Reviews by LoveforPenandDerek
Summary:

The love that burned so fierce in each other's heart for the other would forever burn, but it would burn separately. How does a man cope with a broken heart? Derek Morgan/Penelope Garcia.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Derek/Garcia
Genre: Angst, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4688 Read Count: 458
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very touching!

Strip by KricketWilliams Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

After a particularly long day, Derek's odd request makes Penelope feel a whole lot better. I don't own CM.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Derek/Garcia
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2115 Read Count: 3364
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 09 Jun 2012
Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A masterpiece. A lot of emotion in a scene that also happened to be about sex. I wouldn't call this smut. It was sensual and romantic.



Author's Response:

Thank you, LoveforPenandDerek! I don't consider it just smut either. It's an extension of their strong feelings for one another. :) Kricket

Secrets by Thn0715 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Hotch worries that his relationship with Dave will not survive with the secret he carries: that Emily is alive and he's kept them all in the dark. Established Hotch/Rossi relationship. Post-ep for "Hanley Waters". Slash.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/Rossi
Genre: Angst, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3498 Read Count: 169
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 09 Jun 2012
Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really beautifully composed.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Summary:

Garcia drags Morgan into a plot to get JJ and Hotch together before she'll go home with him. Written for KricketWilliams.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/JJ
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1402 Read Count: 360
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Jun 2012
Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

fun

Summary:

A night of watching Christmas movies and drinking spiked eggnog leads to revelations and passion for Penelope and Derek. I don't own a thing.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Derek/Garcia
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5351 Read Count: 8372
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2012 Updated: 27 Nov 2012
Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

they are so beautiful together.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sara. I truly believe so, too. Kricket

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

loved that penelope made a move on him



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sara. I think it was fitting that she waylaid his fears at this point. :) Kricket

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aw. that was a great ending for this chapter. Love passionate, emotional Derek.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sara. I love his passionate nature, too. I think he's never in half-measures, especially with Penelope. Kricket

Summary:

Fed up after watching Penelope at the Holiday party, Derek Morgan takes matters--and her--into his hands. I don't own a thing.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Derek/Garcia
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12502 Read Count: 28158
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2012 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting start



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sara! I got frustrated with Pen, and I thought, Hmm...Derek must be, too. Kricket

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i like the twist of him having his own cabin



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sara. I thought that might be kind of fun. He owns a lot of properties, we have no idea what it could be. (I'm sort of hoping there's a boat home in his past!) Kricket

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think that the reasons behind Pen's thinking in this chapter fits well with what has been shown on CM. she really does seem more comfortable getting naked with an 'imperfect nerd' than an "adonis', even if she may love her adonis more.

 

well done chapter. very sexy yet thought provoking.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I think a lot of women have an issue with hoping for too much. Aim low, you won't be disappointed kind of thinking. That's sad, because I think a lot of women aim TOO low. Penelope in particular. Kricket

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

that was incrediably hot. Glad to see she finally let herself go in his capable hands



Author's Response:

There is a whole lot of love there. He's got her, he won't let her down. Thanks so much! Kricket

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

it's beautiful how he is helping her explore her sensual side



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Sara. There is a lot of love there and both of their sides. Now if they just can realize it. :) Kricket

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

very well written, you  packed a lot of emotion into that



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sara. That's my wish, that the emotion tempers the smut. There is a lot of love in there. Kricket

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

really beautiful. I'm glad she set him straight about what she was feeling five years before.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sara. That is the one thing that breaks my heart. I truly believe he meant those words, even if she didn't understand them that way. This way, they could remedy any past hurts. Kricket

Summary:

Penelope makes, an oops with a very happy ending. Read and review!


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Derek/Garcia
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1480 Read Count: 2027
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2012 Updated: 08 Dec 2012
Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

very sexy! good job on  this.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it :)

The Question by KricketWilliams Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

A simple question leads to thinking which leads to ...more questions. I don't own a thing.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Derek/Garcia
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25588 Read Count: 40102
[Report This] Published: 06 Mar 2013 Updated: 06 Mar 2013
Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Reading this a second time because I'm trying to spark my muse. I've always loved the way you put together a story.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love all the little details you put in your stories.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The way you write the push and pull between them is exquisite. 

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

"Because right now I want you more than i have ever wanted a woman in my whole life." 

 

Love that line and all the erotic talk between them in this chapter.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You make each love scene a true work of art.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Even though this was all in Penelope's POV, you wrote it in such a way that I felt like I  knew just what Derek was thinking too.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That moment when he admitted he had been waiting five long years for her was breathtaking. Loved it. 

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

The way he speaks to her in this fic is absolutely beautiful

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I can totally understand where Penelope is coming from. I look forward to when she sees how different her and Derek are from what Derek has had in the past with anyone else.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Love the passionate anger between them. 

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This break up is revealing so much about their feelings about each other.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That was one of your sexiest love scenes ever. I loved it.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

The way he took care of her when she had the chills was beautiful

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Love the rollercoaster of emotions in this one.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love the fierce storm of emotion in this chapter.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Absolutely gorgeous. This brought me to tears.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Such a fun ending!

Summary:

After a rewarding day, Erin Strauss treats herself to the executive steam room...and finds the last person she'd ever want to see there. I don't own a thing.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Rossi/Erin
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5678 Read Count: 2717
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2013 Updated: 16 Apr 2013
Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love that ending. Very hot love scene and awesome dialogue. You capture this couple well.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well written. Very sexy.

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love the dialogue

Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start. I've always been a fan of this pairing. Looking forward to reading more and seeing just how steamy they get in the steam room.



Author's Response:

Thank you! These two are so fun to write. They're cat and dog, but they totally adore each other. It's hard to imagine them with others for me. Kricket

Peach Cobbler by AJ Goin Rated: T [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

SPOILER ALERT: 8X18 "RESTORATION" A fluffy little one-shot that the episode begged to have written.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Derek/Garcia
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 971 Read Count: 597
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2014 Updated: 27 Jan 2014
Reviewer: LoveforPenandDerek Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Peach Cobbler

That was great.