Reviews by dowlingnana
Summary: Past Featured Story



Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

Thanks very much to Cared for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 123074
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Epilogue 1

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so so much. On drabbles I don't review every chapter cause they are short. I sure was tempted on some of them though, esp. when Izzy pointed that gun at that scoundrel's pecker and started counting............that was priceless. I love this Ed & Izzy and how their love held through so much along the journey. ty so much for such an awesome, fantastic story. I'm on to the next epi now. ;o) oxox laters, baby 



Author's Response: Thanks very much! glad you like it. I had great fun writing this one.

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Epilogue 2

Now who in the heck would think I'd sob over a dog's POV, lol, but I did and it was awesome. A bittersweet one at that. Izzy & Ed finally got their little girl. I was in awe when I'd read it was their fifth child though........wow, what a time jump. ty again so much for a wonderful story and I certainly will put you on alert and visit you at ffn as well. :o)



Author's Response: precisely why I couldn't write Jack's death...I would have been sobbing like a baby. ;) Back then folks cranked out those babies didn't they? Izzy and Ed had been married 11 years ...so 5 kids wasn't unusual...that they all survived was quite a blessing. Thanks very much!

Lucky Shot by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 314]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Have you ever imagined something so beautiful, so enchanting that it must be a dream or a mirage?"

Take a gaggle of small town gossips, the doctor's son, the mysterious new single mom, add in a lucky shot with a BB gun and watch what unfolds.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9986 Read Count: 120097
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Jun 2012
Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I want to read like your other stories, but how do I get alerts like at FFN?  Plz let me know. ty

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

silence

Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94719
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Dang woman, hubba, hubba. That wore me out too, bwahahahaha. Talk about erotic. Sorry you lost more reviewers. Guess not everyone can take erotica. I only wish my sex/love life were so hot. Long story, lol. Edward was quite brazen in the cafe, the little sneak. He's sneaky that way but his friends are catching on pretty quickly, tee hee. Cya' on ffn. ;o)



Author's Response:

Hey you, thanks so much for enjoying my story, sweets. I love this Edward and the more chapters I write, the more I fall in love with him. See you next time. xoxox

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I really had to feel sorry for Edward with is sweet prayer he did. He really is sorry and wants her back. Now if she'll just realize that. See ya' on ffn. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

First I love how you used Riley for the female nurse's name, that is awesome. And what a sweet change to the twiight saga. Then the fact that Carlisle used a credit card on Edward's lung totally blew my mind. My s-i-L is a surgical tech and I went right to him with that question and as he told me even  more I just sat here in awe. thanx so much, ;o) 

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh my, was I thankful for those pics this time, hubba hubba. I'm just stressed cause I know what chapter were at and what's about to happen. Stress is not the right word, but hey, you understand, right? I am glad Edward is visiting/surprising his mom but I bet he's second guessing it now what with what he read online and saw. Phil IMO is very much acting like a stalker, IDC how much he wants Bella. He's suppose to be an upper crust kind of person and you just don't act that way. He is not listening at all to Bella and that is disrespectful at the very least. ty for another update, till next time, oxox  ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

ha ha ha, Now that you've taken my thigh's virginity. I think it deserves a cuddle. OMG, roflmbbo, that was seriously funny. I was laughing out loud here. Oh to think what kind of pictures you could have posted....sigh* These two are truly getting closer and what a fun pair they actually make. thanx and have fun on your vaca  ;o)

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Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Now I'll review on this site for you luv. I wonder how Edward knew & got to follow Bella on the train to begin with. Obviously his reaction and lack of acknowledgment to her at the club was the complete opposite. I love this site because of the pictures and I adored Edward's reaction to her outfit, esp. her stockings. Yummy!! And the beautiful comparison of the rose to her........awwwww. Exciting. thanx ;o)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your muli-reviews dowlingnana!! Good to see you here. I kinda like the pictures too!!  Thanks for cups as well!!! xoxoxox  See you next week. 

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love how these stories can take me into a world that I can only dream of. Not that I'd do something like this, but, one should never say never. wink, wink Dang you dress Bella very stylish.......adore the pics. I dream of dressing like that as well as having such a condo as well. ;o)



Author's Response:

You soooo get it! One reads to go to places they've never been, where they want to go and experience. Thanks for always being here dowlingnana!!! oxox

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loosie Goosie, ha, love it. Bella is just  lucky that it's Edward behind her. Just think, it could be any man and someone not that good looking. (shudders)  Oh, oh he's gonna use his parents apt. for some 'tasting' time isn't he? Then Bella won't know anything again unless she finds out who's place it really is. Oh yeah. I think it's sad though that Alice did what she did. I mean, I do understand the reasons, esp. about the wanting a life but they're friends. sigh. Anyway, love the story and still kind of trying to understand Edward here and what his game is. Guess I shall see. thanx ;o)  I love the blue couch in the apt. 

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yo baby, a tantra chair, gulp. Well well well, it's great to see Bella finally coming back to her once upon life. Going to ff now to leave my review. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is what I love about fiction, it will take you to places that in reality you yourself would probably never enter. I love reading this here as well because I love the pictures and no standards like ffn has. I'll always still give a review there for you though. Just for you!  Ahh, I wondered when Edward was going to start being possesive and he didn't disappoint. thanx ;o)



Author's Response:

You are the best dowlingnana ... truly. I love that you review on both sites and I love you for that!!! I copied your review and posted it on their FB group page so they would know how much it is appreciated that they allow the option to post pictures inside the chapters. Thanks again. xoxoxox

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm glad to see Edward having a tad bit of guilt. That is speaking volumns and I wonder if he even knows it, lol. Her coming & leaving alone, not eating, just having all around different feelings. ha ha Just a note: too bad the pic of Bella on her laptop wasn't in pink pj's, sigh. I loved the pic of Rose's outfit....hubba, hubba. And, now we see Phil leering almost at Bella. Go Bella, having all these men vying for your attention it seems. Wow oh wow, what 'Anthony' has in store for Isabella............fanning myself. fan, fan.........thanx ;o)



Author's Response:

I love searching for the pictures for each chapter. I wish I could post more on the Stash. Anyway, I'm glad you are liking the story, sweets. xoxoxo

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Have you seen the movie New Years Eve? Trip to Bali, check it off. Breakfast at Tiffany's, check it off. This reminded me of your a/n on the top. lol Check it off. No kidding! Must be new readers that don't know how you work. I've been reading some reviews on another story and I can not believe how rude or insensitive some people are. Get a life.....sonic boom. (Pitch Perfect)  So, shit's gonna hit the fan soon huh? Oh my! I only wish my dh was into fantasy type things, sigh* Cya' on the other site. Love it still ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

HOLY CROW AND OMG, THAT FIRST PIC THERE OF EDWARD IN THE SHOWER. WHEW, I NEED ONE AFTER SEEING THAT. YEAH BB. LOVE THE PICS ON HERE, IT HELPS WITH HAVING VISUALS THAT GO ALONG WITH THE STORY. I LOVE SEEING THE OUTFITS, THE CONDO'S, THE YUMMY MEN, ESP. EDWARD OF COURSE. SO, ANTHONY DELETED THEIR TRYST BUT EDWARD IS ON THE MOVE NOW TO MAKE BELLA HIS. AND AFTER HIS WORDS THERE WITH STEPHEN HE HAS ALREADY MADE A CLAIM. OH, OH THIS IS SO GOOD. I LIKE HOW ROSE WAS ON EDWARD'S LEFT SIDE AND ALICE WAS ON HIS RIGHT AS THEY SPOKE ABOUT BELLA. YEAH, THOSE TWO WANT B&E TOGETHER AND IMO THEY WERE JUST 'HELPING OUT'....YA' KNOW, LOL. THANX ;O)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well, Edward is sure taking possession quickly isn't he? tee hee And yes, Stephan is  a pushy little sucker alright. But Phil is a sneaky one, barreling into her office like that when he knew Edward wanted a moment alone with her. I don't necessarily like the fact that five days went by w/o Edward contacting her though. If he's interested he'd better show her more than that because there's a line behind her wanting attention. I hope he's careful about not being stand offish either since he was 'Anthony' at first and has that fear she's going to recognize him. Get a grip and a plan real soon there Edward. yeah. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I just got back from Alaska and a I hope you got my last two reviews, cause when I was there and hit submit a strange notice came up saying something about it maybe not making it thru??? So, if you didn't then I am sorry!! IDK why either, it's not like Alaska is a foreign country, lol.  I really liked this side of Bella too. She was really playful. You can see a stronger confidence coming out too in her as well. Tsk, tsk Edward with that whispering in her ear....she almost caaught on. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am already reading Counselor and yes it's fabulous so I hope your rec gives her other readers. I thought it neat with the hummingbird cloud and it reminded me of Carano's story Grand where Edward calls Bella his hummingbird in that story. ;o)  Of course I love their banter with the pillow. Banter is always so neat as well as foreplay like, lol. I do wonder about Phil, he seems almost a bit controlling maybe or some underlying anger if doesn't get what he wants. hmmm. Now as for Victoria, wth? How did he become engaged to her when he had just told Bella he only loved one woman before and we all know that was Aria???? This ought to be interesting and yes, with V. involved it can never be good. Bella better hold her own but with Phil coming into the picture soon, well as I stated on FB, a bit of competition maybe just what is needed. Edward doesn't want another woman he loves to get by, right? laters babe, ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh ho, did I love what was going on with Victoria....brillant. And their 'first' time, yowser. You built that up really good. I'm still flying. ;o)  Love the naked pic of him standing by the bed......waiting & watching. yeah!! Breathless!! Have fun!! ;o)



Author's Response:

Oh, goodie, I'm so glad you liked it dowlingnana!!!! I like this next chapter as well. Lemony. xoxox

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I absolutely loved the portrait that was portrayed that Bella had painted. Now, since I always review on ffn too let me get right to my point? I did not, I repeat, did not like how Aria just flew into Edward's arms boo hooing. IDC if it was about her husband & son, it just wasn't right and esp. in front of Bella. And, yeah, she can call him Eddie?  I'm disgusted is what I am. And, when Bella wants a word he has to go and reassure Aria that he would be right back????wth??? He owes her nothing and I'm so glad that Bella reinforced what he felt when he had seen Phil kissing her. Then, to top that, Edward blushes but then smirks.....smirks??? Please!! It won't happen again but, theres that but, she needs help. What did Aria expect that Edward could do for her anyway, huh? He's not some FBI or cop, he's just a photographer. IMO he's always been lucky that Bella is like she is and comes up with that business card. hmmph!! See ffn for my other opinion.  ;o) ty, you really brought out some emotions in me this time, besides with those naughty pictures.  wink, wink 

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh man, so she found out in a whole different way than I'd expected. Of all times, of all places. I'm sure he never, ever expected this. See ya' on ffn.  



Author's Response:

Thanks, dowlingnana! There were so many suggestions on how she was going to find out but I always had this way in my mind. The look on his face when he sees her in the elevator was always in my mind. Thanks for reading and reviewing on all the sites, sweets. xox

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Before I once again review on ffn I'm going to say that i think Rose & Jasper got just a tad bit lucky here after knowing what happened between B&E. But, I still don't like that they showed his pictures w/o his knowledge, esp. Jasper. Edward is the one that owns those pics and Jasper being his, isn't he like his boss or agent? Anyway, being that, he went way over in his own ethics of going against a client's wishes; even if they think Edward needs to show them. Didn't matter!!  thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I so agree with you on Seth. I hope Bella finds out and does fire his ass. That is so unprofessional it's not even funny. *I am reading Girl Code too and so in love with it as well as Counsel. Those two fics have me owned. Cya on ff. thanx 

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

OMG did I love the pictures. wow! Esp. the one that's suppose to be Bella looking out over the land, but the other one of her was beautiful too. Once again yes Seth needs to be fired but so glad that Edward called him out on it right to his face. And oh yeah, give it right back to Phil Edward, lol, good job. Cya' on the flip side. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OH no you didn't..............cya on the flip side. ha ha ha

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 479009
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Poor Bella. But I do agree on liking this James and I'm so glad. I chuckled out loud at his wink and then shaking all over the floor. That is too funny. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Whoa, another surprise?? Dang and I agree with Stark, Edward, they'll find Charlie. No problems. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Aw man, yeah, it surprised me but sure makes sense now for Bella being Dora. It threw me with the saying of an older man with gray hair, lol. I do have to admit I get thoroughly confused with all these nicknames. I still like the story I just can't keep track of them all except a few. There were a few surprises here, that's for sure. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Wow, you guys really wrote a very surprising different story here. I've been intrigued since the beginning. What a twist. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

IDK for sure and I'm tired of speculating cause I'm always wrong, lol, so I'm onto the next chapter. My only guess would have been to find out who Stark really is. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Is Bella going to be taking over Mrs. Cope's job, hmm? thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loving it and I hope Edward doesn't give Bella too much of a hard time. She was only trying to help and a good thing she was there to begin with. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Sounds to me like her dad was in trouble with the mafia somehow, or involved or both. I figured that was Stark. Edward needs to calm down a bit. He didn't really take the time to even understand what had really happened with Bella and his kids. Will this get him to fire Jessica now? I hope so. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yeah I love Betty coz' I love Betty Boop as well as you being right about Alice's normal nicknames. Well, considering the cross look on Edward's face he's probably thinking........and my kids look up to her? lol  thanx

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ha ha ha, the references to Leslie Gore's song, whom I got to see in person singing that song as well as the Beauty Shop reference, one of my favorite all time movies is priceless. I love how you incorporte them into your story. Edward does have a lot of nerve saying she can't work there, wth? Can I be included in on the bet too, lol. I think it's hilarious the kids want rid of Jessica. Edward was too kind in her 'losing' his kids that day. She should have been around somewhere. And excuse me.......he did fire Bella from his club, whatever. I don't blame her for the statement: you break it, you buy it. Loved that. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh these two. I hope Edward gets that age difference out of his head too. If he's interested in her, then go for it. Bella is a hoot and so good for all of them. Just gotta figure out what's with her pained looks, hmmm? thanx

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Geesh, what is Jacob really wanting? To join Star Wars? lol  I also can't believe that Edward didn't tell the old bat Ursula off as well. Edward should have, not only before this, but for sure immediately hired Bella for those kids. He knows deep down the kids want Jessica gone so why delay the inevitable. yeah!

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

These nicknames are something else. I still haven't quite figured out Bella yet. She wants to tell him but then she's afraid. Of what? I'm not sure yet. I find it interesting that Bella thinks the same as Edward, that something's just not right with Jessica. hmm, and what then was it with Jessica (Donkey) trying to seduce Edward for?  thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So exciting. Jessica is foolish to think Edward would ever take her side. I do believe she will be fired real soon, like maybe next chapter. I'm not sure it's the last we'll see of her though. She was in Edward's office for some reason that's for sure. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ding dong the witch is 'dead'........at least for now. I do have a feeling that 'donkey' is going to be found wanting and then she'll be dealt with....severely. ha She sure was/is stupid. She never ever did lie well at all. I love how Bella torments Edward, chuckling. yhanx

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm starting to think Bella was involved with another mob family that possibly killed her family and is why she got shot. Coming to Edward for possible safety but with his children would he want that kind of danger around his kids. This maybe the reason she'll think he could be angry???  Bella is obviously afraid someone is after her, thence the reason for her disguise. She is opening up a tad to him, like about her eye color so she's defenitely not really afraid of him. hmm. Can't wait for this info to come out. As for Newton, well, he could be just an obnoxious cop or paid off by someone. You never know when it comes to those kind of things. The UST in this is driving me crazy....forget what it's doing to B&E, lol. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm adding that I think Bella may have or does belong to a mob family herself. And maybe, just maybe with "Ursula" being attacked it was a retaliation for how she was towards Bella. Or, someone wanted info from "Usula" and tried to beat it out of her???? maybe??? Theories, yeah!! I love their banter too.thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I've been meaning to say or guess I should say instead that I'm thinking Miss Honey might be Sue?  As in Sue Bee Honey??? Just guessing is all and would that make was it Guido(??) Harry then or Billy, maybe? I admit I'm a bit confused with all the name changes but was it really Mike that sent the flowers?? I wonder if it was Jacob that sent them. He always was possesive of Bella and always wanted her. This is awesome, squeal, and I can't wait for more. thanx ;o) 

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yes, there was a lot of info in this chapter. First, for Edward being the boss I don't like the way Jasper seems to be dismissive of that fact. Yeah, he's suppose to protect Edward but stopping him and slamming the door, uh, NO. I'm glad that Bella is revealing more to Edward too. It will help him trust her more for sure. Because he's sure getting closer to her. I figured Mike worked for the mob and now it explains how he quoted what he told Edward about Bella supposedly having a boyfriend. Jacob was told that by Bella so how could Mike have known........yeah. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Liked all the new info into understanding Bella a bit more. I should probably be able to guess what IM is but I can't think right now. I always use BOB, battery operated boyfriend, lol. Now I wonder about Cher and if that was Sue because of her long, straight dk. brown hair.  I adore all the time they're all gettting together. Edward is really, really smitten. wow. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Go Bella, go Bella, go, go, go Bella. That white haired guy sounds like the one described as Dora, hmm?  Well I should hope Edward doesn't doubt Bell'a abilities anymore, lol. Too bad, but Mike and Jane kind of got what they deserved. Sigh* Can't wait for the next chapter. yeah. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, so they know/knew each other. Interesting. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Jacob really thinks he's all that doesn't he? Snort! He needs a lot more than what Edward did to him. Sounds like he got away with too much growing up. So, Edward believes he's falling in love, hmm, I have to agree. As for Sasha, I think she'd better watch herself around Bella. I'm thinking Bella knows exactly how to do some bodily harm already. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I guess I didn't think too much about his 'accident' cause he was already aroused by Bella. We know how guys can be and he did say it had been four years. yeah! Unfortunately he was taken back so quickly by that Sasha that he really couldn't even think straight. Because I am pretty sure if he had had time to think, it would'nt have happened. If I thought anything else then I would have been pissed too. I do have to say I would've left too, just as Bella did. That was just a bit too much to take and probably not knowing what exactly had transpired between Edward & Sasha would have been reason enough. So, we know now how it was that she saw Charlie being killed. Was she adopted? it almost sounds like it from her comment: "Daddy", I say worried I'll never see my second family again.  And who the heck grabbed her when she left and rounded that corner? So glad that even in her anger Edward stayed with her and was there after her nightmare. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

At first I thought Sasha may have drugged him since she had fixed him coffee when they had talked, but now we know. She really did try and molest him. The she-witch. Wow, Bella is really, really smart. Is this why someone wants her? thanx for the bonus update today. I so love this story. ;o) And I'm glad that Edward didn't give up on her. 

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hmmm, does Anna know who Bella is just like Esme did? Ha, I'm sure Edward is catching on more & more that there's more to Bella than he knows. He has already thought that. go Bella. If she can handle Emmett then she sure could handle Sasha. I can't beleive that Sasha even started again after he'd once again threw her out of his home. whatever!!!

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Loved his proposal to her, how precious was that. She is certainly one smart cookie and not just for accepting Edward, lol. Hawk surely has taken over Charlie's duties hasn't he? chuckling  ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Charlie always likes to 'jump the gun' when it comes to Bella, lol. I love how they entered the Volturi and just simply took over. Awesome!  Glad code one is over too so they can get rid of Sasha. yeah. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Sweet chapter. Sweet father/daughter reunion. Sweet wearing 'mom's' dress. Sweet all the way around. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Someone needs to shoot that Sasha, for crying out loud. Anyhoo, I have a feeing our Bella is pregnant.......maybe? tee hee

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Awww........twins again. Makes sense to me. And as for Tanya, yeah, it was very good to see her so good natured compared to other stories. I liked that. As for skanky Sasha though..............ugh! Can't wait to see what ten years brings. ;o)

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

*Sigh* as always when a fun, good fic ends. I can't believe Tanya is with Charlie now, but awesome and that they all get along. I absolutely adore how Tanya & Bella get Sasha going, lol, that is so freakin' good. Ha, seven and now eight kids, wow, they've been busy............for sure. When they got back from their vaca and she was stating how tired she was I wondered and sure enough, ha ha ha. thanx so much. ;o)

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Nikky and I wrote a oneshot for this Awesome banner that was made
by, Caitlin Beresford in a contest, where it was awarded 3rd place.
Here is the contest info: http://battleofthebannerartist.blogspot.com/

 

 

Bella learns after her mother's death that she is not a legal citizen.  Needing to find a way to stay in the USA, she asks her childhood, best friend's, brother, to be her husband.  What starts as a proposal of need, quickly changes. What happens when those changes cause ripples in the lives of Bella and Edward?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18021 Read Count: 9511
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2014 Updated: 05 Apr 2014
Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic story. Loved every bit of it. Too bad Alice was such a jerk though. She was the one truly missing out on things. Loved the banner too. thanx for EPOV too. I swear I'll read anything with that. ;o)

Summary:

Edgar the bullfighter needs to cowboy up and admit to his buttercup just how deep his love and affection for her goes. Before he gets the chance, danger strikes. It will be up to him to save the day and the woman he’s in love with.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10036 Read Count: 289
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2016 Updated: 05 Mar 2016
Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely loved this.........will it expand or is this it? Good luck and ty for this awesome western theme. One of my faorites. ;o)

Summary:

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

 

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

 

 

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9982 Read Count: 1018
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2016 Updated: 12 Mar 2016
Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wish it was a bit more southern but the reality of this paticular fic is how high school can truly be, sigh. I'm not sure I would have bought his excuses but it is what it is. In the end I'm glad the two of them finally got together, just too bad there was too much wasted time; even if this was the right time now. Good luck in the contest.