Reviews by Pixie8401
Summary: Past Featured Story

FBI psychologist Bella Swan is being stalked by one of criminals she helped put behind bars. When she is forced to leave her home town to lay low for a while, she meets the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. Is he really who he says he is, or is he working for the stalker?

Thank you NoelleSeven for the banner!!!!

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277257 Read Count: 40875
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 May 2011
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 So Far Away

I started reading this story and after chapter 1 I thought I'd read this before. 

i had to check and I had read this on fanfiction and was pleasantly surprised to see you had posted it there as well. I was afraid there was some plagiarism happening.

I totally loved reading it before and will read it again  

 

 

 

 

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923183
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please don't pull the fic. I look forward to your updates all the time. 

Im not sure if I've ever given you feedback but I'm loving the story. If you decide to pull the story can you tell me how it ends??? 

If you've had bad reviews... Don't listen to them. They don't know what they are talking about and what would a story be without a few cliff hangers. You rated this story for a reason and you have every right to write what you like. I started writing a story a few years ago and hardly got any reviews. I lost heart in the story and haven't been able to go back to finish it off. 

Take it easy 😉

Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Involuntary Rapture

Omg I thought this was an update and I was going to find out what they are doing to bella. You got me!!! I'll be looking forward to feb 11

😏



Author's Response:

Im sorry, I didn't want to tease, i just was feeling a bit like pulling the fic. And I didn't want any more trouble.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Born to parents living a rich and glamorous lifestyle, Bella had never felt as if she belonged in their world where life often felt fake and pretentious. Wanting more out of life and wanting to make a worthwhile difference, Bella assumes a fake identity and heads off to spend her last summer before college doing something real and meaningful. Her journey starts with meeting a handsome stranger, raised to help those in need—and to detest the rich. What happens when he finds out her secret?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202993 Read Count: 68922
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: I'll Stand By You

I hope you are ok!!! I have a friend going through the same thing and she now suffers from anxiety and her 14 year old son has threatened to commit suicide. Look after you and your daughter first. You are more important than updating this story. 

Im sure we can be more patient under the circumstances. 

Take care

Grace 

Summary:

 

Tragedy strikes young Bella and Emmett as a horrific car accident claims the life of their mother. Charlie looking for a new start moves both children and himself to the small friendly town of Forks, Washington. What none of them expected was the bonds to a certain family of vampires that they all would forge and the unexpected turn of events that would lead to shocking discoveries and unimaginable life changes.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Erotica, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145626 Read Count: 40051
[Report This] Published: 17 Sep 2012 Updated: 17 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54: A Born Goddess

Please say that this story isn't finished!!!! Lots of questions still left unanswered. Like what happens to Alice and davey? What happens with the volturi?

the story is marked as completed it it doesn't feel that way. Is there a sequel?????



Author's Response:

there will be a sequel, once i get some of my other stories finished i will start on the sequel to this one. lots of good stuff to happen in this story. thank you for ur review. glad ur that interested in it..it was my first. thanx again.

Summary: Past Featured Story

They survived falling in love and having four children. Now, Geekward and Nerdella are parents of teenagers. Say a prayer for them for they are in for a bumpy ride. But, a ghost from the past is rearing his ugly head. Follow along as Geekward and Nerdella deal with having teens, battle with the blast from the past and why is Demetri hugging a cow? ANSOL/TGGTP Sequel. ExB AH/AU

STTD

Thanks to Evilnat for the amazing banner! You are the bomb, girl


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269577 Read Count: 89458
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2012 Updated: 26 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: A Parent's Worst Nightmare

Oh my god! I've loved the 2 previous installments of your trilogy. 

 

Why not use Bella as bit with the security detail hiding as well as police to capture him. 

 

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717373
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

You have the most awesome imagination. I love your stories. I have been following your stories for a while now and it upsets me when people want more from you. There is a thing called real life and we can all be swamped with what it dishes out. 

Dont listen to those douche bags that can't accept how often you update. I started a story on fan fiction and I think it has been almost a year and a half since I have updated. Things get in the way and now my kids are growing up and 2 are at school now and the fact that 2012 was a bad year for most people I know. I ended up breaking my wrist and giving myself concussion which has in turn made me lose my short term memory. It is slowly coming back but these hurdles are unexpected. 

Keep your chin up and keep writing. When I receive notification that you have updated your stories. I have to stop what I'm reading to read your next update. 

😄

Summary: Past Featured Story

ddkc

 

ddkc

Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814520
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 244: Chapter 244

I would have jumped him and made him continue

Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 255: Chapter 255

Still doesn't explain why he was acting like a complete douche bag. And I hope we find out this tidbit of information sue and bill has!!!! 

Bring on the next chappie😊😊😊😊😘

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when dysfunction meets dysfunction? Neither Edward nor Bella are prepared when fate brings them together. Will they be able to overcome the odds and find happiness? Or will the ghosts of their past keep them apart? Canon coupling, but non-canon families. Dark themes, high emotion, and standing tissue alert. AH

 

silent wishes


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed, to read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142814 Read Count: 100082
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2013 Updated: 04 May 2015
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Omg! I have never cried so much with a story I've read. 

You are truely a talented writer. You can bring out the emotions on not only the characters but the readers as well. 

Looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully get to some chaps without crying. 

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11 is not showing up on twcs. 

Loving thr story so far. I want to see rose and Tanya get what's coming to them. A few spelling and grammar errors but otherwise well written. 

How to Forget by Shadow Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

HTF banner

 

Where do you go if you don't know who you are, and what if you find you don't want to remember?  Edward finds himself in Forks under suspicious circumstances, can Bella help him discover who he truly is?  BxE AH  NC-17 for lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131184 Read Count: 54714
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2013 Updated: 16 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I know that there are more chapters to read but I don't think Emmett has schizophrenia at all. I think the same people after Emmett are after Edward or Emmett hit Edward in ine of his episodes. I'm so confused. 



Author's Response:

Let me unconfuse you--Emmett is a true schizophrenic, and had never met Edward before Bella introduced them.  Interesting idea, but that's not where we're headed.  Hope that helps!

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272447
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I started reading this story this weekend. I was so entrapped with it that I haven't gotten much sleep and my children have worn the brunt of my tiredness. So far it has been that good that I couldn't put it down. 

 

I understand and the pressures of real life that you have put your story in hiatus but I hope you find time and inspiration to continue this story soon. 

 

Love it so far. 😊

grace xx

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: None

After this chapter The story has been pulled byThe administrators. Is there anywhere I can read the rest of the story ?

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

mm

 

Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

fs


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 10 Part 6

Just curious... You updated chapter 10 part 6 but you didn't post part 5. Will you be doing that because it felt like I was missing something. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

bannner

Isabella is an English woman, trying to escape a marriage she doesn't want. Edward is a Scottish Laird, with a soft spot for a damsel in distress and a hate for the English Redcoats that pursue her, but what does he do with her now that he has saved her? He has no choice, other than to bring her home, but he wasn't counting on falling for the lass on the journey to Castle Menzies.

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32098 Read Count: 136771
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2015 Updated: 07 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Hi, 

I've noticed the the sequel, my lairds Nairn has been removed. I was hanging out for an update and when I got notification via email that it ha been updated, the whole story has been taken down. 

I also had notification of Reckless bella was a new story but that has also been taken down. 

 Hoping all is good with your stories. 

Summary:

Head over Heels

 

Can a broken boot heel mend a broken heart and lead to a HEA?

 

Save


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1610 Read Count: 2970
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2015 Updated: 15 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's a good start to a full story. Will you be continuing or leaving as a one shot?

Summary: Past Featured Story

SYTYCD

 

The competition is fierce. Dreams are at stake and a budding romance between All-Star, Edward and contestant, Bella are the talk to of the competition. Not to mention jealousy and bitterness from fellow contestants. Will Bella's dream become a reality or will her dreams be dashed before she even gets a chance to compete? Will Edward open his heart to the sweet brunette who captured his attention at the auditions?

 

"And America's Favorite Dancer is..."

 

 

Banner by the talented Mina Rivera

fs

 

ON HIATUS


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209773 Read Count: 45867
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2015 Updated: 30 Nov 2016
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: A Dream Fulfilled

I can't wait to read the next instalment of SYTYCD. 😘

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Story cover

 

A group of college students with clashing personalities win an all-expense paid weeklong vacation at a luxury resort in the Caribbean, thinking it will be spent on the beach in glorious sunshine. However, after landing it becomes very apparent that all is not as it should when the students find themselves alone on the island with only their pilot and one guide. Or are they..?

2nd Place in Favorite Undiscovered Gem category of Twific Fandom Awards 2017

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Mystery, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: Read & Enjoyed, El Jardín Trilogy
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85312 Read Count: 31087
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2017 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2017 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

Ten school acquaintances win a trip of a lifetime to an island. But the island isn't what they think! No greeting... no guests... how many were on the plane and what is in store for them. They have to put their differences aside to combat the unknown. 

Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I've played endless summer so I can actually picture what you are writing about. It's good to get someone else's take on the game. 

Blockbuster by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 440]
Summary:

Blockbuster Banner

 

Jacob abandoned Bella, leaving her and their son destitute. Years later, the book she wrote about their struggles became a bestseller. Edward, a film producer and former child actor, wanted to option Bella's book and turn it into a blockbuster. Falling in love wasn't part of the plan ...

What will they do when Jacob comes back?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 266372 Read Count: 44267
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2021 Updated: 02 Jul 2022
Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I look forward to your updates. I really love this story. 

As much as I love the updates... you and you mental and physical health is more important. Please take care of yourself first. Thinking and praying for you.