque was so fitting about them. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us and hopefully we will get to read something more from you, your health permitting ofcourse;) I truly enjoyed reading this wonderful story and wish you all the best in the future;)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much darling! I couldn't have done it without the support of all my amazing and wonderful readers. I'm glad you liked this final chapter and felt it a fitting end. The plaque was one of the first images that popped into my head when this story first began to unfold in my mind. I have started writing a new story (for MTV's Teen Wolf) but it's posted on my FanFiction and AO3 accounts. It's called A Little Helping Hand if you want to give it a go, if you like Teen Wolf. It'll be very different to this story, thankfully not as much research.

Anyway, thank you so much for the lovely review and I'm glad to have had you for a reader.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Birthing

I have finally gotten around to reading this wonderful story. With how bad things are for you health wise and the loss of a loved one your determination to post chapters for this story is admirable;) It was such a pleasure to witness Edward finally maturing and changing into the man and king he now is thanks to his wonderful wife;) You have given us a Tanya that one could not help but like especially when she befriended Bella and stood by her in her time of need. I honestly hope that Bella does survive her fever and comes back fighting fit, I do believe that Edward would be totally lost without her in his life. With everything that they had to overcome to finally find their love and happiness it would be heartbreaking if he did lose her to death. Thanks for sharing and looking forward to reading the next chapter update;)

Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Living

Hi Anna-Margaret!

This was another awesome update! Just knowing that this is the penultimate chapter is sad but I can't wait to see how you will end this wonderful tale;) While it is was heartbreaking to know how serious Bella's illness was, I love that the king did not just give up but sat with her throughout her illness and nursed her back to health once she had recovered. 

Finally Esme has found her HEA with Carlise amidst the worry of the queen's health. You just got to love how precious their little angel Helen is with her knowledge that her mama will be fine as she has them to look after her;) Love the fact that Bella is the one who named their son despite her being out of it and Edward has not let the grass grow under his feet and gotten their little boy baptised as soon as humanly possible.

Loving the fact that Edward did not want to leave his wife's side once she had recovered;) He has finally found the love he was meant to find in his wife and with his children. While sad that their is only one chapter left I can't wait to see your vision for the rest of their HEA. Thanks for sharing and I do hope you are having more good days than bad. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

A cocky QB runs into a snarky band geek. What happens when they collide on and off the field?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 182382 Read Count: 106387
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Hi Amy!

So I just wanted to say awesome update and yes I do know that I reviewed on FF but this way I get to read the chapter twice and maybe say whatever I forgot in the other review. As you know my words by now this was an awesome chapter and seeing the personal progress that Edward has made from the selfish and self serivng manwhore that he was is just incredible. Just the way he interacts with Rainbow and cares for her tells me that he will make an awesome daddy one day. 

Just gotta love Carlisle and his observation that Edward would make a facinating father one day but Edward got him back with the comment about the crazy chick at the bonfire who would have definetly being a grandpa in nine months. Both Cullen boys are spending Christmas with their girls. I can't wait to see how Charlie reacts to having Edward visiting his home. I do know that Riley is gonna be pissed and hopefully Rainbow will get a couple of swipes in too;) So anxious to read more;)



Author's Response:

Haha aren't you the best?  Thank you!  He is coming along very nicely indeed!  He will be a great dad one day!

Carlisle and Edward are so much fun together!  We'll see how i goes with Charlie and I'm sure Riley will make an appearance!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Hi Amy!

Rainbow certainly saved the day and firmly put Riley in his place where he belonged. Love her fascination with the STACHE and how hopeful she is in recruiting her Mom and Dad in helping her get it;) From Rainbow's thoughts to our ears, she loves her daddy more than mom;) Thanks for sharing and congratulations once again on being published;)

Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Hey Amy! I actually posted a review on FF but wanted to leave some words here too;P I really do enjoy reading this story;P Edward shows us how much he has grown and changed when he tries to fight his dickish behavior when talking to Ellie. One can not blame him for reverting back to being a dick when it becomes obvious that she wants to hook up despite him having a girlfriend. It is so sad when you find that you have outgrown your highschool friends and have nothing in common anymore. I love the fact that he misses Bella so much that he decides to go to her in Washington;P I believe that whatever Bella was alluding to in her drunken state is in your one shot that was done for the compilation, will you be posting that one shot? Thanks for sharing this hilarious story with us and I am so please that your stories can be found on another site incase FF does decide to do the unthinkable and remove any of your stories;) TTYS



Author's Response:

Aww sweet of you to hit both places :)  He's definitely grown and changed but he's still him at the same time :)  He did need to bring out the inner dick for sure.  It's always weird to see how you change from the people you were once so tight with huh?

Yeah I will be posting the one shot but not until the reveal happens in Sideline :)

Thanks!

Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hi Amy! 

 

Just wanted to leave a few words here again! I have to reiterate how hilarious I found Charlie. You gotta love how he not only came across as an obsessed fan and a gay guy who was falling for Edward but also as an overprotective dad looking out for his daughter's virtue. 

If Cockyback ever needs to use his speed again, I am sure that all he has to do is remember the episode in the kitchen;) 

After all the fuss and misunderstandings they are finally where they belong in each other's arms. I can't wait to see what will go down between Edward and Riley at dinner;) Thanks for listening to me ramble once again and looking forward to the next update;)



Author's Response:

You're too good to me hon!  I love that he was all over poor confused Edward.  Love that he went to the gay place, of course.  The boy can't fathom anybody not wanting him. hehe

Yeah, he can run from "I do's" on the field.

They needed their time, for sure.  Had to make it happen, so he ran!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Hi Amy!

Once again I so enjoyed reading this chapter! Even though Cockyback was having some jealous feeling concerning Riley he didn't allow it to get in the way of standing up for his girl;D Riley may still be carrying a torch for Bella but his asshole ways was uncalled for. That is not the way you treat someone you care about, his words toward Bella was not only hurtful but demeaning. I love that our qb had the perfect comeback that Riley richly deserved to hear. Riley may have been there first but Edward intended being the last one she was with;) Oh, you have me salivating about the dinner now, I wonder how Riley will handle Charlie's obvious infatuation with Edward considering what he went through to date Bella. I guess that will be the ultimate smack that may get him to back off;) Thanks for sharing and I can't wait to see if Rainbow looks after her daddy's interests at dinner;D



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, he wasn't about to let anyone mess with his girl.  Riley apparently doesn't like a bigger, badder man around his ex for sure.  Our QB did have a great comeback :)  You'll have to see how it goes with Charlie! hehe Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Soni-Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hi Amy!

Awesome update and I must apologize for reviewing so late;( Reading this once again on this site just allowed me to howl with laughter till the tears ran;) Thanks for brightening my day with a good laugh;D

This chapter should have come with a warning that random laughter was ahead;)

Loved Christmas morning with Bella and Edward exchanging gifts first and than going to Charlie's and doing it there too. I love that Edward and Charlie have found something to bond over without Edward stressing so much about Charlie's intentions.

OMG! I love Rainbow, who has taken an instant disliking to Riley and made it very clear too. Their little family have taken care of Riley with lots of help from Rainbow;D Rainbow certainly needs a medal of honor for defending her family to the best of her ability;P Can't wait for the next installment;)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you had a godo time with it hon!  Love to make you laugh til you cry!

 

They had a great Xmas all in all, once they dispatched of the idiot. hehe Rainbow took care of business and Mom and Dad cleaned up the mess :) 

Thanks hon!