Reviews by ThatsMzPeachesTYVM
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983352
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Edward is going to get all freaky on her!!

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Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

His willingness to be ... Whatever she needs him to be should be melting her.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

I'm guessing she did. That would be how she found out how much
was being paid by whom for the mortgage. Nasty, skank-ho!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I think Emmett is smarter than Edward takes him for and Edward's reaction to calling her a fuck-buddy just confirmed to Emmet that it's Bella.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

He's just ... Gah! *drools*

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Paul was a loser/ASSHOLE! Bella is going to be so much
better off without him! Good riddance to bac rubbish... time
to let Edward comfort her heartache away.

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Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well, they aren't drunk... yet! ;)

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Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella has the best-best friends!

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Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yeah, keep trying to convince yourself, Bella! LOL

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Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Asshole is too kind a name for Paul.

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Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Who to take, who to take... Duh!! 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I hope he doesn't get so caught up that he forgets about being home by 6. Is Bella going to get pissed at him for faking a relationship without her knowledge?

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It's not JUST Itaians that are like that! I am of German, Scottish, and Irish heritage, and my momma believes the same. I've been married for over 14 years, and she STILL gets offended when my husband refuses dinner. He refuses if it wasn't planned in advance because he "doesn't want to mooch." *rolling my eyes* 

makes MY life fun, lemme tell ya!

Great chapter, hon!

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Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

He's worse than an asshat. It'll be interesting if, by the time his smelly ass DOES come back 'round; Bella and Edward are already sexing it up, and she's happier than Paul's ever seen her. Happy women are SO much prettier!!

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Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Awe! He's so nervous... I love it!

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Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I like purple on her.

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Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I think I already chose... I like the purple strapless with the high-slit!

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Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

The lady doth protest too much, me thinks!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love that ombre colored fabric, and I agree that it
will look great with the cut and style of the purple one.
I am looking forward to the event, and also to THE 
event, when Edward and Bella take that next step.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I have to laugh here, she says she wants a 'Prince Charming' that will keep her from falling, but that's JUST what he was trying to do!!! LOL Silly girl.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

THey are BOTH in such denial!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

If Esme were like MY mom, she'd have kicked the bitch
out on her ear, and told Emmett to never bring her back
under her roof! PLEASE, tell me that either Rose changes,
or Emmet wises up and finds someone who isn't a horrid
troll, someone who will love him!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I gotta see the pics! LOL

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

maybe she ca try to move on, and get mistreated horribly,
finding through the mess just how great Emmett was, and
we know that Esme has a big ol' momma's heart, and will
try to help her heal from the abuse. Maybe she can be a 
whole new girl... OR you can write her with Paul! ROFL

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

It's a shame more men aren't that thoughtful.

*glares at hubby's empty chair* 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Next few days? *squees* 

Does this mean smexy times are near???

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Holy shyteballs... $82,000??? That is INSANITY. 
Never gonna happen to MY house! LOL

I am eager for the benefit! 

PS Loved the Christmas Vacation references! ;)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I am not sure who is going to cave to their feelings first. I don't think it'll be lopsided for long once it starts, because they both have feelings already, they're just loathe to admit.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I am still torn about who will fall first! LOL

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Eleazer is going to get them all wound up if he keeps insisting they kiss every time he lays eyes on them. Let's hope they bump into him often! ;)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Like... THE BIG ONE??? Oi vey!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Bump and grindy ride ... woot, woot!

That's what I'm talkin' about!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Yeah.. Me too! Ungh!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I want to room with Edward... he can fantasize about my DD's
and be my fuckbuddy ANYDAY!!! *sigh*

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I am SO unsure as to which one is going to fight their feelings
seeing as they BOTH really care abotu each other, and they
BOTH felt the more in this. You KNOW they did.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Sort of ... Kind of the same situ you had. We never had sex, (primarily due to the fact that I was a virgin, and wanted sex to mean something) but we fooled around and mad out a lot. We just never 'went out,' we were good friends. *shrug* it was HS, what can I say?

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

He's not going to be able to handle the thought of her pleasuring herself ... Not when he can fill that need, and help himself as well!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Edward wants a connection, even if he doesn't want to acknowledge it yet.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Rose is an evil, money grubbing bitch, and turning her 
blue was too good for her. I can't wait for Emmett to 
hook up with someone more worthy his time. Someone
who he can love for who they are, not put up with for 
their sexual prowess.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Neither of them are going tawny anybody else.

what would be the point?! 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Yeah, and they both think that not kissing is
actually going to keep the emotions at bay??
PFTTT!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Lawyerward is the shiznit!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

That sounded more like making love than fucking... J/S

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Oh, my!! Looking forward to desk sex!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Me first - after you, of course!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I wonder if they realize the pet names and tenderness that emerge when their walls come down, and they're together? They're only kidding themselves. 😏

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

he's probably going to lose cntrol, and blurt it out
one of these times that they're having sex now
that he has admitted it to himself.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I am thinking he's gonna take some real convincing to believe she's in love ... like losing what they have.'maybe him going out with someone else? Hmm...

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

He is SO in love with her. Silly, unobservant girl.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

It's Edward's fantasy ... Let HIM tell it! 😈

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

I don't think our Edward's heat could take the agony of her finding someone else to date. 😕

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

At least this time, it sounded like she's acknowledging that she may have some feelings toward him as well ... even though she isn't ready to pursue them. At least, that's how it sounded to me.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

I hope she doesn't make him wait incredibly long. there's GOTTA be a way that she can speed up her growth. She's young, but not THAT young. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

What happened to the snarky, scrappy bitch that got in Rose and Jess' faces?!?!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

uh-oh ... what are you up to, missy???

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Are they gonna get drunk and wind up in bed again? 
Bella needs to get over her insecurities. The man is 
head-over-heels for her!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Was she at least partly awake?!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

She had to admit to feelingthat before they can move forward.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Of course not ... we still have to deal with Rose.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

I am so glad they are both on the same page ... Finally!!! :😀

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

They'll build up to it gently. I LOVE that they are finally COMMUNICATING!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

*waves her arm over her head*

Me! Oh, pick me! LOL

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Yeah, it's mostly unlikely because she would only have gotten ONE chance to not treat customers appropriately in such a place. Even at McD's (where I'm a mgr) a crew member will only get one rudeness opportunity. Period. LOL

That said, I agree, it was cute to see him being all 'lawyerly' and standing up for his girl.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Taking it slow would be SO hard after having already had such great sex together already. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Let me guess .... Rosalie?

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I knew Rose was coming back. Let's see how much time she gets for her bad behavior. Hopefully LOTS. Emmett deserves a great girl.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

*raises BOTH hands*

i tried to learn golf with the hubby, but my Tatas DEFINITELY got in the way, and I decided it was a game he can just play with his buddies. All I managed to succeed at was getting VERY. Frustrated.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Yeah, I think ainth is a fair time for her to have him wait!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Yeah, she's definitely going to be feasting on his man meat!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

I think he's going to be/is very afraid that she is goig to withdraw from him again, and that he is goig to have put his heart on the line only to be broken.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

I'm sorry people said that about your writing and about this Bella. I might think she's foolish about counseling, because ... let's face it, until she vomits out the poison, it's going to keep making her sick ... BUT, I know of people who refuse help until they hit the VERY BOTTOM. Some people KNOW they new help, but are too stubborn to get it until they are faced with losing everything of value, and even then, some people are too proud to get outside help. (Just watch the show hoarders. Apples and oranges, but same general idea.)

 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

He's gotta be cracking up ... his sister is more excited that he is seeing Bella than that she just got engaged?? Crazy girl. 😳

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Sometimes having it pointe out is enough to make a person want it. I hope she does!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Woot! Ding-dong, the witch is DONE!! LOL 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Oh, I hope it's Paul. Edward needs to claim her publicly with a searing kiss, right in Paul's face. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Woo hoo!! I'm exited to see what all they do for their 'first date,' and who else pops up from the past.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

She really needs the counseling!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

He needs to say the words. I know he's afraid she will freak out, but I think she needs them. She needs to know what he's thinking.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

She has to come to a point of recognition that he is NOT like her other 'boyfriends' were. This is the guy that will stand by her no natter what ... and I'm not so sure Alice is right about the I love you thing.i think those words might be healing.

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Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

I really want to see Edward call in an anonymous tip to Paul's school and let them know about his despicable behavior with students.

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Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Stubborn and somewhat foolish.

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Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Woo-hoo! Get yer freak on! 😏

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Don't we all?!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

I hope Bella squeals on Paul as soon as Edward digs up more info.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 06 May 2014 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

ROTFL

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

She actually thought about the possibility of a future with Edward!! That's a step, enen if it DID come with a 'maybe.' At least she expressed real HOPE!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Awe! Don't we ALL hav someone we wish we could have been brave enough to have said such a thing to 'once upon a time,' and wish we could have recreated tat moment years afterward?

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 16 May 2014 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Shower lemons are always good!

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Date: 18 May 2014 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

I think Edward really needs to say the words first.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 21 May 2014 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Emmett is truly immature. He needs to find a woman who challenges him to be a better man.

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Date: 22 May 2014 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Since Rosalie is OBVIOUSLY not a good match for Emmett, what are we gonna do to get him settled? He needs a sweetheart ... someone good and kind and mature .... someone like Angela!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

I'm still voting for taking the asshole down. He's destroying the self-image of young, impressionable girls, and doing them emotional harm at a point where they are JUST getting a grip on who yet are themselves.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

I I hope Bella doesn't wind up sick, seeing as she already stated that she has no more leave for the year!! Who'd Emmett go on a date with??

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 29 May 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Bella didn't realize she was the MOH??

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

I really dislike the nasty old goat! She may be pretty, but she's a vile bitch.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

They are SO sexy together. Please, Donny let the drama separate them ... make it draw them closer together. Pleeeease?! *pout*

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

And a baby around to prove it?? Ooh, damn. I would ALMOST feel bad for what's coming for him, except ... I don't! LOL

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Bella had better get over her anger at Edward for not having discussed it with ER really damned fast!! He started it out of love for her, but it HAS to continue for justice' sake!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Edward SHOULD have told her as soon as he started building the case. Let her in as it was growing and developing. SHE should not have attacked him for bringing to justice the asshole who made her feel like garbage. 

Angela and Emmett?? Wait, didn't she dump Edward because his cock was too big, them join a convent?? 😳😳

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

I think Emmett is right. He blindsided her with all of that information. She needs time to process, and cool off. Once it sets in that he fathered a baby with a minor, who then committed suicide over the mess, I think she'll find her hatred renewed.