Reviews by HeatherJoy
Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028857
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

omg... I soo cannot wait until he tastes her himself!    I'm not sure I'll be able to breathe!!!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

oookay!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

umm  well, yea... but still not sure how men can get all into that.   or women either for that matter.   Yea... don't know if I could EVER be bi or gay cause I just couldn't do that to another woman.  



Author's Response:

You are missing out... that's all I have to say. :)

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

omg...i really have to learn not to cum.  that is hota

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

wow..that was all first thing in the morning!   whew.   

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

hmmm  I wanna know the details that he instructed for Bella's spa day.   



Author's Response:

well, in the original, I summarized the spa in a few lines. This time I added in what I had cut out of the one shot to make it fit the word count requirement.

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

canmt wait to hear her reaction to what is in store for her. jgiggkes*.  still contemplating getting a brazilian myself.... 



Author's Response:

I got my first brazillian wax a few weeks ago. Didn't hurt that bad, and it didn't really grow back!

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

smooth yea!  

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

hey sir sugar dom   love love the butterfly name.    

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

mmm I would love for a man to show all that control over me.... choosing for me.   

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

hmmm Wonder what Tanya is thinking... 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

hmmm   Good question.   Is she excited or scared or both?   Yea..I'm sure I'd be thrilled by the prospect but very hesitant too.   I mean...how does she know that Sir won't be some old balding geezer?  lol  



Author's Response:

actually we don't know, and she doesn't know.... that's part of the excitement!

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I love that he wants her so badly. 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

OH I am enjoying and i'm sure Sir is too!  ;)

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

ok...what the hell does Tanya want...  

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

oh good. Glad he put her in her place.   :))

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Yes... must favorite Author and add story to favorites... then submit!   

 

I love these updates .  They are my reprieve from RL.  They take me away to a much better place!!!  :))

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

hmmm So I love that she really does want to meet Sir.  

 

*giggles*  Love the Wreck Room and the naughty place too!!!  ;))

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

hmmm I had wondered after reading the original o/s if she had noticed any similarity in the voices.   Soo glad that he can effect her when she doesn't really even know yet that it is him.   :)

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Love how Edward is treating her as an equal!!!  Learning more and more about the Dom/Sub relationship and like this part very much. 

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

I love how possessive he is of her.  To me...that is a turn on!  

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Loving all these updates!!!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

Kind of weird that he's allowing his sister to choose such things for him to use...   lol

 



Author's Response:

u do know she isn't his sister right? cause i mean, Jasper is her brother as much as Edward is

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

hmmm  I just can't wait for him to tie her up and have his way with her.  Not experienced enought to know what I want him to use on her... but if she's spread eagle for him...that'll do just fine!  

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

but what if she'll be late for work?   lmao... yea..like she cares. Hell, I wouldn't either!   ;)

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

oh yeaa... It certainly IS hot!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

HAHAHA...  Well hell, when I read this... I try not to wear any!   

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

*giggles*  Oh how I Love the RL Sir and Butterfly!   :)   

 

sooo, I know u said that you use everyday things around the house... sooo... is the candlestick or candle one of them??   

 

 



Author's Response:

NO, it was originally going to be her wisk, but i figured people would flip out about that... like it was nasty, not elegant....

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

oooh *rushes to the wreck room for pics*

 

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

mmm   wow!  I can just picture and imagine just how strong that orgasm was.  

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

woooohooo..Congrats on the top 10!   But... soo totally deserved.  

 

Anywho... I'm so lovin' the idea of him waiting for her, watching her walk in late, knowing why...   *giggles*

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

lmao!!!!   wooooo    omg.. he's making her go to work like that?!?   LOL   oh wow!!!   

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

WOW!   I wonder if Sir will be upset with her since she washed?? 

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

Love how possessive he is of her...

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132

Dying to know what Emmett is hiding and what Alice said!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

lmao...so they are having a conversation why Jasper and Rosalie are on their knees between their legs??   *howling w/ laughter*

 



Author's Response:

u know that back in the day, my Sir would talk to his friends while i "serviced" him.... 

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

oooh oooh ooooh...... 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

hmm... oh hell, I am dying to know what both of them are thinking.  I can't help it!!!   

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

oh shit!  I'm dying for him to touch her and I'm just reading this.   HOLY HELL!  Sooo erotic!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

eeeek!   omg... I'm not sure I have control enough to just sit there and wait.  Hell, If HE was there... I'd really have to restrain myself not to jump him  lol.   He might just have to tie me up.  hmm.....    now THAT is something to think about.

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

damn...no cumming?   fuuck pouts

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

oh its definately hottt    

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

hmmm... I am soo not sure other than a hard limit for me is the whole diaper, baby fetish, or scat play.   I don't want to be hurt or humiliated.   I do want a man to take control though, making all decisions in the bedroom.   This whole lifestyle appeals to me but I have never experienced any of it.  The flogger, whip, crop... scare me but excite me at the same time.   Not sure of it all.   I've only learned of these things from reading.   When I read 50 (yes, I'm going there)... I had to google a ton of things!  lol   And of course, when I read IR... well, YOU know how much that turns me on.   :)

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

mmm I soo can't wait to see WHY she'll need her rest for tomorrow!!!!   :))

I absolutely LOVE how he cares for her.  That he doesn't want her to be dissapointed and wants her to understand. 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

ooo... I can't wait to read more!!!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

Its kind of sad... all the things he wants with her but can't have.... yet.   

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

I wanna play room now!  :(  guess I'd actually need a new man for that... and someone who actually knew how to take care of a woman!   

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

I wonder if he noticed at any time the wet spot...  Will he smell it?  Sense it?  hmmmm   Will that arouse him knowing that she was getting excited while she was jotting in her journal? 

I'm sure it would please him to know that she tried her hardest to get rid of that spot too.   

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

hmmm... Anticipating the meeting is killing me!!!!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

Was wondering about that...  :)  Can only imagine what she must be thinking looking at some of those toys and such, never having experienced any of it.  

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

seriously????  Only 6?!   WTF?  Don't people know your talent?  Totally their loss, bb.  Keep writing  cause I'll keep reading and reviewing!   Idiots that don't know how to spell or speak can just kiss your beautiful ass!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

omg i am getting wet with anticipation

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

LILY LILY LILY !!!!   ;)  

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Midnight Caller

UNF!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

awww FUCK!   This is beyond hot!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

oh Holy Fuck!!!   MY TURN!!!   

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

wow!!!  ok... I think I came a little just reading that quick chapter.   

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 164: Chapter 164

mmm Cannot wait till he bathes her.  I have never been bathed before by a man and would just LOVE that attention and care!!!

Being a nurse, I'm always taking care of someone else.  I would so love to receive that TLC.   



Author's Response:

yes, baths are fun. I like when my Sir washes my hair.

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 165

*sigh*... anticipation...   

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

reading in a waiting room at dr office....    think i just came a little

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 167: Chapter 167

mmm Loving the bath.   Wondering if he'll do anything other than clean her in there...??

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 168: Chapter 168

i am still amazed at how she can not cum.   i really should not be reading this at work but i could not wait any longer

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169

oh wow!!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 176: Chapter 176

hmmm   GOD, I really want to try this!  

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 177

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!   um... yea... I soo liked that!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 178: Chapter 178

Damn, I didn't realize I was holding my breathe the whole way thru these last two chapters!!!   YUMMMM

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 179: Chapter 179

WOAH!    And that is one fine pic btw!!  

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 181: Chapter 181

mmm yes sir. 

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

woah!   maybe a good squirting GIF!??   :))

 



Author's Response:

I looked. You get me one, I'll add it :)

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

ung!  MORE!!!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 190: Chapter 190

Still dying to read her journal!   ;)  

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 192: Chapter 192

ok... I have to ask... Wouldn't that hurt like hell???   All night AND all day??    

 



Author's Response:

they aren't nipple clamps, just little like rings that go around.... I dont think they hurt at all. I'd buy them, but they are 70 dollars. I do have o rings i wear all day and they don't hurt, and it looks the same but with a charm hanging down

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 193: Chapter 193

lol...Funny how she thinks her Sir and Edward smell alike.   lol   hmmm 

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 194: Chapter 194

WOAH!  Damn, wonder what club Emmett was thinking about...   And dayum that was hott... him looking at her knowing what was beneath her blouse.   

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 195: Chapter 195

OMG... sooo hott!!!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 196: Chapter 196

ok ... I was cracking the hell up at Emmett's pov until I got to those gif's... DAYUM.  Let's just say I was no longer laughing.   UNF.   That... just   oh yeaaaaa.   :)  I'm in my happy place again.  :))   wait... those shoes on her are just God awful.   lol  sorry... I digress!  

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 197: Chapter 197

LOL...Loved this chap!  I also love how she thinks Edward is so "vanilla"!  :)

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 198: Chapter 198

lmao... omg... the advice from Carlisle cracks the hell out of me!!!  LOL... cum on her, not into a tissue!!   BWAHAHAHA   omg  LOVE this!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 201: Chapter 201

Beautiful pic to go w/ this chap.  Can't wait to see what he has in store for Bella!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 202: Chapter 202

omg... I sooo want this!!!!  To be spread open like that and not be able to move... *sigh*

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 204: Chapter 204

OH MY GAWD!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 207: Chapter 207

WOW... that was just beautiful!!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 208: Chapter 208

silly boys!  lol

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 212: Chapter 212

omg!!! At work?! YESSSS

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

OH FUUUUCK!!!  This is soo damn HOT!    *fans self*

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 214: Chapter 214

OH MY FUCKING GAWWWDD!!!!!    That... right there.... YeSSSS  Damn, the visual too... UNGH!!   Soapy is just too damn talented for her own good and YOU... just WOW!   

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 215: Chapter 215

lmao!!! I sooo love what he's doing to Emmett!!!!    And why is it that I can't stop staring at that gif???    *sigh*   Damn, its been too long...

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 216: Chapter 216

ok...ya had me going for a minute.  I knew that Edward would never share his Bella w/ anyone though.   But woman's underwear??   hmmm not sure about that part!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

Hot guy but  umm... the lingerie just has to go.   Certainly not my thing anyway.   I like a man to be very manly!   

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 224: Chapter 224

mmm hours of him eating her out... oh GAWD!!!!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 225: Chapter 225

so hott.   And if the above pic is supposed to be a gif... its not working :(

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 226: Chapter 226

:)   wow.   I love that she is now in love w/ her sir too.  

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!!!!!!!  That was soo hott.  He said her name and the pic... DAYUM  ___________________________________.   Yea, that is so me flat lining!  

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

woah!  That was intense.   Love this!!!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 229: Chapter 229

LOVE LOVE LOVE this!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 237: Chapter 237

ahhh good questions!   He's intruiged!  :)

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

OMG!!!! yESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS  this..this...omg...this!!! yessssss

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

mmmm soo good!

 

Reviewer: HeatherJoy Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 241: Chapter 241

oh I can't wait to see how this goes...

:)