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15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self
This story is so great! Holy crap, I am afraid for Bella. What is Felix going to do next? He seems like he almost cares for her, but in a totally creepy way, of course. Also, the comment about her body only being a tool for the procreation of the family is scary. I don't know much about sensory depravation, but I know it is a very useful tool in breaking down the psyche. I wonder how Edward is going to figure in in all of this. Ugh, it will be hard to wait a week for the update! Great story!
LindyP :)
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name
I put this story on my favorites, but somehow I have not been getting the alert? Good think you guys mentioned a new chapter was up on Daddy's spoiled little Rich Girl or I might have missed the last two chapters! I added it to my favorites again, so hopefully that will fix the problem. This story is so heartrending, but awesome! You are keeping me on the edge of my seat. It shows you how torture can really break a person down. Renee is already converted but Bella is so much stonger it has taken longer to break her down. Felix definately seems to care about her. Maybe he will be an ally later in the story? Can't wait till EDward makes his appearance! Great chapters!
LindyP :)
Author's Response:
Hey there... I was wondering if you have gone to your Account Info..(at the top of the page) and clicked on Edit preferences...You need to check that you want to recieve alerts for your favorites...
the other thing... when you hit that you want to add a story as a favorite...you must hit the "Submit" button at the bottom of the NEW screen.. Hope this helps..
Thanks for reading..See you soon.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation
Thanks for the insight into Felix. I am actually a little disappointed that Felix is leaving. It would have been interesting to see how he reacted with Edward in the picture. I guess he really tried in his own way to help Bella ( or Elizabeth) survive. Loving this story & looking forward to your next update!
LindyP :)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth
That was chillingly great! Aro scares the living bejesus out of me! Obviously, woman are only regarded as providing their husbands pleasure & bearing children! Scary thought. This story plot is so good!
LindyP :)
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
I got my alert! Thank you! I pretty much knew Aro was sick, but did not realize he would be this sick & perverted! I wonder how all the men feel about having Aro take their wives virginity on their Wedding night? It reminds me of old Feudal times when the lord of the property that his serfs worked on had the same right. Disgusting! So Edward is his son, huh? My guess is that he must follow Aro's ways? I can't wait to see how Bella will affect Edward. Nice update!
LindyP :)
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
So glad to see an update!!!Ugh, if Bella ever escapes from this place she is going to have to be majorly deprogrammed! Having said that, I can't wait till she meets Edward!!!! I am sure he is bound to be much like Aro, but perhaps he might have some redeeming qualities lurking inside? Only time will tell. Looking forward to your next update!
LindyP :)
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Volturi Order
I just love this story!!!! It is fast becoming a favorite of mine (even though I love TTSS too). I am so happy Edward & Bella met! This story is so intriguing! Obviously Bella has memories still trying to surface in her subconcious. I wonder what will happen when she sees Renee again??? I just wish there could be updates everyday (although I know RL takes precedence)! Thanks for updating & happy Easter!
LindyP :)
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement
I love this story!! Thanks so much for giving us Edward's POV. It's nice to know what he is thinking & how he sees Bella. Damn that Aro is EVIL! Now he will punish Edward & make Bella watch. I know he was jealous watching the instant attraction between these two! Glad you two had a good time together & are now back to writing your awesome stories!
LindyP :)
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
It's nice to know that Esme & Carlislr are good people. Aro just gets creepier & creepier-eww!!!! Looking forward to your next chapter!
LindyP :)
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession
I love Esme! She is going to be a great refuge for Bella in that hell hole! Looking forward to your next update! And congrats to your daughter & her gymnastic team! My daughter, Bella, is 4 & loves her gymnastics!
LindyP :)
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family
Just as I was thinking Aro could not get any sicker.... Ugh, poor Rebecca! And I know that Bella saw Renee outside. This aro's evilness knows no bounds! Love this story, it's so good!
LindyP :)
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
So good! What are the odds he would run into Felix in that bar???? I hope Felix takes pity on him & leaves him a clue. Poor Charlie!!! I love your updating schedule, by the way. You guys rock!
LindyP :)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us
Ugh! I am so worried for Alice & what it entails for her in her "ceremony". I am sure Aro is ready! Are they injecting them with drugs to make sure they get pregnant by Aro on their wedding night? Ugh! Poor Alice! Jasper seems awesome though! Looking forward to your next posting!
LindyP :)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple
Oh my God, this Aro is really SICK! Thank God Alice was truly a virgin! Now I am just worried that Bella will tip the other's off that she remembers her past! Great, great update!
LindyP ;)
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Poor Bella! I can't stand it!!! I am so afraid of what Aro will do now. I hope Edward can save her. Awesome chapter!
LindyP :)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Oh Crap!! What did they do to Bella??? The suspense is killing me! Awesome chapter! You'll have me on the edge of my seat until I find what happens next!
LindyP :)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First
So awesome to get your update, even though it took me a long time to get around to reading it! I still love this story!
LindyP :)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Ugh! Aro literally makes me want to vomit!!! Oh Please, let that be Edward who is coming in to save her! Awesome update! Thanks!
LindyP :)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
That was awesome guys! I hope Charlie is able to get to them in time! Thanks for the great update!
LindyP :)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
That was so great! Yeah, Charlie found his daughter (well, at least her location). Looking forward to your next post!!! Congrats on the Publishing house! I'll have to check it out!
LindyP :)
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
Excellent chapter! Now I will be anxiously waiting to see what happens! Thanxs for the update! Happy Holidays!
LindyP :)
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514863
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
Loving this story, as usual & love this new format! Way better than FF & you don't get censored! Bella loves Edward-yay!
LindyP :)
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
I can't figure out why I am not getting alerts to the new chapters. I have added your stories to my favorites, is there something I am doing wrong? Great, great chapter. Poor Carlisle. I know he must feel so guilty over all this! I hope they catch James & I wonder what Aro is going to say!
LindyP :)
Author's Response:
I can't remember if I have spoken to you before...so sorry if this is a repeat...but here is the thing.
1. Make sure that the stories you have favorited show up in your favorites...(some people miss the last step in making it a favorite by not submitting on the second screen.)
2. To do this... go to the Account Info at the top of the screen. Click on manage favorites...story favorites...you should see your stories there..
3. Next and while you are in Account Info...go to your EDIT PREFERENCE section. There you have to check the box that says that you want an email alert for your favorites.
AND YOU ARE DONE... you shouldn't miss another moment of all your favorites. Hope this helps...(If I have just repeated myself, and this is NOT the problem...please let me know..)
Thanks
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
OK, so I figured out why I was not getting the alerts & hopefully fixed the problem! Still trying to navigate this new site!
LindyP :)
Author's Response:
OH GOOD...and I know...but it is going to be so great once all the KINKS are ironed out...(I love it.)
Happy reading.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
Wow! I never would have pegged Laurent as the mastermind behind this. Great chapter!
LindyP :)
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Holy Crap!!! James??? Or Laurent??? What a way to leave us hanging, but so good!!!! Please update soo, I'll be dying over the weekend!
LindyP :)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Holy crap! Not that Laurent didn't deserve it, but wow! Something tells me that Aro is going to exact his revenge for using his name. He obviously has a connection to Heidi. WOW!
Lindyp :)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Great update! I hope Lauren does get what is coming to her!
LindyP :)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
God, I hope Edward finds them in time! Thank God they found the cell with the GPS! Great update!
LindyP :)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James
Yahoo! Go girls!!! I hope James is out long enough for Edward to find them! Actually, while James is passed out, maybe they should cut off his pecker! Thanksfor the update!
LindyP :)
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
Yeah! I hope that Jacob allows them to take James to Aro. Now that would be justice!!!! I have really loved this story from the beginning & I am going to miss it when it is finished. Of course, I am loving your other stories too & am looking forward to your next updates! I will read anything you guys write!!!! Your brilliant!
LindyP :)
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
Yes! James FINALLY got what he deserved! You ladies did him up right! I can't believe this story is truly coming to an end, so sad. Thank you so much for such an AMAZING story! It has been an awesome ride! Looking forward to your last chapter ladies!
LindyP :)
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Loved, loved, loved this story from the very beginning! Thank you for taking this on this awesome journey with you guys. That was a perfect ending to a great story! I am sad it is over! I hope James is enjoying his payback in hell! Looking forward now to your next installment of VO!
LindyP :)
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625180
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45
I love the new format! Great update! I love how Edward was trying to clean up the ice cream instead of making Bella do it or having his mom take the blame. He's really changed! Interesting memory he remembered too! I wonder if he will connect the dots with Carlisle's behavior towards Bella? Thanks for the update!
LindyP :)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47
OH MY GOD, OMG, OMG! I totally did not see this last part coming! Somehow, I did not get your last chapter alert so I got to read these last two chapters back to back. I think I forgot to check the box in my prefrences about alerting me to new chapters, but now I fixed that. Your last chapter had me on the edge of my seat. I KNEW Carlisle would try to pull some bullshit like this! And Demetri & his dad are just as evil! Oh poor Bella! Edward is going to have to make her revert back to her servitude ways. I just hope he can comunicate to her that he is doing this to protect her. She is going to be so confused & upset. Especially since she was upset earlier at the security following them when they went shopping & out to lunch. Ugh, this Demitri is going to be BAD NEWS! And I wonder if Bella could be pregnant??? Your story is still my all time favorite! It is so, so good! Please update when you can!
LindyP :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm working on the next chapter and hope to have it ready by the weekend. I know it was evil to leave everyone hanging like this so I won't leave you for long. Everything is quickly coming to a head.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
Phew!!! I was so worried that Edward was going to keep her in the dark about his behavior to make it look more believable. I don't think Bella could recover from that if he did that. And Thank God he didn't beat her. But I do worry about Carlisle wanting to check "Edward's work" later. She will only have bruises on her wrists. Maybe locking her in the room will prevent this, although I am sure Carlisle has a key to their room (shudder). I am sure move evil things are to come from Carlisle, Demitri & Marcus. And I am so relieved that Bella FINALLY confided in EDward about his father's plans for her. Really great chapter & looking forward to your next post!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49
Excellent chapter! Although I must admit, a small part of me wished she was growing some poisonous plants to use on Carlisle! That was so vile what he & Charlie did to Esme! Although I am not surprised. He really is a sick & twisted man. And I am so sad to hear Edward is reverting to his old ways, but again, I am not surprised. I hope getting out of the house helps him to come back! And thankfully Carlisle released Bella out of her adoption. I just wish Bella could go to college! Thanks for the update. I can't believe this story is winding down. I'll be so sad without your updates!
LindyP :)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50
Oh my God! How could you leave us hanging like that!!! That was an excellent chapter! Please, oh please let Edward get there in time! I'll be looking forward to your next post!
LindyP :)
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
I have a hard time coming to terms with this story ending! Don't get me wrong,I am beyond thrilled that you are finishing it. It's just I will miss your updates to this story! It's been a long haul, but you should be commended for sticking through it through all that RL has thrown at you. This story is AMAZING! I am so glad Carlisle is finally out of the picture. It would have been fitting for either Bella or Edward to end his miserable exsistence, but then they might have to contend with lingering guilt. I hope Esme dumped his ashes down a toilet! I would love to read her outtake. Thank God she did not know how truly sick his thoughts had gotten in regards to Bella. I will be looking forward to your next chapter-God, how will Edward respond to Bella wanting to be set free? I know you are planning for a HEA, so I will just sit tight!
LindyP :)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Wow! I was so happy to see it was Edward she was going on a date with (although I had a sneaky suspicion it was). I think you did the right thing for Bella-she desperately needed to get out from under Edward's thumb & get some serious therapy. Coupled with being on her own & in school it most likely helped her heal a lot. I was also so happy to see the changes in the other Cullen's. Wow, I can't believe this story is coming to the end. I am really going to miss your updates here but am excited for you that it will be finished! It really is an amazing story, and as I have told you before, will always remain one of my favorites! I will be interested in anything you write & would love to read your novel with new parts! Keep me posted please!
LindyP :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your support Lindy!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
Congratulations Mic! You did it! I was hooked on your story from Day 1, it is truly an incredible story. As hard as it was to read at times, you wrote so incredibly well that you couldn't NOT read to know what happened next. You made Bella into a true fighter & the bond that brought the family together & took down evil Carlisle! It was a perfect ending to a perfect story! Any chance for any future outtakes? I would love to know if they had children! I actually hate the thought of no future updates from TPW! I have you on author alert already so I will just wait to see what you come up with next!
Congrats again for an excellent story!
LindyP :)
Author's Response:
There will be more in the book that wasn't in the ff story...
The only other outtake planned is what Esme did with the ashes. I had to give everyone an ending but left a lot out of it since I don't plan on pulling the story when the book is published later this year. There will actually be a different epilogue on the book.
Thank you so much for sticking with me, Lindy. I know you've been here from the beginning and I've always looked forward to your reviews. Thank you so much for being such a great friend. I hope you like the next story.
Mic
Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Thanks for letting me know a new chapter was up. I guess I am not surprised with all the crap going down with FF. Such a disappointment. But I love this new site! And I love the latest chapter! I wonder what Edward's going to think when he hears B&J are together? And I wonder what's up with Jake's temper??? I feel he is hiding something! Great post!
LindyP :)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
So that's why he didn't call! Can't say I blame him there, but at least a text to Bella would have been nice! At least Edward's mom sounds cool about all this. Great update! Looking forward to TTSS & VO updates too!
LindyP :)
Get inside Charlie's head and see what he was thinking during the "sex talk" that takes place in chapter 2 of Eclipse. My entry for the Twilight Novel Novice Eclipse Fan Fiction Challenge. Rated T.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Charlie/None
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2170 Read Count: 873
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Sex Talk - One Shot
Oh, that was good! Poor Charlie....if he only knew...... Loved it!
LindyP :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I think Charlie would be totally shocked to know that his baby girl is the aggressor and not Edward. I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
~Jenn