Reviews by beezy0563
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward was 19.  Bella was 13.  They were next door neighbors.  Charlie was the chief of police.  Carlisle was a doctor at the local hospital. 

Edward’s little sister Alice was also 13 and Bella’s best friend. 

While home from college for the summer, Edward spent time with his little sister and her best friend so their parents could all go out for dinner.

Over the next several years, Edward and Bella became good friends, until the summer she turned 16 when she transformed before his eyes.

 

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AH, ExB, Mostly EPOV, sort of coming-of-age, hopefully a little poignant, with a splash of angst until Bella's at least seventeen.  Mature for language, eventual lemons and a very spunky Bella.

 

Banner made by yours truly!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77808 Read Count: 67190
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: beezy0563 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Race

I want more! 

Please!

Reviewer: beezy0563 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: The Airport

I still haven't figured out what the heck Edward did that was so bad for Carlisle and Charlie to be so angry with him and to not trust him with Bella. Did I miss that some where or has it yet to be revealed.

~Beezy



Author's Response:

There have been hints along the way, though not very subtle I suppose.  There will be a few more before the event is revealed, but by then, most of you will have figured it out.

Thanks for reading!

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87332
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: beezy0563 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh snap! Go Bella!!!!



Author's Response:

Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums.  Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt.  Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time.  As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction.  Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense.  Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them.  I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight.  I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that.  I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!”  LOVE IT—just sayin’.  As promised we would share our favorite line with you...  Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle.  Mine is:  “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.”  We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love.  Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”

“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”

“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.

“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”

“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.

“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.

“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.

“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.

“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.

“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.

“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.

“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.

“Why?”

“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.

 

Summary:

After a drunken night, Isabella fell pregnant by an unknown man. With her brother's help, she raises her child, but what happen when two little boys with green-eyes show up at her day-care? Will all her questions finally be answered? All-human


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85507 Read Count: 27009
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2012 Updated: 18 Dec 2015
Reviewer: beezy0563 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

So he knew about her being pregnant the whole time??? What the hell!!!!



Author's Response:

He just put the pieces together! He's a smart man :P

Reviewer: beezy0563 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

ok so should we be concerned of someone taking Bella or is is Edward that grabbed her???? 

Reviewer: beezy0563 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

What the heck did he lie about?

Reviewer: beezy0563 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

holy crap!

Serenity's Prayer by ladylibre Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

SP

 

When Edward takes Bella into the forest to dump her, her reaction completely surprises him. Will this be the end of B&E or will they find a new path to forever? A canon-based yet very different AU approach to New Moon. Some OOC and OC.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242771 Read Count: 26820
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Mar 2014
Reviewer: beezy0563 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Not Today and Never Again

Those three songs are AMAZING!!!!

 



Author's Response:

AREN'T THEY?!? Those songs rock my world every time I hear them.

Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

thanks to christagbanners for the banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95391
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: beezy0563 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

yes yes yes