Reviews by Azlady2003
The Devil In Me by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

devil

Banner made by Fallingsnow Winter 

 

The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.

 

And StillDreaming85

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52216
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2014 Updated: 19 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Taking thats rose at the end? Can edward imprenant bella, idk if the demon can or not? Loved the lemon.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I wonder what alice thought when she witness what bella saw?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh oh bellas has trouble heading her way and edward wont be happy

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh fuck, i hope edward stops rosalie before bella ends up dead or hurt.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awww something tells me bella will be a pawn to peter getting even. I think the min edward calls bella her name instead of miss swan will be the day he himself admits he has fallen in love too,

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97745
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think the anonymous is eddie and demitri filled his head full of lies. I dont think eddie would hurt bella. I still think after the sex bella will say thank you then go back to hating him. I hope edward doesn't cheat on bella (even though he tried once before) but his attachment to russian isabella i'm thinking he might cheat with her and think he "loves" her since he is having a hard time getting bella to forgive.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved Victoria's pay back....oh shit, who stopped bella?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bellas starting to thaw out...edward better tell her about almost cheating on her before she finds out from someone else. I feel for bella, shes between a rock and a hard place.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Poor baby and bella

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I knew it was dimitri who has been picking eddie up.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh shit the family knows one of his secerts....i think if they knew what dimitri and hedi did to him his family will kill dimitrii for edward... Now esme will feel guilty because now she knows why bella left edward.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Poor bella, edward kills her family yet nonna is pissed at bella. I cant picture the tattoo, i wonder what it looks like. Loved the chapter. She thinks edward wouldnt touch her cuz of the weight gain and edward thinks bella dont want to be touched. Bot these two are on different pages. I want them to make up but st the same time I dont because if someone killed my family I couldnt forgive them. So how old are bella and edward again?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh shit what does Jane have?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Aww edward and bella are so cute. Loved edward spending time with little kitten

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Its demitri who spoke at the end huh? Damn cliffy...oh i cant wait for more. Edward is going to hear on the voicemail of her being taken and is gonna freak!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh crap! Cant wait till next update

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Another cliffie....ahh I'm dying here, cant wait for next update

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So i put off reading the ending cuz i didnt want to see this go. I feel for eddie Dimitri manipulated him, and i guess bella was wrong edward didnt love eddie deep down. I would wonder if anthony can do anything that will make edward kill him? I get it eddie was a child conceived out of rape, i imagine id have a hard time seeing a child that was conceived if i was raped. I admit i was hoping edward would have had someone Rape Dimitri, that would of been my revenge before i killed him.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hot damn i love the and the lemon

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5222 Read Count: 100405
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2014 Updated: 15 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Love it...edward is probably kicking himself for not noticing shes been throwing up before now. I hope its a boy.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Its good for bella to get some answers

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Poor bella, she saw a girl get raped and was anally raped. I was a child that got molestated so I feel for bella to know your own father didnt care

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Aww she woke up

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Its a girl!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Cant wait for more

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Wonder what the monitors are showing 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I hope charlie experiences all he put bella through. As a child of abuse and molestion, i know how hard it is to recover, poor bella

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Aww i love it

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Hot damn

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Oh im hoping bella shoots him herself

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I cant wait to read about charlies torture 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Oh damn cliffy

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Cant wait for charlie to get his

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Glad to see bella home. To sell bella does cgarlie have to show proof that shes his daughter? Whoever thinks they can get edwards children are in for a world of pain

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

I  dont get how charlie was able to sell the children, as her children werent his, can anyone sell anyone? I lovve the story and cant wait for more

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

That amun is confusing. How can he cherish the women in his life, when he rapes and sell women? Does sue, seth, and leah know, if so how can they stand it? Then he is mad bella was sold like trash, yet does the same to the women in the family he is collecting from. But i am glad bella has more family that love her, hopefully together they can stop all the contracts even the ones on the children.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

So amun called saying he wanted to collect a clients daughter as payment for a debt by charlie...then he said the daughter was isabella and needed help finding her.....that was amuns way of trying to find bella for sue without using the truth? Something tells me that bellas new family will be pissed that the unborn children have contracts on them. So why cant bella visit leah and seth if they dont claim her? What happen to amuns wife now that his fathers dead and hes with sue?

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

silence

Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94710
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Phil must of planned all tnat, because its to much of a coindince for a picture of them "kissing" to be snapped as well as mention of the hand holding. I dont trust phil

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Loveit

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Shes forgiving him a lil

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Hot damn

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Damn, fucken psycho phill

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Aww he heard her

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wonder why edward doesn't want bella to know its him...though the mystery is hot. Is it wrong that i wish a stranger did that to me?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I hope bella listens to alice and cuts back to make time for her friends

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oooo i cant wait till nxt time...plus something tells me bella bringing a date to the party will have edward jealous

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hot damn that was good.....so it seems already bella has serpassed aria. Cant wait for more

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Aww edward is trying to win her the right way goof for hi 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

The guest IMO is a coward if they can't use their name when they review...stand by your words instead of being two faced which i think guest reviwers are. So seems like edward is playing with fire and if he has Anthony pay bella a visit thats not fair to toy with bella let her move on. Btw....when I review i tend to talk to the characters im just that involved in the story lol

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Is this the 1st time bella and anthony/edward fucked without a condom? I hope Bellas on BC because if she gets knocked up she will try to track down anthony and edward will have to come clean. Cant wait for more

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Im thinking phil will be a rebound when bella finds out anthony is edward and feels betrayed and runs to phil..or phil offers a shoulder.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Aww cock block lol. Love the chapter

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh fuck...i hope seeing aria doesnt bring those love feelingsup again

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Congrats on getting plublished 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Love it

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I love the recs. So Esme had another son, or did they mistakenly think edward was dead?

Summary: Past Featured Story

fertile

 

 

Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M

Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.

Banner by: Beffers87

Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56092
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Man if a guy kept calling an older woman, i'd be pissed...even if i was older than him.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You never say older chick to a woman...man edward you don't know how to woo the ladies

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Aww edward is trying to takecare of her...and is weaseling in her life lil by lil

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Charlie is a selfish sob

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Im thinking edward may insist on living with bella durning her bed rest.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Aww edward loves her

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Poor bella right when edward and bella move foward the baby grts in jeopody

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aww edward is romantic

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awww i loved the ending

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

Nikky and I wrote a oneshot for this Awesome banner that was made
by, Caitlin Beresford in a contest, where it was awarded 3rd place.
Here is the contest info: http://battleofthebannerartist.blogspot.com/

 

 

Bella learns after her mother's death that she is not a legal citizen.  Needing to find a way to stay in the USA, she asks her childhood, best friend's, brother, to be her husband.  What starts as a proposal of need, quickly changes. What happens when those changes cause ripples in the lives of Bella and Edward?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18021 Read Count: 9511
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2014 Updated: 05 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonder what happen to alice..i loved this story

Summary:

fvwl

A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126107
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh no Sr. Is trying to kill edward...i hope Sr. Dies. Where is the scene that edward says he should of let her go, im thinking next chapter. Loved this one.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 31 May 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Something tells me new girl is gonna be trouble

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I think bella sorta knows that edward wont hurt her...but hes suffering from ptsd and its gonna take awhile to uncondition herself. Loved the update

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aww edward knows somethings up with his feelings, he just doesnt know hes faling in love. Poor bella, once she knows and believes edward wont hit her then she will finally stop flinching when he yells...but its hard to break something she has dealt with all her life. Im thinking carlo is working for charlie. Cant wait for more :)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ding dong SR dead 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor bella...peters a dead man. So, how long have they been together now?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loved the lemon...one day edwards gonna shock vella and say the L word back.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Aww edwards in love even if he doesnt see it

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was hot not gonna lie...but i think with charlie and her. Ex using her as a punching bag, she does not need another man discipling her. Is daddward here to stay (its hot)? Or will bella be pissed and fight it?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 15 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Aww edward finally is starting to realize how much bella means to him, and that he could never kill her (even though he has thought it many times, even putting the gun to her head). Maybe bella knowing she is his weakness will make her not as afraid when he gets angry. They may be doing things backwards (or the traditional way if you think about arranged marriages back in the day and some cultures) with marriage 1st then getting to know each other.....but edward wanting and being happy to sleep anywher as long as the wife is next to him shows his feelings even though hes barely figuring it out. Love it cant wait to see how edward grows more.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bella protected edward :)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Poor bella, she catches him cheating her (which in my eyes sucking another womens tits and getting a blow job by another women is cheating). How would he feel if she was getting licked by another man? I wanna smack edward for bella. He is full of condirdictions, he doesnt have feelings for her yet her wont divorce her, poor guy doesnt realize his soul needs her. I cant wait till bella makes him pay. Is it wrong that I sorta hope she gives him a taste of his own medicine.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved the revenge and how edward is confused with his feelings.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh no poor bella. I have faith that edward walked in before edwards dad could do anymore than take her clothes off. I hope she tells edward what he said and did and that he threatened her friends.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Awww bella sorta got used to the nicknames, at least during the heat of the moment. Loved the lemon :) and im glad bella told edward everything senior did and said, esp him threatening her. Im glad edward realized bellas changing him :) i love the character growth....another great chapter.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So edward only gave her the wedding ban? Wonder if hes gonna give her the engagement ring by reasking her to marry him? He wears his wedding ring yet these hoes dont see it, grrrr. I hope he lets bella put on his new wedding ring and i hope she starts wearing hers everyday. So bella admitted she loves him, edward i dont think has admitted it to himself that he loves bella, hopefully her declaration knocks him out of his denial. I see the change in him, hes grown i kove it

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Ooo bellas gonna freak when she finds out hes been arrested. Something tells me that when he was dancing with bella, his moment was realizing he loves bella

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh bellas pissed, never seen her this mad not even at peter. She would be super pissed if she knew what antonio did to edward. Can't wait for more

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, free from an abusive ex and his controlling family, takes her son and moves away from the life she knew. Opening a Bakery, she meets Edward, a fireman, when her partially deaf son runs off. Can Edward be the Baker’s Man, and Irina’s daddy too? What baggage does he have?

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Banner by: Chandrakanta


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15651 Read Count: 3430
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2014 Updated: 01 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww i loved it

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

 

Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Where I Belong

Oh isnt lauren an ex gf? Wow im glad bellas back



Author's Response: Thanks as well for partaking in my little game. You were right about Lauren and here's your reward: … About twenty minutes into the movie, a tall blonde entered the screen and Emmett laughed out loud. “Ed, if I didn't know any better, I'd think that chick was Lauren.” Before I could say anything, Rosalie scoffed at him. “I'm surprised you even remember the names of all your tramps.” Emmett answered her with a wide smirk. “Sorry to burst your bubble, princess, but I actually do know the name of every woman I granted the honor of satisfying me. And one of them has been said a lot here tonight.” He paused for a moment to revel in her angry scowl. “I wasn't talking about one of my past companions, though, but of Edward's.” He turned to look at me. “Don't you think she looks like that girl you dated in college?” I hadn't actually thought about her in a while, and I hadn't seen her since we'd broken up, but maybe there was a slight similarity. I was totally surprised though when Bella put the movie on hold and asked, “What was Lauren's last name?” I frowned slightly, but answered without delay. “Mallory. Her name was Lauren Mallory. Why do you want to know?” Bella's expression showed shock and some realization. “You said she dumped you without a real reason, right?” I just nodded, even more confused now. Bella seemed to notice and started to explain. “Your father mentioned her. He said that the Mallory girl,” she made air-quotes, “skipped town for twenty-thousand dollars.” Her eyes were locked with mine, grief darkening the deep brown. “I'm so sorry, Edward.” “If that chick took money from your good-for-nothing father to leave you, then she isn't even worth another thought. I never liked her anyway.” I could always count on Emmett to have my back. “I know,” I agreed. “But it still hurts to know how easy it was to leave me behind.” It wasn't hard to get over Lauren by any means. Our connection had never run very deep, but she had been my girlfriend, and it was hard to learn that something like that happened behind my back. Then something occurred to me. “Did Carlisle say anything else?” … What else did Carlisle say? See you next chapter with the answer.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

Love it, where is wild child located at?



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Wild Child is on FFn as well as here. Here's the link: http://www.twcslibrary.net/viewstory.php?sid=6993 See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Ambush

The teaser is edward yelling at carlisle cuz edward told him of what carlisle said. Bellas calling....i hope she comes back and she only went to roses to think



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. You're guesses aren't too far off ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - The Truth and Nothing But the Truth

Bellas in labor (from the preview)? I cant find the stories from last rec or this weeks what are the links please?



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. There will be a bit of a time jump next chapter, so yes, Bella might be in labor. About the recs, here are the links: A Dominant & A Gentleman http://www.twcslibrary.net/viewstory.php?sid=10826 Sideline Collision https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6749059/1/Sideline-Collision Enjoy. See you next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Drabble Mafia Fic. What is the ultimate act of Betrayal? For Bella is was when her husband and best friend slept together. Find out how she dealt with them and how she plans to turn her life around. Will she find happiness?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22383 Read Count: 139183
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2014 Updated: 14 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Im guessing carlisle as bellas dad, maybe aro

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh i hope edwards not an undercover fed

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ooooo

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oooooooooo love it

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh im thinking edwards an undercover fbi or a rival mobster

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hot damn

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh shit!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I love bella, shes kick ass

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oooo wonder if emmette will kill his dad. If their dad is royce then I am guessing royce raped emmettes wife and caused this change in loyalty.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviews honey xx

 

Psst! Remember that game where someone was trying to find something you had and you would shout hot or cold ... Well your hot ;)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Ooooooo cliffy..... you know me,I am greedy so with that said, I want more :)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Ouch, poor bella