Reviews by TheRedGirl
Summary: Past Featured Story

ATL

Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491592
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Aug 2013
Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

I was ready to send you some love but with a cliffie like that, I'm not feeling it, lol. If you really want to redeem yourself, which I'm sure you do, you must update very, very soon!!!

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

 Banner by Amandac3 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Now that's what I call a happy ending.

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806446
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue Two

I just finished reading your Storm Series.  I can't tell you how much I enjoyed every bit of it.  Every character seemed so real, I was either laughing, crying or biting my nails.  You are incredibly talented and should seriously consider a career in writing.  Thanks for keeping me entertained.

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

I love/hate cliffies.  I sure hope Bella stays very, very cautious with Edward.  You don't normally go from humiliating and literally destroying someone in front of the entire world, to falling madly in love with them in a short time.  It would do Edward well to get some intensive therapy.  Yes, yes, yes, please send me a teaser for the next chapter.  Thanks!!



Author's Response: hi. thank you for the review. I am sorry for the late update but here is a teaser for chapter 20 this is unbeta'd I watched as Edward walked away and headed towards his own home with a big grin on his face. I suddenly drifted into a dreamworld where everything was perfect with Edward and hopefully some day it will be. I was painfully unaware of my brother and friends stand around me until I felt a pinch on my left arm. "So are you going to tell us what is going on or am I going to have to torture it out of you?" Alice squeeled, jumping up and down. I started to feel dizzy simply by looking at her. "Well, Edward and I decided to go slow in our realtionship and he wants to do all the daddy things when it comes to our babies," I said enthusiastically. Suddenly the three of them were looking at me shocked with their mouths wide open. "What's wrong? Go I have ketchup on my face or spinach in my teeth," I asked. The three of them continued to stare at me and surprise, surprise, it was Alice that started talking first. "Bella, did you just say babies? As in more than one," she asked. "Shit," I muttered to myself. I wanted to tell everyone about the twins all together and with Edward by my side. I was about to answer her when I heard a crash coming from a few houses down. I looked down and saw a chair flying through a window. What frightened me more was that the chair came flying out of Edward's window and I could clearly hear the shouting and screaming that followed. Jasper looked at me and then went running towards Edward's house with Alice, Alec and I following closely behind.

Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

Banner created by Evilnat

Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130089
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

Looks like Aro is literally the ball-less bastard we all knew him to be.  I guess his plan was to tell Bella that Charlie wasn't her father and since he was going to kill her, having that horrible info on her mind would be the last thing she thought about before she died, never to find out the truth.  He needs to become some big, hairy guy's bitch in prison.  That would be a good beginning to some payback for the hell he put Bella through.

Relentless by StillDreaming85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 576]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by OTB

Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185508
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Relentless

I'm usually not a fan of the rough and gruff Charlie that manhandles Bella but right now, I'm feeling pretty sorry for him.  Bella was right, she was in this mess all because of Edward and I wonder if he even realizes it or for that matter if he cares.  If he doesn't care, it will surely come back to bite him on the ass and it will be well deserved.  Bella needs her Dad so somehow, some way, the two of them are gonna have to have a sit down and heart to heart.  Don't know if it'll work but the attempt is warranted.

Glad you're feeling better.  Great chapter - was most definitely worth the wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I think he can get away with the little man handling that he did to her. The poor guy is on meltdown. His own child is with a mobster, and not giving him answers. Bella is right and now Edward has to sort this mess out or lose her. 

Edward will get Bella and Charlie together in a few chapters time x x

Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Relentless

I honestly didn't think i could hate Edward more than I did at the end of the last chapter but alas you have shown me there's always room for more despite his claims of undying love.  I would be extremely happy if he suffered a slow, tortuous pain, with Bella watching and laughing til her heart's content.  Yes, that would make me very happy.  Could you arrange that?  Please?



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I'm sorry, but I can't arrange that hunni LOL. Hopefully you will like him a little more after the next chapter x x

Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Relentless

Damn you and your cliffies.  Nice chapter though!



Author's Response:

Damn you for damnin me :P

Thanks for the review sweetpea x x

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97745
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

While realistically I know this is fiction but to put yourself in Bella's place and try to imagine, much less understand what she is feeling is almost too much to deal with.  I'm miles away from being Team Edward since he still hasn't done a damn thing to show Bella he's at least somewhat human but I'm struggling with this whole "you can have the baby" scenario as well.  I get where she's coming from but as time passes and that baby begins to move and kick, I think she's gonna feel differently and we haven't even talked about when it's born-holy shit!  I think we all know she won't be able to leave the hospital without the little one and even more than that, there's not a single person on the planet who would think Edward could walk away from his child or Bella.  All of that makes for the coming weeks to be very interesting.

Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

These are some fucked up people. Great chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478695
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Roscoe from Dukes of Hazzard-perfect for Mike.

Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I promise I'm not blowing sunshine up your ass when I say this.  I can see this being a movie.  It's got all the right elements-danger, UST (so far), mysterious assholes, some cute kids who might get caught in the crossfire, a dirty cop, etc. Am I right?

Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm gonna have to watch some of these movies so I can understand the characters better.

Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Edward's a typical guy, thinking and reacting with his dick-go figure.  I assumed chaos was a sophisticated computer/security system that protects her.  When Jake meets his demise, can you please make sure it's slow and extremely painful, including tortuous?  Thank you.

Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chaos needs to keep a very close eye on Sasha.  I have a feeling we've not seen the last of her.  Hopefully now, Bella and Edward can get it together, literally.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201893
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter- 45: When The Cookie Doesn't Come To You

I never considered Bella doing the proposing. After their odd and forced beginning, this would be a perfect way for them to seal the deal.



Author's Response: All I'll ask of you is to wait a bit, sit back and enjoy... ;) Thanks for leaving a review. The next chapter should be up on Tuesday. Take care. Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082126
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

One of the main reasons I like your stories, besides your stellar writing is, you add pics to it.  Sometimes, no matter how descriptive you are, as a reader it's hard to picture a firehouse or a condo or the look of a character.  I know it takes a good deal of time to do the little extras and your readers definitely appreciate it. Thanks for another great chapter.

Between women by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 84]
Summary:

Two times a week they reunite after their Zumba class to share their laughs, their secrets. It's the only time they have to be themselves. But life is more than stolen smiles and shared secrets. Four married women bare their souls through cups of coffee.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47623 Read Count: 7312
[Report This] Published: 10 Jan 2016 Updated: 24 Dec 2016
Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Esme's in trouble. So is Emmet. The video of him cheating will be perfect to show the judge in court. I wouldn't even let him know about it until then. Perfect surprise for the asshole. 



Author's Response:

Don't worry, Esme will talk with Carlisle eventually ;)

About the video... There'll be something like that soon ;)

Reviewer: TheRedGirl Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This has become one of my favorite first. Thanks for the update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words :)