Reviews by LovinRob1
Summary: Past Featured Story

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As a homeless drifter in Kentucky, Edward Masen finds work and a home with widow Esme Cullen and her two young daughters. Will he have the strength to stay away from Bella, whose innocence captures his heart?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Shena's Storys to Read, To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168630 Read Count: 65046
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Sep 2012
Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 : Church folks need lovin' too!

Ah Jen... you know how much I adore Esme and what she did was so right on. They were being careless. I mean Bella is a kid so she has a right to be careless but Edward's a man and he needs to think about what he wants, not just the sexual stuff but a future for the two of them. Hopefully he will be thinking about what she said and do something about it!

But the best line for me was when Esme said, "Don't shame my daughter Edward!" I mean that says it all right there. In fact I told one of my daughters boyfriends that very thing but, ya know there was some cursing when I said it :-)

Another fantastic chapter girl. This story just keeps getting better and better!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 : High School Drama

Loved this chapter.. Yes, that homecoming reminded me of some of my football games and yes, definitely saw some hissie fits in my time... AND yes, I have also been busted in various acts of disarray... YIKES! this was a stroll down memory lane, hehehehe... great chapter my friend, great chapter!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 : The value of a life

Wonderful, wonderful chapter... I adore Esme and even more so now. She is so strong and wise. Of course I loved Edward's awkward proposal and that he asks for permission from Esme. That was sooooo appropriate and made me feel all warm and giddy inside *sigh*    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 : Jam cake and diamonds

Goodness Gracious... HOT, HOT, HOT! man, Jen you seriously pulled out another fantastic chapter here, filled with lots of love and sex and all around goodness...Great job girl :-)    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 : Snowballs and Footrubs

Hey girl... I can definitely relate to so many aspects of this chapter, this story. Although I didn't grow up in the country my family still spent New Years alone with Dick Clark, playing card games or monopoly and over the past 10 years it has been the snow and sledding in the winter, I still get excited when it snows for the first time... wonderfully awesome chapter.    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 : Better late than Never

Oh girl... you know I have been begging for Charlie for many a chapters. I just love so many things about it. But mostly I just loved how much Charlie loved her and that he finally did something about it only to find out she felt the same way. What a perfectly wonderful chapter.    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 : Twelve-minutes??!!

Oh girl... I love your Edward so much. I was just giggling at all his inner dialogue, and holy crap woman, that would have been the best 12 minutes of my LIFE! hehehehe... another fantastic chapter and ya know I just laughed when the school closed cause I don't know how many times shit like that has happened here in the Dakotas!

And BTW... Relay for Life is such a powerful organization... thanks for doing it lady, you are AWESOME!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52 : Dessert at the kitchen table

MMMM... sorry it took me a while. It was difficult to pull myself away from the King of Cannes. He just kept drawing me in...LOL

Now I loved so many things in here and yes, a nekked Edward cooking would have made me cream myself on the spot :-) As far as the table, isn't that like a requirement or something? Well, it works for me and that table sex was hotter than hot cause "Yes, he IS that good" And finding all the pictures in Charlies bedroom, ahhhhhh, Charlie *sigh*    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53 : Earthquake in the Mountains!!

I'm with Esme, Oh my! I just loved Porn Star Charlie with his Porn Star Stache... Wonderful chappie girl and yes, he 'measured up' quite nicely, hehehehehhe... PERFECT!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54: Talking to Myself

LOVE this and you know it. Loved their light hearted fun at the movies and then doing doughnuts in the parking lot! Of course you know I don't trust James and Jacob just cause ya know he's a Jacob, LOL... but being in the dark and seeing those snow prints on the floor. I would soooo be freaking out, just like Bella is... Edward! get your ass home :-)    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55:Traces of him

Oh Edward, Edward, Edward... I just love you so much. I totally understand why you were late but ya know, a quick phone call would have done the trick...LOL... Just love these two so much. Thanks Jen for the fantastic story!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56:Back Door Guests are Best

Hey Jen... well, you know how I feel about this chapter and the back door lovin' that ensued *wink wink* I think you did such a fantastic job on this chapter, one of my favs so far :-)    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57:Altercations, Announcements, and Bitter Pills

Ooohhh, love, love, love... A) I loved that you were realistic with how sore someone is after their first back door lovin' session, B) I adore your Edward so damn much it makes me sick...LOL C) His daddy is an ass and needs to go DOWN! and D) I freaking love that Charlie offered his pad to Edward... I know Bella ain't gonna be the most thrilled with that though since she won't have easy access to that sexy beast down the hall :-)    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 : Please...don't go.

Hey girl... you know I love jrPOV cause he is freakin' hilarious. This was such a fabulous chapter from start to finish and I am still kicking myself that I thought I had sent this back to you when I didn't...Ehhhh! well, at least you can blame me for the late posting, hehehehehe... Love ya girl!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 :Riley Josephine Whitlock

Now I have cast a protective spell over you and the girls with my brand new Cedric Diggory wand so you will be safe in NY, now whether NY will be safe from you, hmmm not so sure...LOL... You know I adore this chapter, Charlie is pure perfect... I loved him getting E&B and his whole internal dialogue about what they were doing, hehehehe... and of course, him holding the baby *SIGH* ... FAB FAB FAB!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 : Daddy Dearest is Dead as a Doornail

Well, you know I loved this chapter. Daddyward has me all a flutter, just the visual of Edward holding little Riley Jo and singing to her *sigh* And I am glad his daddy is dead, he was bad news and now Edward is free of the baggage that he provides. And BTW, I think I would build an alter at Edward's feet as well, just sayin'    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 : Valentine's Kisses

Ahhh, loved this chapter... loved their gifts to one another, loved them playing house, and that lemon was pure yummy... love ya girl an thanks for all the love :-)    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 : Aqua Net and Open Flames

Ahhh, I loved this chapter and it brought back so many memories for me. My god! A can a week easily, when I went out my hair was BULLET PROOF! but seriously, loved the prom, loved their interactions with one another and loved how perfect they are together...sigh... I am in denial that this is almost done :-(    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 : Misunderstandings & Multiples

Ah, thanks for all the love BB! I love you too and don't worry about last night, you were fine...

I really loved this chapter, especially Esme taking care of business with the waitress and of course their 3 orgasm inducing sexcapade was ultra hot BB!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64: Little Shit and Flossy

I sooo loved this chapter Jen... Edward and LS just cracked me up as well as the auction. Bella is too damn funny and poor Edward needs to accept the fact that he is a pussy whipped schmuck for a girl who absolutely ADORES him :-)    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65: I love a rainy night

Ahhh, thanks babe, you know I believe in you and this story...now this chapter was all kinds of wonderful. I absolutely LOVED their wedding and thought you wrote it perfectly. I love their love, they are just so perfect together and he was right when he told her they were meant to be! Wonderful chapter BB :-)    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66: A place to call our own

What a beautiful ending to a beautiful story... I have so fallen for this whole crew, your wonderful and charming countryward and your spunky yet fragile Bella, an Esme that makes me proud to be a woman and Charlie I would totally do! I loved it baby, I loved how they got married at their spot and loved even more that they will grow old there, hopefully raising a houseful of children... CONGRATULATIONS girl, love you :-)    

Last Friday Night by amandac3 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 29]
Summary: Past Featured Story


 


Whipped cream flavored vodka, Justin Bieber, skinny dipping & Birthday Sex! Spend 24 hours in the life of Edward Masen. While celebrating their dirty thirty, twins Edward and Jasper, and their bestie, Emmett, carve a path of destruction through the city.


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69728 Read Count: 16269
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jun 2012
Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue – Think We Kissed but I Forgot

Last Friday Night, woohoo... so proud of you    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Oops, I Said On My Dick

Fireward... pure YUMMY! Thanks for pimping my story girl... love ya    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Poor Pussy Poor Pussy Cat

LOL... hot damn! love me some Riley and love me some Emmett. Now that boy would definately be fun to hang out with... and can we get Edward laid already. The boy is desperate!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 – Uptown baby, uptown

It's a THROW pillow damn it...LMAO! Seriously, I love Jasper and our emo Edward and HAM, My God! he is just to awesome for his own good :-) Another great chapter girl... Now, let's bring on the chickas    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 – You wasn't saying that when you was...

Hey Girl... Let's see... First off, Tanya is pure skank, who would screw around on Edwardo? Secondly, have I said how much I love Ham? and Thirdly, HELL YEAH! loving the girls already... Have fun in Vegas Baby and remember: What happens in Vegas STAYS in Vegas and that's all I got to say!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 – Got my Ray Bans on and I'm feelin' hella cool tonight

Mar-ga-RITAS! hehehehe... I love this chapter and the interactions they have with one another. Oh this is gonna be a seriously fun night, can't wait to get into the club! And, I say back to Edward... "Show ME what YOU got, Wardo!"    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 – Shake That!

As You Wish! Hell yeah, girl... Loved the chapter, loved their interactions and Riley is so damn AWESOME (much better than my Riley...LOL). I am not sure who I love more him or Emmett (aside from Wardo of course, that is a given...LOL)... Can't wait for the next chapter :-)    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 – Baby now get up on it

LaLaLaLoved it! so, um, yeah, I don't have a hubby anymore so you better get to writing me a lemon woman! Oh man, B & E are super hawt together and hot damn they are going to definately be seriously shit faced before the night is done...LMAO!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 – You the Illest

Oh Ham...*tisk,tisk*... he's in for a long night isn't he? Loved the song choices and of course Bella and Rosalie are AWESOME! Them boys don't stand a chance    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Shame on Me

Ah Ri,Ri needed some loving. BV is one of my favs and yeah. UMMMMM, Wardo is a better man than most but I am thinking he may be having a little trouble holding off as the night goes on...LOL... But, hot damn do I WUV him :-)    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Girl Quit Playin'

Oh man... you know I love this chapter, not just cause Wardo is frigging AWESOME but Jizz proposing was perfect... 

And, yes, thank you for scrubward, my computer almost shorted out from all the drool on the keyboard, hehehehehe    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 – Kiss Me til You're Drunk

Ah quit your bitchin this chapter is FINE! besides, they are out of the club, and gettin ready to get BUSY! wooohooo... Seriosuly though, loved the interactions the boys have with one another and of course I have had enough of the UST between HB and Wardo... I... need... some... RELEASE! hehehehe    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 – Make Love to You Endless

Okay... you KNOW I LALALALOVED this chapter! The sexual chemistry between these two is fan-fucking-tastic soooooo AWESOME job. And let's see a Wet and Beautiful Edward *ahem* I think I need a minute ;-)    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Don't Need Candles and Cake

Excellente' my dear, Excellente'... I think I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke...LOL... great chapter, A... LALALALAloved it!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - She Put Her Body On Me

Last Friday Night, lalalalalalalala...LOL... Yes, you know I like me some shower lemons so let's get to cracking on the next chappie...LMAO... Ah, I really think I am in love with Wardo *sigh*    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 – From Your Head to Your Toes

Is fifteen hours too soon...I THINK NOT! God I love Wardo and yes my dear HB seriously delivered on the BJ...AWESOME    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 – I Work Out

Give me shirtless cowboyward and like right NOW!

hehehehe... loved it, what is it about guys. Women spend oodles of dollars on expensive lingerie and they want little cotton ones. Go figure!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 – Make My World Stop

YUM! I will have a chorizo and egg burrito with the red sauce that will make my eyes water and burn as it goes down my throat..LOL

AH, love me some Riley. AND, love that my Wardo is getting all romantic, hehehehe... is he going to carve their initials in a tree :-) now, lets get to the lovin!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 – I'm the Magic Trojan

Ahhhh, my dear sweet Wardo, how I love thee and your sparkly peen! Great chapter. I am already sad that my time with these two is almost over :-(    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 – Check please…

AWWWW! I already miss Wardo and HB... I am so proud of you girl. This is such a fantastic story. I loved being a part of it and am so looking forward to the other stories you plan on writing... I LOVE YOU! 

So have a drink on me!    

Reviewer: LovinRob1 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue - I'm Rising So High

SIGH... I so loved HB and Wardo as well as all the cast and crew, hehehehe... this was a fantastic story girl and the epi was perfect for them... Now I am still waiting for my tight 501's and cowboy hat ;-) Cowboyward is seriously calling to me    

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Outtake 1 - Riley

Ahhh... I love me some Ri-Ri... So happy he got his 'more' .. hell you could probably right a short novella from these two crazy cats cause they are freaking AWESOME together!    

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Outtake 2 - Edward

Merry Christmas to me! Thank you for the best present EVAH! Shirtless Cowboyward rules my world right now :-)    

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Outtake 3 - Bella

Ah HB is such a lucky bitch! You know I soooo loved this outtake. Another goot one girl :-)    

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Outtake 4 - Rosalie

OMG! those two are so freaking funny! A) I can't believe he quoted Tenacious D to her and B) I can't believe she actually KNEW it was Tenacious D... and the sex was hot, hot, hot... well, considering your inspiration *sigh* I think I need to swing over to the blog and remind myself *wink, wink*