Reviews by mysticfighter111
Summary: Past Featured Story

All her life, initiate sorceress, Be'lah has been having nightmares of her death at the hands of a dragon-riding leech mage. Fleeing her fate, she winds up on Plaht Island, an outcast tangled up in a dark prophesy.  This legend reveals her part in freeing Prince Ehd Wyrd from his curse-if she lives. Elves, fairies, and dragons-no vampires. Part one of a potential trilogy.


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101635 Read Count: 6323
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2015 Updated: 06 Aug 2015
Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Kiss

Bella had the most marvelous idea, such a great gift for all the couples. I LOVED their first kiss, can't wait to find out what Edward needs to tell Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your enthusiasm.  The transformation spell was a wonderful gift, but it takes too much out of her, so she won't be able to do it again.  As to what he needs to tell her, I did try to keep them in character.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Training

Be'lah comes up with unusual solutions when threatened, unpredicted reactions could be what makes the difference in a fight. How will she act towards Ehd Wyrd now that Alyss clued her in?



Author's Response:

Be'lah has a lot to learn in a short time.  Her solutions are much different than what she might choose if she had formal training.  R'ness doesn't understand that Be'lah hasn't really been trained at all.  She's used to elves, who are taught to use magic from the cradle.  Even after only six months of training, and elf would have a strong grasp of the basics.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Elf

I love how you weave things from the Twilight-books into your story. I'm amazed that Mis invisible and dragon-saliva has healing properties.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  In reading through this story again, I was surprised how much of Twilight seeped in.  As far as M being invisible; he's really not.  But he's the same color as the obsidian in the caves, and he manages to hide in the darke alcoves, so still he can't be seen.  As to the dragon saliva having healing properties, that's not true either, but Be'lah didn't know.  M just wanted a taste of her.   

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Magic

Succeed or die - no pressure.



Author's Response:

R'ness is a tough teacher, no doubt.  She knows they're running out of time.  She and Be'lah may be related, but at this point she doesn't feel a thing for her.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Prophesy

Who wouldn't love a guard-dragon to take them out for night-flights? I'M curious about what M has to tell about the prophesy.



Author's Response:

Maybe I was thinking a bit too much about Jasmine's magic carpet flgith in Aladdin.  Being able to soar on the back of a dragon would be an amazing flight--probably like walking on the wings of an old bi-plane.  Knowing he would catch her if she fell, probably helps her relax.   And even here we have Bella riding on Edward's back, as he shows her the world from a different angle.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Royalty

They're running out of time, indeed. How to undo the curse without giving in to marriage?



Author's Response:

Jheyms isn't the hunter in this story, but he's still a big pain, and he has a huge impact.  All it took was a casual refusal to set him off.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Dragons

The dragons' exterior sounds so familiar :)- I like the crown on the bronze one.

That was one hell of a dragon-fight!



Author's Response:

A review on every chapter is more than I usually hope for.  It's funny, but most of the people on the island haven't really paid attention to the dragons enough to notice there's more than one.  

Thanks for commenting on the fight.  I'm never sure if I get the excitement right.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Transformations

Of all the things running through Bella's mind asking Ehd Wyrd about his feelings has taken priority - astounding! I didn't expect Alyss to sprout wings, but it's fitting. I'm glad M was willing to share his story. Bella needs to know if she's indeed the person to fulfill the prophesy.



Author's Response:

Just like the books, Be'lah doesn't focus on all that's wrong with her situation; it's all about the connection she feels with Ehd'Wyrd.  Alyss is half fairy, and she just took in a big hit of pure magic.  M's story is a hard one for her to hear.  She's always known it, but she was trying so hard to deny she had any part to play in the prophesy.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Sacrifice

Did I get it right and Be'lah destroyed the gate for good?



Author's Response:

As part elf, Be'lah's can open the gate.  Her blood can freeze it open.  Her mixed race contaminates the gate, and it reacts as if it's under attack.  Her death can destroy the gate--once it's attuned to her.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Torture

Oooh, bronze and green. The pale leech in Be'lah's dream commands a black dragon. Maybe she was right all the time and the dragons-eat-virgins-myth is just that - a myth - and there's hope that Alyss isn't dead after all .... or I'm being overly optimistic.



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the reviews.  Seeing all those in my email put a huge grin on my face.  Green-eyes and bronze scales wouldn't mean much to someone who hadn't read Twilight, but it sets off all kinds of alarms to those who have.  Usually I avoid the word bronze in my writing, since it's so much a part of Edward, it's almost cliche'.  There's still a lot of story ahead, and since these responses can be read by anyone, I try to avoid spoilers.    

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Countdown

Oh no! She gave up! The battle was horrible and of course Jhemys preyed on their feelings and put innocent people's lifes in danger to get his way. I'm so anxious to find out if the curse was lifted and what happened to everybody else. I really, really hope you found a way to make Be'lah and Ehd Wyrd somehow live.



Author's Response:

Just like Bella, my Be'lah doesn't want to go on without Ehd Wyrd.  And just like James, Jheyms uses the innocent to get what he wants.  There's still more story; I happen to enjoy happy endings.  I may be a fan of George R.R. Martin's Game of Thrones, but killing off beloved characters is a nasty habit of his.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Sacrifice

For an initiate Be'lah seems to be quite resourceful, even if she couldn't save Alyss. To me the leeches are the greater danger than the dragons. If they suck the life-force out of every living thing, why don't they destroy the dragons that way?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Be'lah is resourceful.  One of her greatest gifts is she doesn't accept anything at face value.  She wasn't going to allow herself to be sacrificed, even though everyone thinks that's just how it should be.  The leeches are very dangerous.  They could probably attack a dragon with their magic--if they want to take a chance on being eaten or flattened.  They're cowards at heart.  Dragons are also magical, and leeching a dragon would be like trying to take a sip of water from beneath a waterfall.  Leeching also requires stillness and control.  Someone who is trying to escape or fighting isn't easy to leech.  

Guns and Pies by acullengirl40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella a bakery owner in a small mountain town where she grew up has sworn off men as most of the men she comes in contact with every day are tourists, until one day a sexy bearded man walks into her bakery wearing camo. Will he end up being her prince charming or will another summer tourist win her heart.

Edward an Ex Army sharp shooter is sick of his current situation with his demanding vegan girlfriend. He is on the verge of breaking up with the green monster as he likes to call her. Will walking though Bella's bakery door make him see that he needs more sweetness in his life and finaly cut his girlfriend lose or will he keep her around out of fear of being alone

Will these two let their hearts finally decide their path in life or will they both let fear drive their hearts away from what they both need, each other.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44255 Read Count: 20430
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2015 Updated: 09 Sep 2017
Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs

First of all: never apologize for long chapters. I'm delighted about the update, I had thought you had abandoned the story. Jake is such a "dog" dog, but I guess it gests boring around the house all alone. The meet-the-parents was epic. I wonder if the bimbo goes by the name of Tanya.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache

Oh, please, please, make him ditch Tanya! She wasn't  even looking at him when he came home, texting away to God knows who. Maybe her plan B? She was so rude to Rosalie, she needs to go. Everybody else noticed he was away, didn't Tanya? I'm curious about Edward's secret project.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth

First of all I would love to taste-test at Bella's bakery. Edward shouldn't give a fluff and just enjoy the cupcake. He seems to be in pretty good shape judging from Bella's reaction and if Tanya is going to start an "epic battle" over something her boyfriend eats it's time Edward put his combat-boot down. Look forward to Edward's POV.



Author's Response:

I'd def be a taste tester as long as I dont have to clean up the mess from baking, my poor body wouldnt like it though lol. Thank you for you sweet review. yeah Edwards being a pussy right now lets hope those boots get to knockin soon. working on EPOV as we speak hoping to post it tonight or tomorrow. If you are intersted I started a blog for this story on blogger the address is gunsandpies.blogspot.com. I posted Bella's nutty monkey cupcake recipe there and I will be posting pics and spoilers to this story there as well I will put the link in my bio notes or story notes

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper

I think Edward did well and Tanya showed again that she's not just a mean, cheating liar, but also dumb. Edward should take her threat seriously, he provided her with a comfortable life she won't want to give up without a fight. If she was not following him she might have been at the clinic to get tested herself or worse because she's pregnant from whoever.  As to Edward's leg, I think he was injured badly and now has a big scar or a prosthetic leg. Edward needs some Bella-sighting and some of her delicious baked-goods.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts

If Edward needs a breathing body next to him when he's having a nightmare he should get a dog. Dogs are faithful, don't request thousand-dollar-dresses and contrary to Tanya are cuddly. What more incentive does Edward need to get rid of the cheater? Cheers to Rosalie and Esme for everything they did for Edward.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Sundays are a day of rest my ass

sprinkleofpixiemacic - I like, she's agreat friend, but don't let her burn the band-t-shirts. It's good to see Bella's awesome cupcakes get the attention they deserve.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Sunday drives and Cupcakegirl

And they're all in one place at last. Jake is his usual hostile self towards Edward, no surprise there, he, he.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man

I'm glad you're back. Alice is pushing too hard. She made Bella cry and doesn't feel an ounce of remorse. I know how to drive a stick-shift, because they're the most common in Germany. Driving-lessons with Edward is something Bella can look forward to, the car is a gem.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Be'lah is a sorceress, and prophesy foretold her part in freeing Prince Ehd'Wyrd and his family from their curse.  She failed.  Now Ehd'Wyrd and J'spurr are no longer human, but fully dragon.  Be'lah died to destroy the dragon gateway, and she was reborn as the fiery fi'nyx.  

Again she is wrapped up in prophesy, as the displaced dragons need her to lead them home.  There is another gateway in the Faen realm, and Alyss is herself a fairy.  It should be a simple quest to map a pathway through Faen, and take the dragons back home.

Nothing is ever as simple as it seems.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102563 Read Count: 4480
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2015 Updated: 15 Dec 2015
Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Royal Destiny

Alyss' cousin is a spoiled brat - who would have thought? Prince or not I don't like T'lar and his little magical seducrtion. Is he hoping to be the new ruler beside Alyss?



Author's Response:

Alyss's cousin is absolutely a spoiled brat.  T'lar has a reason for what he's doing, but he doesn't know what he's getting into. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Destiny's Pawn

The queen was very intent on getting the travellers to the castle and T'lar is adamant he and Alyss are destined to get married. I wonder what they really want to accomplish. T'lar's info is as unreliable as any fairies.



Author's Response:

That's the problem.  Everyone is working at cross-purposes, and no one knows who to trust.  I am going to try for a four day posting schedule, and hopefully finish writing this before I catch up to myself.  I know where it's going, but it's a convoluted mess getting there.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Prisoner Escape

The prophecies are not quite what T'lar makes them out to be. He said that their people are safer, because they've been following the foretellings, but the fair- and the dark-haired fairies are at war. It's so sad to see Alyss and J'spurr suffering apart.



Author's Response:

Here there are more predictions at work than just the prophesy.  There's a set of predictions related to the thrones and lineage of the fairies, and it's got everyone mixed up.  Unfortunately, it does get worse before it gets better.  Thanks again for being so kind in reading and reviewing.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Other Side

The complete prophesy desn't sound very promising, the prospect of being changed by an abundance of magic is scary. At least they are together.



Author's Response:

The prophesy is one of those things thats only understandable from hindsight most of the time.  The magic of Faen is a real risk, which is one of the things that keeps outsiders away.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Surprise Attacks

That was a narrow escape. Princess-sprytz - the little fairy?



Author's Response:

It's a little difficult to understand the sprytz.  They're calling Alyss a princess.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 War Torn

T'lar and Bree would be the perfect king and queen for a reunited kingdom. Couldn't Alyss and Bree get a hold of J'syka's powerful crown somehow?



Author's Response:

T'lar and Bree would be perfect.  Even if they could get the crown, Alyss is afraid of how it might affect her, since it's such powerful magic.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Not Yet

Cock-blocked by a mega-monster! Well, if that isn't a valid excuse to leave the bed. Ja'spurr made every thing so pretty, it's a shame. I really hope Be'lah will manage to put the giant worm to sleep, maybe add J'syka as a nightcap.



Author's Response:

The mega-monster is my husband's creation by a slightly different name.  He plays D&D, and Gorgomath is a dragon that's flying through the universe, eating everything.  When it gets to the last world, it chokes on it, and coughs up a new universe.  It's said sometimes you can sit at night and watch the stars go out.  As much as I wanted to write a graphic honeymoon night, I had to keep it T rated.  The ratings are a pet peeve of mine, owing to the fact that you need a complicit mind to understand an intimate scene.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Monster War

It would be great to just pit the two horrible fairy-queens against each other to duke it out without anymore collateral damage. Who's afraid of dragons now? - At least they're straightforward. Look forward to them finding a way out of this mess.



Author's Response:

I didn't realize I'd fallen so far behind on my responses.  There's still a lot of mess they need to work through, but you can be sure they'll get there.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Enemy Territory

That was a narrow escape. What a dangerous realm. Is Be'lah within the dome Ja'spurr created? I wonder what using all that Fairy-magic is going to do to him.



Author's Response:

At this point, the group is separated.  J'spurr and Ghar'rett are together, and the other four are together, while Alyss is in the castle.  

I like the idea that fairly-land is a dangerous place, because it's easy to think fairy's are simple, flighty, and harmless.  Nothing here is harmless!  Reading old fairy tales, before Disney got hold of them, you can see how dangerous this fantasy realm really is.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Love Slave

Can't believe he gave his crown to Lore'yn. She's even worse than J'syka. I hope Be'lah will have a means to lift the spell befoe J'spurr executes all of her evil plans. Could it be she's after T'lar? THey're in so much trouble.



Author's Response:

Lore'yn is the reigning fairy queen, which means she can pretty much get whatever she wants.  A grown up spoiled brat with unlimited magic at her fingertips; and J'spurr under her control, Lore'yn is what J'syka could turn into if she was left in charge.  They've all got a part to play here.  Thanks again for reading and reviewing.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Fairy City

Could it be that J'spurr is fighting off the love-spell somehow? I really hope he regains power over his mind soon.



Author's Response:

Fairies have powerful magic, but not enough wisdom to know what they're doing.  J'spurr is fighting for all he's worth, but the spell is pretty strong.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Faen Magic

Now they need a plan to engage the fairies in fight and force them to use up magic, and quick.



Author's Response:

The fairies will have to deal with the consequences of their choices soon.  Fate didn't shove everyone together just to leave things alone.  There's enough wrong in Faen, it needs dragons to change it.  Thanks for reading.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Lost Hope

Can't Bree be the queen to king T'lar and J'syka is free to leave because someone else claimed the throne or must it be family?



Author's Response:

She's baaaack!

You were way ahead of me on Bree being queen.  The people and the castle might reject her, because she's a fair-haired fairy.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Wedding Blues

At least they know abot Lore'yn having the wand - useful information. I'm dreading the magic working on Alyss.



Author's Response:

There is so much messed up in this realm.  The crown, wand, and necklace are all part of a set, and they work together.  Still, like the rings of Middle Earth, they're not what they seem.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Unbelievable Truths

How to free J'spurr from the spell? Lore'yn is very thorough in eliminating th e enemy and collecting power.



Author's Response:

Lore'yn is a conniving queen, that's for sure.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Uninvited Guest

Such a clever plan and idiot fool Jasper fudged it up - or is there method to the madness and the cut-off wings will help them somehow, maybe to fool Lore'yn?



Author's Response:

In taking his crown, Lore'yn took away a lot of his ability to see her motivations.  He's only starting to realize he has it without the crown.  Forcing J'spurr to cut off her wings, is what broke the spell.  One, he knew it was Alyss who was the merciful one, not Lore'yn.  Two, it was Alyss who could command him.  Three, it dimmed the compulsion, once the quest was finished.  Four, he realized this wasn't a mercy at all.  And five, he was able to see she wasn't married, and she got a chance to tell him she loved him.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Wingless Fairy

The other castle was fit for dragons, maybe this one is, too, and the fairies are not supposed to rule in the first place.



Author's Response:

The fairies really aren't supposed to rule in Faen--no one is.  The fairies of legend were flighty, simple, and uninterested in ruling.  They didn't build complex castles or cities; they lived in harmony with nature.  That's all changed, since the dragons came through the gateway and feasted on fairies, and the wanderer taught them how to organize and fight.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Queens Gambit

Damn! I hope J'spurr will be able to keep the evil queen out of his head.



Author's Response:

J'spurr is in a bad spot.  Alyss loves him, Lore'yn wants him for his military mind.  The dragons need him to lead them home.  And he just wants to settle down with his princess.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Dark Revelations

I hope it won't take that jump to save J'spurr from getting married to Lore'yn.



Author's Response:

Lore'yn has a few more tricks up her sleeve.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Doomed Groom

Oh, how I wish J'spurr would use the sword to end Lore'yn for good! What made M come to help?



Author's Response:

J'spurr was controlled too much to use the sword against Lore'yn.  Everything was set up so only Lore'yn had any control--or so she thought.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Burning Fury

That was quite the showdown. Lore'yn can go up in smoke with her tree for all I care. I'm glad J'spurr could return from wherever he was to Alyss. Lant'n was a great help so far, I hope he doesn't have asinister hidden agenda, too.



Author's Response:

Once upon a time, Lore'yn wasn't an evil witch; she was a fairy who cared about her tree.  When everything is stripped away, she still cares about that tree more than anything else.  Lant'n is a fun character, with too much power for his own good.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Faen Born

Lant'n has a twisted sense of homour and I think he only tells them enough to motivate them to do their bidding. Maybe he tells them that the gateway is useless because he neeeds them to stay a little longer to accomplish something he wants done. I wonder about little Kath'ryn's magical abilities.



Author's Response:

Lant'n definitely has a twisted way of looking at things.  He knows things he wasn't able to tell while the queen was alive.  He's been working outside the boundaries, pushing the limits of the law.  Still of all the creatures of Faen, Lepryns are least bound by the law.  Baby Kath'ryn was supposed to be born back in the human realm, according to my plans.  She had other ideas.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Lepryn Magic

Did I understand Lant'n right and Alyss could blink even between realms? That would be awesome.



Author's Response:

You understood correctly.  Alyss doesn't need a gateway, as long as she knows where she's going.  Thanks again for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Peaceful Faen

Alyss sort of confined the evil embedded in the crown and hopefully it is not going to influence Bree. She should check the sceptre, too. She is so powerful now, all that magic turned bad would be devastating.



Author's Response:

I think Alyss convinced Bree not to wear the crown unless it's absolutely necessary.  The scepter probably has a problem too, but Alyss can handle it.  Most of her more powerful magic comes through Faen, so it won't be easy for her to subvert it, even if she wanted to.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Always Forever

Finally something goes as planned, a whole day without unwelcome or dangerous interruptions and finally they are married. I guess Lant'n is responsible for bringing Alyss' dad and Ja'spurr's parents to Faen. I hope that whatever comes through the gate will wait until after the wedding-night. I wonder about Kath'ryn and what kind of abilities she might have.



Author's Response:

Don't look now, but I think you spoke too soon.  Yeah, I'd love to have a nice, easy day where nothing bad happens, but the story would be twice as long if I did.  Lant'n and the Lepryns brought the family to Faen.  Baby Kath'ryn is still a puzzle.  I have plans for her, but it's going to take time.  Only a chapter or two left now.  

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Fairy Tales

Who would have thought that the giant dragon could be put back to sleep by a lullaby? And all the peoples of Faen worked together. Alyss and J'spurr saved by a unicorn - what a reward for sacrificing themselves to save the worlds. J'syka got off easy, good luck to her new husband. And finally the wedding-night, they've been waiting so long to be able to be together, uninterrupted.



Author's Response:

I couldn't write about the land of fairies, without a little fairy magic.  Unicorns are at the pinnacle of fairy lore.  I wasn't sure how they were going to take care of the monster, but singing it to sleep was a lot better than a more violent end.  Without all the discord stirred up by the rival queens, the people were able to put their differences behind them.  Alyss and Bree insisting on everyone using magic, helped heal their two peoples.  This group is slowly dealing with damage done by the traveler. 

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Broken Door

Another chapter full of surprises and not all of them bad, like Ghar'rett turned pink by the spritz, he, he. Rose'sdragon-breath will come in useful against the creatures lurking on the other side of the gateway. I look forward to book three and wish you happy holidays.



Author's Response:

Thanks again for reading and reviewing; so sorry it's taken me so long to respond.  I've been in the process of moving for almost a year.  I moved to Texas in April, and lived with my in-laws until the first of this month, while our new house was being built.  Finding time to write has been a challenge, but now that we're in the new house--I still can't find much time to write!  It should get better the more things come out of boxes.  I'm also hoping to get into publishing my own material--if only I could find someone to help me.  One step at a time, right?  Thanks again for R&R.  

Home to Stay by Sher Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Coming home to Forks after being gone four years, everything looks and feels the same. Edward couldn’t wait to see the love of his life, Bella. She’s the one he left behind, but, first, his attention is captured by a young girl that looks just like him, and the woman with her is just who he came to see. Could the little girl be his?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74811 Read Count: 35754
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2015 Updated: 30 Dec 2017
Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Assuming the little girl is Edward's I can't understand why his parents were so evasive when he asked them about Bella. Emmett's comment doesn't help either. I hope Bella is not going to slam the door in his face.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

They have a lot of catching up to do. I still think it was wrong of Bella to make Edward's parents keep the news of Angelina's existence from their son.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella knew that Edward wanted to join the Peace Corps. If she had objections she should have voiced them before he left. While he was away, keeping in contact was next to impossible, not just with Bella, but with his parents, too. Keeping Edward out of his daughter's life because of her pride was wrong. If she missed and needed him so much Bella could have lifted the news-embargo anytime, they all knew Edward would have come home asap. Edward's mother didn't want to risk losing Angelina, so she kept Edward in the dark. It seems as if nobody was expecting him to really come home and now that he's back in Forks he's blamed for not helping in a situation he didn't even know existed. What a welcome - not. At least Angelina is happy about his return.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It's good to see Bella and Edward getting familiar with each other again. Exchanging the letters is a good way to get each other up to date. Angelina is a cute little girl.

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Summary: Edward adopts jennifer and decides to move back home for a new start and family support. He soon after meets his sister's friend Bella who lives by the beat of her own drum. Even though the whole town seems to dislike her, Alice swears she is a great friend. So many questions to be answered so read and found out.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63750 Read Count: 54495
[Report This] Published: 14 Nov 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2016
Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh, I knew it. Bella is taking care of everyone around her while there in noone looking out for her. Maybe it would have been an eye-opener for Alice's family if she had to spend the weekend in jail. I'm so, so angry with Alice. Manic depression or not - she lets Bella ruin her life because she is too cowardly to own up to her crime. I'm sisappointed in Edward, too. By now he must know that something is terribly wrong with the family-dynamics at the Cullens.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

.... or the other way 'round.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Esme needs to get a grip on all the shouting and bad-mouthing, no wonder little Jen does not want to be in her company. The way she behaved at the police-station - her son's work-place - was more than embarrassing. Who's causing a scene now?

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Could it be Alice was feeling a little rebellious - I would with parents like hers - and called Bella to the rescue? I wonder why Edward didn't ask any questions.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Junping to conclusions seems to be a Cullen-family-trait.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella made Edward think about his attitude and gave him a new insight, I'm glad they're trying for a friendship of sorts. Maybe Aro's advice about Alice and his fondness of Bella will make Edward think some more. Jenny will be so happy when she finds out that Bella is going to paint her room.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Finally Edward gets some answers and not just cryptic messages and snippy remarks. Again, the way Esme treated the traumatized little girl shows that she is not fit to look after and bring up children. She has Alice to show for it, too.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

How can Edward be so stupid to believe Bella was the one stealing and Alice be so selfish to let her friend get arrested instead? I bet she told Jennifer not to tell Edward. Can't say it enough: I hate Esme and Mike for their bias.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm glad Edward chose to spend Christmas with Bella's family and friends. His parents and sister have to get their sh** together and start to treat Edward and Jennifer right, Bella too. Christmas at the Cullens must be an unhappy, uncomfortable affair.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm not convinced that Bella's explanation of Esme's behaviour is the sole reason. Love that Edward and Charlie are getting along so well.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wouldn't we all like to know what Esme did?

Jennifer's room is a magical place now thanks to Bella. It's wonderful she's brave enough to talk to Edward.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Why would Edward willingly go to Christmas dinner and expose himself and his daughter to the mad-woman? A fine doctor we have here. I can see Alice go willingly to a doctor, but her mother? They probably have to put her in a straight-jacket. Aro made my day. I like him.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'd like to read more.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

So - I had to take a deep breath. The audacity and self-righteousness of Edward's so-called mother is making my blood-pressure soar. He should send child-service over to the hater who is obviously incapable of taking care of her own daughter. Bitch should get her life in order before she goes around accusing somebody else.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What's Esme's problem with Bella? Her exterior? She was rude to Bella and she gave it right back - not polite, but the same goes for Esme. Alice just bowled Jen over, no wonder the little girl is not comfortable with her right away.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward is a douche. I assume the joint is a cigarette and a teenage-girl spending time with a boy is not unheard of.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like that Tia wants to involve Edward so much in Jen's therapy.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Edward is such an idiot. He's always asking the wrong questions and listens to the wrong people - no wonder his daughter is unhappy with him. He's not even surprised Bella was beaten up. I hope Judge Aro gave him something to think about. Where did Alice hide her pathetic self?

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Gosh, Edward is so slow. It's infuriating how he doubts Bella on every turn, but doesn't question why Jen won't speak to Alice anymore or why she's uncomfortable with her grandmother, why Aro is trying to protect Bella. He should feel bad, too, that she was beaten up in jail - his responsability! Bella is still his advocate with his daughter despite his abysmal behaviour, if that doesn't make hm reassess he's hopeless.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Old hag sums it up nicely. Edward invited Bella to come and paint, it was not Esme's place to throw her out. Why would Jenny ever want to speak to Esme? She's always horrible around her. Poor Bella and Jennifer. I think the little girl was told not to speak or her parents would be harmed. I guess she believes that it is her fault that they were killed and she doesn't want to put anyone else in danger.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 16 May 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh Edward, he has a lot to learn. I would have expected him to ask Jennifer what made her punch the other child and I would have expected him to not just nod when told that "it doesn't matter". The reason for Jen's behaviour does matter indeed. Maybe the other child's actions were punishable under school rules, too? Jennnifer has good reason to yell at him. She needs his support and that he takes her feelings serious. Cheers to the brave little girl to make herself heard!

Like the Edward-Charlie-interaction.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 16 May 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Esme annoys me to no end and I hope Edward puts her in her place, the self-righteous cow. I think it's time for her to learn some unpleasant truths.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Hedge fund manager Edward Cullen didn't make the Forbes list this year and thinks he's a failure, just like his father and teachers in small-town Forks always told him. Only one person ever believed in him, but he left her behind to chase his fortune in New York City. Can a longtime Seattle holiday tradition bring magic and love back to his life? AU, AH, E/B, HEA. Co-authored with Sophia Amador, who also made the banner. **TOP TEN COMPLETED FICS OF DEC 2015 on TwiFanfictionRecs **

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9047 Read Count: 5238
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2015 Updated: 29 Dec 2015
Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Happy together at last. Novella or outtakes - I'd love to read both.

Happy New Year

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It sonds like a beautiful tradition. If I was living there I would definitely go to watch and listen.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think Edward's father is a very unpleasant person who has no regard for his sons feelings and needs.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like that Edward is driving a Tesla. I would like one of my own, but I didn't invest in Microsoft stock, either. Edward's father is so narrow-minded, but he had a deep impact on Edward's self-esteem.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ha, I knew it. Edward's father stole them so much joy. I'm glad Bella doesn't hold a grudge and wants to reconnect, too. Cheers to Alice for being such a big supporter.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

He shouldn't even think about Tanya's reaction and just ask Bella out. I wonder if the lack of correspondence between Bella and Edward is owed to his father, he'sjust the type to intercept letters.

The Way Home by Velley Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

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Strikhedonia (n.) The pleasure of being able to say "to hell with it".

The summer 1978 nine-year old Bella Swan and her family were driving on the English countryside when they picked up a pair of backpackers. Eleven years later Bella finds herself on a backpacking adventure of her own. Along the way Bella discovers the true meaning of adventure and discovers a new way home.

 

 

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Banner by: GeezerWench


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23398 Read Count: 2056
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2015 Updated: 25 Feb 2016
Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Eudaimonia

Too bad Eloise didn't elaborate about her mother. I'm curious, too. The night gets better and better for Bella, Eloise tells her that she loves her and now she's kissing Edward.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Quaquaversal

Edward is still very enigmatic.



Author's Response:

He certainly is. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Yoko meshi

I'd pick babysitting over harvesting grapes anytime and travelling around Europe with Edward is the icing and the cherry on top. Bella is one lucky girl.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Saudade

Essie's looks are strangely similar to those of a handsome Frenchman Bella met in London. Why does she let Jasper get away with his secrecy?

Love the banner!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Resfeber

I wonder if Bella's passport will reappear. I have a bad feeling about Jasper, too. He was very evasive about the people he was planning to meet and the Ackers don't seem to think much of him.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Let's just say this will be an interesting trip.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Solivagant

I hope Bella got some honest answers from Jasper and an apology. You better make her meet Edward again once she's visiting the Dordogne ;)

BTW the time-difference between NY and London should be 5 hours



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know about the time difference.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Fernweh

My parents would have turned grey instantly had I surprised them with the news that I'd just purchased an interrail-pass and a hiker's backpack and was leaving next Saturday. I see why Bella didn't want to involve Renee and Charlie in her planning, though.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Cockaigne

Ah, les Carons. Peut être Bella se souvient d'encontrer un Edward Caron à Londres. I really hope it's him. Can't say I miss Jasper and his secret-keeping, it's just that I'm very curious about his dealings.

Happy New Year!

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Selcouth

No time like the present for Bella to ask.



Author's Response:

Very true. Thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

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The Chicago Fire of 1871, also called the Great Chicago Fire, burned from October 8 to October 10, 1871, and destroyed thousands of buildings, killed an estimated 300 people and caused an estimated 200 million in damages. Can the love of one couple survive the fire or will it be destroyed along with everything else?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18171 Read Count: 7834
[Report This] Published: 09 Jan 2016 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Can't wait for the epi to find out how their family and friends are.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Idiot could have taken off his pants and saved himself. Too bad James didn't go alone, but caused the death of many innocent people. Edward's father had it coming, at least is was quick, a consolation for his wife. Hope Bella and Edwardcan find shelter insid the church - at least temporarily.                                                                                 

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The prospects are not good for Alice and Edward to get to marry the spouse of their choice. I doubt that Edward can sway his father's opinion about courting Bella. He doesn't seem to care for his children's input, let alone feelings, just about prestige and wealth. Who would give their daughter to a man like James?

Summary:

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Former FBI Special Agent Edward Cullen along former LAPD Homicide Detective and his-now-wife Bella Swan-Cullen; Hoodoo Man Sam Uley and his wife Angela Uley, who is a very powerful psychic; former Chicago Police Captain Emmett Cullen and his wife Lauren Cullen, also a very powerful psychic and sister to Angela Uley, have formed a detective agency, The Down on the Bayou Detective Agency.  Come along with them as they investigate the normal, strange and unusual in their files.

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31867 Read Count: 13894
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2016 Updated: 17 Jul 2016
Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 02 May 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 1

I'm looking forward to their next adventure. I guess it won't take long before Sam calls in the crew for assistance. Wouldn't it be cool to sit in the shade of a magnificent tree listening to stories from a Dryad?



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm looking forward to it also.  I'll tell you that only Sam and Edward tackle this one, but they get some "special" help.  :)

My experience with a Dryad was I saw pictures of what she was saying.  I'll confess I have "fairies" in my backyard too.  Only they don't look like the beautiful creatures of the Victorian Age artist.  They are beautiful balls of colored light, and if they get pissed off, run!  

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Case #16 - Un vampir de energie Part 9

Give my thanks to Mr. H. for helping you out. I'm always looking forward to you posting the next chapter.

It's gone, they did it - with the help of Michael. After all that Emmett experienced with his fellow-detectives, how could he doubt that the supernatural exists?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'll happily give Harry your thanks.  He always smiles when I tell him that I need his brains.  LOL.

Yes we've eliminated the current peril looking forward to the next Case File which will take place on the Navajo and Hopi Indian reservations.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Respite

A woman in Kate's position should have more manners, more grip on her emotions and her verbal filter. Now I kind of wish her to be in a "paranormal pickle". Shady Shaman sounds promising.



Author's Response:

Kate's attitude is one that Edward had to deal with when he was employed by the FBI but now he doesn't have to put up with that crap.  I wrote her into the story line to give an example of the what Edward had to deal with.

I hope you enjoy the next case file too.  Did a lot of research for it.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Case #16 - Un vampir de energie - Part 10 Fini

Poor Emmett, how could he think it was all hocus-pocus until now? The evidence was right before his eyes :) Realizing that the vampir was a scout about to bring his fellow-aliens for a feeding-spree is the stuff that causes nightmares. They've earned themselves a break.



Author's Response:

Yes they have earned themselves a well deserved break.  They will have a little respite before the next heavy duty Case File begins.  Yes Emmett is finally realizing that it's not hocus-pocus.  It's hard for a great many people to believe that psychics are cheats and liars.  My first husband was a city cop and eventually a highway patrol man and he called my beliefs all of the above.  

Thank you so much for your kind remarks and being such a loyal reader.  I always look forward to reading what you have to say.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Case #16 - Un vampir de energie Part 8

If the vampir is desperate it might get sloppy and make mistakes. He must be very powerful if they had to combine their resistance to get away unharmed.



Author's Response:

Oooo I know!  But hopefully our DOTBDA crew will be abe to come uip with something the eliminate this different type of vampire!

See you need week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 31 May 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Case # 19 - The Shady Shaman Part 5

Wow, now that's a surprise! Grandmother Spider sounds like the perfect ally for finding and securing the fetish. Matters are serious if an entity like her is needed. Poor twins and poor Bella and Angela, staying back and waiting must be torturous.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Yes she doesn't usually take on physical form, but when an Guardian Angel requesting help I think she'd take notice.  The fetish being used is very very old so I suspect that is what won her over to help the two friends.  

The families of both Sam and Edward should be use to the men being gone.  Won't be the last time either.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Case File #16 - "Un vampir de energie" Continued

Ah, they're getting somewhere, at least about the how. I'm intrigued - again.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I try to keep things a little different and not stick to the same ole tired plots.  It's so much fun reading the "gasps" in the reviews.

I'll see you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23-Endings and Beginnings

Oh my, with two more sets of twins the friends are going to have their hands full, especially if the babies are gifted :-D

Thank you.

I look forward to whatever you might write next.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Case File #16 "Un vampir de energie." Part 4

Now they have a theory what they are up against, but how are they going to fight and incapacitate such a creature? Emmett will get his chance to help, I'm sure :D.



Author's Response:

Oh our Gang will always pull through.  I believe in the HEA remember.  :D  Yes Emmett and Bella both will pay important rolls!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

See you next week??

Hard Hugs

Dinia