Reviews by killmeangel22
All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: killmeangel22 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

awesome chapter



Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Esme Cullen's matchmaking leads to her son Edward dating fledging wedding photographer, Bella Swan. Falling for each other is effortless and soon Bella's career begins to take off. However, not everyone is quite so thrilled about Bella's happiness and success. A continuation of "The Wedding Photographer".


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139889 Read Count: 63250
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2012 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: killmeangel22 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

You should write about Bree's deal with Edward  but this chapter was great and I love the story



Author's Response:

It'll be a little while before you learn more about Bree, but not to worry, we're about to get into the mystery and things really get exciting.  Glad you liked the chapter and are enjoying the story.  Thank you so much for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Mr. Househusband by ADAdancer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

 

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Raising three children wasn’t that easy, especially when your wife is working long hours as a famous television chef. Some may think I have the easiest life, but spending your days cleaning up after children and running errands is anything but that. I was a househusband.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19206 Read Count: 9881
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2013 Updated: 27 Aug 2015
Reviewer: killmeangel22 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it updateeeeeeee 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Here is your teaser!

I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Summary: Past Featured Story

I couldn't believe I was doing this. But I had stayed quiet for too long. There was no one in the world for me except for him. It's time to stop a wedding. AH/Edward&Bella


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59051 Read Count: 37693
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2013 Updated: 28 Oct 2013
Reviewer: killmeangel22 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Enchanted

I thought this was supposed to be about Bella and Edward but it doesn't seem like it



Author's Response:

Not everything as it seems, things start to change next chapter :) It is most definitely E&B HEA

Twilesque by pienuniek Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 182]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Her grandmother taught her to believe in fairy tales. She was told that one day her Prince Charming would come to save her. But after years of abuse, Bella has nearly given up all hope, until the day the Cullens moved to Forks. Twilight AU, mating connection story.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126196 Read Count: 58053
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2014 Updated: 24 Mar 2014
Reviewer: killmeangel22 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Edward

I think the idea of this story is great and it has lots of potential but there is too much awkwardness in the way you wrote this it does not flow very well 

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This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478645
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: killmeangel22 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yeah that entire thing with sasha you should redo it was very very very confusing to understand what was going on and not really logical which makes me sad because the beging and ending were great and i love this story

Summary:

 

Bella feels like an outcast in her family and that they are keeping secrets. Will Bella find out the truth?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7971 Read Count: 1177
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2018 Updated: 22 Jan 2020
Reviewer: killmeangel22 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I Really like where this is going and would love to read more