Reviews by MrzJasperHale4ever
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There has been a murder at the Cullen Manor. Can you help discover and uncover who the murderer is?  A collaboration from The Writer's Coffee Shop written for OhThoseCullenBoys for winning us in the FGB Auction.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15452 Read Count: 5695
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Mar 2010
Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

is it edward i've always dreamed of edward killin tanya that would be awsome  but if i had to be for real my moneys on carlise

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

so i elminate bella and emmett every1 1 else is fair game

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625413
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

so i don't have to lite you on fire now *puts down blow torce*  good because if he had really hurt her i would have been pissed

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 61009
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion

thought she said she doesn't faint



Author's Response:

Well, not usually, but these are unusual circumstances! LoL! Thanks for reading and reviewing...

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan

lmao this chapter was funny and fun and just amazing i loved bella trying to explain to carlisle why she couldn't tell him everything she knew itz was too adorable i can't wait to see how this story goes so far i'm loving it



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it - thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down

so i wondering if all this is real or is she in the hospital somewhere unconscious and thinking this is all real is that why she hears alice talking in here ear you can tell me you know it would be r little secert :)



Author's Response:

That appears to be an ongoing debate among the readers... and Bella's not a hundred percent sure herself, at the moment. Guess we'll have to just wait and see... :-)

 

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations

Lmao i wish she would have slapped him that would have been nice



Author's Response:

Hmmm... she probably thought about it, but in general Bella's not really violent! :-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch

so you still want tell me if bella bat shit crazy and dreaming this all up n/m don't tell me i gonna believe thats what going on in my head any way so why does she only hear alice voice does edward not know yet is she trying to get her back before edward finds out plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tell me i beg i will i will



Author's Response:

Don't beg! :-) There is a reason she's hearing Alice's voice... and all will be explained, but not for a little while yet. Sorry! :-)

 

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties

LMFAO she always does what she says she wont first she wasn't gonna faint and she did and then she wasn't gonna go down and well she did



Author's Response:

Lol! You're right! Poor Bella... :-)

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends

That bitch is crazy is what she is she's going to mess around an erase Edward and the future even if she stays in the past with him what will she do if he dies another why and carlisie doesn't save him then what smarty hell both her and edward are nuts she might just off her self if that happens



Author's Response:

Well she could very well mess things up... but she has her reasons for trying. She'll be trying to explain herself in the next few chapters.

Thanks for R&R! :-)

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry

you're gonna make me go nuts so she has to chose between staying in the past with that edward and being with future edward because i still think the crazy bitch is in the hospital on drugs but if this real why can't she choose past edward be happy and human together blahhhhh i'm nuts don't listen to me this is what u do to me its all your fault so ha u have to deal with it give me somethng a tiny clue so  can maintane some shread of dignity and not go nuts over this like how nuts bella is and just help me understand 



Author's Response:

Okay, a tiny clue? Hmmmm.... Bella is NOT crazy. Does that help? LoL! She'll talk about what she thinks about that dream in the next chapter... it did freak her out a bit...

Oh, and at this point she IS choosing the Edward from the past and plans to try and be happy and human together with him... how she accomplishes that will be the trick...

Thanks for reading! :-)

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents

Love it i'm so confused about what i want for her i not sure anymore can she just keep human edward and be happy **cries** and tell DR. C to back off edwards woman i mean ewwww man what is he thinking lol update soon



Author's Response:

Don't cry bb! :-) It'll be okay! As for Dr. C... he is a gentleman and won't push where he's not wanted... as for what he's thinking... *shrugs* We'll just have to wait and see!

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Of Squealing Fangirls and Surprise Visitors

OMG.....Alice is gonna be so pissed did bella somehow pull her into the past because if she left jasper there i bet she want like that i'm following you on twitter now did u know that :) can't wait for the next update will u post a teaser monday on ADF too i hope so



Author's Response:

Hmmm... you think she'll be pissed? Well, we'll have to wait and see! ;-)

Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Of Big Bows and Birthing Babies

so i was wrong alice is not mad.. i glad she's trying to help bella she really is a god bff.. alice reacting to past edward was priceless i just wanna read it over and ovr and imagin it in my head.. i can't help but wonder wht wil hppen when future edward finds out about what's going on.. wll he find out. can you tell me that plzzz :) and what does alice have planned for friday dinner sneaky little one sge is



Author's Response:

Nope, Alice isn't mad.. she just wants to help.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter - and no, I can't tell you what's going on in the future. Well, actually I could, but I won't! LoL!

Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls

Okay excuse me for a moment this is gonna be so unlady like.. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Why is he there OMG and he's human this is just WOW i did not see that coming. not even a little bit but since Alice was alive around then i guess it make since for james to be alive too but that is freaking crazy that he's there in chicago. Alice is not gonna like this. is that who's in the alley come on Tami you an tell me or maybe not i can wait. i think i can wait **thinks about it** No i can't OMG i am going to be awake all night thinking about this. Well okay not all night because i have Remember me watching to do tonight and hearing Rob pant during that sex scene will turn my brain to mush so any ways. OMG james i didn't see that coming i Love that no matter how right i think i am or how much i try to guess you throw me for a loop i'm always 100 steps behide this story and i'm not going to catch up every thing will be a suprise for me that what makes this story so unique and beatuiful and seriously cnt i have a clue and i still want to know what's going on back in the future does Vamp Edward still not know? is he running around clueless? are you going to do a future chapter soon or make us wait or not at all? because really i have witing issues it makes me insane lol i going to be  mess trying to figure out this story but. any who, cnt wait for the next update but until then **Bounces** Mwah



Author's Response:

LMAO!!! Oh girl, you crack me up! :-)

Can't tell you - don't think about it - just enjoy Remember Me and the loveliness of Rob! :-) Answers will be coming soon... but no, there won't be a future chapter... we won't know what's happening there until the end of the story.

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

Gawd i love them more here then i did in the books this is how twilight should have been THIS edward is the bomb and then some and this bella is just amazing okay so on til the next chapter since i have to catch up stupid FFn

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

she better have caved i would have said yes the first time i mean hell its edward masen with his green eyes and the sext smirk gawd **drools**

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Of Rings and Revelations

He's not going to like have sex with her, and then wait until she goes to sleep to call the people with the white jackets to come get her crazy ass is he. because that would just be rude as all hell, and mean, and w/e okay the sex part will be HOTT but damn i don't know what to say ummm WoW!!!! can't wait until the next update!!!

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Of Wishes and Watches

OK HOLY SHIT!!!!!! that was fucking intease as hell i think i'm shaking WOW!!! what a dream

so okay i going to try to get all these things out of my head i can start from the begining now so

First off you're a tease tami i swear u are even tho deep down i kinda figure they wouldn't have had sex i was hoping they did well okay the fanfic Hoor in me was hoping the more relistic side of me is glad

Ha bella made a age old mistake mis buttoning good ppl get caught like that all the time i should know lol

So bella has turned are poor dear sweet loving carlisle into a ninja stalker i swear i hope he doesn't mess this up he cnt he just cnt do that

The poem is beautiful i loved that part

So maybe bella has found away to make edward believe that was smart of her to remember sonething she could tell him to prove sh'e not crazy ((altho i still think she is))

But back to that dream that was just creppy and sad and i think i'm going to go cry now because you put thoughts of edward dieing in my head

So update soon and stop the crying want you? Love you tami great chapter



Author's Response:

Lol! Your review cracked me up. Sorry about the teasing, but it was kind of true to character, I think. :-) Don't worry, they only have a few weeks until the wedding night.

Carlisle as a ninja stalker? LMAO!!

Don't cry! I think the next chapter is tear free, if I remember correctly!

Thanks for R&R bb!

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Of Announcements and Assumptions

Tamiiiiiiii.... OMG!!!! they think's she's with child how funny **sighs** she is so going to fuck up the future isn't she i have no faith at all in bella is she accident kills my chances at seeing golden eye sprakle peen edward i will hurt her and it want be pretty lol at the moment i am stuck on the belief that no matter what Edward want live human or otherwise



Author's Response:

OMG you're cracking me up... Poor Bella better hide! Lol!

Thanks for the review bb! :-)

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Of Tombs and Tea Parties

Hiya babes i actually knew about the tomb thingy lmao i love reading this story when it set in chicago there so much history in here its wonderful.. love this chapter update soon chat with ya tonught for the read along

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

**huffs** i have no idea what to say to you right now of course you would end it there *8stomps foot** so not fair

S okay i love the little cute banter in the begining about the vows and the ring

Edward is so funny with his parents and bella "I often fear for my life"

The wedding was perfect and the wedding night was all i excepted and then u cut me of so not nice but i still love and UPDATE SOON!!!

Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

So you're no longer a cockblocker wow they really know how to get it on **wiggles eyebrows** this was a pretty perfect chapt i cnt wait for more update soon oh btw tell Dr. Daddy i'm so serious about the stalking he's sexy and all but that shit just an'it cool



Author's Response:

Nope, my cockblocking days are over! LoL! So glad you liked the chapter - thanks for R&R bb! :-)

Summary:

This is just a little O/S with a difference.

Edward is a greaser in the 50's and Bella is a British transfer student.

Will the rebel fall for the square?

Just a bit of fun!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3629 Read Count: 288
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 28 Apr 2010
Reviewer: MrzJasperHale4ever Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awwwwwwwwz **tears** so adorable