Reviews by shenaniwhatagans
Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028970
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm going to have to get a job if this is what is waiting for me there!!

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

LOL...not sure if it's a good thing for her or not to be handed off to James??? 

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hummm, James is Bi & love that he doesn't even cover up to great them, at least he stopped thrusting LOL

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes, kick the small strawberry blonde to the curb!  Way to go dirty girl Bella, the good girls always have some dark dirty secret somewhere :D

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Holy shit in a hand basket! Not even a whimper, what is wrong with the stupid vampgirl...she doesn't deserve him. 

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Now that is the James I remember...such a dick

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm sure he can get Bella to take care of the blow job issue.  I'm kinda scared for Tanya at the moment...didn't think I would ever say that...

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

LMFAO

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh, he can punish me anytime!

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The butterfly mystery is solved & in a kinky kinda way ;)  

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Sigh...I think I passed out at this part of the o/s

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

LOL I love your AN...cause it's sooo true. 

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I want to be his new toy!!!!!! I've been really good

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I love how Emmett always seems to be a switch or the sub in BDSM stories LOL Not sure if I can picture Alice giving it to him though....

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Shamelessly inserting himself into her life <3

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Stepping up his game

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Performing under pressure can be very stressful...wait or stress releaving...

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

OMG your killing me!!! Now I'm going to have that image in my head all throughout dinner tonight 

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

A nice slow build for Sir :)

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Now there's a picture I would like to see

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Damn he needs to open up the window!

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Emmett calling out Edward on his stalkerness..classic

Better is Edward calling out Em's submitting...LMAO

Edward is evil with the whole Jessica thing, trying to drive butterfly crazy! I like it <3

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Making her wait while he watches from his room...hot

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Knew it...he is just as turned on by her. He can't stop thinking or watching her. Love him!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

OMG  I think I would only be able to nod dumbly too!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

LOL..."Oh no she fucking didn't"...he cracks me up!!!  I think she is going to have her first punishment. :(

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

She likes being his little slut and seriously...who wouldn't!  I love this story

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Hope you enjoyed your vaction!!  

Edward is getting himself all worked up...he needs to re-read his 'Being a Dom 101' book. LMAO

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

He is going to have to meet with her soon, cause I don't think he will be able to stand not being close enough to touch for much longer!

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

He can teach me anytime...you write a mighty hot vamp dom. I think I may be in love with him :)

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Learning who you belong too seems to be a hard lesson for Bella tonight.  So fiesty...he is going to love taming her!

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

When they finally get together in person, I might have to have a drink to calm down first...can't wait

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

So freaking hot!!!  Seeing him do this in my mind over and over again...way to worked up. You rock my dear!!!

 

I will help spread the news about Involuntary Rapture. I was surprised it lasted that long on FF ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

I read the orginal and I wanted to say...I LOVE hearing his side.  It makes the story even hotter than before & I wasn't sure that was possible!!

Knowing how she is affecting him and making him lose his focus and that his need for her is spinning out of control...so hot 

Please don't stop writing this!!!

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

She has some serious self control! I need my own midnight caller to check on my own ;)

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

I wish I could say that he was cruel to keep building her up and then making her stop over and over again...but it's what Dom's do and he does it so freaking good!

She should be thanking the Dom gods for him, I'm telling you!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

The elusive female ejaculation...after being a worked up as she is know wonder she finally blew.  Wonder is she will be begging for him to make her do it again!!  Lucky girl

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Oh my, his words of what he will do to her has me fanning myself.  How does one find such a confident, domineering vampire???  Is there like a group on facebook or something cause I will serch that shit out...just saying ;D

Still loving this story and living through butterfly.  I hope you continue it past the end of the orginal cause I really want to see what happens when they are in the same room and he is pushing her!!!

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING THIS!!!!  I'm dying to see were you are going to take this and what they will do together.  I personally had a family emergency so I was out of the reading for a bit but I'm back now and will be checking daily...please *on my knees begging*

Now this chapter...knew he was losing his control on himself. Dying to find out who his master is and what that conversation will entail.  Will it be Carlise or Aro??? I'll fall over if it's Emmett cause that would be hysterical if Edward trained under him and had to submit to Emmett!!! LMAO

Anyway, I'll be waiting for the next chapter like a good girl :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Thank god it wasn't Emmett but I think I secretly wanted it to be LOL

I'm sure Carlise trained him well and was quite shocked to see him suddenly fall to his knees.  Will Edward be able to handle it if Carlise points out that he is having real feelings for the human girl???  Does he suspect that is the case or is he oblivious to it?? Has he ever been affected this way by a submissive or a girl before??

So many questions that will bounce around my brain until the next chapter!! 



Author's Response:

Edward has never felt this way before.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

As every good Dom should do, you must see what it is like for your submissive. You must know what it is they are giving up to you. :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Wow, flustered much?!?!  He comes off so confident with himself so it's interesting to see him vulnerable.  But it's very cute on him :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

I'm sure Carlise's eye probably bugged out of his head when Edward said he wanted to ravage her...lol...poor Carlise, where did all his training go?!?!

Right out the window cause Edward can't get enough of butterfly...will all the rules go out the window with her?

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

He is always talking about what he will do to her with his cock (to butterfly & himself), so I'm confused...was he just getting her riled up and wishing with himself? And that seems like an even lonlier life than not having anyone...no physical touch.  I understand why, but that's just makes me sad for him.



Author's Response:

Well, if I had it to write again, I wouldn't have put some of those lines in there, but I'm not changing any of the original fic, just adding too it, so I have to work around those parts. Don't worry, if u read the one shot, u know he gets his desire.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Ok, so Tanya is a vampire so that answers my physical touch question from last chapter, right?!?

I'm glad he was already looking for a new Dom for her cause he did seem to push her off really quickly...of course it makes sense why now...silly out of control vampire Dom!!!  Open your eyes and see that she is probably your true mate & you couldn't stay away if you wanted to. :)

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

I guess Edward wouldn't react well to the news that butterfly was his mate?!  

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Love that Jessica is still driving her crazy at work with all the sex talk.  Edward is a bad bad man ;)

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Getting himself under control by looking at what he really wanted!  That a boy :)

Wonder what he is asking Tanya....possibilities are dancing around in my head...

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Moving this Master/butterfly relationship along I see...I think she likes being HIS butterfly ;)

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Hummmm, I don't think I could control it to the level that is usually demanded. Then again I also don't have a hot Dom training me in doing so...I would be up for trying though ;)

Glad he is feeling better under control...when will he realize that he won't be able to not put his cock in her???  Crazy vamp

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Oh Edward...so wicked that we love you!  Punishing her because she can touch herself and you can't...get your butt in gear and walk across the street man!!!  Silly smoking hot vampire

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Tough call about the phone calls for me...but I know I'm late on my reading so it probably doesn't matter anymore...I can't wait for them to meet but knowing all the full details of the week in between would be awesome. :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

I wish he would call me first thing in the morning and say such things to me!!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

A day of finding out what he likes...*drops to knees* Yes, sir!!!

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

I guess he will be chasing her orgasm with his own...knowing the speed of vampires I'm sure he will have no problem sqeezing one out in 4.5 min.!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

I love this story, just in case you weren't sure or anything!!!!!  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Sooooo, Tanya works at the salon he is sending her too and this would be why he called her before.  Crazy man, asking Kate to keep her away from butterfly was sweet but does he really think Tanya will let her be there and her not have a few things to say to her?  

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Way to go Kate!!!  Saving butterfly from being eatten by Tanya I assume.  

Not that he isn't always on her mind, but he's calling her throughout the day today to get her in the frame of mind that she is his??? Yes?  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

A spa day...sigh!  Is it wrong that I love a good waxing????  It kinda makes me feel sexier and only good things can come from that!!!  Just over sharing for a minute...sorry :)



Author's Response:

no such thing as over sharing

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

She did so well for a first time waxer!  Not even cussing :)

I think it is sweet that your hubby calls you his butterfly...you are a very lucky lady!!!

And to Sir...not that you don't already know this but your butterfly is one awesome girl who write super hot stories.  



Author's Response:

He hasn't read my work.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

LOL Emmett & his dirty mind!!!!   Edward may want to watch her walk in knowing she is out of her comfort zone but I'm pretty sure when he smells her a super sexed up he is going to regret it just a bit. ;)

 

You totally deserve to be on the top ten most reviewed!!! You are amazing :D



Author's Response:

awwww thanks... I just can't believe the seven people reading this fic can review sooooo much... kidding.. i know its more like 8 or 9 people...giggle

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

I can imagine what he thought when he realized that she thought of herself as a whore...it must have broke his heart cause he cares for her so much.  Such a good Dom and getting on it ASAP!!!  Love him

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Love that he thought that being closer to her would lessen his want for her...men are crazy!

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Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Butterfly is getting so confident in herself with Sir!!!

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Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Damn, Tanya cockblocking poor Edward.  What the hell does she want anyway!!!!  Kick her ass to the curb quickly Edward, cause I don't trust her :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Oooh snap!  Get off your knees sweetie, cause he doesn't like trash!  Glad he quickly put her in her place and sent her on her way.  He needs to focus on his butterfly :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

I never recieve any update information from TWCS, I just continue to check on this story daily.  I belong to the TWCS group on FB so if it's not posted there that something updates I don't know.  If someone could explain how to get them though that would be sweet!

Back to my dear Edward and his poor overworked cock.  I sure hope he has stocked up on cleanser cause he is having a hell of a time keeping his walls & windows cum free!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Thanks for the invite and I will def check it out :)

So, he is finally going to start working with her...can't wait to actually hear what went on during those work events...

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

I was wondering the same thing about his voice...wouldn't she recongize it as Sir's???  I guess if he used he's real seductive Dom voice when on the phone with her it would be harded for her to recongnize.  Interesting though 



Author's Response:

well, at this point everyone is reminding her of him, and she think's there is no way it would be Edward.... sooo, she dismisses it.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

I always wondered what was going on in the orginal when he asked he out at work.  Was he testing her or just curious about what she would do??  LOL what the hell was Emmett thinking???  He really likes to get Edward all riled up!!!!  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Edward is finally realizing that he has acutal feelings for butterfly!!!  Well, he realizes that someting is different about the situation but I'm sure that those feelings are going to smash into him soon. Since he is Edward I can't wait to see him panic when he figures it out :)  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

I kinda forgot all about the penthouse and the new playroom...oooh I can't wait!  

So he was acutally insecure about how she felt about his real self & that's why he asked her out...silly vampire!  He does it a few times in the orginal...he really likes to mess with her then, huh?!?!

Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

Poor Edward having to see Jasper & Alice in his head!!!

Butterfly is going to have a kick ass playroom :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

A flogger...I'm fascinated with them!!  Oooh or a crop...yet another obsession.  Apparently I really need to get my husband to learn how to use these toys LOL

But anything you have Sir use on Butterfly will be hot...cause that's just how you write my dear!!!

 



Author's Response:

I was terrified of a flogger until my Mistress took me shopping for one. Honestly, most of them are not that hard to use and aren't that painful. Go to an adult store and play around with them. Wear shorts or a skirt. Use them on your thigh. Remember, you can always just lightly flick. I've even used mine on my husband, on his most sensative areas. I don't hit, just glide over it. It feels like a hundred fingers touching u all at once. :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

She is still so insecure about his need for her :(  Once they meet in person I know she will never question it again!!

His words are still killing me...if I had a jacket on I think I would have thrown it to the floor immediatly too

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

It just got very hot in here....my god woman, are you trying to kill me!!!!

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Teasing her about work guys when he's one...and the table...omg

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

I love the Wreck room and your RL Sir aka Sugar Dom seems so sweet!  You are a very lucky girl!!!

Now back to the story....his words are still killing me...the candlestick!!! *faints from hyperventilating*

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

I'm telling you there should be a talking dirty in the bedroom class for those men that are a bit on the shy side...just saying that Sir here could teach the hell out of that class!!!!

So freaking hot

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Well, I guess they are going to be very late for work now....they will really need a shower after this fun. :D

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Oh my Sir...so forceful and hot!!!  He is really only going to be torturing himself cause ya know his body is going to react to her scent!!!  His cock is going to be on overdrive today at work!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

LOL Love your AN!!!

Edward, Edward, Edward...what the hell were you thinking dude!!!  We all saw it coming but sometimes you just have to learn first hand!!!

I hope Emmett makes it through the day without Edward fighting him..LMAO

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132

Jessica cracks me up.  So Edward has taken to flirting with B during work hours now!  I wonder if he will have something to say about her cleaning up in the ladies room, cause you know he will noticed she did something.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

Well, they are all really comfortable with each other!!!  hehehe  

I love that everyone already know that she is Edward's mate but Edward...always the last to figure out his feelings...

Thanks for having Alice whip Emmett's ass though...it put a smile on my face :)

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Emmett, always the funny guy...love the comment about the love of his life sitting across from him....did Edward even get it??

Are we heading to the playroom with this phone call????  Yes please!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

So excited that the time has come for them to meet!!!

I really enjoy the story how you've been doing it...a mixture of both pov's.  I don't know if the entire playroom scenes would need to be done in both but getting into both theirs heads a bit during it would be sweet.

You have never taken me down a wrong path, so I'm totally submitting to your choice ;)  Love you Noc!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

He's so funny about touching her...thinking about biting her & changing her.  He is going to have to have that conversation sooner rather than later with Carlise or Alice :

He is going to have to have the Dom's creed on constant repeat in his head when he's around butterfly...cause she is going to test him to the thousanth degree ;)

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

I think most of us have had that realization at some point ourselves, when we realize what exactly turns us on and it seems so wrong.  But wrong it is not...so enjoy it!!!!

Sir can totally take my body for his pleasure...repeatedly please ;)

He is not to lenient tonight...no cumming for butterfly.  I'm sure he is suffering as well...

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

No it's totally hot that he took her panties and jerked off!!  I like that he is so obsessed with her that he can't get enough!  Very hot

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

I am very facinated by floggers!  I don't know why, but they make me the most excited when I read about them being used.  

There will be no diapers, I know that hehehe  I'm still new to my kinky side so I'm not sure what all my hard limits are...I do know there is quite a lot that I would like to try though!

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Alice at a loss for words...unthinkable ;)

I will be in the front row of class in the Wreck Room for your coaching!!!!!

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

Always so caring towards her...sigh...love him.  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

I think 'a little excited' would be an understatement!!!  To be standing in her shoes...I might have passed out form hyperventilating. ;)

I didn't realize that you had written a new story...I don't get any updates from TWCS.  I will have to check it out. I'm interested to see what your Mistress will be like. 



Author's Response:

I wrote it in line at DisneyWorld in August. I have lots of fics if you click on my profile. :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

Oh the possibilities are endless...

Wonder how long it will take for him to realize that his need for her is uncontrolable?? That he has to claim her or he will lose his mind.  He's not to far off now, so I can only imagine when he can acutally touch her.  He won't be able to not ram into her!!

Damn, when is the playroom scene???? ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

The idea of being bound to his leather chairs do something for me as well!!!  Actually, being bound to any chair is working for me hehehe

I can't wait to see his reaction to her in his playroom :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Butterfly is in for some amazing playtime...I can only imagine the fantasies running around his head!!  Thanks for the long chapter <3

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

LOL...I stand my by statement in the Wreck Room...was he sniffing glue before reading???  This story is awesome and I can't wait to see new chapters post!

Now back to the story....I am on pins and needles waiting for this to finally happen.  I might be as nervous as Butterfly!! LOL

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

I'm chuckling about him still thinking that he will just be able to get rid of her!  Such denial :)  But that's how we love him.  

 

 

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

I love her safewords and love even more that he took such time to come up with them for her specifically!!  Course I'm not sure what he could do that would make me dislike him LOL

I'm so sorry you are having a bad day :(  I'm glad that you have a great friend in Bec for you to always turn to.  I'm sending hugs your way even though I'm sure I am days late but feel free to save them up for another rough day!!



Author's Response:

It was an Aunt Flo day... and Bec just told me how beautiful I was, and of course so did Sir...  :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

Oh my....well she is getting fast tracked into training tonight!  Perhaps there should have been some notes about how she should act in the playroom, no??

Well, now that he has her where he wants her ;) let the games begin!!!

 

LOL  is koalababy Bec???  



Author's Response:

yes koalababy is Bec's name when she is my submissive.