Reviews by janedoh
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Ginny's in debt over her head.  Can Lucius help bail her out?  At what cost?  Contains side pairings of SS/HG and HP/DM.  Very adult content, includes both slash and femslash.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy, Hermione/Lucius Malfoy, Hermione/Other Male Character, Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109708 Read Count: 46550
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Jun 2012
Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I followed you over from fanfiction.net after finding Snape's Story there. I am using this opportunity to read some of your other stories as you post them. I am enjoying this one, though GW/LM is not a pairing I usually read. Thanks for leaving us a breadcrumb trail to find you, and I look forward to reading more of your work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and for following me.  How'd you like that breadcrumb???  I hope more people are able to find it and know what it means. Spread the word if you can.  LOL.  I am slowly but surely reposting all my stories, here and on AFF, but it's a slooooowwww process.  I lost ALL of my final edits on Snape's Story, so I am going to have to edit all the chapters again before I post them and I just haven't had a chance to yet.  But don't worry..it WILL happen, hopefully before the end of June.   I'm just not looking forward to doing a re edit and Im still pretty upset that I even have to.

Don't forget THIS story also includes a SS/HG pairing and they get quite a bit of "smut" time.

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Woo hoo--enter SS and HG!



Author's Response:

Soon, very soon.  Thanks you so much for the review!!!

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Poor, poor Severus. At least Hermione will be taking matters in hand! Can't wait to see the Weasley response as well.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!!  Yeah, Hermione won't have any trouble setting old Severus straight,

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Thanks for the boatload of chapters-the mix and match session was really hot. 



Author's Response:

My pleasure.  This is the longest story I have to transfer...once I have it all re posted, I can focus on posting all my other stories.  Glad you liked it and thanks for the review.

Snape's Story by Tbird1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 144]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Dark Lord is dead and the magical world is struggling to return back to normal. Severus Snape's past has finally caught up to him and his life is in a downworld spiral. Can one caring woman save him before he destroys himself? This story contains adult themes, situations and language.


Categories: Harry Potter, After Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75584 Read Count: 28977
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 08 Feb 2013
Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Uh oh. Ron wasn't particularly mature when Severus arrived, was he? I think Hermione is smart not to leave them alone too long. Loved the Severus-George interactions. I also like how you set up Luna as a friend with experience in the trenches so to speak to keep Hermione on track. Hopefulyy another update soon?



Author's Response:

Ron is a git.

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yay! So happy you are posting this one.



Author's Response:

Thanks.   Just to give you fair warning, updates may be a little slower because I'm also "watering" it down to re post on FF.net.  I'm hoping people who were already reading it there will find it again and then know that they can come find the "real, adult" version of the story here...on a grown up site. Instead of one that seems to want to only cater to children.  No, I'm not bitter at all.  LOL.  Thank you so much for the review, I can't tell you how much I appreciate everyone's wonderful support.

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really like this story--it isn't pleasant reading, but it is one of the few fics that tries to consider what the effects of canon would be on real people. As I said in my deleted FF.net review, I love fluffy SSHG as much as the next person, but the reality is that SS would have real and serious issues to work on before he could have his happily ever after.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I'm glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for taking the time to review.


Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Severus. Lucius isn't a very good friend in this one, is he?



Author's Response:

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks for posting updates so quickly! Poor Severus, though I do sympathize with Harry and Ron having to clean up after him. I like the idea of Severus not needing magic to be dangerous. It makes sense that he would be able to handle himself in a physical fight, given his life history. I hope he gets a break soon, though...



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  Glad you like it.  I just like the idea of Snape being a badass, both physically and magically.

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yay--new material! I thought you did a good job integrating the stuff we've seen with Hermione's reactions. I think it is better to show us the canon source so we can see Hermione's reactions rather than hear about her reaction after the fact. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind review.  This will be the only chapter that contains "canon" stuff, but Hermione really needed to see and reacte to the "memories".  Now we can move on to new and dramactic stuff.  Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

You are spoiling us with updates. Poor Hermione--Severus is feeling no pain right now, but she has to pick up all the pieces. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.



Author's Response:

I know I'm spoiling you!!!  And I would have spoiled you again, but for some strange reason my netbook didn't charge, so as I sat down on break to write, my battery died.  I kept on writing, long hand, but now I have to re type everything.  Hopefully I'll get it worked out before the end of the week.

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was so hot, but so sad. Poor Severus. What will he do now that he is out of polyjuice? No more relief without actually talking to Hermione...



Author's Response:

He might have to admit to her how he feels.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Hooray for daydreams about sweaty Severus! I just got caught up, and am hapy to see their relationship progressing. For all that Severus is working on (and he seems to be making some progress), I think Hermione is still wearing blinders when it comes to the relationship between Severus and Harry. She is still thinking like Harry's 15 year old best friend, and not like the therapist she is trained to be loading it all on Severus like that.



Author's Response:

She just wants everybody to be one happy family.  She really is just the classic enabler.

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Poor Severus. Not even his first time is a good story. I hope you won't leave us hanging too long--inquiring minds want to know what Hermione fantasizes about!



Author's Response:

I'll try not to!!!  I'm working on it now.

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh no! Poor Severus. He never can catch a break, can he? Hopefully this will get him to stop dithering about his counseling, though. 



Author's Response:

He's pretty stubborn....

Reviewer: janedoh Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Poor Severus. Still, unless he tells Hermione more about his past, she is (unfortunately) likely to keep accidentally triggering him. Someone needs to smack that man and get him back in counseling, or at least working on his issues with Hermione, even is she is too close to be a true therapist.