Reviews by Auror21
Arms by Virginia May Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Competitive shooter Bella Swan had an Olympic gold medal and dreams of another before witnessing the brutal murder of both her parents.  Now living under a new identity as a high school student in tiny Forks, Washington, she must learn to cope with  the loss of both her family and her future.  When she meets the local math teacher and her older "foster-brother", Edward Cullen, things are complicated by an instant and unexpected attraction.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158957 Read Count: 88750
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Auror21 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Love this story but are they ever going to reunite with the Cullens? How did the trial go? Are there still crazy monsters potentially after them? Any chance you can get that bit answered/ wrapped up next chapter? 

is Bella’s alias Leia because Edward loves Star Wars?

great job so far and love the character development.



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks so much. All good questions, and all coming up in future takes. 

 

Thanks again!!

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Auror21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yay!!! Thank you for the mid week update! I hope we still get another udate this Saturday. Also, congratulations and welcome to the world Joey!

This was a lovely chapter and I greatly enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to seeing Edward's (and Carlisle's) side of things. Hopefully Bella won't have to suffer for too long. We don't want her to have to be institutionalized. ;D

I just about squeeled when you said we'de be meeting vamp Edward soon. I'm looking forward to it. You have a real gift for writing. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Yes, I will update tomorrow like normal.  Vampire Edward next chapter!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Auror21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I am obsessed with this story! I check the website multiple times a day for new chapters (sad, I know), but I don't understand why there's such a gap between chapters if you say it's been completed already. Is it being beta'd as we go? Faster postings, PLEASE?! I can't wait to find out about the present day Edward and if they left town during her first visit to Forks because of Bella.  POST!!! ;-D



Author's Response:

Yes, it's being betad and edited as we go.  That's what's why the posts are a week apart.  I try to stick to a Saturday update schedule.  The Cullens didn't leave town because of Bella; they left town because of the "missing" campers.  There will be more on that later.

Thanks for reviewing!

The Body by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 403]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has a fetish that no one else in the world knows about. Except the thousands of followers on his anonymous blog. What happens when Bella works out who 'The Body ' is.

Ths was my submission to the twkink 2015 fest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121593 Read Count: 145727
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2015 Updated: 19 May 2017
Reviewer: Auror21 Signed
Date: 07 May 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very fun fic so far. I like the premis, don't think I've read about this kink in a fanfic yet. Definitely will be looking for an update.



Author's Response:

I've really developed the story but the link will be the same x

Summary:

At one hour of Dumbledore's army, Harry did a powerful spell that even Hermione hasn't known. From whom learn the "The Boy Who Lived" something like that, and why does he refuse to didn't give his classmates this skill?

PS (spoiler): This is the AU in a world where Lupine didn't teach Harry The Patronus Charm.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry Potter/Severus Snape
Genre: Action, Drama, Friendship, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Supernatural
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites E
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1446 Read Count: 37
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 05 Jan 2019
Reviewer: Auror21 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I’m really not trying to be mean here, but do you speak english as a second language? There are so many grammatical errors and missed pronouns it was hard to read. I highly recommend a beta or a re-edit if you plan to continue this. The basic idea of the story has merit.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment and reading.
I'm sorry for the mistakes, I'm not so good in English. It's not my native language, and I have no one to check it out. I will be glad, if you have time, you will write me mistakes and how to correct them.