"and you know, age before beauty" as they were going through the door at the restaurant.  I love Bella's little digs at Tanya.  Edward has more in common with an almost 18 yr old than he does with Skankya. Edward thinks he's fucked with his growing feelings for Bella, but if he only knew what his little ward thought about him, he'd be walking with a permanent hard on.  LOL    Update soon, Please!

Hmm... I wonder who's buying up the shares at SP? Will this jeopardize the company? Will this put Edward in a mood worse than it is now or will he die from the blue balls syndrome? LOL

Skanya is a bitch!  Hopefully she knows now that it's over between her and Edward. I think she should have known by the way he flipped out on her at her apt.   How's Edward going to explain his little white lie to Bella? And is he going to get the chance since it looks like Bella isn't planning on returning any time soon. I don't blame her at all. Edward's been giving her mixed signals and then the meeting with a "client" and then Tanya answers his phone.   PLEASE update soon!

Edward did say some very awful things to Bella, but he had every right to be angry with her for leaving and not coming home because she is his ward.   Alot of his despicable words towards Bella is due,  I think, to his feelings for her and it was a bad time mix those two feelings together when he was so pissed.    Bella is a young girl who is, I'm sure, going to make Edward's life a living hell for talking to her that way and assuming she slept with Riley. As for shoving Edward' dick up his ass? Nah, I would like to slap him along side his head and then give him a big kiss. Hehehehe

Oh Bella. What have you done now?  Because of the Tanya debacles, Bella has, once again,  jumped to conclusions about Edward and Carmen. Bella needs to learn to listen first before taking action. How much of a hole has she dug herself in now? Will she get drunk and marry James to spite Edward? She knows what she is doing is wrong, so I hope she listens to her heart and doesn't do anything stupid, like getting married.  Now that Edward knows how Bella feels about him, what will he do when he finds her? Chain her up in the red room of pain and punish her ass. LOL God, what an awesome chap! 

Holy.... what? Married? Heading to the next chap, like right now!

Oh dear God,  a cliffie? Really? LOL  

I don't like the word hate but I do use the word dislike alot. And right now , I seriously dislike Edward.  I know he isn't using his head (well, he was using a head several times and has been thinking with it too), but he has been unintentionally leading Bella on. He has no clue as to how Bella actually feels about him.  Does he not think that while he tries to distance himself from her, that she is going to maybe revert back to the person who felt abandoned before?  I know what I think Bella should do, but I'd be acting childish. LOL

What the hell is he doing? My God, he needs to quit thinking with his dick.  Maybe he needs to go to school and take lessons on constraint and how not to break someone's heart. If his game plan was to get her away from him then he should have kept his dick in his pants. Does he not think that his actions gave her hope? Did that tat she got not show him how she feels about him?  If I was Bella, I would head back to London, have no contact with him, finish her exams, ask for a divorce(not sure if she can, but would serve him right) and go on an extended vacation, not letting anyone know where she is going. Make sure she is photographed having a wonderful  time and let him die a single old man. Gah,  he so f**king irritates me.  And on that note, that just goes to show what an awesome story you are writing :)

My God Edward.  You kissed Jane? I don't what he thinks the definition of cheating is,  but that is cheating in my book.  If he seriously wants to persue a relationship with Jane, which we all know he has his head up his ass and is using Jane as an excuse, he needs to be honest with Bella. That means taking Rose's advice.  As for Bella, she is trying to delay the inevitable.  She doesn't want to hear what Edward has to say because how much more can he break her heart?  And, I do want Edward and Bella together, but not until he realizes he's an ass and needs to clean up the fucking mess he's made. I want Bella to make him work for it.

I have to be honest and tell you I was kind of leery about reading this chap.  These two just plain make my heart ache.  I can totally see Bella's POV.  Seeing those texts and the way Edward has been treating her, would make me want to run away and nurse my broken heart.  As for Edward, I think, I mean, I hope he has finally got his head out of his ass and finally realizes what his heart is telling him. I love Lauren.  She makes me laugh when this story starts bringing me down.  No offense. LOL  This chap makes me think of the old saying, "Absense makes the heart grow fonder"  I think Bella staying away from Edward will make him really think about what he could be losing or already lost.  

Oh, Edward broke my heart in this chap. It took this God aweful tragedy for him to finally realize, come to terms and admit that he's in love with Bella.  He's not fighting it anymore.  He even admitted to Jess and Lauren's family that he's married to Bella. He's not hiding from it now. I hope, when Bella wakes up, Edward tells her exactly how he feels and let's her make the decisions on her own. And....  Good Lord,  you can see where Lauren got her 'personalitly' from. LOL  Like mother, like daughter.  Another awesome chap :)

Oh, I  so do not want this story to end.  Although the story was angsty, made me curse and cry like a baby,  I love these two and your wonderful FF .  You know,  there are all kinds of possibilities for a sequel.  Just sayin' :)

Hmmm... Rosalie? A bitch? What a concept. LOL   And... I'm still trying to picture Alice as a Dom.

Oh my!  Sir and butterfly :)

Keep talking dirty, Sir and I bet butterfly will cum in less than 5, I know I would. :)

though I love the phone calls, I am really wanting them to finally meet.

He's very observant :)

If Edward would talk dirty to me, I could probably cum without touching myself :)

Uhhmmm... Oh my!  Wow, going all Dom and they haven't even come face to face yet.

Oh boy. 

Well we know one of them is going to get punished and I'm betting it's Laurant.

Tonight's the night :)

Damn, is it tonight yet? LOL

I can't even imagine getting that phone call and a total stranger saying to me "that was beautiful butterfly".  I'd probably have another orgasm :)

Well Beautiful Butterfly,  we all know someone that fits the bill and will go over and beyond ;)

I'm betting the phone calls aren't going to stop Bella from her nightly routine, it's only going to spur her on.  She likes knowing someone might be watching her. If she only knew who, where and why!

That, right there, makes me want to be a bad girl :)

Wishin Edward was in the same room listening to me sleep :)

Hmmm... Edward's toy! :)

I wonder what scene Bella is going to do next for her mystery caller :)

Bella just submitted to him.  Sir will be happy with his butterfly.

*raises hand, waving*  :)

I might have missed it, but how is Edward watching Bella during the day? 

By the sights and sounds of Bella's 'performance',  it looks like Sir might be satisfied tonight.

What? Really? That's very interesting.  Hmmmm....

I like how you've been giving us  little tidbits into Edward's character.  He sounds like a man/vampire that knows what he wants, is very possessive and dark, who wants his subs obedient or not, LOL  (I think he also likes giving out the punishments) and obviously not looking for his mate since he says he would never take their lives.  Hmmm.... I wonder how that's going to work out when he finally meets his butterfly.

Holy.......

I guess she does consider it a reward. I think being called 'little girl' helped. hehehehe

* thinking about the punishments* :)

I think he should hire a window cleaning service, but then he'd have to explain why there's cum sprayed all over them. LOL   It seems like Edward wants Bella to disobey him, to give out his punishment.  But she seems to be very obedient, even in her sleep.

Whoa,  he really does have things planned out.  What Emmett thought was a joke was exactly what Edward has been doing. LOL  So, what exactly is he going to use Jessica for? Oh,  Oh, I think I might know. Hehehehe 

What a cruel bastard, but I love it! :)

Uh oh.  She just disobeyed Sir and she mostly likely doesn't even know it!

Oh my. Cold and hard, just like Sir. Hehehehe

She's falling right into his plans.  Sir should be pleased that she obeyed his orders. :)

Hahaha.  Who's in control now?

I'm still reading :)   I'm curious what Edward's plans are and whenand if they are going to meet in person? LOL  Because I really can't wait for them to meet!

Damn! No sex? Huh..

Bella is really messing with his head and obviously Edward isn't used to feeling this way.  I'd like to know what the reason was for him to decide to become a Dom?