Reviews by GeezerWench
Summary: Past Featured Story

Born to loving parents then lost to them for 8 years, he is little more than feral and hostile when found. Fate steps in one day in the form of a Volturi King and a new life and destiny. Vampire AU Child Jasper, Mentor/Father Caius. Jasper will be paired with Bella. AU & OOC

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101477 Read Count: 31929
[Report This] Published: 20 Apr 2014 Updated: 11 Nov 2014
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

More shit is being piled on.

Alice is Malice and Edward is coveting something that isn't his.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Edward being a devious little bastard.

I am real glad that Bella didn't just run off and not speak to Jasper. (I hate that.)

He bit her! Yes! Pump her full of venom!

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

*whew*

Good! Edward knew she wasn't his mate and the perv is sitting outside listening to them.

I wonder what Carlisle would think of that?

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

 

Paula? Mated to Peter?

Alice was babbling about not meeting her mate? did she honestly think she had a chance at Jasper? 

NO FUCKING WAY DID EDWARD JUST DO THAT! 

Why the hell didn't Jasper hear Bella screaming!?!

WTF?

Oh, gee. Now Carlisle is going to be really mad at Jasper for killing his best boy Edward.

I really hope Carlisle fucks up right in front of Caius.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

oh christ

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

*whew* glad Bella's okay.

Garrett?

Peter's just a little jealous there.

How could Jasper just run off and leave Bella alone? I hope he's back soon.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

No damn way did Jasper just give up!

No fucking way!

and he couldn't jump up into a tree?

 

Thank Christ! Caius!

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Alice wants Jasper dead? What the hell for?

Not surprised Carlisle was up Edward's ass.

Oh, no! Marcus!

Aro and Caius have Carlisle! Aro will hear all the shit rolling around in Carlisle's head. They'll know everything.

Of course Alice took off. What the hell was she trying to do? Why kill Jasper? What's the point of that?

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Yeah, I guess Jasper would take over in Marcus' place.

Edward-sick fuck. Same with Carlisle. They would have just killed Esme.

Athenodora is going to rip Jasper a new one.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh, God. I hope it's Jasper's baby.

If it was Edward's, I can't see how they both could keep from hating it.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh DAMMIT!

No, Jasper! Don't die!

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I gotta say I will be so pissed off if you kill Jasper.

I HATE it when he dies.

 

Oh *gasp* he lived! (Good damn thing.)

But he doesn't remember anything!

ARRRRGH

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Holy shit! What next?

 

Newborn Jasper is running loose with Bella.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Yeah. Get that little bitch Alice. I gotta know what the hell she was thinking.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I hope all his memories have come back.

It might not be such a bad thing to lose some memories though.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I can kind of sympathize with Jasper a bit here.

Carlisle was his "sperm donor", but Caius is his father and his sire.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Glad Alice is dead. She thought Jasper's "first" son was going to be her mate?

"First?"

Jasper is crowned, Tanya's got her eyes on him, and he just up and leaves Bella to go back to Forks? I hope he told her.

 

What happened with Charlie? That legal stuff takes months, though. Hope he's been sitting in jail for a good part of that.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Well, well, well. Charlie's been taken care of. Wraps that problem up.

WTF? Leah's pregnant? Jasper didn't use that protection he told Esme about?

Leah is having Jasper's FIRST baby.

Right before Bella pops one out.

He just left her. He didn't kill her. He couldn't kill his first baby.

I was wondering about that. If Alice thought that Jasper's first son was going to be her mate, and Alice is dead, then Jasper's son's mate has been killed.

Doesn't mean he couldn't find another one. Unless you go for that only one true love thing.

But Leah ... if she has a boy ... Jasper killed his son's mate. Good riddance. He won't miss what he never knew about.

And a sequel would be cool.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Jasper is SO going to get his ass kicked.He's got some s'plainin' to do!

Carlisle still in the dungeon and his daughter right in front of him.

Esme raised her. Esme would have only told Jade good things about Jasper. I think it's good Esme raised her.

Did Leah die at the birth? If not, she's the last shifter. Unless she had more kids.

You'd think she would have left La Push and never gone back. there wasn't anyone left alive there. Well, almost nobody.

I wonder if Esme took her in?

Oh gosh.

Enjoyed your story. Got totally pissed off at parts of it, but it worked out. Mostly.

Like I said before, if you got a sequel, I'd like to read it.

 

 

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

That was good. I was wondering what happened to Leah. She was given a raw deal in Twilight.

Now, a little fun here didn't turn out so well for her either. At least she didn't kill her baby. She very well could have. Or killed herself when she was pregnant.

I'm glad she went to Esme. Maybe she can die with some peace knowing Esme will take care of her daughter.

Good story!

Summary:

Banner by: Caiteexx

Bailing Peter out of jail was as routine as eating for Jasper. However, this time, he wasn't the one to do it and the choice to ask Bella to go instead would rock the coven to its core as everything she thought she knew was questioned by someone with his own developing agenda. AU/OOC/Bella/Peter.  All normal disclamers apply


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Wanna read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13505 Read Count: 12774
[Report This] Published: 29 Jul 2014 Updated: 02 Feb 2015
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good to see this!

Good start with this premise. I'm liking it so far.

Glad Rosalie spoke her mind. Truly, Edward was never going to change Bella unless something drastic happened.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love your Peter so far!

Gotta wonder why Jasper would actually ask Bella to go bail Peter out.

Would Alice have something to do with it? At the moment, I'm leaning toward "no."

Peter hit the nail on the head when describing Edward. Really, why would Bella put up with his shit if she wasn't getting something out of it?

There is the money, but she doesn't actually seem impressed with that.

"Edward isn't here."

Go for it Bella!

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

They pretty much came to the same conclusion.

If Bella's going to be human, she might as well live like one! Especially at college.

He's going to withold a bit of info from his old pal Jasper. heh heh heh

Go get her, Peter.

The Promise by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

In desperation, he made a promise... one he had every intention of keeping… but could he, when his life was no longer his own, much less any kind of a life?  Only decades of time and unseen mystical forces would hold the answer.  New Moon AU Vamp/Human Time Travel, Rated for eventual lemons


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55191 Read Count: 8766
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2014 Updated: 28 Dec 2014
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I can see how Charlotte would love Peter and worhsip him like a hero, but if he never returned her affections after all those years ...

Ah, Peter seeking solace in other women's arms. It had been a long time and he was thinking he'd never see Bella again. After a few decades, he had to figure she was dead.

They'll work through it.

Wolves!?! And Charlie brought them? What the hell!

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yeah. Snap out of it, Bella!

Maybe Renee didn't like her mother because they were too much alike?

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Jacob is trying too hard. Boy needs to give up.

Then Bella disappears and he can't reach her!

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Already, there's a letch. Or a wolf among the sheep.

Let's have her get a look at Peter!

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Damn! Trouble.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Saved!

And looks like she got one over Peter.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Jasper in the alley.

With his vampire memory, he'll never forget what Bella looks like.

Maybe he'll even be after her next.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Very interesting way to propose to a girl!

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

She finally gets some and ow.

She had to be blowing Peter's mind.

Outhouse! *ug*

And Jasper just happened to be hanging around out back.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh shit. Jasper found her.

Her shield worked really well! Pissed Jasper right the hell off.

Awww. Peter and Bella's first fight. Glad they worked it out.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Pregnant!?! That didn't take long. Peter must be putting out some power surges.

Of course, Jasper's going to come back and fuck it all up.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh, no! Peter had a feeling and Bella didn't listen to it!

Jasper got him.

I hope she doesn't lose the baby.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awwwwwww.

I still hope she doesn't lose the baby.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh! She's still pregnant!

"Well, you see Jacob, when a man and a woman are attracted to each other..."

LOL

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Damn! Poor Charlie!

I can't imagine his shock at seeing Bella 10 months older and 8 months pregnant!

I'm a little surprised she didn't flick a Bic at Jasper.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yeah. What's up with Charlotte?

All the shit going on put her in labor.

Jasper deserved that pain in that handshake and everything else.

So! Jim was Jasper's younger brother! Peter's his nephew!

Looks like a baby is on the way!

Eager for your next update, Hon. Enjoying your story.

(Even if Jasper is a dick, I still get upset if he's killed.)

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Being a bashful sort myself when it comes to being nekkid, I know how Bella feels. But then I had kids. After a while in labor, I didn't give a shit who was poking around down there. The pain is a little distracting.

Edward Fucking Cullen

Except, I wouldn't want Edward there.

Good answer, Rose. Glad she and Emmett don't seem so ready to put up with Edward's bullshit.

The best thing any of them can do is keep him the hell away from her.

Oh. Right. Let's all walk on eggshells around the Little Prince, shall we?

Fuck you, Alice.

Charlie was a bit of a sissy.

Edward! Asshole.

Oh! And they let him walk right in while she's in labor! Are they morons?

He's such a self-centered idiot, God knows what he'll do.

Peter made it!

Good! Now he can kill Edward as soon as Edward says something really stupid!

Glad he made it! He gets to see his son born. And then maybe we'll find out about Charlotte.

Good update, Hon!

 

 

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I swear, when I had my first baby, I had been told "you'll feel a mild urge to push."

OMG, that "mild urge" was completely overwhelming! I had no control over it. My body said it was time to push, so it did! I don't care what anybody said, there was no way I couldn't.

Carlisle is cracking me up, telling Bella to "push gently."

Men have no freakin' clue.

Edward is being a dick.

So everybody is standing around, gaping at Bella's messy lady parts? The *boy* shouldn't have been in there to begin with.

Don't blame Peter in the least for not wanting to leave Bella. He doesn't trust Jasper and Edward is still lurking. Peter should stay right next to her and the baby.

Oh, now Edward wants answers? Well, let's get all huffy and shit.

Fantastical story? I guess Edward assumes Bella went and got knocked up after he left. I'm sure he's insulted and feeling put upon.

Wise of Jasper to leave the room.

Glad Carlisle put Edward in his place and good to see Carlisle showing some balls.

Just great! Charlotte's in love with Peter.

If she doesn't cooperate with Carlisle, he can always kick her out of his house.

Quite eager to see how Peter handles mentioning Charlotte to Bella.

You know, I can't really blame him. He was taken from Bella a l-o-n-g time ago. He thought he could never see her again. He got on with the life he had. He probably figured Bella had died a long time before.

If you can't be with the one you love

Love the one you're with

To quote an old song.

That's a long time to be alone. Should be interesting to see how he chases off Charlotte.

 

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

"You were the biggest bad-ass on the planet and now you're the biggest pussy."

Holy crap!

Peter has a point.

Jeez! For Peter it was damn near a century. For Bella? What? A couple/few months? Good Lord. After a while, Peter would have thought she was dead. He was supposed to stay "pure" for a dead woman?

Allegedly dead, but still.

Hoo boy. Charlotte's going to be trouble.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

God, Edward! Get over yourself! How long was Carlisle alone before he found somebody? Jesus H. Christ.

Oh wait. There happens to be a teeny bopper downstairs ...

And the teeny boppers have met!

Interesting pairing.

'Bout time somebody got hold of Victoria. Damn Cullens and their stupid treaty. How many people died because the wolves were assholes about it?

I guess Jasper broke the treaty, though. the wolves may chase them all the way through Forks and to the Cullens'.

Jerks.

Peter will have to give 'em hell.

The Descent by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

She sought an escape from the pain. She found it. New Moon AU DARK CONTENT. Read warning heading chapter. Mentions of self harm. Do not read if it's not to your liking. NOT A FLUFFY FIC. You have been warned. Bella paired with either Jasper or Caius. You Choose pairing! Will Not Be a Poly!


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Caius, Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4010 Read Count: 1021
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2015 Updated: 07 Jan 2015
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Jake gave up pretty easily.He'd been sniffing around Bella for how long, and now he and his boys are chased off by one vampire?

Well, they were trespassing on Cullen territory.

Can't blame Jasper for not wanting to leave any loose ends.

Ha ha ha ha Cullens voted him off the island. I suspect they'll come to regret that.

Damn. HOT Jasper! OMG. So sexy and sure of himself. Knows what he wants and is going for it. Except for wanting a mate.

 

Me? Of course I prefer Bella with Jasper.

Summary:

Made by: Falling Star

 

After Bella’s first day at Forks High, Edward fled to Alaska. What if, when he got back, the rest of the family were less than inclined to help him get the girl? Just how far will some go to make sure Bella ended up with who she was meant to? Most importantly, what happens when the one she’s meant for finds out? Twi-rewrite. AU, NC, Crossover, rated for future gore, adult situations and naughty language. Part 1 of 3


Categories: Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Klaus
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Design Trilogy
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12926 Read Count: 24129
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2015 Updated: 27 Feb 2015
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Have I reviewed this? Can't remember. Anyhow, I can't stand Alice, or Alice with Jasper, but I guess I have to give her a chance here.

Cover up by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 100]
Summary:

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Betrayal and revenge are powerful motivators, and when two people who have been betrayed by the same coven come together under dire circumstances, revenge becomes all the more sweet. NM-A/U, N/C, OOC, all normal disclaimers apply

Banner by the wonderful TheDarkFallingStar

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62831 Read Count: 19898
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2015 Updated: 02 Dec 2017
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bella - I just want to slap her.

Though I guess everyone feels like they're the only one to get dumped. Ever.

She's hooked into the Cullens' security? Apparently.

Whoops. Looks like the Volturi came for a visit and Peter got snagged.

Well, shit.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you, baby! So excited to get a Peter/Bella story.

I am actually re-reading Never Saw That Coming over on FF because I just can't get enough Peter/Bella or Jasper/Bella. Especially Jasper. Even after all these years. Twilight is ten? P-shaw. Drop in the bucket.

And I really do enjoy your style of writing.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Cogratulations on your nominations in the 2016 Noncanon Awards Twilight Round 5!

Yes, she's loyal to a fault, but she's starting to finally realize she placed her trust in the wrong people.

Ya gotta wonder why the Cullens would up and leave and then later decide to off Bella. It would have been so much easier if Edward had just snapped her neck in the woods. Problem solved. Throw her off a cliff or into a gully or something. It would have been easy. The girl trips over air. A little hike in the woods would be deadly, right?

That makes me think it isn't necessarily the collective Cullens that made that decision.

I can only hope my beloved Jasper wasn't fully aware of what was going on. Can I blame Alice? The manipulative little bitch. I'll blame her. Perhaps she *saw* something that led her to think Bella being remaining alive would be a *bad thing* for the *family*. And she never liked Peter anyway. Uncouth ruffian that he is.

Jesus. Wiping out the town. Or damn near all of it. The Volturi have overstepped just a bit. There was no need for that. Can hardly wait to hear their reasoning for THAT! It's not like anyone knew Peter was there.

No one but Alice and Jasper.

And it makes it look like Jasper set him up. Bloody hell. If Jasper is asking him for *favors* why would he set him up? I think it's Alice. But then, I dn't like her anyway.

Ooo! The Cullens may not be aware that half of Forks has been decimated! Depends on what sort of story the Volturi come up with. I mean, towns do get fucked up now and then. Gas pipeline explosions, chemical plant leaks and/or explosions. School shootings. Crazy dudes with knives on a rampage ... it happens. Hell ... even terrorist bombings. Like what just happened in Brussels.

So, I'll go with the Cullens don't know what's really going on in Forks just yet.

Yeah, there's no way Bella can stay human and survive beyond the first volley, so to speak.

Don't screw around and be wishy-washy, Bella! Just do it!

 

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yeah! Who is Peter callling?

Exactly! Why go to so much trouble just to get rid of a couple of folks. Bella's human. It's not like she's dangerous.

Edward did it again and got caught? Another girl right after Bella? Didn't give them much time to settle into their new digs before he was dicking around again.

Peter going in later to clean up after Edward? What the hell for? Edward should have cleaned up his own messes. Now he's got Peter on his ass.

Or, do they feel they were caught because of Bella? How would the Volturi know unless one of the Cullens told them?

I'll still blame Alice. She's protecting her boy Edward. Or she thinks she is. She's got no problem with throwing Jasper or the rest of them under the bus. It's all about her Edward. She's underestimating Peter.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I like that idea of picking them off one by one. No one is ALWAYS in the company of someone else.

Well now. Peter's having a bit of difficulty.

Yeah, why would Bella think she'd be better at vampiring than anyone esle? Oh, right. We all think we're special.

Kick her ass, Peter!

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Peter kicked her ass thoroughly.

She probably should stop trying to start shit with him. She's going to lose. And he's right. She's been starting the shit all along.

Guess who's coming to dinner! Is it the person Peter called before? He might enjoy Bella kicking the guy's ass.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Caius!?! Looks like he’s chosen his team. #TeamPeter

Yes, to wipe out a few school kids. Locked doors and fires.

They took out the wolves, too. My goodness. I suspect that seed has been sown far and wide, so there may be another wolf pup or two out in the world somewhere.

Okay, maybe Caius hasn't chosen yet. He needs to think long and hard about how much he wants to live.

Ahhh. The Volturi thought Peter was there to try and protect Bella. He was so obviously set up. I don't think Jasper would do that. I'm still leaning toward Alice.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella broke Peter's stuff because she could.

Uh oh.

Not just angry sex—totally pissed off sex.

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Jasper IS a bastard then. Too bad. Bums me out when he gets killed, even if he is a dick.

But to give up his friend, Peter. I guess Peter wasn't a friend so much as a tool to be used for his own convenience.

Too bad. Jasper's going to to die.

Now I'm wondering if the Cullens think Peter and Bella are dead and gone.

Jasper could very well call Charlotte to pretend to see how she is. He ought to know Charlotte knows him as well as Peter does.

But now, to find out why, after all this time, Jasper decided to get rid of Peter. If nothing else, Peter has been useful.

And after all the girls Edward has left in his wake, that Peter's killed for them, how is Bella any different than the rest of them?

My mind still goes to Alice. She saw something that changed things.

 

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yup. As long as they don’t know Bella is alive, they can’t try and kill her. Hope Randall keeps her safe and they get along okay.

 

Normally, I hate it when Jasper gets killed, but he deserves it this time. Killed Charlotte? Just to try and piss Peter off? Hurt him. Break his heart?

 

Of course, Jasper used his power on her; otherwise she’d have hurt him, at least.

 

Yeah, so why did Jasper pawn off the leftover humans on Peter? Alice tell him it was the right thing to do for the “family?” Why would he even care? Guess he had to pretend to care.

 

Peter should keep a souvenir. A little something to give to Alice for being the bitch she is. Maybe a little something for all the Cullens. I’d have brought you his heart, Alice, but he didn’t have one.”

 

LOL

 

Carlisle’s bitch. Alice’s bitch. Carlisle may not even know that Jasper called and had Edward’s leavings taken care of. Maybe Jasper was just “cleaning up” to protect his own ass. Whatever. He’s a dick.

 

Can’t wait for Peter to make him suffer.

Catharsis by mama4dukes Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

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A very public, cathartic moment leads Bella Swan to realize that Edward Cullen is not quite prince charming. Her newfound self-awareness leads to stronger friendships and new adventures, but will her past relationship with a vampire threaten her new, happier life?    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Sam
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99426 Read Count: 16382
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2018 Updated: 27 Mar 2018
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL Edward. What an asshole.



Author's Response:

Yes, he really is an abusive, manipulative, jerk. Thanks for chiming in. XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Candy Nipperhorn

*snort*

LOL

I dn't care what the counselor might have said, I would not be on the prom committee.



Author's Response:

Yes, but think about it, since you and I won't be on the prom committee, it would be a challenge. I bet Candy Nipperhorn was on the prom committee in her time. *nods head* Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

*gulp* murder suicide in front of the kids.

Jesus H Christ.

 

A concert! How nice.



Author's Response:

Horrible, but something that truly happens in real life. 

Concerts are happy. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes

Summary:

WIIDFM

I don’t like that Edward told Bella to be wary of me or that I should stay away from her, That’s not what should happen, Why? he’s my anally retentive brother, That's why!  (Film version of meeting the family) Twilight AU


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Why?
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3974 Read Count: 449
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2018 Updated: 30 Mar 2018
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: You & Me

I like it.

They treated Jasper like the red-headed step child. Until they needed him for Victoria's newborns.

 

Yeah. I follow you over here, too.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yeah I jump about reading things all over the shop too xx

Alexis

Summary:

ADITLOAOG

Why was it always me? Why couldn't I be normal? Did I have a tattoo on my forehead saying Tasty Meal, Feel Free to Kill Me'?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Contests & Competitions
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12024 Read Count: 2155
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2018 Updated: 01 Mar 2019
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Human days

Woo hoo!



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Nice of you to review here as well xx

Alexis

Summary:

HT

Summary:  Carlisle and Bella take a moment to give thanks for their happiness. As do all the others around the world. Pt 7 of Celebrations. Carlisle/Bella

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Celebrations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3823 Read Count: 215
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2019 Updated: 28 Nov 2019
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 1: If I Had But On Wish

Everyone but Alice seems to be coming around. They needed that time for reflection.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I don't see Alice ever seeing the light xx

Alexis

Summary:

GAC


The Cullens need Bella to get a clue before her change, so what better way than a game of Cluedo!


DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6201 Read Count: 302
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2019 Updated: 14 Dec 2019
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Make Her See

Good story! Bella's future is her business, not Edward's.

And I realized that I would totally suck at that game, Clue. Or cluedo.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I remember playing that a lot as a kid, monopoly too lol xx

Alexis

Summary:

KYWWIKY

The won't phase! They can't phase! If they do everyone will know what they did! AU

A/N: Mention of rape, physical and mental abuse, as well as suicide. But not specific or detailed.

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU. 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3002 Read Count: 341
[Report This] Published: 21 Dec 2019 Updated: 21 Dec 2019
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Run For Your Life

Yeah. Trouble is, people can be raped with objects.

{{{shudder}}}

I haven't read the other story, and don't think I'm going to. Don't need to!

 

I like revenge stories, but what they did to Bella ...



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Not my usual reading material. I stumbled across it and couldn't stop reading, it was like watching a trainwreck.

xx Alexis

Summary:

Trust

A short Twilight Fanfic.  

Chief Warrant Officer Jasper Whitlock, takes a fateful patrol with his 75th Ranger unit, not everything goes as planned. Metal is tested, and the bonds of loyalty are proven...B/E mostly human.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2352 Read Count: 303
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2020 Updated: 02 Aug 2020
Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Mans best friend

that was good!

 

I think that was the first time I've seen Bellka written as a dog!