Reviews by Kimmie41
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533716
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

Great chapter Lexi. I'm glad they worked it out...Very well played out chapter; nice closure and new start for them. :)

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Ok, here we go...Let's break it down...First, let me say, I loved the chapter. Bella has still got it and so does Edward...As for Sonny, he reminds me of a younger Skip. He's single, he's good looking, he's rich, why can't he sleep around? As long as he wraps it. *shrugs* I would like to know why him and Katie stopped seeing each other. I don't remember if he said anything or not. I would love for the baby to be his. He's right, it would be a bomb dropping on the family. And I wonder if she loves him? He's says she is the only one he loves and would love to be with her again. As for Damion...That was a shocker. Wasn't expecting that. Bella and Edward didn't want him to be in the "thing," Edward says he didn't have the heart, balls and didn't show interest. Man, wait until the sit down. And the costumes, I remember in WTS, with him dressing up and the plays, I'm glad how you incorporated that into this. As for Sonny screwing Bianca and Damion wanted her, well, I guess he should have spoke up first. I mean, I know he is shy, but still. If you want something, you gotta go after them. I'm curious to see how he gets all these women when he isn't with this chick Julie, with him being so shy.

As for they way Sonny feels..I can understand..the jealousy he feels toward Damion because he is so silent and deadly and in school doing what he wants. If Sonny wanted to, he could take his bar exam and live up to his potential. Sonny needs to look at it like he can do things that Damion can't and vice versa. But he doesn't see that.

lastly...OH!!! Aro Jr. and Anthony. My God, hilarious. I did not see that coming at all.

Will you be posting pics of all the kids if you can find them?

Lexi, I don't give a shit who doesn't like this chapter and the ones to come. you are awesome, you have a gift as a great writer and don't let the few people that are negative get you down.

Can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

Thanks for updating early Lexi. Loved the chapter. Yeah, I don't know what to think of Alex and Carlise. I mean, she is being forced to have the baby and get married. Its what he wants, but I don't think she wants that.

Curious to read the outcome of all that.

:)

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

Loved this chapter Lexi....Great job...I'm so going to miss this story. :( I look forward to every wednesday. I read this chapter on the way home from Florida Wed...Enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

I loved this chapter. I don't think it was anything special; just a day at work for Edward. But it was good. Gosh, I hate to see this story end. I love when there is action going on.

 

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

Oh Damn, this was a long ass chapter. :) But so good...I loved it and it ended perfectly...

I don't know why you put in the AN at the beginning regarding E/B and no cheating. I know that won't happen, but other people still might think the skip will...*shakes head*

I'm looking forward to the next journey for them.

Will we seeing your new story soon-Copward?

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Ok, YES!!!! I loved it Lexi....I'm going to leave the same review here and on FF, even though I read it here. I didn't want to miss anything...And no, not really caring for Kylie at the moment. She is kinda immature and bratty, but she can improve.

 

I like it. I like that her and E still have the sexin' going on..Curious about Alex and Carlise though...:) Lisa and Aro got married. YAY!!! Can't wait for more Lexi...Really good...Next week?

 

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Ok, same review here as on TWCS (where I read the chapter because I don't want to miss anything)

Now we get inside Kylie's head and....UGH!!! Joe is disgusting. He was Carlie and kissed Kylie? *GAGS*

I think Kylie is too young. She is confused and Joe was the rebound and like she said the ticket out of the house, but why though. Why did she want to get away from Edward and Bella so much? Was it the life or she was depressed from Peto/Gio?

Anyway, I'm so glad her and Peto worked things out. Now, maybe she'll goto school...Looking forward to the next update...Edward's turn?

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Dang, Long chapter, but I loved it though. Again, same review here and on TWCS-where I read it. I didn't want to miss anything.

Um...I don't know what to think about Damion. The whole time I was reading this chapter, all I kept picturing was Edward. I had to keep reminding myself that this was Damion. He is extremly intelligent. Smart. Obsessive and has psychotic tendencies. :) Do you have a picture of this Julie in your mind of what she looks like. He doesn't need to be with her and I'm wondering if he is with anyone, how often the role playing will come into effect.

I was really surprised by Lauren. She couldn't have Edward so she took Damion, although he could have said no, but he was young guy in puberty with a women. Who would say no? It just wasn't right and I think she end with a bullet in her by Bella if it ever became known.
He also has an unhealthy obsession with Alex. I kinda of had that feeling the last couple of chapters, but I wasn't sure. I don't know if it was her, or her qualites that he was obsessed and that he wanted. Maybe both. *shrugs* I don't know, it was weired though, how he kept saying she wanted him and he was kind of pushing himself and the situation on her. I kept thinking someone was going to walk in and catch them. :) Anyway...on to review part 2.

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Ok, when Dame ran into Maggie, I thought, "Oh, this will be the one for him." So, needless to say I was disappointed to know she was so young and wanting to be a nun? WOW....I liked this chapter, but also, it was more or less them talking, so...I don't know..I guess I wanted more, but we did get into that crazy head of his. I think he does have some type of issues. It is not normal for him to feel the way he does about killing. He has such a nonchelant (?sp) attitude toward sex in general. I wonder if he has ever had to where there are emotions involved? *shrugs* He's a puzzle, because he lies all the time and you don't know if he is himself or playing a role. It is frustrating and confusing, because I would have to question everything he does. GAH!! I love him, but he is psycho. LOL...You know you said in a post earlier in the week, that not everyone will have their HEA, but you know, I would like Damion to meet the one. Gosh, I would like Sonny and Katie to be together too. :) Great chapters.

Summary: Past Featured Story

(E & B Version) A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149771 Read Count: 33315
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh crap! What's going on? What happened with Edward?

I know Bella and Jacob are close, but maybe they shouldn't be affectionate in public. Some people don't understand the closeness of their friendship.

Can't stand Jessica. I hope she gets what's coming to her.

Do you not post on FF.net anymore?

Hurry update again soon please.



Author's Response:

I'm holding off on updating at FFN for a little while, just until the turmoil dies down. The people who were causing the "issues" admitted that they watch the first couple of pages of updates for new targets. I thought it prudent just to lay low for a while, but I will resume posting the story over there when it seems safe again.

 

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717534
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Thank you Lexi for continuing to post this story. I love it and I will read anywhere you post. Seriously...I'm so glad things are coming together. Looking forward to next chapter.

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I found the notification in my inbox where you posted that you updated. Sorry...I did enjoy having to read like 6 or 7 chapters.

So, Bella's keeping the baby, E and B are together? Lovin' it so far Lexi...I don't trust CJ though...Something about him. 

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I think I actually read the last few chapters-updates- on your blog, but I'm reviewing here. *shrug*

I freakin' love this Lexi...You keep me wanting more and more. With this, Higher, and Riders (that I so miss) Anyway, personally, I think Bella needs professional help and I understand she gets bored. I would to, all day everyday while E is working. Hopefully, she'll be better when she starts school? And if she works at Sal's, that would help her to. Keep her mind busy and she'll be helping.

I can't say how much I love this and your other stories enough. Really, I can't. Words would not do it justice.

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Yeah, What happened?!! I'm lost too. GAH!!

Thank you Lexi for updating. Love, love, love this chapter and the past few.

Don't trust CJ at all and like E said, becasue Carlise trust him, he's alone too. I guess in that world, it is very difficult who you can trust.

Have E and B been to the doc yet? Can't remember. I can't wait until she gets furthur along and starts showing.

Update soon please. 

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Thanks Lexi for posting this here. I think all your Readers blew up the site trying to get on at the same time to read these updates. LOL. I mean seriously....

Love Edward in this. He is so sweet to Bella. Being there for her, helping her. She needs help emotionally and mentally and I agree with Edward. When she fine fine, then they could be together together. Ya know?

Thanks again and don't give up...Your wonderful.

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Thank you so much for updating Lexi. I hope you are alright...Love these chapters. I wish E and B would communicate more; I mean is there a reason for them acting wierd or they wasn't sure how to act after being apart for 2 days. I mean I know they probably don't know what their relationship is.

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Ok, now that I'm all caught up...Whew!!! I tell you what, this whole ordeal is one big clusterfuck. I mean, if they would have just been honest with each other, so much of these miserable feelings could have been avoided. I tried, to put myself in Bella's shoes being 18, immature but I still would have told Edward how I felt, what I was feeling and that was pregnant and not pushed him away. There is no communication between the two and that is so frustrating. I'm so proud that Bella's backbone shone through in this chapter and she spoke up. She needs to speak up, be strong, and yeah, she needs help. Even though she wants this baby, even though she wants Edward, she has all this self hatred, low self-esteem in her that she needs help.

Lastly, thank you Lexi, because I tell you what, I would have been pissed if Edward screwed Tanya...Yuck!! Glad that he came to his senses when he seen Bella. I actually thought that he would find her in his bed. I really really hope they start talking next chapter and solve this. And if they officially get together around chapter 80? God.....IDK....I hope they get crap straight in the next chapter and not in 20...Love the chapters and I'm keeping up...

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Thank you for updating Lexi...Without Riders, Tribute and Offbeat is what I have to look forward to. I have missed this...

Will you be elaborating more on Bella's pregnancy? I mean I don't even remember if they have been to the doctor or how far along she is. It hasn't been talked about much in the past few or more chapters.

Love the chapter...and update soon please.