Reviews by Lovedwardalways
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478798
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am thinking that the nicknames are wonderful.  Glad Bella was there in time to save Cassie. Yeah Jessica is so fired.  

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Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is very good. Loving it. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh this is going to be good.  

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Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think it was was funny. I love how he picked her up and carried her to the office.  The kids are funny with the double please.  

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Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ugh Edward is black boxers drool.   They seem to have fun as a family.  Yep Bella is a way better nanny.  

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Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I knew she would quit or get fired soon enough that lady is crazy.  

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Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Donkey I love that.   The kids are so cute with all the questions.  

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Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Omg poor Edward can't handling the naked teasing there.  I love the playroom that is awesome. Jessica is an idiot. 

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Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Roscoe love it but I loved roscoe he is such a dork.  Wonderful chapter. Love it so far. 

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Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

They are just so cute together.  They can't help but share things. Are being his grandfather. Bella's real eye color.  I know he won't run he loves her. 

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Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Mike is such a jackass.  She could have easily ripped his cock off if he only knew.  I love protectiveward.  

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Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh wow it was good I was alone when I read this cause when I found out Jacob was marmaduke I was a little vocal yep hate Jacob.  I like that they are sharing more of each other.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

The kids are so funny how they believe every thing they hear about cooties and kissing.  I love how they want Edward and Bella to get married and be the new mom.  I love his protective/ jealous side. 

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow she is Bella's godmother and Renee would be Edwards godmother. I love the IM and Edward was wanting to see it. A ironman one and then him being a ironman nickname nice. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh wow. Jacob really is a dumb ass, all these guys trying to claim his girl is not good.  Some much info flowing between the two of them love it.  Can't wait to meet ms. Honey and guido.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I just thought it was her computer program that turned off the lights.  Of course he was ready to bust a nut he was all riled up from Bella then that skank had to ruin things but I guess it was good they did not go all the way.  So is the cottage her dad got killed at the cottage Edward takes the kids to. 

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I  glad he never had sex with that nasty whore. Love the computer and how smart she is.  Jasper is so serious all the time Bella is going to give him a heart attack. 

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hehehe poor Edward keeps getting cock blocked.  Jasper is funny kept trying to get in the house.  Not telling him who chaos is was too funny.  She took Emmett down quick I bet that just turned Edward on even more.  Scorpious loved that and the way way she told her how it is. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love space balls  yoghurt is my favorite.  This is a wonderful chapter. I love Alice she is so cute. 

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Glad she build the panic room.  She is bad ass.  Scorpia knows not to mess with her now.  Jessica is messed in the head.  I bet mike pooped himself when he found out he was masen lol. 

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OMG that is crazy.  She is Dora I love how they thought he was a fifty year old man with gray hair.  Hawk is Jasper's dad no wonder she is so good.  Taught by the best. It is funny when she took hawk down and the faces jasper and Edward made.  Poor Edward hawk wanting to shoot him in the balls. 

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Finally he gets to make love to his Bella. Peabody finally get a glimpse of how smart she really is.  I understand his want to apologize to Bella but he was born to protect Edward so it is understandable.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh gosh that was so funny. Jasper having to hear about the iron man and the hawkeye. Edward got hawk out of the bedroom easily.  Can't wait to see Bella kick Peabody's butt. 

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh yes loved the steamy bathroom. I love they want to call her mommy.  

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Jasper got his bumm handed to him and needed Edward to call it quits for him.  Love it. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I love that the wristbands shocked them.  The kids new wristbands are cool.  

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Awesome no wonder she felt so close to the kids.  Love the new living conditions. 

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh my gosh did not see that coming. Charlie is alive wow.  

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

James is crazy wanting to get shocked.  I love that they call her boss's wife.  

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Charlie thinking that the twins were hers would upset any dad.  Like hawk would let Edward let that happen.  

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Awwww so cute love it. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

That would not have been good if hawk or Charlie walk in on them on the desk. Love the honeymoon. Cassie is cute wanting a honeymoon.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Oh I love the names so cute.  Tanya is awesome getting the best of Sasha.  The kids will be great big brother and sister. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Wow he is really good at keeping her pregnant. I love all the names. I can't believe Sasha still wants him after all these years.  Tanya is brilliant and getting her riled up.  She ended up with Charlie that is great loved this story. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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SUMMARY: Edward, fresh out of veterinary school moves to the small town his grandfather was from, after his sudden death. There he inherits his veterinary clinic and ranch. He finds himself intrigued by the young Isabella who tries to runaway with her brother several times. What will Edward do when he finds a journal his grandfather kept and realizes that his own grandfather was trying to help her and her brother get away?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76586 Read Count: 117708
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 16 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It looks good so far.  I am sure I will enjoy it.  

Summary:

It's been six years since the birth of Elizabeth Renee Cullen. Edward is working hard as an attorney and Bella, his Little One, is a famous author. This is an future-take from the world of Mafia Princess...

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13835 Read Count: 6013
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2014 Updated: 09 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Daddy's Little Princess

That was cute. Love the little princess. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

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Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082143
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting new story.  

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Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What could have possibly happened in Florida.  So I am guessing a abussive ex. And when she left him Renee did not agree with it cause he was probably wealthy and in the right social set and she loved it to hell with if he was a jack ass.  That is just a guess. 

Summary:

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To see the world; the damage, the truth, the pain, the beauty, you have to open your eyes. To be able to help others and be a better person, you have to open your eyes.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31055 Read Count: 40479
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So many layers to this story.  This is so good.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh wow that is a lot to take in.  Phil is just evil and to sell her like she was a piece of furniture. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Finally got a chance to read. Oh this is making me nervous. But I love Edward and his pacing wanting everything to be perfect. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting new little story here. I am sure I will love it. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Bella is a excellent mother and Edward is a wonderful father to that beautiful baby girl so it is understandable that they worry.  Poor jasper having to deal with Emmett being all protective big brother.  Wonderful chapter. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Maybe Emmett and his bluntness will get her to talk.  

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Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh good Tia not Tanya but it still going to be hard on them. I can't wait to see where she has been. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So much could of happened to her I does not seem good at all but I am sure you will slowly unravel into a brilliant revelation. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Renee I knew she had to be involved her evil plot I am sure good thing jasper was there to help.  

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Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh no not Tanya he is with Tanya I guess he moved on what will it mean now that Bella is back. 

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Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Wow Bella saw him naked she has great willpower I would have attacked him in the shower.  I love the grandparents advice and was nice of them to take the baby for the night.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What was she thinking taking the pill. My sister gets them bad her whole right side will just go numb and she will fall to the ground.  It will make her so sick.  Now we know what her problem is. Now to get her better. 

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Date: 29 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Maybe it was a good thing he just stole a few kisses and cuddled I don't think they are ready for more. 

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Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

But jasper help her get away so he let her take his truck well it is good Bella is getting better. 

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love the British term cuppa my pastor is from Manchester and his will say grab yourself a cuppa. 

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Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Uh oh that does not sound good. Happy 4th be safe and have fun. 

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Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well at least she is in good hand now and will get the proper treatment.  Esmeralda is a force to be reckoned with.  

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Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my goodness.  This is crazy.  Poor Charlie is going to pull all of his hair out.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

 

Emmett wanting to kick Jakes adds was sweet of him. Of course Carlisle will be there for her she is the daughter that got away.  

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Awwww he is so sweet kissing her while she was sick. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh what did Charlie do. Is is jasper ? Another twist just making the story more intense. 

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Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh yeah love the caveman act hehehe 

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Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

He gets his alone time he has been craving.  What to talk about so much has happened over the years.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

He is sweet how much he cares for her and yes he needs to be honest with Tia let her go. So he can focus on Bella. 

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Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Jasper is so adorable when he talks about Alice.  I think that about right Edward would go anywhere with her. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh that was cute. 

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Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Edward is so cute wanting to protect her.  I wonder what jasper has up his sleeve.  

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Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hope your feeling better.  I think a memory book is a excellent idea.  Bella will love it. 

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Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That is sad that peter was raised that way and I think it is good that Marcus did not treat jasper that way so he is not jaded and has a good heart.  

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Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Woohoo peter is dead and the evil wife is penniless. I love that they went to the grandparents house and they are free. 

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Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh I did not even think about the will. Oh gosh I love jasper he is so sly. 

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Date: 19 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Awww that is sweet always thinking of others 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Glad to see you updating. Real life gets in the way sometimes but with all you do for people we appreciate you taking time out of your busy schedule for is.  Your worth the wait.  Hope things are getting better and less crazy. 

Year Of Hell by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 283]
Summary: Past Featured Story


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Summary: Edward has known Bella for five years, but after some time away from Forks, he learns even more.  Some bad people have their hand in the control of Forks. Will Bella and Edward be able to save each other or get lost in the mix? What happens when Edward’s friendship with Bella becomes so much more? Can Edward and Bella both fight the demons from their past and present to find their future?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 176064 Read Count: 55905
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2014 Updated: 19 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh my gosh that was too funny in the elevator.  These two are great together. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Dang Renee was crazy and what a sad start to life she had. He finally came to rescue her then she was thrown back into it. Hopefully know that Edward knows the truth he can help her find his grave and she can have closure.  That was sad what happened to his parents and him handling it bad they should have started counseling earlier it would have helped.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well if you get away with everything you don't know any better but tell that to the cop and then using your one call to Bloomingdales yet she is a whack a doodle for sure.  His dad is a jerk for wanting to blame him.  I was already not liking him for wanting to push him into medicine and not appreciate his talents.  Ian glad he is helping her in the water. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh nooooo that is so sad.  Edward will save her. 

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Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Jasper is with other women what a dipshit.  I love that Aro and the rest of them got arrested. I can believe Alice acted like she did not know him. Carlisle is a jack ass calling him mr. Masen and not wanting him to  call him dad and his mom wanting to go to him but douche nozzle would not let her.  I am happy there are new people in authority. Woohoo for Bella standing up for Edward.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Day With Edward

I am loving this so far. Really cute story with him sticking up for kids that is cool. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Small towns are good for that.  I hope Edward can help her.  

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Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh I love that ending that was amazing.  Poor rose giving birth to a 15 lbs baby.  So glad everyone got the hea they deserved good luck on winning for bent not broken hope you win. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

The football team must protect the muffin maker.  Jake is still crazy wanting Bella think she belongs to him.  Glad Aro and his band of jackass are gone for good.  Awwww talking babies. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Carlisle is still a jackass but at least he told him why and that he gave the piano back. Edward is so romantic wonderful proposal.  Loved the speech. 

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Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Wow. Nearly all the doctors in this story are assholes. The first doctor talking about teen pregnancy and abortion. The the doctor wanting to take Bella's kidney saying oh you can have another baby he seemed like a brain dead moron.  I loved Charlie's send off that was cool casino night that is so Charlie. Rene is freaking wacko I am glad she is dead. Loved this story so much.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awww they are so cute together.  I understand his need for control and she would be a good sub 

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Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

You can just feel the love of Edward's mother and how much she cared for him. Bella is opening up a bit more to the intimacy side of the relationship which is good poor Edward needs some relief. Renee is quacked out of her mind. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I knew she would come around eventually but dang took her long enough I am glad she is divorcing the prick what a shit for brains he is taking it out on Edward cause he thought Edward and Esme slept together in college and he is a doctor I sure would not not want him to be my doctor.  Of course Edward will help Emmett cause Edward is a wonderful person.  So glad Royce iss not eligable for parole for 15 yrs.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I am glad they are getting the help they need.  Oh oral was fantastic loved it. People will only change when they are ready and Carlisle and Alice have not got there yet. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was so romantic the dinner was wonderful. The bikini was killing him, nice.  The teacher is nasty again.  She is cute talking in her sleep.  

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Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

They are so cute they just fit together.  I am kinda glad Esme did not tell Carlisle he does not need to know something more to hold against Edward.  Rose is a big skank.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loving this story.  Those are some funny dares.  That was sad she lost her dad. I will be voting daily for bent not broken for fic of the month you deserve to win. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Really ? His dad would kick him out what an ass.  Glad they have most of the same classes.  Edward did not even start that fight that sucks. 

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Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Charlie is funny knowing Edward was in the closet.  Hmm if they both go to UW they can live in his apartment save her on rent and she can cook and clean for him and cuddle every night.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ughhhh!!!! His dad pisses me off I did not hear from the school and constantly threatening to kick him out what a ass.  I am glad Charlie is there for him.  The realization finally hit him that he loves her.  She is so funny wanting to make her own cake. I am surprised he did not get her a new phone but maybe to soon for that. He is so sweet to get her a Edwin beat. 

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Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Dang her cousin is a hoe.  That is so sweet of Edward to find her family.  I love her aunt she is funny.  Her grandma is sweet.  Well she does not have to worry about money ever again.  So it seems Renee was always crazy.  I love how Charlie called Edward out about telling Bella he loves her.  Darn Alice and her kiss ruining moment. 

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Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awwww the first kiss. Emmett can't trust his own brother and won't even listen to him. Alice is such a bitch getting in on this. His mom I thought would believe him I figured she knew about him and Bella.  He just let Emmett take out all his frustration and let him attack him that takes a big man to do that.  Rose need to burn in hell while being proded with rusty nails and cactus. 

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Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love his little talks with himself.  Finally it is out and they are on the same page. Doo da and hoo ha interesting names there.  I wish Emmett would just listen to Edward and see the truth. 

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Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Rose is evil and needs to be dealt with.  Ugh no one is believing him and that piece of shit he calls a father is so beyond fucked in the head tell him to leave so he can spend time with his family.  Aro planting crap in his locker that is such bullshit.  He need to get a good attorney I am sure Jeeves has one on retainer. 

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Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I am glad Bella stayed.  It just all fell in on him and could not take it any more but he handled more then most people could.  So it was Emmett's good friend Royce, maybe now we will find out why rose was saying it was Edward.  

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Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh wow so much new information , Edward is a great guy of course he help rose even after all she did to him.  I think it may be Alice that will contact him once she learns the truth.  Carlisle is a dick trying to find a way to kick him out he was looking for an excuse.  I am glad Edward is living with Charlie he needs a positive role model. 

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Date: 15 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Sleep well. Wow she got to meet Edwards parent I love that.  She kicked cauis ass it is a good thing he died or he would have been in a world of hurt if the guys got ahold of him.  So glad she is awake and safe. 

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Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That was sweet of Edward to give rose and her mom a place to live.  Rose seems to have gotten close with bellA that is good. To bad jasper is still on drugs. I wonder what it will take for Esme to get her head out of Carlisle ass and see that Edward is not a bad guy.