Penname: swervin35 [Real name: NMJ
Member Since: 03 Jun 2012
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Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661146
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 43: Bella

Swoony is right, but it said some much.  I got chills twice, once at work and and then we I reread this chapter again at home.  Got chapter.

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

Wow!  I hooked.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

This is getting better the more I read.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

Sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank!

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

Loving this.



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 8: Edward

I can't wait for the next chapter and reading Bella's reaction to the picture Edward attached.  This is really well written.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 10: Edward

Wow! What great chapters. 



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 15: Bella

I got chills reading this chapter.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! :)

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 16: Edward

So sad.  I don't think Bella wants an out.



Author's Response:

No, of course she doesn't! :) Thank you!

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 23: Bella

Wow! I can't wait to readt the next chapter.  This was amazing.

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 24: Edward

Can I just say that out of all the stories I've read where Edward or Bella is in the military, this is one of the best.  Great job.

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 25: Bella

Love this chapter and if they were interrupted.

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 26: Edward

Wow! Not more I can say but WOW.

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 27: Bella

Whew is right.  Whatever Edward's reaction it is bound to be good.

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 28: Edward

Can't wait to see what Edward sends her back.

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 31: Bella

'Thank you' was not what I was expecting at the end.  I was hoping she would say those three little words, but it was still a nice way to end the conversation.  Those three little words, would be better face to faca, anyway.

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 32: Edward

Great chapter.  It is wonderful that both Bella and Edward can talk/email, whatever, about their worries, fears, the little things.  I wish some of my past relationships were like that, instead it was like pulling teeth to get them to talk to me.  Now, I have a wonderful guy in my life who is a bit like the Edward in your story.  He overly worries, but he's there for me -- through it all.

As for your end notes, of course I am bracing myself for something, but I am enjoying the ride.  I can't wait for them to physically meet.  I'm wondering what will happen.  I like the pace of the story.  It's not rushed, it's perfect.

Now for what I think Edward's sending Bella.  First, I would hope he would be sending her a t-shirt, one that he recently wore, but not all stinky, more on the fresh side.  I don't think he would be one to send a shirt like that.  Bella did send him sheet music, so I wouldn't be surprised if he composed a song for her (he did say he could compose without a piano, right? I can't remember! LOL!)

Can't wait for the next chapters tomorrow.

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33: Bella

This was a really sweet chapter.

I am going to have to check out the FB page.

Reviewer: swervin35 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 42: Edward

Loved Edward's reaction to what Bella told him about Mike.  Was surprised by Emmett's suggestion and by him calling Mike.  I wonder what Mike said.  Hopefully the flowers Edward sent will give Mike the rest of the message, Bella is taken.  I'm also glad Edward didn't mention sending her anything in his reply.

 

Great chapter.  Can't wait to see how Bella reacts to the flowers Edward sent and to see what he had print on the card.