Wow and he called her a dweeb I don't like him 

What an unexpected treat. Edward pov with quite a few questions answered about his whys.   I agree with you about the time skips had you written the passage of time it would've been very angsty and probably felt like filler

What are the chances of you completing this story?

What are the chances of you completing this story?

Really good. I still hope she's not as passive as she said in the books 

Oh my! Glad to see the update 

Maybe he's finally getting a clue. Good for Bella. That had to be so hard for her to do. 

I don't like him. He doesn't want anything serious but isn't willing to try to let her try with someone else. 

He's being a douche. I hope he's clear with her about what this means to him in terms of a relationship. He knows her past and to make her his f buddy would not be something she could handle. 

She's not going to believe him. Especially when she finds out he knows about the baby. 

A while longer. Edward is right not to rush. He needs to take it slow for both there sakes. She could could be mistaking gratitude or her first crush for something it's not. She also needs to finish healing and I disagree with Alice there is a big difference before a 19 and 29. Most people grow profoundly in their late teens and early twenties.   I'm really enjoying this Edward he's different from your typical Edward 

He really thought he could be a CEO. I wouldn't want someone that dumb in charge of anything. He has done no research to figure anything out. How could he believe such a person isn't a liar.

Wow people are vicious. I would never say anything like that. I wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy let alone authors. I would choose to discontinue reading your story and likely tell you my reasoning but never say that type of thing. I was just venting about your Edward and my inability to understand that behavior. Please try to ignore such horrifying comments. I hope the person at least had the decency to sign it but in learning that many of the nastier comments come from anonymous cowards. 

However, on bright note I enjoy most of your stories and I agreed with your judgment not to include lemons in your last story. It was sweet and had you included lemons it would have changed the tone 

Please tell me it's an HEA because same has begun to show the classic signs of an abuser. He wants to wear down her esteem. 

He still has done enough to redeem himself. I hope Bella sticks to her guns about him and gives mike a try if only for Edward to truly appreciate what he did. 

James is her brother isn't he? So did we get the update because I asked and can I convince to give us another one soon? Today perhaps? I'll even settle for tomorrow? That's generous.  Lol

PS he's an even bigger dirt bag then I thought and would like to see him get another beating 

He still is a selfish beep beep beep. I really don't like him. You really going to make us wait for Thursday. 

But he has a hidden agenda.   he is not serious about this and Bella is?  how can anyone wonder at Bella being cautious and suspicious.  He I think she's  giving him better than he deserves considering how often he has let his other head talk for him.

It's Carmen. 

Please update soon.  I really don't like Edward.  I actually hope she dumps his cheating cowardly assistance.   I don't remember if I've ever rooted against BxE HEA.

Please update soon.  Edward is a monster.   They're is no redeeming this group.  I hope Bella finds some peace if only to get them all tossed in jail. 

Oh my keep them coming.  Excellent update.

So Carmen is a traitor?  Love the story please continue the quick updates

Oh my goodness. Please keep the updates coming.  Although I honestly don't know how this can end as BxE with their past. 

No, really she wants to be with this effed up family.  Wow Stockholm Syndrome has taken root.  Please have her come to her senses.  She can't be in love with him after everything.   He cheated on her and so many other things   please he should after least have to win her over.

Update soon please.

Best tell off ever.  I hope you continue you this story.  I'm going to love his reaction. 

We're almost at the prologue.  Is she going to hear things from him that make her walk away because she feels less than or because they are awful to her.  Rose and the rest of the cullens are full of crap and Edward better choose her or else.  I'm tired of her taking everyone's crap.  She is more powerful then the wolves or the witches combined.  It's called hybrid vigour.  When you combine two thing that are usually fairly homogeneous within themselves,  the new thing usually is much heartier because it takes on the strengths of the two.  Bella has already floored the witches with her power and I think the fact that she is mating with Edward before her 21st should tell the wolves her power.

I'd like to know everyoneev reaction to their mating.  I would like to see Rose get her comeuppance.  I would also like for her to remember that only her family stood by her and defended her.  Alice sat on the sidelines and Carlisle was going to abuse his powers by forcing her to leave and the hateful things the senior Cullen said.

Wow what a colossal jerk.  He is incredibly carelessly cruel. How is he that dumb as a boss?  He should be able to measure his words with a little more care.

Edward is really a coward.  I really hope she doesn't fall back into his arms.  He really isn't trustworthy.