Reviews by Duvi
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1114022
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 16 Part 8

I really hate Tanya. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 17 part 1

Tanya is going to shit bricks when these pictures come out. I hope they make her cry. Bella and Edward are too alike, some one needs to put Tanya in her place. Alice to the rescue??? She's the one that seems to do all the work that needs to be done. I can just picture her! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

I think I'm going to love Douglas. Finally, I see the light at the end of the tunnel. Douglas has to make things better with his photos. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 17 Part 3

Finally!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 18 Part 8

Noooooooo!!!! He knocked on the door and...??? I want more please!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 17 Part 13

Tanya is all about herself. What is better for her image. If she takes Charlie away from Edward the fans will revolt against her, she won't do that because she wants the fans to like her. Edward needs to get her to sign over her parental rights. I'm pretty sure she will because she doesn't want Charlie. As long as James doesn't fight for a paternity test in court no one will take Charlie away from Edward. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 18 Part 1

He won't lose Charlie. I just know Tanya doesn't care. All she cares about is he reputation which is on the floor at the moment. She will do anything to get back up, including giving up her rights to Charlie. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 18 Part 2

Yes!!!!! Poppa bear mode in full effect. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 18 part 3

I love this Edward!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 18 Part 4

Yes!!!!!!! I'm so hold she's gone. I hope you stays away. 

 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 18 Part 6

I give him a week tops before he pushes her to the ground and has his way with her. Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 20 Part 1

Yay!!!! You're back. It's been a long time. It's so good and now that they are together it gets better and better. Worth the wait!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 19 Part 3

More!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 19 Part 8

Gah!!! So freaking hot!!! I can't wait for more too!!! More of your writing! ;-) 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 19 Part 9

Hot, hot, hot!!! So worth the wait!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 19 Part 18

Dear baby Jesus this was hot!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 20 part 5

O. M. G. That was too funny!!! Way too funny. How will they explain it to Elizabeth. Kids are so innocent she will think nothing of it. 

P.s. I missed you girl!!!! I'm so glad this updated again. I was a little worried. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 19 Part 2

Yay. It feels real now. They are moving on and are going to go on a date. Thank you Rosalie. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 20 part 8

Aw, he wants her to go with him. I hope it all works out. 

 

 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 May 2016 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 20 Part 4

Yay!!! I love this story! Thank you for the update. It's worth the wait. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 20 Part 7

These two are setting up routines and acting like a family already. I'm so glad the kids can see this. Two parents who love each other. I really hope this isn't the calm before the storm. I love them together. They make such a cute family. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 20 Part 9

Gah!!! What if Little Elizabeth goes on stage?!?!? The world will live her!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 20 Part 10

Aw!!!!! Of course Ellen would get the dirt. She's awesome!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 20 Part 11

Ellen makes everything better. Lol. Need some babies time and maybe some mommy daddy time. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 21 Part 1

Yay!!! These two are finally out. Lol. 

Summary:

Side shots of Bella and Edward's POV from our Christmas story called Momma Santa's Christmas Plan.

 

banner by: tonks1865 / Tiffany Kennedy


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21090 Read Count: 6937
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

She probably saw them and will be extra evil. That woman is already awful to them all. 

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28899
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That last part where Bella said everyone leaves them was heartbreaking. I can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I already love it!! Lucy AKA Buterfly is the cutest thing ever!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

A friend entered her in the contest, maybe Alice. It could have been Rose too. Maybe Rose ran into her or saw her and thought Bella deserves the tickets because she was a great mother. I have no idea how she won but I'm glad she did!! Bella definitely has a fairy godmother or godfather somewhere out there. The fact that she knows Esward's dad makes me think he could have done it as well. Carlisle got Rose to help, many be even Emmett helped get her to Edward. His family seems to love Bella and Lucy so much already. It's almost like they know them. 

Summary:

 

Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126048
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Sent From Hell!!!! Yessss!!!!

Wow, way to come full circle. Emmett graduating...perfect. I can't wait to read more of your stories. I love them!!! You girls write good angst and drama. It's crazy sometimes but not too crazy. I feel like they could be turned into soap operas...you would make so much money!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Her parents are a-holes. You two write some great stuff. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Yay to everything!!  This story, the new stories, Kasi's daughter doing better, everything. 

Under Construction by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 275]
Summary:

Under Construction

 

Bella Swan, a divorced adoption attorney, is relishing her time with her two hot and attentive boyfriends, Edward Masen and Garrett Keyes. Never in her wildest dreams had she ever considered being with two men, let alone two men who adored her as much as they do. Their relationship is perfection. With all new relationships, they are trying to navigate the ins and outs of being together. Their little bubble of sexual exploration is threatened when Bella is sent to New York City for a high profile adoption proceeding.

With a heavy heart, Bella flies out to New York to meet her new clients, close friends of Aro Volturi, her former boss. Carmen and Eleazar D’Amato are finalizing the adoption of a child that they fostered for almost a year and a half, but dealing with them is easy. Running into her ex-husband is not. He manages to appear everywhere once he found out that Bella was in New York. His new marriage has crumbled and his estranged wife has taken their child, hiding him away from James. His job is hanging by a thread and he now blames Bella for everything.

On a whim, Edward and Garrett fly out to New York to surprise Bella. She loses herself with them, but they had an audience. But, who and to what end?

 

Banner by Mina


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33096 Read Count: 45303
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 16 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Damn woman!!! I love your stuff. So hot! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OMG!!!! This was just HOT. Pew. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well damn. I knew this update would be hot but it was more than that. Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yup. Garrett is not feeling the love BUT tomorrow is his night. Let's see how Edward feels then. I bet it's just because he was left out. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Gah!! I want some sexy boys like that. Sigh. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay!!!!! I can't wait for more!  

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Of course he will. He already is. He's s transparent. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Essie is Team Bella all the way. I love her!!! The best revenge will be when James sees Bella with both young men and he's alone begging her for forgiveness. I hope he visits when they are all together. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow. Just wow. I have no words other than give me more!! Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I never found out if Edward felt any jealousy like Garret did on the following night? The night that Edward watched. I don't think Edward would because he knows their connection is stronger BUT maybe he did. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

The boys are going to take a much needed vacation and join her in New York. That's the only option. They must. Lol. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Noooo!!! Bella should have told them!! Something tells me there is going to be trouble. I hope her boys are there to handle James. He is definitely going to try and hurt her if he doesn't get what he wants. Or, even better, I hope she beats him up herself. She is stronger than before and needs to stand up to herself. I think she can!!! James doesn't know what is going to hit him. Bella can then report him to the cops!! Gah!! I hope she beats him up herself!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

She is totally deflecting but because she doesn't want to inconvenience her boys. They need to fly out earlier!! Come on spider senses!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Please let one of her boys find the cameras before it's too late. That guard needs to be fired!!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Please don't take this the wrong way because I absolutely love, love, love your stories especially this one BUT in case you are thinking of publishing later I have a recommendation. James is a douche and idiot. He is not a good person at all. I know this but he seemed so unhinge and crazy when he blamed Bella for his demise EARLIER. If you ever publish have him go crazy after he sees her with Edward and Garrett. See, he's so delusional and wants to spy on Bella and puts the cameras in because he's a creep. He wants to win her over and assumed she would be waiting for him. Who wouldnt? When he sees how hard working she is he remembers why he stayed with her for so long. She's the perfect girl for him. He starts to get angry because she won't answer any of his failed attempts to talk to her since they met. He starts to get angry and then loses it when he sees her with two guys at the same time. This is what drives him into madness. How dare she move on and with two much younger, much more handsome, well off men. This is when he flips everything and it's no longer love but hate he feels towards her. He starts to blame her. 

To me this would make more sense. Just saying. I love it either way. Also, I'm not a writer so my opinion doesn't matter. Thank you for sharing. I can't wait for the next one!!! I already know it will be hot!! Like fan worthy. Get it Bella!! 

Hilda

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Whatever it is, it's good. He didn't say office or coffee shop. He knows after she finds out she won't want to goo home.she will be able to stay at his place until the cops find all of the cameras. James is such a dumb sleazy creep. I hope he gets locked up for this. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I can see why Bella would do this. She's scared and feels like if this got out people would judge. However, what Aro said is correct. It was something done by consenting adults and was a private affair. Or at least should have been. I hated Carmen at the beginning!! Hated her. I don't care if the Devil himself is representing me I want the best lawyer in order to keep my son. Her reactions were not only irelavent to the case but none of her business. I understand her caution and worry since they were in fact sent to her but that's it. She could have put her son's life in jeopardy over something that didn't have anything to do with her adoption. I don't think Bella is thinking clearly. Poor guys. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

...or will she?

i still think a miracle will happen and she is pregnant. Maybe it's just wishful thinking. I don't know what will bring her back to her guys but something will. They belong together. 

Nightmare by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary:

Summary: There's a serial killer on the loose and he calls himself Sent From Hell. Edward is a little strange and his past is jaded. He's let his crush on Bella be known, but she's scared of his unknown past. When Bella is hunted down, will Edward be her saving grace or will he be Sent From Hell?

 

Banner by: CaiteexxGraphics


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68989 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Is it Kelly?!? I hope so! What an incesitive ahole. She can believe what she wants but don't hurt other people with your religious beliefs. It felt like she was doing it on purpose or she's just dumb. So dumb. 

I swear the more I read, the more it sounds like Jasper. Also, what was up with him finding Bella's twin. Then saying he's never met anyone like her. Uhm, is he dense or that obsessed with Bella he can't tell them apart?!? Ugh!! I need more lucky for me the next chapters are coming!! I love this new writing train you're on!!! Keep them coming ladies!! I want to know who did it!!! That MacAvoy guy also seems suspect. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I totally think the killer, or the one in charge at least, is Kelly and Bella just told her everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

The more time goes by the more I think it's Jasper and possibly McAvoy working together. Ugh. It could be anyone!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Of course it's not Edward but now I feel a little better. He spent all night in jail. Jasper and that creepy professor McAvoy are acting all sorts of cray cray. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Gah!!!! Finally!! What a sicko! Now to see how it all ends. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"Professor MaAvoy asks as his green eyes scanning the room."

"Mike rolls his green eyes at me."

"Edward Masen...I always seem to get lost in his deep green eyes."

My bet right now is Professor McAvoy. He teaches this class to try to understand himself. If he looks anything like James McAvoy I'm going to be mad. He's such a hottie. So far there are three green eyed men that could be the killer. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Peter a doctor with green eyes. Maybe it's him. I'm leaning more towards an older man. Professor McAvoy or Doctor Peter. So many green eyes. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Stupid Mike Newton wanting a serial killer. Who could it be??? I need more clues. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

TAR, could it be Tanya with a different last name? It seems like Maria was not their prostituting herself but helping homeless and prostitutes with medical attention. If this is true the serial killer sees things that don't really exist. He's way crazy. Poor Edward. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Interesting. Edward's back story is freaking interesting. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Green eyes. It could be anyone. I wonder who it will be? 

 

I really tried to wait. I hate reading WIPs but I can't wait and this is too good. Waiting till after Halloween was too much. Lol. I can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

No new clues. Green eyes, green eyes. Oh, green eyes. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Professor McAvoy was super creepy and Edward's blade is "misplaced". What if partners are killing??? 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I going to have to go back and see if there's mention of Jasper's eye color. Maybe he's wearing contact. He's acting like the murderer. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ahhh. I have so many ideas. It could be a partner killing. Maybe the doctor and the professor working together. However, I think it will be one guy who is schizophrenic. This is what leads to believe it's the Doctor. He's always heard the voice and wanted to learn more about the illness and how to "fix" himself but now the other voice has taken over. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I suspect everyone!!!! They are all acting strange. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Gah!!! I need more clues there are too many possible killers. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I try to guess but can't. Still need more clues. :-) 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I need the next chapter!!!! Gah!!! Who is it? Is it one person or two?? I need to know! 

Restoration by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 372]
Summary:

Restoration

Fear and close-mindedness broke them apart. Will love bring them back together? Will their faith in love be restored? The third installment in the Renovations Trilogy.

Banner by Mina Rivera!


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49186 Read Count: 44003
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2015 Updated: 10 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

All the brothers are awesome. I love this change. It's so refreshing. I also love when James is a good guy. Like Bella's brother or something just as nice. A good guy.

Oh, Bella! She has so much growing to do. Quick question, were the chances of having a baby very low or nonexistent? Her reaction was way off, all the crying is way off. Bella has always been a very strong independent woman. Could her reaction be due to a pregnancy? It has messed up her hormones. I don't need her to be pregnant and having this child from the case with her will show her she can be a wonderful adoptive mother. She can love a child just as much BUT her crying fest is making me wonder. Or was it just a break breaking point? She loved the guys and had to break up wth them? Like I said, I'm just wondering. Can't wait for more!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

As much as everything sucked this is just what they all needed. Some real growing is going on and relationships are going to be set up correctly with defined lines. Stronger, brighter, better!!!! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I still think she's pregnant. Or is it wishful thinking? I also agree with Gareett, they can adopt. Now to win back Edward. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Bella. What a though choice, the career you worked your life to attain or a relationship that makes you happy. If only she could have both. With Garrett and Esmeralda on her side hopefully she will very soon. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella is going to cry!!! Lol. She's so weepy. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awwww.  

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Aw, I know so much happened in this chapter but I loved how normal they are. How they want to go out and celebrate a good day at work and invite friends and family. It turned into a party! 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Go Essie!!!!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oy. Poor girl. Her mind is in a very bad place. 

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Le sigh is correct. Yay!!

Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yay! They finally got back together that was easier than I expected. The heart wants what the heart wants. 

Summary:

Prompt: #46: Pleasure/Pain. E/B. Bella is tiny. Like, 5ft tall on a good day. Edward is at least 6'2. The height difference is a turn on for them both. She loves looking up at her big strong man. He loves protecting his little girl. Problem is, Bella's tiny everywhere. Edward has trouble fitting inside her. Maybe there are a few tears. It hurts so good.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12462 Read Count: 7050
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2016 Updated: 12 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Duvi Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Too Busy Being Yours (To Fall For Somebody New)

Pew. These two are so hot together. I loved it!