Reviews by Andromida1964
Changing Lives by ineedcoffee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Five years have passed since Edward left Bella in the woods. Both Bella and the Cullens' have experienced great tragedy since they last saw each other, but what happens when they meet again, and what is the meaning of the prophecy? Bella OOC. BxJas

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118495 Read Count: 21165
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Aftermath

I really enjoyed your story....took me awhile to read all these chapters though...lol.

Summary:

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Sequel to Bella’s Revenge.  Bella has been abducted by Edward’s brother.  Edward wages war on anyone who stands in his way of finding his one true love.  Brother against brother.  Can he save her before she’s killed?  Before she’s turned?  Or before she falls in love?  How can Edward ever forgive his brother?  The one he trusts.  The one known as…Jasper.   

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81658 Read Count: 24568
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm really liking your story....I do have to admit though that I like the idea of Jasper and Bella together....the real Jasper though......thanks, Diane



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I'm actually liking that idea too.  I may have to use it in another story.....

 

Here is your preview:

 

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Her body fit perfectly against mine.  I held her closer to me as her moans increased.  I couldn’t believe the feelings that were coursing through me.  I was already a goner.  I loved this woman and wanted her to know it with every thrust. 

She felt incredible, as though she was made for me.  Her beautiful breasts rubbed against my stone chest violently as my animal side took over.  I thrust hard and fast, reveling in her moans of pleasure.  I could not stop the noises that came from me either.  Nor did I want to.  I wanted her to know what she was doing to me; that she was driving me to the brink.  Any moment now I would come deep inside her and feel the white-hot streak of pleasure as my body warmed due to the sensation.    

I pressed my lips to hers forcefully and my tongue flew in her mouth.  Her tongue danced with my own, massaging it and biting it gently.  It sent a shiver down my spine and I wrapped her leg around me, driving me deeper.

“I-I’m getting close…” she breathed.  My thrusts increased.  I was having a hard time controlling myself, even though I promised I would.  I wanted her to feel her, consume her and possess her.  I gave her my soul (if I do have one) and took hers.  We were one.

Her hands found their way into my hair and she pulled me closer, if that was even possible.  Her fingernails felt incredible against my scalp and I moaned into her mouth.  They trailed down my back slowly as she attacked my neck.  I lifted up off her gorgeous body slightly to give her better access. 

Afraid that she would lose her contact with me, she wrapped her legs tightly against my hips, matching my thrusts perfectly.  The movement drove me wild and I reached up to grip the headboard as the white-hot streak started coursing through me.  My release was imminent.

I felt her shaking and trembling; her hands now gripping my forearms tightly.  She tensed up and her inner walls clamped down on me as she screamed my name as she came.  I threw my head back as my orgasm hit hard.  My mouth pulled back, exposing my teeth and a growl escaped my chest.  At that moment, I was an animal.  My control was gone.

I fell against her, laying my head between her breasts.  I listened to her breathing return to normal as I continued to hold her close to me.  Her hands were in my hair and she comforted me.  She always comforted me and I pressed my lips to hers gently.

“That was just…wow,” I said against her beautiful lips.  That was what she did to me; I couldn’t think straight.

She closed her eyes and sighed happily.  She looked into my still-black eyes.

“Thank you, Jasper.” 

 

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great Chapter...I still wish it would have been the real Jasper. I like him and Bella together. The story is awesome either way, I am enjoying it. Thanks for taking the time to write it for us. :)



Author's Response:

Well, thank YOU for reading it.  And reviewing.  It means a lot.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Secret Lives by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

During a night out with the girls, Bella Swan, head accountant at a top pharmaceutical company, meets a handsome stranger. After one dance and an undeniable connection, their night is cut short and she never learns his name. Soon after, Bella is introduced to her newest co-worker.  Can she work with the new accountant and remain professional at the same time.

 

Entry for the Office Romance Challenge


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4396 Read Count: 478
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 11 May 2010
Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Makes me want to get an office job. But of course I would end up with the smelly guy who never takes a bath. <sighs> Loved this Mizzdee...you should take this further.

Andromida



Author's Response:

You are way too funny girl.  If I wasn't married, I would wish for an office and co-worker like Edward.  Edward is going to be so fun to write in this one.  I will continue with this story because all that sexual tension is just dying to get out.  I know what you're thinking...I should have put "you know who" in this story but that just wouldn't have worked for this one.

Well, you know what is occupying my mind right now with my other stories so this one has taken a back seat. I hope to get back to it soon though.  I'll let you know when they are coming...the chapters I mean.  Thanks for the love and the coffee - D

Memories of Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Bella Swan wants nothing more than to prepare for her future.

When Edward Cullen moves to town he quickly realizes that he wants nothing more than Bella Swan.

Will her painful past and his recent mistakes keep Bella from seeing the man Edward truly is?  Can she let Edward in?  Can the two form that lasting bond that can never be broken?  Or will the heartaches and tragedies tear them apart for good?

Rated NC-17 for some strong language and eventual mature content.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 199361 Read Count: 9583
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Teenagers In Love

Jake, what can I say about Jake? I still don't trust him no matter how nice he pretends to be. I mean a couple of weeks ago he was saying things that men say with double meanings behind them. And now he wants to kiss her. If she decides to sleep with him she had better check into a heart-felt I Love You first.

I guess when Edward finally arrives she will have a struggle going on between whats right and wrong. The heart verses the mind. Am I right?

Loving your story and I am looking forward to the next update. :)



Author's Response:

Ah good point there Miss Diane.  Sure he says he loves her in his texts but anyone can say that.  The only "I love you" she's heard from him comes with a "you're my best friend" right after it.  Nice catch.  Now all he seems to think and talk about is how much he wants her and she wants him.  His one track mind is going to push Bella to her limits but will she end up on that track with him...that's the question???

Yes, when Edward shows up it's going to throw her whole world upside down.  She's going to seem like an absolute lunatic for awhile before she figures out what's going on.  It's going to be a painful ride for poor Miss Bella but she'll come out of it so much stronger than when she went into it.  I'm ready for a strong Bella, aren't you??

Thanks for the review lady.  I know you see this early and ask me questions when you read it but it's good to hear what else you're thinking that you never say to me.  Thanks for accepting all my craziness and keeping me in line to get this one done.  The rest are going to go fairly easily.  Thanks for the cups...Love ya tons - D

 

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

That was a very vivid picture on the beach. I was shocked that they don't even like each other. I'm going to go read the next chapter. You're a very good writer....Diane.



Author's Response:

Thanks Diane.  I'm so glad you liked it.  If you're shocked now...I'll have you really confused when they actually meet each other.  Thanks for the encouragement...D

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - A New Beginning

Bella and Alice stay very much in character. I agree with Alice, I'm not much of a Jacob fan. I wonder what he has done to her? Diane



Author's Response:

I do love how Bella and Alice are with each other.  I try to keep them that way as much as possible. Jacob does a number on Bella's head.  You'll get hints here and there but Bella won't tell the whole story about them for a while.  Thanks...D

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The First Day

Oh I like that Rosalie's a good looking genius. I know that sounds horrible of me to say. I had never thought of her, that way, and I like it. I'm still curious about what happened between Bella and Jake. Great chapter.....Diane



Author's Response:

I've always loved Rosalie's character and I wanted to make her smart and strong enough to handle what comes along with the beauty.  I want her to be able to kick some ass and still have that quiet beauty that doesn't make her the conceited type.  That's always the characteristic I hated in her the most.  The one that says "I'm beautiful and I know it".  In this story, she is actually going to be the glue that holds them all together.  She is going to be Bella's strength when she needs it.  I really hope you like the next chapter. It will explain a little about Bella and Jacob.  Thanks...D

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - My Boyfriend's Back

Sounds like Bella is a distraction for Jacob. Okay so when do Jasper and Edward come onto the story? I take it there will be no Carlisle. *sniffs*  Good Chapter! :)



Author's Response:

That sounds like a good description for Jacob. Sorry hun...I love you but no Carlisle. He remains the dad in this story.  D

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Alice's Missing Man

Awwww, tell the pixie.I bet Jasper kicks Jake's ass on the soccer field. :)



Author's Response:

Sometimes I wish that were the case but you'll see later how Jasper feels about Jacob.   Thanks..D

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Mr. Whitlock Arrives

I loved the way you described Jasper it was almost poetic. I'm glad he is finally in the story, and Alice is happy, Now for Edward. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Diane.  That's the best compliment I've gotten.  To me Jasper always has this quiet confidence about him.  He is the most graceful of them all. He needs to be portrayed that way.  I just love Jasper.  D

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Happy Birthday To Me

Edward is such a sweetheart, That makes me wonder what happened between them in the opening? Great Chapter:).



Author's Response:

I unfortunately can't answer that question right now.  I wish I could but that would give away the entire story. Thanks...D

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - From Anger to Something Else

I loved this chapter. They all seem so appealing together. I can't wait to see what happens next. Edward can be such a sweet young man, with the right Bella motivation. :)



Author's Response:

Yes hun.  He will definitely get some Bella motivation.  Just not now.  He'll be back soon though.  I won't keep him gone for too long.  Lots of love...Dee

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Here We Go Again

Great Chapter...I caught the double meanings behind Jacob's lies. I also understand why she would fall for that broken voice. That always helps convince us women that they are sincere. When you want to believe someone you will no matter what age you are. Glad she called him out on his crap.

I can't wait for Edward and Emmett to move there. Things should get heated up then.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for taking the time to share your story with everyone. It's really good. :)

 



Author's Response:

Jacob never told Bella the truth before and hurt her in a lot of ways.  For her to believe what he's telling her now shows how much she wants to love him and have that returned.  I'm glad she called him out too.  She's been carrying a ton of frustration and hurt that finally came out.  I guess public speaking is really helping her.  However, it might be a little off the mark this time.  Emmett and Edward's turn isn't up yet.  Yes, things will get more interesting for the girls when they show up.  Thanks girl. Much love...Dee

 

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Bella's Roller Coaster

It had to be Edward or else I will have to throw a fit...lol. I hope that Edward didn't see it. That would be sad for Edward. It's hard to let go of the first person that you've ever been attached to. But Jacob is so wrong for her and I hate that he is playing his Jacob games.

I hope Edward doesn't give up on her. Great Chapter!

-Diane

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Love, Loss and Longing

Another great chapter Mizzdee. I love the way your chapters flow and are always filled with just the right amount of detail. I don't want Jake to be with Bella :(  Please bring Edward and her back together soon. EDWARD, EDWARD, EDWARD. Okay maybe that was a little much...giggles.

I love that you told things from Edwards POV and I am taking it from the little hints here and there that Edward was there and did dance with her last chapter.

I will be waiting to see what happens next chapter, please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks girl.  I'm glad you still like it.  I so appreciate the suggestions you made for this chapter or that last part just wouldn't have been right. I don't think anyone wants Jacob with Bella but he's gonna be taking advantage of Bella's little lapses in control for a little while still.  Edward and Emmett will be back really soon.  We'll see what happens when they get to town.

Thank you so so so much for working with me and listening to my craziness when things aren't working right.  You're the best, super smart beta / friend ever.  Dee

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - A Month Can Change Everything

Okay does it count that I indeed wanted to cut off your fingers...J/K. Damn girl you took that down to the very last second. I was so mad I could have spit. Now I am so greatful that it didn't happen that I am considering just slapping you instead, kidding again.

This was truly a well written and exciting chapter. I can't wait to read Edward,s pov in the upcoming chapter. Love ya, Diane,



Author's Response:

I'm sooo sorry that I almost gave you a heart attack with this, hon.  I would like to keep my fingers if you don't mind.  I would like to say thank you to my man Charlie for stopping that before it went any further.  They both wanted it but she may want something better soon.

Thanks, as always, for everything you do for me.  You are a definitely my other half girl.  TTYL - D

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - There's A New Family In Town

 Okay I fell in love with this chapter. I know, I know I am a Carlisle lover. But this was a very well played out chapter. I want to be apart of their family. It all felt so very real to me.

 I loved Edward taking things out on the soccer ball over that week-end. Em and him at the gym...can I hand them a towel please...hehe...hot. Em isn't a dummy and it was refreshing to see him as intelligent with a sense of humor.

  Esme's love for her husband and her family was beautiful. Who would have ever thought she had such a sense of humor. I guess thats where Emmett got his from.


 I loved the airport, I could feel the love between Carlisle and Esme and it gave me goosebumps.

 Edward in the bathroom talking to himself. :)

 Great Chapter Mizzdee. I am certainly looking forward to reading more about the new family in town.



Author's Response:

I've been in Edward's shoes and it is very therapeutic to take the frustration out on the ball.  Word of advice to Edward - make sure there isn't anyone on the receiving end of that ball when it's kicked...not pretty. 

I wanted to be able to show the family dynamic.  They are very well off but don't act that way.  They definitely aren't the stuffy type...they know how to have fun.  Emmett and Esme are very much alike and Carlisle and Edward balance them out.  It's really going to be Emmett that keeps Edward from flipping out for awhile when he can't get what he wants. So he has to be the smart, serious, funny and sensitive man all rolled into one.  Damn I love Emmett!!!  but you already knew that.

Thanks for the review and, as always, the cups.  You keep me going and keep me sane lady.  Thanks - D

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Making New Friends

Ah, Edward is such a sweetheart to ask for the kiss. Where does one find a man like that? I love how Esme has a lot of personality and love in your story. She and Emmett aren't just there in the background. And Carlisle the loving husband and father. I will not make a naughty remark here, but I want too.

The snowball fight was good, sounds like you may have had a couple of them yourself. I know I have, although Edward would have been nice to hide behind a tree with...shoo Emmett, go away. : )

Very well written, as always and descriptive enough to feel like I was right there spying on them. Can't wait for your next update. Tons of Love. Diane



Author's Response:

Those kind of men are out there, babe.  They're few and far between but they are there.  You know Emmett is one of my absolute favorites.  There had to be more to him than muscles and a smile so I brought him to life.  Esme needed to be the loving caring mother that Edward sets his standards by but she also needed to be able to handle Emmett so a sense of humor was necessary. Carlisle is quite the romantic and, over the years, Edward has watched and learned from him how to treat a girl. You will see a lot of Carlisle's personality in Edward.  Emmett wasn't lying when he said that Edward acts more like he's fifty than fifteen.  He's too much like his dad.

And yes, I have had many, many snowball fights with overbearing brothers who are ready to crown themselves champion. Although I've never had someone like Edward to run to for cover.  It would have been nice though. Oh well, a girl can dream.

Thanks for the great review hun.  I will get the next one out as soon as I can.  Love ya tons - D

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Life's Ups and Downs

Finally they see each other again. :) I am excited to see what will happen next. It didn't take ole Emmett long to put his plan in action to steal Rosalie, did it...lol...go Em.

I love how Edward and Bella went right for the hug though. Everything was so sweet till Jessica came along. Bella broke my heart thinking she wasn't enough.

Great chapter hun. Loved the humor with Alice and the ski's.

-Diane

The Accused by mizzdee Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Detective Edward Cullen has a good life…great friends, a job he loves, and a family that means everything to him. One chaotic night thrusts him into his biggest case ever as he races the clock to save his best friend's life.

Written for the A Picture Says It All Anonymous contest. Based on picture prompt 10

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9056 Read Count: 219
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 27 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Crime

I love the two sides of Edward in your story. The loving family man and the all business homicide detective. I will be looking for the next chapters to come in the future. I want to know what the out come will be for Emmett and if Rosalie will stand behind him knowing that he may have cheated on her. The door slamming behind Edward and Emmett screaming out as it shut was very dramatic.

Edward is a wonderful father and husband. I would love to read more about his family and of course, I want to know what they will have. I hope it's a boy. Great job, great story. Thanks for sharing it with us, Diane

Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Could This Get Worse

 I think adding the lawyer was a great twist and conflict of interest. Edward's family is the sweetest vision of love. I know its going to be hard for him to miss out on so much time with that newborn baby of his.

 Emmett is in an awful situation and pulling others down with him. It's nice that you allow him to be a real person and not just comic relief. He actually has a brain and apparently a body that can't be enough of a 'bad boy' at times.

 Great Chapter, then again, I expect no less from you. You're an awesome writer.

Life In The Balance by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

Bella’s hopes, dreams, life and future were violently ripped away. She finally finds the strength to do what it takes to save her sanity but at what price? Can the man hired to help her remain professional long enough to save her life?

Warning:  This story contains violence, abuse and death. If you are sensitive to those issues, this isn’t the story for you.

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Awesome banner made by Rosalynn (Rosalynn7885)

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 266053 Read Count: 14118
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2010 Updated: 31 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Andromida1964 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - How I Got Here

This is one of the best beginning chapters I have ever read. I am looking forward to reading every single chapter you write of this. :)



Author's Response:

One of these days, if I can find it again, I'll share the picture of the view I described in the beginning.  It's beautiful.  You know how nervous I am about this one lady.  Thanks for standing with me through this one.  Lots of love - D