Reviews by twinmamma
Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 257: Chapter 257

Damn... Edward is being a mean dom.  Can't wait to see what he's got up his sleeve, vcause I doubt this is just a simple - "Swing by the shop & pick up a couple of carnations" type of order :)

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 258: Chapter 258

:)

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Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 259: Chapter 259

Knew he must have planned something with his little "field trip"  - can't wait to see what he's got in store re: lilacs..

The story deletions at ff are so crazy - I'm happy reading your story at TWCS.  Honestly, I don't understand why readers who enjoy adult fiction wouldn't create an account here...

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Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 260: Chapter 260

:) Hapy holidays!



Author's Response:

thanks, and to you too!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 261: Chapter 261

I know she's not dead, but still....what a way to go  ;)

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 262: Chapter 262

Can you imagine having a dream about 2 hot guys in your office having a fight on your ceiling surrounded by strangers...  I'd be like - "What the hell did I eat before falling asleep..?!?"  LOL  :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 265: Chapter 265

Thanks for the sexy start to the new year :)

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Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 266: Chapter 266

I'd think she'd need to write this stuff in her journal - at some point these fears will start to impact her enjoyment in the playroom -- or at least she'd look bummed out at work where Edward would see it...  I can't believe these doubts haven't eaten away at her sooner -- but then again, great sex will help you forgive almost anything, even when you shouldn't

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 268: Chapter 268

I love a good oral scene as much - or more- than the next girl...but I'm so ready for Edward to start throwing some hints to Bella about his real identity. Don't all of these office meet-ups make her a little suspicious about the fact that Sir could be a co-worker...? 



Author's Response:

coming very soon!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 275: Chapter 275

Damn...  Can't wait for the next update!!!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 277: Chapter 277

:)

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Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 278: Chapter 278

Awww...  Can't wait to see how Edward responds to her note!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 280: Chapter 280

Oooh... It's so close - can't wait for the big reveal!!!!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 282: Chapter 282

:)   The countdown to the big reveal is killing me!!  I can't take the wait!!!  :)

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Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 284: Chapter 284

Oh man - you're killing me!  Can't wait for the big reveal...  :)

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Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 285: Chapter 285

Awww!!!  And great pics... Haven't seen the library one before - Rob is such a cutie!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 286: Chapter 286

Dying here....  The tension is unbearable!  And I mean that as a compliment... :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 287: Chapter 287

Oh man...  I can't take!!   How's she gonna handle the big "Yeah baby, there's something I need to tell you... I'm Edward." [Yeah! Sir's a hottie!]  "And I'm a vampire." [Oh no!  Sir's a lunatic!]   :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 288: Chapter 288

ACK!!!  I can't take it...  Gotta read the next chapter!!  Although I have a feeling it's basically EPOV with him doing an internal happy-dance :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh yes - yes - yes!!!  I can totally see it!!

- The step sisters & stepmom subject Cinderella to humiliation, even though that's a hard limit for her

- "Prince Charming" is a tounge-in-cheek ninckname - because in reality he's a cold, demanding Dom that's unsatisfied with his partners

- At the dance - the other princesses are scared at the thought of his punishments - but Cinderella gets aroused

- Instead of a glass slipper -- it's actually a glass dildo that's nicknamed "slipper" --> because it feels so good to "SLIP-HER in" (can you just see the King's messenger traveling from house to house asking about the glass slipper and everyone pulls out a shoe -- except for Cinderella who runs down the stairs with a huge glass cock)

- Cinderella lives happily ever after with her Prince Sir - who makes her wear butt plugs / anal beads under her fancy gowns...

Please consider writing it -- it would be so fun!!  :)



Author's Response:

It sounds like you have it all planned out! Why don't you. Message me on fb and I'll help you with it. I promise :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 290: Chapter 290

:)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 291: Chapter 291

Awwww...

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 293: Chapter 293

:)

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Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 299: Chapter 299

Oh yeah... All the build up to this moment...

I still can't believe he's ready to sleep with her without first having the whole - "Hey babe, I'm a vampire" discussion.  But then again -- considering all of the stuff she's gone along with so far, anything short of "I have a bunch of my victims' dead bodies in the freezer.  How'd you like a little school girl fricasse for dinner?" would probably be A-okay with Butterfly.  :)

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Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 300: Chapter 300

And so it begins....  Can't wait to see what you have in store for us!  :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 305: Chapter 305

Holy cow.. That's quite the photo collection :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 311: Chapter 311

Such a great story!  Thanks for the ride...  :)

Summary:

storm3

Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806665
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: On the Road

I appreciated the look back...

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Drama At Twilight

Glad Kylie & Gio are on track - but I'm disappointed that it was more aboiut Gino being an ass instead of her choosing to do the right thing - especially after her almost-marriage.  We really haven't met his character - and I'm already wondering if he deserves better that Kylie...   

Dying to see if Jordan can make piece with Dame's family.  It looks like she's his HEA - but I'm thinking that'll only be possib;e if she's not at peace with everything -- we don't want another Lauren!  

Great job - love your multifaceted characters and plot twists that are based in realistic situations & motivations --  and not fake drama just for the sake of creating a plot!!!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 43: New Edition

Interesting angle -- to see Dame on teh outside looking in since he's not part of the "family business" -- and I knew that crazy Amelia wasn't gonna go quietly!  Can't wait to see them, pop a cap in her ass!  :)

Another great chapter!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Lies

Favorite line: "...and that's what I call bursting in like a motherfucker."  LOL

Seriously - I loved Dame's character -- but now I feel sad that he's another Carlisle.  I thought he'd be more like his Dad  and that finding his true love would balance out his psycho killer side.  Now it looks like he's more dark than light.  And I feel bad for Amelia.  I thought she had some potential for being a kick ass broad who could roll with Dame (maybe a bit of a Bonnie & Clyde vibe) -- but now it sounds like she's just an Esme Jr. which is disappointing, especially with all this talk of her having the hots for Sonny.

The Sonny-Maggie storyline is too lovely.  They are so sweet together - and I'm glad she's not harboring any feelings toward Dame.    

I love your work and I will absolutely keep reading!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Finding Nemp

Great chapter - can't wait to see what happens with Amelia. 

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Great development of Edward's character - it's good to see he's not the same bloodthirsty kid he was back in QS. 

 

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Comfortably Numb

I'm so happy for Sonny & Maggie -- but Dame is breakin' my heart!  I know you always deliver the HEA - so I'm keeping the faith that things will work out for him. 

Glad to hear about the Sandy relief effort!  I live on Long Island - and I have friends that live on the water that lost everything.  I only recently got back power and most of my friends are still doing without.  It's a mess here.

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Webs

It's a huge relief that Katie doesn't have that hold on Sonny.  I'm surprised he isn't a bit relieved himself not to have all the baby momma drama.  He's gotta know he's gonna have kids w/ Maggie at some point.  I guess he feels stupid and sad for getting played by someone he once loved with his whole heart...  Hopefully he'll sober up & see the silver lining. 

The info re: Amelia is interesting -- I hope she ends up being another false alarm.  She's TROUBLE! I loved crazy-killer Dame, and I felt bad for heartbroken, abused Dame, but he's turning into my least-favorite character.  I find his hang-up on Maggie sad in a pathetic, annoying way.  He is Carlile 2.0.  I hope he won't be such a whiny bitch for much longer - but the story overall is so compelling I can deal with it. 

I really liked the fact that Sonny & Maggie had their first fight and that Maggie let her bad ass side out.  She's so Bella (every guy falls for her, Bella didn't clean / Maggie can't cook, they are both ready to pull a gun, both are sex fiends) - which is a compliment.  I can't wait to see her further grow into her role as the future Boss's wife.

I also hope Kylie stays true to Gio.  I remember when Edward was tempted to cheat on Bella, and made the conscious to stay true.  I hope Katie will do the same.  She comes off as a bit of a bubble-brain - hooking up with Joe at prom was beyond stupid - but her interactions with Edward are so fun, they really make her character come alive.  They say boys marry their moms, girls marry their dads.  That's certainly the case for Sonny -- and I hope it's the same for Kylie.  I look forward to learning more about Gio's character and figuring out what qualities he might share with Edward.

Personally I don't mind the fact that this isn't all Bella / Edward POV.  They are settled in their marriage and their business -- the kids stroes are where the action is at.  Having said that - Aro was one of my favorite characters in the first 2 books - and he's been such a prick in this one, I'm happy I'll get a chance to hear what's going on in his head.

I never write such long reviews -- but I just love your story so much and have become so invested in it, I can't help but ramble on.  I need some kind of Oprah-like "Storm Reading Group"  :)  Thanks so much for writing this story and for the frequent updates!  You are awesome!!!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Stay the Same

Great resolution for Dame.  I was a fan of his murder spree -- yet even I am happy for him that he's content with his career as a doctor after reading that chapter. 

No one mixes humor with the drama!!  I bow down to the Queen!!  That ham trick has me laughing so hard my stomach hurt!  :)

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Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Edward

The Edward-Bella dynamic in this series will alawys be my favorites -- but I'm really intrigued by Damion... I love learning more about him through his conversations with Edward.  I can't wait to see how his character develops.  And

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Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Talk is Cheap

I'm so glad the way the Alex situation played out -- I'd hate to think she'd be Dame's HEA...  I'm so curious what kind of woman Dame's "Bella" will be. 

As to the negativity to the female characters -- it's your fault!  Sonny & Dame are such great characters -- it's tough to "find" (write) a woman who's good enough for them!! ;-)

 

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Actions Speak Louder

I'm happy Sonny's got a "love of his life."  It'll be fun to hear how the man-whore becomes a husband and hopefully Katie can calm the hell down.  Hopefully Sonny takes after his Dad and not his Uncle C!  Then Damion can pick up the slack so we can follow his exploits as he continues the sarch for his HEA.  Can't wait to see the awesome, blood-thirsty chick he lands...  :)

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Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Change of Pace

Oh no... don't tell me that Dame's gonna take after Carlile and he marries Amelia (his Esme) when his true love is actually Maggie... ACK!  Amelia seems like a cool chick -- so maybe Maggie could instead turn out to be some psycho woman scored -- like Jane/Carlile :)

And I loved the dig on the Twilight "charge" thing with the crack about static cling...  Too funny! 

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Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Change of Pace Part Two

I like Amelioa -- so much more than the sweet, innocent little girl Maggie.  I'm so over that -- I love that Amelia is a kick ass girl who can pull out her own damn 9mm and throw down for her man!  Screw med school - I love crazy, blood-thirsty Damion!!!  Amelia & Damion can bethe new Bonnie & Clyde  :)

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Old Habits, New Days

I love that Bella & Edward are still hot & heavy -- too sweet!

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Breaking the Habit

Loved it!

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Baby Blues

Happy birthday! 

Put me with the readers that love Amelia & can't stand that little girl Maggie (is true love only fit for innocent, super-young virgins?!? - Gag me!)  Can't wait 'til Damion - hopefully - goes back to be a psycho killer. I know he's rushing with Amelia - and and he's in love with the idea of being in love - but I still think it would be cool if the Prince on NY falls for the princess of NJ...

My heart breaks for Sonny - but the situation he's in is totally realistic.  I can't wait 'til he finds his HEA (hopefully Sonny's isn't with Amelia & Damion isn't w/ Maggie)

:)

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Case Study

So happy he loves Amelia - and will soon be embracing his sociopathic side!  It is that "something special" that made me fall in love with your Edward... 

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Charm

Can't waqit to see the fireworks at the Halloween party!! :)

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Shaky and Jack

OMG!!  What a twisted scenario...  I didn't see Maggie & Sonny -- but then again, I get that she is his 2nd chance at innocent young love in a way, since he lost Katie -- so it makes sense.  I hate the thought of Dam being hung up on her...  He's my favorite and I want his HEA...  Can't wait to see where your story goes.

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Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Gotcha

Awesome chapter! I wasn't sure about the Sonny-Maggie hook-up at first.  She seemed a bit fickle for my taste, but this chapter really sealed the deal for me.  They make a wierd kind of sense.  They had their first crush/loves (Katie / Dame respectively) - and now they have found a new true love.  I'm dying for Dame's reaction though.  I really like Amelia and see alot of fun possibilities in their pairing - can't wait to see what you do with them.  

So sorry about your friend - I'll send in my donation..

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Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Truth

I'm loving Maggie & Sonny together more & more...  Great chapter!

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: My Girl

Oh man... It breaks my heart how frigged up Dame is. And the pain Edward & Bella are going through kills me.  Their pain is palpable. I know you've got a HEA up your sleeve for Dame -- I just have no idea how you'll pull it off and what twists and turns we're in for on the way.  I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter to see another piece of the puzzle.

And Sonny & Maggie -- I wasn;t a fan of their relationship at first -- but you've really sold it to me.  I love them together now.  it's the passion of Bella & Edwards early days -- but Sonny is much sweeter and Maggie is much more innocent.  Their light balances the darkness of Dame's drama.

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

Damn!!!!!!!!  I'm so glad the truth came out.  Hopefully Dame can start healing and he won't be just another Carlile knock off.  He deserves to be happy & in a loving relationship like his mom -- and I'd hate to see Sonny & Maggie go through what Bella and Edward did.

Lauren totally deserves to die -- but what's that gonna do to poor Kylie & Gio?!?  And what about Katie& Sonny's ability to co-parent... The impact of this revelation is too immense -- it's blowing my mind!!  I can't wait to see where you take this story.  

Your first 2 Quiet Storm books were awesome -- and this one is just as intense and entertaining.  Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: A Hard Place

AWesome as always...  Can't imagine how Lauren believes she's getting out of this alive!

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Titanium

The wedding was so sweet... And I even liked what Dame had to say. 

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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Blazing Guns

I hope Dame's truely past his feeling for Maggie.  Nothing's sadder than pining away for someone who's unavailable -- especially your siblings spouse...  I will miss Dame's cold killer personna.  I hope he won't go back to being a boring doctor.  And the whole "...stars in the sky" comment just made me smile...  I love that Sonny & Maggie get to experince an Edward/Bella soulmate connection too...  And Kylie & Gio have a sweet connection too.  If Amelia & Dame are meant to be -- I hope their passion gets turned up a notch -- and if not, I can't wait to see how that sytory resolves itself.

I'm almost scared to see what the ramifications are when Lauren's disappearance / death become obvious.  If Katie & AJ don't survive this book, I wouldn't mind -- but that would tear up Aro who I adore - even though he's been a total prick so far in this book (granted, his behavior toward Sonny makes sense...).

You are awesome -- and I'm totally up for the ride - whatever direction this story takes!

Please don't let the anonymous reviews get to you.  there are people who live to flame others.  I don't get how their minds work -- maybe it's some kind of power trip for them to know they screwed with someone's head... Regardless - their comments have absolutely no connection to reality - so don't take them seriously... 

Thanks so much for the frequent updates -- I'd be miserable if I had to wait months for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Glad to see Dame is starting to act normal around Maggie.  And I'm happy he's moving away from Amelia.  Once the trust is gone, the love follows...  I can't wait to see where you go with Dame's character!  I don't want him to be a miserable psychopath - but I do kinda hope he has a role in the family business... He's too interesting to just putter away in some county hospital or doctor's office.  How you'd actually go about striking a balance between the two worlds is a tough question - but that's why I'm just a reader...  :) 

Your Quiet Storm Bella and Edward were/are so amazing - but the kids have pulled me in just as much!!  I get so happy when I see a new chapter is posted - I can't wait to see what's going on with them.

Assuming you don't post again before Thursday - Happy Thanksgiving!

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: In Between

This new Dame & Jordan pairing seem a bit ordinary - but if that's his HEA, so be it.  I wish he could find a way to balance his mafia killer & sweet doctor personnas -- but if he's gotta choose one or the other, I'm glad he's foudn some peace. 

I'm thrilled Amelia's out of the picture -- at least until she boiils Dame's rabbit... LOL ;)  I gotta believe there's no way she's going quietly..

I'm glad Edward & Bella -- as well as Maggie & Sony have that crazy passion + the mafia craziness. 

Still curious about Kylie & Gio's story...

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Crumbs

Great chapter... Knew there was something up with C-bag :)

If things move forward with Jordan - can't wait to hear how she reacts to the family business...

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Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Dinner

Poor Maggie - her parents are a nightmare....  It totally makes sense why she'd be open to an early marriage.  The back & forth at the table was great!  Love your sense of humor!!!

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Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Eclipse at Midnight

Such an amazing twist...  And I really like the fact that Sonny is an addict, because that's the reality for a lot of people.  I also like the fact that Sonny and Maggie's true love is set against real problems that would tear a weaker relationship apart. 

As to Dame - I'm so glad he's growing up, gaining a mature appreciation of his brother & no longer obsessing over Maggie!  While I'd love for Dame to take that Las Vegas contract off Sonny's hands - if his HEA is to walk the straight and narrow as a good doctor - then more power too him...  

Of course if  can find a way to balance the doctor & mobster - that'd be awesome too...

Can't wait for the next update!  And great rec - CaraNo's work is awesome.

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Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I loved how Bella mothered Maggie - it touched my heart... 

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Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chicken

:) Happy New Year!

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Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Lost Time

OMG... I hope this twist doesn't mean that Edward is gonna be under suspicion for Heidi.... Loved Sonny & Maggie reconnecting.  I also like how the tight squeeze thing is genetic :)

So happy to see a new chapter & really enjoying Tribute...

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Nothing

Favorite lines:

"And what I don't know won't give me a fucking stroke" - it's so funny because it's so true!

"And once upon a time, he did fuck my wife . . ."  - that thought is *so* Edward! 

"...when Tunnel and Lime Light owned the night." - I lived in Manhattan in the mid to late 80's - that quote brought me back! 

 

And personally - while I love Edward & Bebella --> I can re-read QS & WtS anytime (and I often do!) when I miss hearing about them.  I love Dame & Sonny chapters!  I can't wait to see what's up with them...

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717458
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

These doofus men around Bella are so frustratingly stupid... Blaming the woman for getting beat on - accepting that "it just happened once"...  I wish I could say, "this is make-believe" - but attitudes like that are just too realistic.  It's sickening...  Thank goodness your Edward got out of the neighborhood and has a 21st century understanding that domestic violence survivors need therapy.

Great story!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

LOVE IT!! He deserved everything he got!  Just hope it brings Bella some peace...  So happy I read this on TWCS so I don't have to worry about it getting pulled :)

And please don't be upset about the "Riders" comments...  Try to take it as a compliment.  It's just that we love that story -- and just like when the one you adore is away for a few days, it can seem like months.  Some people handle the wait maturely, while others have a bitch fit.  I look forward to that story update -- but I am SO HAPPY you started writing "Tribute."  No one writes gritty, NYC underworld stuff like you (and Lord knows - a ton of people have tried).  And we are very lucky that you share your work with us for free.  But just know, if the day comes when you decide to sell your work - I'll be right there with money in hand to buy your books along with a whole bunch of your other fans. :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just found your new story -- excited to read it!  No one does Mafia fic like you!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thank goodness you didn't have Edward & Alice hook up!  The thought of it makes me queezy...  I guess I'm a little to canon-bound for my own good... :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

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Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

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Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

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Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

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Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

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Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love Jasper's description of bowling and why it's a bad date choice!  :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Can't wait to meet this Esme...  Hope she makes out better than the Quiet storm Esme ;)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great twist!

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Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

:)  You go girl!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

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Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Let the ass kicking begin! 

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

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Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

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Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Totally hot!  I love a slow burn!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

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Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Can't wait to learn more about what's up with Jake...  And though I usually have no patience for the "I'm totally crazy for her - but I can't pursue it" storylines, which can seem so contrived, I'm really enjoying this story because Edward's reluctance makes perfect sense.

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh yeah, he's gotta die.  I just hope Edward kills him slowly...  Please don't leave this secret hanging for much longer.

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Oh my God...  I can't take this... Gotta see the next chapter!!  Thank God the secret's out!!  Can't wait to see Jake pay for his crimes and for Bella to finally get some freakin' treatment.

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Ooohh!!!  Thank you!!  I needed this update today - I was dying after the last chapter... 

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

:)  Just hope Edward makes it slow & painful...

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Poor Bella... 

Sorry to hear about FF... but can't say I'm surprised.  I know TWCS isn't perfect - but as an adult who wants to read adult stories - I totally prefer it to FF and its "moral police."  I hate to think that authors are editing themselves because of the site's policies.  I respect TWCS' stand on authors' freedom and am more than willing to deal with a few technical hiccups to get to read great fic for free :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I love how you write characters who are crazy brutal / tough, yet have a soft side that few see.  In the hands of a less skillful author it would come off as contrived and unbelievable -- but your characters are so real...  Love this story & can't wait for the next update.  :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Interesting turn of events...  Can;t wait to see how their relationship develops.. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hermione needs a place to stay. Harry's happy to help and let her stay at Grimmauld Place, problem is, Snape's already living there. Will this a problem? What's Hermione got on her mind?


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10879 Read Count: 9495
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2013 Updated: 30 Mar 2013
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

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