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An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Twipotterlover2244 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter. Update soon



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Edward's next chapter, which will be up later today:

"Maggie?" Bella's quiet voice startled me.

"Mrs. Jones," I answered her. She lifted her confused eyes to meet mine. "You and I spent our entire childhood with that woman and had no idea she and your father were best friends."

I smiled when Bella's brow creased.

"How do you know this?"

My smile faded, knowing this would be where it started. I had promised her the absolute truth and that was what I would give her. It wasn't a difficult question but I knew my Bella would be upset by my answer. And I'd learned enough about the girl in my arms now to know that she wouldn't take the news lightly and I braced myself for a fight.

Hoping to keep her violent side at bay, I spoke in the calmest voice possible. "The first year I came home, I overheard a horrible argument between the three of them. Your father was so angry, more so than I'd ever heard in my life. He was yelling at your mother and when Mrs. Jones stepped in to defend her, he turned his anger on her."

"You're lying!" Her fist hit me hard and in a flash, she was across the room. "My father has never yelled at my mother and neither of my parents have ever said a cross word to Mrs. Jones. What could possibly cause them to argue?"

I didn't want to say it. I didn't want to hurt her again and it was inevitable that my words would do just that. I steeled myself for her wrath.

"They were arguing about you."

Reviewer: Twipotterlover2244 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Good chapter. Update soon



Author's Response:

 

I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Bella's next chapter, which will be up later today:

"I could have done it, Angel, but I was afraid of what would happen when you began aging and I didn't. There was no way to explain it to you without telling you the truth and doing so would have ensured your death." A horrified expression crept across his face. "You mocked me before but I was afraid of the Italians, Bella. They're vicious men and I was terrified of what they would do to you if they found out you knew our secret."

"But you could have changed me, Edward. We would have been safe."

"I couldn't ask you to give up..."

I was in front of him in a flash with a hand covering his mouth. Our eyes locked and his face blurred as the venom filled my eyes.

With more emotion than I thought myself capable of, I whispered, "I gave my life to you when you were alive." My hand slid to his cheek. "What made you think I wouldn't have given you forever if you asked for it?"

Slowly, his hand covered mine.

"I wanted that," he whispered back. "I wanted you...so much that I couldn't stay away any longer. But when I came back you were gone."    

 

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A cocky QB runs into a snarky band geek. What happens when they collide on and off the field?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 182382 Read Count: 106387
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Good chapter. Update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Will update as soon as I can.

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter please udpate soon



Author's Response:

Thanks, will do.

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter. Update  soon



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Will do!

Summary:

Follow along as Sexy Geek Boy and Nerdella continue to grow as lovers and parents. Be aware, there is danger around the corner. What, you ask? Read and find out! ExB, AU/AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161783 Read Count: 114441
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Aug 2012
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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

Great story. I am going to miss it.

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

 Banner by Amandac3 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
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Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks Twipooterlover. Glad you like it.

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Great chapter. Glad I could see it from Bella's point of view. I still think she is being stupid. Update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Twipotterlover. I love the next two chapters...especially next Sunday's.  I post on Thursday and Sunday...religiously.

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Love the chapter hate the cliffie. They better get back together next chapter



Author's Response:

I hate cliffie's too. But it was a good spot to end it there.

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

did it to us again!



Author's Response:

What????  A cliffie?  

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Great chapter. Thanks for not letting their separation last to long

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Great chapter. Glad you are not doing anymore explanations.

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Great chapter. What do you have planned next?

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Great chapter. When are Bella and Edward going to get married



Author's Response:

Hmmmm *strums chin*.   I wonder?  :)

Summary:

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Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730

Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119928
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Trial and Error

Great chapter. Update soon!

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Breaking the News

Great chapter. Update soon

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Where there is love

Great story. Sad to see it end

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104501
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
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Date: 13 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22- Terrified

great chpater! Update soon

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Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26- Making plans

great chapter! update soon!

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27- Change of plans

Great chapter! They are sooooo cute! Update soon

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Moving On

Great chatper. When are they going to start realizing they like each other again? Update soon

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

Great chapter. When are they going to get back together?

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband

Great chapter. I hope they will get together soon

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14- Part of his world

Great chapter. I can't wait dfor then to realize that they have feelings for each other. Maybe James being with her will speed I along

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16- Confused

Great chapter. Still cant wait for them to get together. Update sooner

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17- Confrontation

FINALLY!!! We are getting somewhere! I can't wait for them to get back together. Next chapter u should have Tanya and Edward break up! Update soon!

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I better be coming soon lol! Great chapter. Update soon

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Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20- Hide and seek

Great chapter! I hope they are breaking up next chapter. Updated soon

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Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy

Great chapter! udpate soon

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Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29- Going home

Great Chapters!! Update soon!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419156
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter. Update soon

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter. What is wrong with jasper! Update soon!

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Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Great chapter. Glad to see Royce finaly behind bars. Update soon

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Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter. Update soon.

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter. Please udpate soon.

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Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter. is Bella going to meet rose next chapter? Please udpate soon.

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Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Great chapter! So glad bella is ok!

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter. Maybe this will be Charlie wake up call. Maybe u should have Charlie go to jail for a bit bad when when he comes out Ihe will be nicer. 

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Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Maybe Jacob did or jasper but that is unlikely. I hope that jasper comes around.please update soon

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Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter. Update soon.

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Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great Chapter update soon. 

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter. Please update soon

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter. Update soon

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Good chapter update soon!

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter. Update soon

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Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I think the person is charlie or either Jacob but those are obvious answers. Update soon!

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Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

great  chapter. are you going to do a sequel?

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They survived falling in love and having four children. Now, Geekward and Nerdella are parents of teenagers. Say a prayer for them for they are in for a bumpy ride. But, a ghost from the past is rearing his ugly head. Follow along as Geekward and Nerdella deal with having teens, battle with the blast from the past and why is Demetri hugging a cow? ANSOL/TGGTP Sequel. ExB AH/AU

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269577 Read Count: 89457
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2012 Updated: 26 Jul 2015
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Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Job Hunts, Mongoloids, and Volleyball

great chpater. update soon!

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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Parties and Working Stiffs

What the heck is her problem! Great chapter! Update soon

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Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Firsts

Good chapter. Update soon

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Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Mortal Coil

Great Chapter! Update soon!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101885
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
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Date: 13 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Great chapter! Bella really needed some time to talk to someone. Update soon!

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Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Great chapter! Udpate soon

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Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great new story! Update soon!

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Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

great chapter! Update soon!

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Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Great chapter! Update soon

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Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

This was an amazing chapter! Update soon

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Great chapter! Glad Bella is finally ready to take that next step. Update soon!

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Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

great chapter! Update soon!

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Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Great chapter! Update soon!

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Date: 25 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Great chapter! Update soon!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

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Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082126
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
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Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

great chapter!

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Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This is a great story so far! Cant wait to read more. Update soon

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Great chapter! cant wait to see what is next!

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Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Great chapter!!