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Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Loved the update. I'm glad Emmett and Bella had their little talk. Edward was so sweet defending Bella. I thought it was cute that Edward got hurt and Bella was all concerned for him. I can't believe you left us with that cliffy. How does Marcus know who she is? Has he known that Jack was with her all along? Can't wait to find out.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Great chapter. I really thought that Marcus knew about Jack. I wonder how Esme will take the news about what he wants. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!

Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance! 

 <3 Shel

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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.

"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.

"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.

"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Loved the update. Jack really is such a cutie. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I loved the chapter. Even after reading all the teasers on the blog and over at the support group, I was not expecting the I love you declarations. That was a nice surprise. Could it be that Jack's nervousness points to trouble ahead? Can't wait.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Shel, that was evil. How could you leave it there?! LoL. I don't even know what to say because everything in this chapter was great. I laughed, felt a little creeped out, felt like crying, and now I'm pissed. At Victoria, not at you. LoL. Can't wait to see what happens. I'm hoping you will be giving us some good teasers over at the support group. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I was right, Vicwhoria does have a nice ring to it. So, James is involved? Can't wait to see how that plays out. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

I wish they would have found out more about James before Edward worked with him. Not sure how I feel about this. I love that Charlie came for a visit. I was starting to miss him. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Loved the chapter. I really hate Victoria. I was hoping we were going to find out more about James. I don't like that Edward doesn't take Bella's feelings into consideration about James. If he really thinks James is innocent why doesn't he have James investigated so he can prove to Bella that James isn't a bad guy. He has nothing to lose by investigating James and this way he wouldn't sound like an ass when he discounts Bella's feelings about James. Just a thought. Looking forward to reading more.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Thanks for the early update. Loved it. How cute that they went to meet her.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Loved the chapter. I really like this Edward. He is so sweet.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Loved this chapter. I really want to find out about James. I feel like I have been on the edge of my seat waiting to find out and then nothing. Can't wait for the next.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Shel, that was evil. I can't believe you left us like that. Great chapter. It feels like we waited so long to find out about James and you didn't disappoint. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Elli :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Great chapter. Loved it. I'm glad things were resolved in this chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!

♥ Shel ♥

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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."

She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."

The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"

Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.

"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.

Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

I'm glad Jack took the news well. I want Edward to move in with them. It doesn't matter that they haven't known each other long. They don't have a normal relationship anyways.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

In other news, Bella and Jack both won the Avant Garde Awards that they were up for! I simply can not thank everyone enough! You guys are the single biggest reason that this story has been as successful as it has! I adore each and every one of you! And not just for voting or reviewing, but for continuing on this journey with me and loving Jack as much as I do!

I'm shooting to have the EPOV up soon, but he's been difficult. I'm also in the process of writing a Victoria POV for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence compilation. It should be interesting to see how well I can channel bat-shit crazy!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Edward, can I ask you something?" she asked in a quiet voice.

He shifted slightly and brushed a piece of hair from her face. "Anything, baby."

She swallowed nervously, worried about what his response would be to her question. "The documents that James showed me, were they real?"

He took a deep breath and nodded hesitantly. Betrayal pierced her heart and she felt tears spring to her eyes.

"Ssh, don't cry," he whispered, brushing thumbed across her cheeks. "It's not like it sounds."

"Then how is it? Why were you petitioning for custody if you're moving across the country? Or was that a lie?" she replied with a small sob, her body beginning to shake.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

That was nice. I can't wait for Edward to be with them. It's sad that they can't all leave together.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.

The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"

She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."

Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"

Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"

"That you have a dad now."

"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."

"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"

Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

I loved this. I thought I was gonna be all sad because they were apart, but then that ending was just great. Can't wait for the next, even if it makes me sad knowing the end is near.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

I loved it. I think that Jack has become one of my favorite original characters. I love how you wrote his character. He's like a little adult. He reminds me so much of my son that I truly enjoyed reading his story. I'm going to miss this Edward and Bella. You told their story in a way that kept me so interested the entire journey. Thanks so much for choosing to share this amazing story with us.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

I'm so sad to see this end. I enjoyed reading every single chapter of this story. It has truly become one of my favorite fics.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary:

AIEW

Thanks to Bonnie's Banners for the banner

Set after Breaking Dawn, Rosalie's jealousy over Bella and Edward's
happy ending drives her to choices that will effect both her and Emmett's
future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12097 Read Count: 1500
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2010 Updated: 23 Jul 2010
Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, so I've never actually read a fic about Rose and Emmett. However, since I'm a huge fan of your writing I'm giving it a try. It's a great start and it sounds very interesting. Definitely a story line that I have never encountered. Can't wait to see how this goes.

Elli :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving it a chance. Rose is my least favorite character so the fact that she took over my head and made me write this is crazy even to me!! I hope you continue to enjoy.

 

And I have a new B/E fic coming soon too.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Rosalie has gone off the deep end. There are so many ways that they could go about getting a baby, yet she chose the most extreme. It's so disturbing. I can't imagine any wife who would want their husband to do this. Atleast not a sane one. LoL. I'm definitely intrigued and want to know how this will play out. I'm not even going to try to guess cause you never do what I'm expecting. You are obviously way more creative than I am. Looking forward to reading more soon.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Yes, she has. But they can't really have a human kid, it wouldn't be safe. The Volturi keep an eye on the Cullen clan.

 

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved it. I'm very interested to see how this is going to play out. I'm thinking Rose and Emmett have different views on how this will end for the girl if she does get pregnant. It seems like Emmett actually likes the girl and I don't think Rose will like that. Then again stranger things have happened. Can't wait to see what happens.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thanks girl, I love that people don't know where I am going with this. I've actually tweaked the ending like three times, so I might not even know where this is going. LOL

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Is it weird that I feel bad for Rosalie eventhough it was her idea to have Emmett do this? It's such a strange thing for me to say because I always disliked Rose in the series. I'm so conflicted. I feel bad for Rose because her husband is now thinking of another woman when he is with her. I feel bad for Emmett because he clearly wants to please his wife, yet he is developing feelings for Violet. And Violet, I feel bad for her because she doesn't have any clue as to what is going on. At this point I don't even know what scenario to root for in the end. Clearly I am a very confused individual right now. I'm blaming my confusion on your writing being so great that you have made me care for all three characters. The fact that you could make me care for Rosalie in this twisted scenario is amazing. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I hate Rosalie too, so the fact that I could write something that made anyone feel for her makes me a little proud. LOL.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Violet. I feel bad that she died. Rose killing her didn't come as a complete surprise and in a sick and twisted way I understand why she did it. Leaving Violet alive would complicate things. What if she had wanted to keep the baby for herself? Not only that, but Rose definitely seems like the jealous type and I don't think she could handle seeing the woman her hubby had sex with. Atleast not when she already got what she wanted from that. Great writing like always. Can't wait to see what happens.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

I love watching the reactions to this. Some think Rose is just crazy while others can sympathize her motives.

I hope the next chapter clears up her thinking. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm glad everything worked out between Emmett and Rose. Emmett is definitely a great guy to be so forgiving. I still feel bad that Violet died, but I think it goes well with the story. Can't wait for your new stories. I'm looking forward to reading more of your amazing writing.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

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Thank you for reviewing the last chapter of All I Ever Wanted. Here is a teaser for my new fic called Attraction Vs Compatibility. 

EPOV

I felt her before I saw her; I turned to see her walking towards her picnic table, the one she and her friends always sat at. The way she moved could hypnotize a man. She was confident and sexy, always with a smile on her face.

Some days when she was wearing her cheerleading outfit, it was near impossible to stay away from her. It wasn’t something I was ever attracted to before, cheerleaders, that is, but her in that tiny skirt was heaven. She was completely different from me, where I was more shy and withdrawn, she was bold and sassy.

I knew her name was Bella as I had heard her friends shout it enough times, but that was the extent that I knew about her, besides the fact that she was beautiful.

She met my eyes as she always did and I was speechless. Her eyes were always so kind and welcoming, even to me, someone she didn’t know. I knew she felt the pull that I did, but the truth was, she was the kind of girl who could have anyone.

What would she do with me?

Summary:

mtte

This is the outtakes from my story 'Married to the enemy.' Please read that story before reading the outtakes!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6428 Read Count: 2011
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Secrets EPOV

I loved hearing Edward's thoughts. Sometimes I feel like I have this love/hate relationship with this Edward. LoL. I love how he can be so nice and sweet, but there are times like this when he can be such a prick. I'm actually glad you suggested reading the original chapter because he makes up for it in the end. Thanks for the glimpse of Edward's thoughts, I really enjoyed reading it.

Elli :)

Summary:

Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.    

po

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14810
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 May 2011
Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Best Friend

Great chapter. Loved it.

Elli :)

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: In My Life

Great chapter. Jack really is the cutest.

Elli :)

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Everything

I loved this. I think it was so nice of Jasper to have Jack as his best man or the best boy. LoL. Alice and Jasper really are some great friends to Bella.

Elli :)

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Letter : EPOV

Poor Edward. I really do feel bad for him. Victoria did not deserve him or Jack. I'm definitely loving your story and all the outtakes. Looking forward to reading more soon.

Elli :)

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Save Me San Francisco

Loved this outtake. I think the relationship between Bella and Jack is cute.

Elli :)

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: This Is Halloween

That was cute. I feel like I say it all the time but I just think that Jack is adorable.
Elli :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella lives a charmed life, Edward has skeletons in his closet. They are drawn to each other but fight the pull, how could two people so different ever make things work in the real world. Dark themes and Canon Pairings.

 

Thank you to Decode Banners for the wonderful banner.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58248 Read Count: 12974
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

What was he going to answer when she said I love you? Couldn't you have let him answer and then let her continue talking in her sleep? LoL. Great chapter. I like that they are making progress as a couple, but it was sad to see Bella have a relapse.
Elli :)

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great start. Loved it. No surprise there since I always love your stories. Definitely looking forward to reading more.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thanks. I always love your reviews so we are a great team!

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Loved the chapter. Can't wait to see what happens now that they have seen each other at work. Looking forward to the next.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thanks. I appreciate the review.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Great chapter. Loved the interaction between them. Can't wait to see what happens when they go out with his friends. When do we get to find out the meaning of his tattoo? I'm actually cursing myself right now for only knowing English and Spanish. LoL. I was going to look it up, but then I decided I rather wait for the explanation in the story. Awesome writing like always. Looking forward to the next update.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

LOL, I've had two people google it so far and two people say they are waiting. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter but I have no idea what chapter the tattoo talk will come out in...but I think it will be fairly soon.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Great chapter. So the outing was definitely awkward for both of them. Their one on one time seems to be going better, atleast they are talking to each other. What's the deal with Jane? Does she not like Bella or is it that she is a little territorial when it comes to Edward? Or is it that she's really just a bitch? Definitely looking forward to reading more. Can't wait. BTW, I will definitely be voting for your story. It's the best.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thanks!


Jane is well, Jane. She kind of likes her status quo. She doesn't think that Bella would be a good match for Edward and personally she doesn't really get along with the type of girl Bella is. She's not trying to be a bitch but it's just kind of who she is.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Loved the chapter. Finally I know what the tattoo means! I like it, especially since I had no clue as to what it meant. It's kinda sweet that he thinks she's worth waiting for. I was a little worried after his conversation with Jane since he was questioning himself. Makes me wonder what kind of influence she has over him.

I could not stop laughing when Edward was thinking about Jane's boyfriend. The mental picture was hilarious. Jane must be even weirder than I thought.

I can't wait to see what happens now that Edward and Bella are together. Looking forward to reading more soon.

Elli :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. Rocky roads are ahead but they can take it, right?

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Loved it. I always get so excited when I see you updated.

Poor Edward having to deal with the loud friends, but since Bella has hung out with his friends I guess it's only fair. I have to say it was funny to read that the oversharing with her friends might give him performance anxiety.

Jane really is bitchy with Bella. I have no idea how E&B can make this work with E having a friend like that. What about Garrett? The one time he speaks to her is to tell her most relationships don't work? I can see how that can make her feel insecure. At least Bella's friends weren't rude to Edward.

I definitely like that Bella was able to express how she feels to Edward. I guess it does seem quick to feel that way so fast, but the two years of staring have to count for something, right?

Can't wait to read more.

Elli :)



Author's Response:

Thanks. I don't think that Edward's friends even realized that they were attacking Bella, It's just the way they are.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

It's clear the girl has problems if she is willing to put herself in those type of situations. Can't wait to see what she tells Edward. I'm sure that will be an interesting conversation. Definitely looking forward to reading more soon.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

That was definitely an intense conversation. I guess it's to be expected that Edward would need time to think about this. Can't wait to see what he decides.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Yes, more intensity to come! Hold on tight. LOL

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I thought we were supposed to get you gifts, not the other way around. LoL. Thanks for the update. Hope you're having a great day.

I thought this chapter was great. I think Bella took a step in the right direction by confiding in Jasper. Jane surprised me. She actually gave decent advice to Edward considering how she feels about Bella. At first I thought, how could he tell Jane, but then I realized I was being a hypocrite. I tell my best friend everything and he is the person I go to when I need advice or when I have a problem. Then again, we have been best friends since we were little kids so our relationship is a little different than what Jane and Edward have. I don't remember if you mentioned how long Edward and Jane have been friends. I think Edward is being great by researching and trying to find a way to help Bella. It really shows how much he cares for her. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more and seeing how this plays out. Can't wait.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thanks lady. And I'm surprised more people weren't upset at him telling Jane. Cause yeah, we all tell our best friends everything. it's a natural thing to do!

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Holy shit! How could you leave it like that? That's just evil. LoL. I definitely did not see that coming. Is that really happening to him? All that keeps running through my head is, if this happens to him how is that going to affect how he feels about her and her weird fantasies. Is Bella going to notice that something is wrong? I won't even get into what I'm thinking about Lauren right now because I don't have enough words to describe these thoughts. Can't wait for the next update to see what happens. I'm definitely curious to see how this is going to play out.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Ha ha. Yeah, I am a little evil. Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Edward. It makes me want to cry. I suspected that this was going to affect how he felt about Bella and her fantasies. I'm assuming this was the wake up call that Bella needed. Amazing writing like always. Can't wait for the next update.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Your reviews always make me smile.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I really hate that bitch Lauren. I don't want her to get away with it. If she's not going to jail, I'm not opposed to violence. She deserves more than a punch to the face. Poor Edward. It's so sad that male victims don't get the same understanding that female victims get. Things like that really piss me off in RL. I can't wait for the next chapter since it looks like Jane is planning something.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Yeah I know, but such is life. Sometimes the bad guys get away with it. And yes male victims rarely get the same treatment as female victims.

 

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I'm so glad that Edward and Bella are both getting help. It's good that they both have friends they can speak with, but they definitely need the professional help. I really like your Jasper. I know you don't mention him a lot, but I like seeing the close bond that him and Bella seem to have. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thanks. I like Jasper too, I feel bad that I'm not able to use him all that much but he is important for sure.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I'm so glad they talked, even if it was only for a little bit. I felt so bad when he thought about hugging her but didn't know if he could. I wonder if they would benefit from a therapy session together? Can't wait to see what happens next.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

I'm trying to figure that same thing out. LOL

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Great chapter. I guess they just need to take things slow, one day at a time and see how things go from there.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Things are moving now.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Aww, I'm sad the fic is over. I really did enjoy every chapter of this and I'm definitely going to miss reading about this Edward and Bella. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Sorry for the delay on responding, I thought I already had. LOL

Bunker by vampiremama Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Bunker

Thank you to Ima Twi Hard for the wonderful banner

As the bombs land around them, trapped together in a bunker, friends Bella and Edward have to make a choice. After all, no one wants to die a virgin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2792 Read Count: 860
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2010 Updated: 08 Oct 2010
Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bunker

This was perfect. I really needed to read something nice and sweet.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you. I really needed to write something nice and sweet after the last couple chapters of A vs C. LOL

Summary:

BtLGThaMy submission for the Dirty Cheeky Monkeys "Squeeze your Lemon" writing exercise. A photograpger, a model, an abandoned warehouse, and sexy times. What more could you ask for?

Make sure you follow here to catch the updates every Wed.

http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=3504


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2328 Read Count: 973
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Nov 2010
Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think I need to invest in a thesaurus because I don't know how else to tell you that I loved it. LoL. I feel like I repeat myself so much. You know I think you're awesome and I love everything you write. I really enjoyed this Edward. Hmm..that sounds a little dirty and not how I meant for it to sound. I'm hoping you know what I mean :)

Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thesaurus.com is free. LOL. I know cause I use it ALL the time when I write so really it's the thesaurus that is a good writer not me.

 

So glad you enjoyed thanks for always being so supportive, it really does mean a lot.

Summary:

Madam President

 

Summary:  Bella Marie Swan, the previous first daughter of the United States is elected as the first female President. After her inauguration, she moves in the White House and begins the job that she was elected to do. It had been a hard-fought election, with her opponent attacking her personally for being a woman and not being married. However, in the end, the people of the country spoke with their votes. The first day on the job she was introduced to her security team and was shocked to see the leader was her high school sweetheart, Edward Cullen.

 

Edward Cullen had worked hard and up through the ranks to become the leader of USSS for the POTUS. Excited to start his new position for the upcoming President, until she won. The only woman he had ever loved.

 

Across the globe, an old foe of the United States has decided it is time to cripple their enemy before launching an all-out offensive. Sometimes the biggest killer is those that can not be seen by the naked eye.

 

Will Edward be able to keep his feelings hidden or will in the face of death, he will tell her? 

 

Action/Romance and of course a HEA!!! HeartforTwilight  #BabiesattheBorder #MadamPresident 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15900 Read Count: 7025
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2020 Updated: 26 Nov 2022
Reviewer: emartin Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: emartin Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief

Great start. Excited to keep reading more. 

Reviewer: emartin Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death

Looking forward to reading more :)