Reviews by SnowGoose
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263184
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Birthdays and Unexpected Visitors

I think that Edward should tell Alice abo hearing her tell her friends back in high school that she olny befriended him to get closer to Jasper.  I think it is the only way that they could be friends; if she realizes her part in curting him and making him feel that no woman could be trusted.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  The next chapter will be a great one for sure, but as a loyal reader and reviewer pointed out so far most of the chapters have been just that... a great one.  I know many of you are sick of Rose, and we assure you that there will be closure there soon.  There is not much redemption for a character like Rose, however there are things happening that will at least show that Emmett is not in fact an idiot who allows Rose to be poisonous to all.  Many of you are worried that the introduction of Mr. James Hunter will be a dangerous situation for Bella.  James Hunter has been in the story all along, and he is a very volatile person, and there will be more to come that involves him in the near future.  Alice is showing a bit of a change, but I think she knows she has made her final stand alongside of Rosalie.  Keep in mind within days of chapter 24 posting that Enduring His Cimmerian View will post and the first out-take to post will be Bella’s POV up to and through chapter 24.  We waited to give you Bella’s POV until Chapter 24 posted for a very good reason... sex.  Yep get out your big girl panties and prepare yourselves for that, because it is going to be posting on Thursday, the BPOV will post hopefully next Saturday.  There weren’t a lot of questions, but there is still some confusion.  Rose and Jasper are Esme’s niece and nephew, whom Esme and Carlisle were given guardianship of when they were around 10/12 respectfully.  Rose is older.  Edward’s mother is MIA, but for all accounts and purposes he believes she is still alive.  Bella’s birth mother was Renee who died of Cancer when Bella was 3.  Charlie is Bella’s birth father and he is dead.  Sue Swan was Charlie’s wife and Bella’s Step mother.  Harry Clearwater is Sue Swans brother, and tormentor of Bella.   We are excited to see your reviews from the next chapter as well as the BPOV that will post.  Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 24 teaser... subject to changes in the beta process.

I’m in the middle of teaching when my phone rings.  “Excuse me. Tia, please carry on for me.”  Tia gives me a smile and takes over from where I left off.  “Hello, Caius. I was just going to step into my office.  How can I help you?”

I hear some chatter in the background.  “Edward, I’m sorry for bothering you.  Everything here is a big clusterfuck right now.  I was just calling to give you an update on the Bree Tanner situation.  We’ve had three more ex-students come forward with allegations claiming that Mr. Hunter did similar things to them, so the state police have taken over the case.  I was one of the people they called in to assist, as they’re planning to speak to all of his ex-students. The officers got here yesterday and worked through last night and this morning.  They need to speak to you, as well.” I sigh, rubbing my face, even though I had already expected this information. “This looks really fucking big, Edward.  From what I’ve gathered, he targets a student in their junior year, mostly just degrading them at first. Then, when they enter their senior year, he starts to get physical with them at the same time he begins the process with another student.  The three girls that came forward were manipulated into sleeping with him.  Due to the fact they were all over eighteen at the time, they can’t get him for statutory rape, but are charging him with aggravated rape and extortion.” 

I pull at my hair, hoping that James gets a shitty lawyer. A good one could use this to their advantage. “What’s the bond amount he’s being held on?”

There is a loud sigh and a chill travels down my spine.  “Nothing. He was released pending charges after questioning.  The charges were just filed, so now the officers are on their way to pick him up again.”  We talk a little more about some other things before saying our goodbyes. 

The rest of the day passes in a blur. The State Police being here is making life more stressful than it already is.  Marcus sent in extra counselors and staff to help out with the backlash of shit that’s going on in Forks. 

By the end of the week another three ex-students have come forward claiming that Mr. Hunter forced them into physical relationships with him. A current student has also come forward to say he had just recently started verbally abusing her.

Feral by opalaline Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella signed up for a summer archeology program, she thought she'd be exploring fossils and sedimentary rock. Little did she know, she would find herself the primary caretaker for a man with no verbal capacity or human interaction skills-a feral man.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115615 Read Count: 42934
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Dec 2012
Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

awww 

GOD Edward is soo sweet

Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

this is so sweet.  I hope Bella ia ok

Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I am proud of how Edward stood up to Charlie.  I love this story and hope you update again soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324374
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation

Please come back to this story

Conventioneers by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?

 

conventioneers


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30227
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Jul 2013
Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap

I love your stories and I am on pins and neadles hoping for more of this one.

Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Year Two; Day One

Um it's getting hot in here......

 

Summary:

Edward's been dead for years, trapped in his former home that was just purchased by Bella Swan, a woman more perceptive than most. Will he scare her away like the others, or will they form an unusual bond between the living and the dead?

 

    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6861 Read Count: 1570
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2012
Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was truly beautiful

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 11 part 5

WOW...... What a Bitch

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hates Valentine's Day, and everything about it. Her past experiences in love have left her with a jaded view on relationships. After quitting college, she gets a job at a diner, where she makes friends and finds herself in a new job. What happens when the CEO gets under her skin, will she open up to what she really wants from him, or run off and hide?  all human/olderward - w/a smidge of daddykink. 

Banner by the talented Christag Banners.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47353 Read Count: 109804
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2015 Updated: 18 Feb 2015
Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My best friend and I call valentine's day SAD.. Single Awareness Day.  we both are over 40 and have one cat each.  Yup  Sad fits.0

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28879
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jake is a first class a**.  I hope Bella bought some new bras during her shopping trip.  cant wait to meet Edward.

Summary:

 

Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126007
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I don't think Bella would allow Edward to get so close to her, (enough to nearly kiss her) if she was in a romantic relationship with his son.

Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

poor Edward.  This has got to be torcher.  Just curious does Emmett havr a secret crush on Roselie, His type of girl is basically her but younger.

Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I wonder if Tia feels the same lack of anything for Edward as he feels ... or rather doesn't feel for her?

Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

In think that Emmett and Bella have never really been boyfriend /girlfriend.  I think that after Edward told Emmett to stop being an ass and acting like he is doing someone a favor just by talking to them and actually be nice and stick up for the people being teased, he saw Bella being Bullied and decided to tell the kids at school to cool it because she was his Girlfriend.  I also think that he told Bella about his crush on Rose and when she developed feelings for his dad she told Emmett how she felt.  I am sure Em has heard her calling out for Edward in her sleep.

Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I actually think that Emmett is actually treating Bella more like a sister than a girlfriend. I don't dout that he loves her but as a friend only.

Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Of course it is a slow burn. Bella is still in High School  for ceying out loud and edward still thinks she is Em's Girl.

Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OK I love Tia.  I wonder if Rose and Emmett have had the talk that Edward and Bella need to have.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Summary: Edward adopts jennifer and decides to move back home for a new start and family support. He soon after meets his sister's friend Bella who lives by the beat of her own drum. Even though the whole town seems to dislike her, Alice swears she is a great friend. So many questions to be answered so read and found out.

Banner by: Canadiantwilight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63750 Read Count: 54495
[Report This] Published: 14 Nov 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2016
Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I love this story.

Reviewer: SnowGoose Signed
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

MORE PLEEEEEESE  this is a good story.