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Ginny's Fantasy by Tbird1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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Ginny's having some inappropriate thoughts about her Potions Professor, but why is he having so much trouble teaching  his class?  Adult content.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Severus Snape/Ginny Weasley
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9748 Read Count: 3703
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Jun 2012
Reviewer: grumpymax Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I very much enjoy your Snape stories and I am looking forward to see how this one's turning out. Glad, that you found a new home here although it took a while to find you and hate that FFN did that to you. I very much hope you'll be able to finish this one. Thanks for finding a way to post. Will you pick up Snape's Story as well?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for finding me!!!!!!   Unfortunately when FF.net deleted my account they also deleted all my final edits on Snape's Story.  Right not I'm slowly working on getting "completed" stories uploaded here, as well as on AFF AND yourfanfiction.  (no I'm not being paranoid).  I'm going to have to re edit Snape's Story to post it and I PROMISE you, I will be doing it.  Right now 1) I'm just still really, really upset about what FF.net did to me, so I'm finding it hard to even face the whole re editing thing and 2) I just haven't had time.  But I WILL finish it, I promise.  And thanks again for finding me and for your review.  If you know of any of my other readers, please let them know where to find me!!!

Snape's Story by Tbird1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 144]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Dark Lord is dead and the magical world is struggling to return back to normal. Severus Snape's past has finally caught up to him and his life is in a downworld spiral. Can one caring woman save him before he destroys himself? This story contains adult themes, situations and language.


Categories: Harry Potter, After Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75584 Read Count: 28977
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 08 Feb 2013
Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh no! you can't just stop here!!! Please!? I liked the way you have Minerva McGonagall intervene. It is always nice to know that a few people do care about that daft man...

Still perfect...after perhaps seeing light at the end of the tunnel only to have it switched off again...I think I can understand Severus...

Will check on an hourly basis if you are letting us off the hook :O)

Thank you, TBird



Author's Response:

I just loooooove my cliffhangers!!! Muahahahahaha.  No need to check all day, I do work.  I'll be working on the next chapter today at work.  I'm hoping it "writes" itself like the previous chapters have been doing.  The next chapter will be up sometime this week.  I usually post when I get home from work, so sometime after 5 CST.   Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review.

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

! One of my absolute favourite stories. I like this chapter a lot because it tells us just how lonely Severus is...poor man. Please keep on posting more...Thank you very much.



Author's Response:

Thanks you so much.  Glad you are enjoying it!!!

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

10..because I just love this story. Thanks for continuing to post...



Author's Response:

Thanks. It's a lot of fun and very challenging to write!!!  Glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Thank you very much, TBird - finally where this ended previously on FFN. I can't wait to read more. I love this story - it's different and I just adore it - and you for writing it.



Author's Response:

Yes, I'm caught up and working on new chapters.  Right now I'm working on what I think is going to be THE most difficult chapter to write...The Memories.  I don't want to do a complete rehash of what we've all already seen and read.....but it's important to get some bullet points in there.  I think once I get past this chapter, the writing will go much, much quicker.  I'm just having trouble getting this one 'just right'.  I'm so glad everyone is enjoying this so much.  I really, really just wanted to try something different and this came to me one night in a dream.  Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

There's nothing new and still you made me cry...*blush* ...a little. This is almost better (or worse?) than in the movie. I love it. Please more...faster (sorry...could not help it...)

Thank you very much. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!  I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Noooo. I was so absolutely thrilled to find another chapter so soon. And yes: you absolutely spoiled me already. This one's just hasn't got enough Snape in it. Although I sitll love it. It's perfect. I, for one, can't wait for the next one ...and another one...:O) Please keep this up. One of my absolute favourite fics.

Poor Severus...with friends like that you do not need enemies...

Thanks again. Full points...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!!  Yes Lucius is definately a "toxic" friend.  There's more Snape in the next chapter, I promise!!!!

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thankyouthankyouthankyou - for the quick update. Again I loved it...even though...so sad.  No wonder he's closed himself off. I love it. As usual - I will be happy to see the next chapter. Thanks :O)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review.  Glad you enjoyed it!!!

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

YAY! I am so lucky. Another fast update. I really, really liked this one. Thank you so much. As usual: can't wait for the next update. Perfect. Love this story!

Take care



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!!  I'm working on the next chapter and hope to have it posted this weekend or by the first of next week.  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.  Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

lucky me! New chapter AND bare bottoms :O) I loved this. Still one of my three all time favs. Hoping, as usual, for quick updates. Thank you very much.



Author's Response:

LOL.  I couldn't resist Snape flashing a little flesh at her just to embarrass her.  It just seemed like something he would do.  Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Damn! Cliffhanger! Again :O( *grins*. Poor Severus. It's a good thing Albus finally spoke to him...although I would have expected a bit more of a struggle from the late Headmaster.  Somehow, I can't see him asking for forgivness just like that - not with a hidden agenda somewhere...If I could write as well as you do I probably would have made two chapters out of this one. But I can't and all is well because I still like the story. A lot! Thank you very much, TBird :O)



Author's Response:

He's just a portrait, all the fight has gone out of him.  LOL.   I actually hadn't orginally planned for that chapter, but a lot of people were asking for it, so I added it last min.  Glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was hot! And sad! And I really, really want to shake some sense into the man! :O) Very nice writing! Thank you very much - as usual, I can't wait for the next chapter. Severus continues digging himself in deeper and deeper and I am eager to find out how you are going to get him out of this again. Well, I guess I hope you do...

Perfect. 10 points

 



Author's Response:

That's kinda how it goes with alcoholics, they just keep burying themselves deeper and deeper and deeper.    Thanks for the review.  I'm sooooo glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I was a bit worried about this one.

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

"...maybe I could be good too!" That is so sad. I wish, Hermione could have zoomed in on that part of the sentence instead of why the heck he knows about the mark. But, honestly? Everyone would probably have done the same thing.

It's brilliant! Again - 10points.

I fear that Severus needs something good happening in his life or he won't be able to come back...

Thank you, TBird :O)



Author's Response:

I would have done it.  In fact, I wish there really were such a thing as polyjuice potion. LOL.

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I want to shake her: wake up!!!! Now it's become even worse to wait for the next chapter. Is Severus going to do something stupid? Will Hermione? :O) Thank you - this was moving. You can see how his life is crumbling around him. Brilliant writing. 10 points from me.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I'm just racking up housepoints here!!!!  LOL.

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Phoenix Tears. Now. That is an interesting solution to the problem :O) I must say that I have neither thought of that before nor have I stumbled across it. Creative. Hahahaha - I wish I could've see Severus face when he tries to explain the lube. Can't wait - as usual. Looks like for the moment, he feels a bit better...?

Which reminds me - I'm off to review the previous chapter which I've read but neglected to comment. I bet you can't wait...

Thank you very much, TBird



Author's Response:

If we remember from the books, Phoenix Tears cure........everything.  I cannot tell a lie, I actually read it in another story and remembered it when I was coming up with the idea for this story.  Yeah, he's got some 'splain' to do...or maybe he'll just 'show' her what it's used for.  LOL.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

hahaha. Hermione had it coming: she did ask! Hot. Will Severus, with all his issues, manage to turn this belly-up again? I find myself hoping that not. Being realistic I would assume that nothing, not even a new relationship can stop his self-destructive behaviou just like this...Can't wait to read how you are going to proceed with them. Please be gentle with Severus?

Thank you very much, TBird.



Author's Response:

Well his problems aren't going to just disappear.......he still has some work to do.

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh my! Poor Severus. I meant to ask if we could hear more about what's driven him to drink in the first place...? I suppose we are going to find out. Well done, TBird. Thank you very much.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the wonderful review!!

Reviewer: grumpymax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Well...something has to give sooner or later. This can't go on for much longer...Severus needs to confront things. I hope, he doesn't muck things up too badly...Brilliant, TBird, thanks so much. Happy Holidays or a very happy, Merry Christmas.