Reviews by Jaenelle Masen
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

i don't really know if i could do this kind of relationship....men in general rarely pay enough attention to one wife let along multiple wives...and then to have to share his spare time?  on top of that Edward is a doctor!  he hardly has any spare time to begin with as it is...i really find it hard and heartbreaking to have to share someone that i love with other women...its demeaning and hurtful!

Citrus Dreams by ash_golden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella has a fun time reading while waiting on Edward to come back from his hunt. LEMONY. Vamps. OOC. All canon. Please review!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7998 Read Count: 1832
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was hilarious...and very parallel...to SMs novel anyway...sheesh...the ultimate cockblock!

Summary:

"I was born under unusual circumstances". Set in the cloudy town of Forks in 1986, this is the story of Isabella Swan a sixty year old woman in the body of a twenty year old and how her life began when the Cullens moved back into town.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Parody/Crackfic, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49075 Read Count: 4035
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2010 Updated: 27 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

are you going to create a sequel?  how did Edward know that he needed to go back to Bella instead of continuing on with Victoria's goose chase?  

What happened to Victoria and Laurent?  Did the Cullens kill them?  

there are too many open things here....



Author's Response:

that's why there's going to be a sequel :)

thanks for reading and reviewing and I hope to see you back some time in December for the sequel :)

Summary:

Edward is beautiful, of that there is no doubt. His beauty has opened so many doors for him, but it has closed just as many others. 

 

Has the door slammed shut on what he truly wants?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7162 Read Count: 475
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2010 Updated: 27 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beauty Crowds Me

you gave us a lemon with Jessica and Edward in a short story about Edward and Bella being in love?  i feel jipped!  you need to give us at least one more chapter of E and B going way farther than he did with any of those other skanks! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and the constructive review.  The story was written for a contest with an idea in mind and sadly only a 7,000 word count. At one point I wrote a lemon at the end between E & B but it came out too rushed and seemed too sordid for a HEA, so I felt that the fic ended better as it did within the context for the contest.  

The lemon with Jessica was less about Edward being with Jessica and more about Edwards realisation that he and Bella had never been a couple and that in his mind that was never likely to happen and that he would have to move on.  Of course once he had, he still struggled to get Bella out of his mind and had chosen someone who reminded him of her in looks - he was seeing Bella even though it was Jessica.

Now, my beta is going to kill me, because after writing for 3 contests in a month, I have decided to do a little companion one-shot to this story called 'In Sight of Thee' (from the same Emily Dickinson poem)  It will be BPOV and cover her perspective of Edwards beauty and their relationship in school, what happened with creepy James, how she recognised Edward at the magazine and then of course what happened after they left the restaurant.  And there will be lots of E&B Lemons...

Suzanne

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

ohh man...this has "catastrophe" written all over it! the truth always comes out somehow and by trying to use more lies to cover up the truth, the damage is going to get even bigger than before! 

 

poor Bella! she is going to get slammed in the fallout! 



Author's Response:

It's not looking so good for these two...Bella's actually not going to find out for a few more chapters.  But I can guarantee you that Edward's not done ruining things.

Long December by JustJo94 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Long December

While facing the height of tension in their marrage, Bella wonders if she will be able to make it through the holiday season with out her husband. Holiday o/s AU/AH

This beautiful banner was constructed by the AMAZING Evenstar! Thank you, sweeheart! Merry X-mas!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6291 Read Count: 704
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Long December (One Shot)

my tears speak for themselves! 



Author's Response:

Wow. I know exactly what you mean. When I was rereading this and doing final edits, I started to tear up as well. I guess that there is some part of this story that truely touches us deep inside. We can relate on some level to the angst of not wanting to be rejected.

I appreciate your review and am here if you ever need a shoulder...

Happy Holidays!

Paper Made Men by kallee77 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

One-Shot with Amy Studt song Paper Made Men. Bella, a new recording artist has developed a relationship with her producer. He is struggling with his own past and has his own job to do when it comes to Ms. Swan. Are they a perfect made match?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1334 Read Count: 535
[Report This] Published: 06 Oct 2011 Updated: 02 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Paper Made Men

Please contnue

 

Surprises by EmziBob Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Jessica comes home after a 3 year trip expecting Edward to be waiting to marry her, but she is in for one hell of a surprise. Told from Jessica's POV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3430 Read Count: 5753
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2012 Updated: 17 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You should continue this at least show us Edward's reaction to stupid Jessica coming back after three years and expecting to marry him after he dumped her sorry behind