Reviews by shenaniwhatagans
Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028970
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

At least he is remembering this is her first time and she has never been a submissive before so doesn't know the rules.  He will have so much fun teaching her!  I sometimes forget that he is a vamp and her sudden movements could cause dire events to occurr.  A spanking will get him in the right frame of mind though...

You are so silly...and I love being part of the 'small' group of women!!!!

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 223: Chapter 223

That was a hot and sweet chapter!!! However, honey pot made me giggle :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

5 spanks sounds perfect for her first offense...and for being such a newbie.  

 

The review for IR was great!! Thank for posting it here :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 157

She trusts him...did he not realize that or perhaps because she is so new he just thought she would panic.  

 

I am glad to hear that you are having a better day!!!! :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

Can I rent him out for a night??? Please...I so much want to experience what butterfly is just once!  



Author's Response:

I'm pretty particular about who i lend my Sir out to, but maybe I can help you find your own Sir or Ma'am. Are we friends on fb?

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 159

So good...so very very good!  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

Holy hell....yes, Sir!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

Nipple training...what are we training them to do??  Is it just to make them used to so much stimulation?  

I feel like this is going to be a long overly enjoyable session for butterfly!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

Did he expect her to safeword perhaps? She needs to understand that safewording won't end their relationship...he would be crushed if she was hurt or upset and didn't safeword...it could be dangerous to her.  I'm sure you will have them go over it so I won't worry about the small stuff :)

My guess for orgasms is 10

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

Damn, I said 10 and debated with myself about 11 but didn't go with my gut!

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 164: Chapter 164

Of course he put in a viewing room!!  So, no rest for butterfly then, making plans for tomorrow *chuckles nervously*

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 165

He is the sweetest Dom ever! 

LOL, I love your author notes...have fun with koalababy ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

She will obey his need to change her shampoo and such, since right now she will do anything he asks.  She is as hooked as she can be, I believe.

You guys are killing me in the author notes...now I'm just jealous!!



Author's Response:

lmao... im censoring the hell out of the author notes

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 167: Chapter 167

Butterfly is in such great hands...does she know how lucky she is??

 



Author's Response:

I know how lucky I am

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 168: Chapter 168

Butterfly is getting a crash course as to what it's like to have Sir actually in the room...not as easy as she thought, no?  She can't lessen the feel of his hands on her to hold out...poor thing...is he going to push her to fail???

Ooooh, koalababy gets the sweetest breakfast ;)

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 173

I love the journal...it always gets my attention cause I'm so quiet in rl and wonder what it would be like to write in one to expess myself to my hub. Guess I should just get on that then. ;)  

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174

It is on the top of my desires list but have never done it.  I may get myself a pretty suede flogger for Christmas though ;)

Can't wait to see what she feels about it so I can live threw her.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 175

Oh yes...it's getting very very good...bring on the training

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 176: Chapter 176

God woman, you have us all on lily!  So hot

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 177

I may have enjoyed that chapter a little too much ;)  The pic just added to my top desire of the flogger...now I have to add the nipple clamps to the Christmas list.  Santa better be ready!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 178: Chapter 178

All us dirty girls want Sir's cum on our ass ;)  Glad the girls were able to help you with the writer's block the other night. I'm sorry I missed it but I'm sure it won't be the last time you need...motivation

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 179: Chapter 179

Ughhh, another great chapter! I've read it twice and it still does the same things to me...sigh.

Thanks for inviting me to keep you company...it was fun ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 180: Chapter 180

I love hearing his pov!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 182: Chapter 182

Him inspecting her was so erotic...sigh

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 183: Chapter 183

I can totally see that as Emmett with Alice...that part still makes me giggle.  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 184: Chapter 184

Love the butterfly bands!!!  Who wouldn't get wet from what is doing to her :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 185: Chapter 185

Ugh...so good...

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 187: Chapter 187

He is sooo good with her!  I love the pic...she makes such hot ones ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

Yup, the flogger is definatly going on the must have list for Christmas!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

Love the pic & the fuck hot chapter!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 192: Chapter 192

Are his family trying to do an intervention???  Yeah, he is way to far gone with his butterfly to see reason at this point. Wonder if they will finally tell him that she is his mate?

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 193: Chapter 193

So funny that she likes Emmett more but only in a brotherly way...and Edward keeps asking her out, why??? Checking to see who much she wants/needs her Sir?

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 194: Chapter 194

Emmett cracks me up...I can only imagine the type of club they are going to next week...BDSM perhaps!!  And Edward reaction  LMAO

However, after the rubbing the butterfly nipples I'm not sure he will be able to not take her right there!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 195: Chapter 195

Even better reason for Edwards outburts!!!! Emmett and his dirty mind :) Love the visuals too!!

He needs to get a grip or he is going to kill Emmett right there...nevermind that he will be fucking butterfly by the end of the day if he doesn't get out of that room...

Love him...

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 196: Chapter 196

Ugh...loved the visuals!!!  Emmett is fun to hear from but the idea of Rose putting on a strap on and fucking Jessica to death had me laughing in my seat!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 197: Chapter 197

Edward only does it missonary in fantasy land...just wait little butterfly!! 

Poor Edward I'm sure was going to bust so he had to leave for the day...he walked himself into that situation, silly vamp.  

My husband plays hockey & my best friend & her three children play, so I know how much time goes into that...it's crazy!! Don't stress we will wait for ya :)

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 198: Chapter 198

So no one is going to clue him in as to why he feels the way he does? Do they think he will panic or something?

Gotta love Carlisle's advice at the end ;)  I'm pretty sure Edward would much prefer to cum on butterfly then in a tissue in his work bathroom!!!  

I will definitly let Bec know how much we appriciate all she does to help you get this awesome fic out to us!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 199: Chapter 199

Now we know why Jasper is so calm!!! Love it. Poor Edward has been left out of the yummy juices link 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 200: Chapter 200

Esme calls Carlisle 'Daddy' *gigglesnorts* of course she does!  Love the visuals btw :)   Edward needs to get on this pronto

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 201: Chapter 201

Can't wait for the rope play!!!! I love this photo!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 202: Chapter 202

The thought of him tying her up in while he is nude...ugh, such a hot picture!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 204: Chapter 204

Edward has found a new hobby and butterfly is gonig to be thrilled that he has ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 205: Chapter 205

<3 being a dirty little girl!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

Yes!!!  He does seem a bit drunk on her *giggles* wonder if that happens to all men...

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 208: Chapter 208

Making paper airplanes...such a guy thing to do :)  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 209: Chapter 209

I would hate to be Emmett especially after the threesome thoughts from work LMAO  Maybe he will tie him up at the club and let Alice go at him

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

You can't control love Edward!!!

 

Do what you need to do Noc and when you are able to write, we will be here waiting for ya!!  Good luck with national novel writing :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 211: Chapter 211

Interesting turn of events....can't wait to see what it is that Alice sees

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 212: Chapter 212

Edwards cracking me up.  Giving Emmett a hard time and then sending him home for 'lunch', loved his 'i don't share' comment :)

Love love love this pic

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 215: Chapter 215

He is having so much fun with Emmett!!!  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 216: Chapter 216

LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, Emmett is so very gullible. I can't believe that he put all that on & still didn't figure something was up.  He must have been super horny without having Rose to calm him down ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

Your Rose cracks me up!!!!  Who wouldn't want to open the door and have their husband wearing that all tied up for the taking LOL

Glad you picked this photo, it was my favorite :)

Congrats on the #1 slot, you deserve it!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 218: Chapter 218

Rose is so fun right now!! Emmett is about to learn a hard lesson but I have a feeling he will enjoy it :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 219: Chapter 219

Ugh...love that pic! He needs to shut his trap so he won't keep getting himself in these situations. However, after tonight he may want to piss her off again ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 220: Chapter 220

Not sure why that is so hot but it is!!!!  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 221: Chapter 221

I like Emmett discovering a bit about himself and what it's like to submit like Rose does to him!!  Plus the entire scence was fuck hot :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 222: Chapter 222

That was so hot...hearing how Rose felt during it..yeah very not scene!!!  Pics are awesome 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 224: Chapter 224

Edward is addicted to her juices...wonder if there's a support group for that? lol

I am so excited that we are almost at the club...he is going to bring butterfly, right???

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 225: Chapter 225

Sir is working her over tonight with no mercy :)  

I have sadly watched that gif more time then I would like to remember...so freaking huge!!!

I favorite most of my authors that have more then one story I'm reading or that I know write awesome stories. That way on here I don't have to sort threw all my favorite stories, I can just go to my favorite authors and pick it right out.  Anyway, that's me but I have no idea how it works here on TWCS.

Sorry, that probably didn't really help LOL

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 226: Chapter 226

So damn hot...I know I say it all the time but it is true!!! You have a gift with words & thank you for providing me with a daily dose of hotness :)

This is what he has been waiting for right?? For her to fall in love with him...or was it Alice that was waiting for that before she told him to tell her about him. Crap now I can't remember.  Anyway...aren't we off to the club soon ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

She must of been so lost in her thoughts and emotions cause she would have never regularly done that without being told. His reaction while quick was a bit to panic ridden but luckily she doesn't know that's the reason, I guess.  He is going to degrade himself over and over because of this, isn't he.  I can just see Alice doing a face plam right now & screaming LOL

 



Author's Response:

I can see alice doing that too.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

OMG I totally didn't register that he had called her Bella! I was a bit into what was happening lol

I knew he was going to use the fact that she thought she had disobeyed to fix this scene but it make me so sad that he thinks she doesn't love him yet that is why she did it. :(  

Nevermind poor Bella having a huge moment & then it's gone and she can't say why...well she can say why but they are both stubborn & scared 

I love them

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 229: Chapter 229

Ughhh, she might have written that she loved him in the journal!! This situation is making my heart hurt, Noc!  So, everything will change after the club...your such a tease with this...What is at this club that will help Edward??!?

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 230: Chapter 230

I know you were worried that this chapter would be boring but I think you needed to have the back story on the club. Cause would there really be a BDSM club for vampires in the city?? It needed the explanation :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 231: Chapter 231

Loved this section!! Glad you were still able to have this chapter in with your pet :)  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 232: Chapter 232

Alice and you are funny!!  I can't imagine those piercings on a cock...they look so damn painful and wouldn't the ring tear during sex?? I may just be naive though :)  However, barbells like Alice imagined would be sweet to feel at least for me, probably not for the guy ;)

Can't wait for more!   I'm planning on looking for some pics today to go with some of your previous chapters :)  cya

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 233: Chapter 233

The secret door in the fridge was perfect!!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 234: Chapter 234

A human submisssive demonstration with a vampire...interesting. This is what will change things for Edward?!?!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 235: Chapter 235

Oh that pic does things to me...

This is going to be fun to see what Edward gets out of this demonstration :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 236: Chapter 236

I bet Edward will be running back to find butterfly and demand that she meet him in the playroom.

;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 237: Chapter 237

Poor Alice has to see every thing Edward decides  lol  Or maybe she kinda gets off on it ;)

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 238: Chapter 238

Is he going to reveal what he is to her soon??? He has to know by now that she would stay with him...can he not feel that she loves him??/

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

Yup, she is the luckiest bitch around!!!  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 241: Chapter 241

Emmett is such a ball buster!! Love that he and Edward are always giving each other shit...well Emmett gives it more but it's still funny to see :)

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 242: Chapter 242

From walking threw her office after being eatten out, to knowing she is going to the playroom, to the anticipation of his arrival...so freaking hot!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 243: Chapter 243

Love the idea of him taking a hot shower to soften and warm up his skin.  Ummmm, the chat during his inspection of her, had me whimpering...

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 244: Chapter 244

Funny how Edwards voice at work is reminding her of Sirs LOL 

I am not into pain (or I don't think I am) but this scene made me wonder seriously what it feels like to have the spanking followed by the flogger...to be able to let go and give it all up to him cause that's what he wants.

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 245: Chapter 245

Awesome manpic!!!!!

I've said it before but I love being inside of Edwards head...

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 246: Chapter 246

Ughhhh love the photos!!!

She is going to get high from his delicious cum but I think we would all think that Edwards cum would be the best thing ever!!

 

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 247: Chapter 247

Love love love the pic & gif!!!

She seems to be drinking staight from his cock...he must taste soooo good!!!  This whole chapter does things to me...tingly good things ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 248: Chapter 248

I love that he called her Mine! That was so freaking hot :)  And Edward owes Peter a couple shots of blood!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

Hummmm, she moves fast and seems to be stronger now...vamp cum have some extra ingrediants perhaps!!!  These might be things that Peter should have mentioned so he doesn't have a heart attack. LOL

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 250: Chapter 250

I guess Peter did tell him about the strength thing...I remember the talk about her being very tired after.  He is just the sweetest vamp around! Love to snuggled up and fall asleep.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 251: Chapter 251

That would suck wondering if you are the only one he plays with. I thought she actually signed paperwork but maybe it was just her limits. It would drive me crazy not knowing and without her being able to look in his eyes she really doesn't have a clue to his feelings. Well, except for his word changes lately

If Edward could read her mind at work he also would never let her leave the playroom!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 252: Chapter 252

I really love his chats with Carlisle and the little insights into his sex life with Esme. So he finally knows he loves her, time to step up his game and see what she thinks about him



Author's Response:

I have thousands of words written about Carlisle and Esme's sex life. Their first time in a bdsm club, all of it. Hoping to work on it and have it out by spring on amazon!

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Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 253: Chapter 253

Good point Carlisle...push him, he needs to know she loves him for him!

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Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 254: Chapter 254

Embrace it Edward. :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 255: Chapter 255

Ugghhh that chapter does something to me in tingly ways ;)  She exposes so much about herself yet holds so much in. I relate to her thoughts and her worry that they won't be accepted.

His teasing ways and his words are her total undoing (and mine) :)  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 256: Chapter 256

Hummm wonder what his other plans are for today??? 

On a different note...the vibrator used in the last pic...have you ever used one like that? I always see them but always wondered if any 'real' people have used them. Sorry if this is a tmi question ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 257: Chapter 257

Something about that is so very hot!  So he wants her to walk to a store covered in both their cum dressed in a little dress...she is so going to attract some attention. I hope he is prepared for that. ;)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 258: Chapter 258

LMAO about Jake the dog!!! So good. I'm surprised that Edward did punch that guy, however he wasn't actually doing anything wrong. He was just being nice and she does look rather sexy.  

Sometimes I don't think that Edward thinks his plans through completely but I still love him



Author's Response:

cause he is sooo far out of his element that's what makes him so lovable!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 259: Chapter 259

I really like what he did with the flowers.  I'm sure the scent of lilacs will cause her to get wet from now on..it will be a long spring for butterfly :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 260: Chapter 260

Those vamp traits are awesome if they caused that sweet orgasm!! Edward is so enjoying her vamp strength during his blow jobs :)  

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Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 261: Chapter 261

So didn't she just pass out?? Why is he so worried...did I miss something last chapter or is it just about the fact that he is getting close to showing her who he is and or changing her? 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 262: Chapter 262

He reaction to Rose was pretty primal and she actually agreed that she was in the wrong.  If Alice knew what was going on why did the entire family come to check on him. Or was she not really 100% sure, she was lying very still.  

After that dream, she is going to start questioning what is real and what isn't...especially since Edward and Emmett were in it :)



Author's Response:

Alice wasnt sure. Their relationship is so fliud things change at a moments notice

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 263: Chapter 263

He is certainly a sweet Dom! I think this was the most relaxing time they have ever had since they started this arrangement.  *sigh* he takes such good care of her

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 264: Chapter 264

Oh I hope he is planning on telling her soon!! I don't want the fic to end, I just want to see them able to move forward. :)  I swear you could write this story until she is a 200yr old vamp and I would still pop in to read it!

Hope you are having a better day Noc. :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 298: Chapter 298

Hot!!! Now that she can see him everything is kinda like the first time :)

His answer to her saying she feels like she could fly....priceless!!!

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 299: Chapter 299

Poor butterfly has no idea what is going on with her. Must have been very soft metal... LMAO  

 

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 300: Chapter 300

Hmmmm wonder who is going to be more affected by this, Sir or butterfly. Such a important event for both :)