Reviews by littlelostbunny
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263191
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: littlelostbunny Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: First Times

I actually stumbled upon this story by accident, I clicked the wrong story link.  Best mistake I've made in a long time.  I absolutely loved this story and found it hard to stop reading, even when everything started to get blurry from tired eye.  The way you guys have portrayed the characters is fantastic.  I can't wait for more updates I really am addicted to this story.



Author's Response:

Well after this chapter how will we ever get better?  I hope that you trust me when I say, it will!  Many of you want Aro to get his hands on Uncle Harry before the police do.  I will not say who gets to Uncle Harry first; because well that would just ruin the surprise, but I will say this... his capture is already written, so feel free to speculate.  There are some seriously some great chapters coming up, but Nikky says I need to warn you all that some of them are rather drama and angst filled.  There also may or may not be a few cliffhangers in the near future, oh heck who am I kidding the next two chapters are rather cliffy in nature.  The next chapter has a big surprise within and MOST of you may be very shocked.  Nikky, Jess, and a few others who have already read the chapter during BETA processing seem to think that the next chapter may generate a lot more reviews.  We may even get some from people who have not reviewed before now, because it is quite a twist.   There is your warning.  Nikky and I have been called diabolical for the plot twist that is coming, so we sure hope you all like it.  I will say this out of all the readers and reviewers we have, only one time has someone guessed a good portion of the plot and got it right.  We of course didn’t tell them, because well then they would know it would ruin the story telling process.   We had a few question about Sienna’s ability to place a phone call since she is deaf.  Deaf people can make phone calls using a Telecommunication Device for the Deaf (TDD).  Special telephone services have been developed to carry the TDD functionality even further. In certain countries there are systems in place so that a deaf person can communicate with a hearing person on an ordinary voice phone using a human relay operator. There are also "carry-over" services, enabling people who can hear but cannot speak ("hearing carry-over," a.k.a. "HCO"), or people who cannot hear but are able to speak ("voice carry-over," a.k.a. "VCO") to use the telephone.  Couple of questions came about Charlotte’s nick-name of Chas, in our story Charlotte was the youngest raised by her father among her several brothers and she was quite the tomboy growing up.  Char is a girlie name and therefore her brothers tagged her with Chas, because it is manlier.  Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we are proud of it, and are grateful to our loyal readers.  If you have more questions or want to discuss some of the story line, feel free to join the group on Facebook you can find us by searching for: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT FanFiction.  Kasi (&Nikky)

PS….Enduring His Cimmerian View is now POSTED... Please go read and review.

Chapter 25 Teaser:
“Pajama day is when you stay in your pajamas all day and eat lots of bad stuff, watch movies, and play games all day long.”  Seth and Leah nod their heads at me and Bella gives me a small half nod with her smile.  “Okay then, pajama day it is in our house.  I just need to make a few phone calls. Why don’t you all get your robes and slippers on, and I’ll meet you for breakfast as soon as I am done.”  Seth and Leah hug me before walking out of the bathroom to get their slippers and robes.

After they leave the room, I look to see Bella biting her lip, and I know she’s worrying about something.  “I’m sorry that she wet the bed. She’s never done that before.”

I walk to Bella, wrapping my arms around her. “Baby, its okay. She’s upset, and her body is reacting to that, so don’t worry about it.” I kiss her head and push her hair out of her face.  I hiss as I see the large bruises that go all the way up one side of her face.  “Baby, how are you feeling? Are you in pain?”

She shrugs her shoulders and tries to give me a smile.  “I’m not sure. I...”  She stops and rubs her head.  “I feel like I failed them.  He hurt Seth, and I should’ve been able to protect him better.  I’m upset that it was Uncle Harry that broke into our apartment the other time.  I don’t understand why he did that, or what he was looking for.  How could he do that to Seth and Leah?  I mean, I know that he doesn’t really like me much, but they’re his sister’s children.  I thought he would love them.” 

Summary: Past Featured Story

After a shocking discovery, Bella is forced out of her rainy, northwestern home and takes up residence in sunny, Jacksonville, Florida. While she suspects her life with vampires is over, she is unknowingly moving deeper into supernatural waters. After all, there's always a bigger fish. AU-New Moon


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202340 Read Count: 8581
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Aug 2013
Reviewer: littlelostbunny Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I absolutely am captivated by this story.  I have to admit I was extremely annoyed when it ended on a cliffy I was getting into the chapter and then it ended on me lol.  I will be tuning in to find out what happens next that's for sure.  It's a great story, beautifully written and with strong loveable characters.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Sorry about the cliffie :( I had to end it there. The next chapter is probably going to be written in the 3rd person perspective, so I had to cut off Bella's POV with a cliffie. I'm working hard on it, but it's proving a bit difficult. I try to get it out just as quickly as I can! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/113273/images/Grace Trilogy(1).jpgFollowing her divorce from her abusive ex-husband, Olivia Grace is building a new life for herself in her beloved Seattle.  Broken and wary, she longs for a relationship with a man who will love and cherish her the way she deserves to be, but will she be able to overcome her fears of abuse and let someone in?

Xander Wade is a young, powerful, self made man who uses women only for his pleasure.  A shattered past relationship has left him unwilling and unable to trust any woman enough to let her close to his heart.  His brief, dominating dalliances with countless women have left him jaded and cynical.  Will he let down his guard and open his heart to the lovely Olivia?

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Categories: Original Fiction, Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204303 Read Count: 20313
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2015 Updated: 13 Jan 2015
Reviewer: littlelostbunny Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Just wanted to say that I am enjoying your story, it's well written and a great read. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

So glad to hear you are enjoying the story.  I'll be posting more today!