Reviews by labelleamie
Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

it is odd.yes. liked the chapters so far..

xo,lavanya

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

i remain

After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77533
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

hi, i am sorry to not havr reviewed much but i want you to know , i really really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. please don't make edward into a martyrward , i've had enough of those, whatever he thinks is right,he is still a seventeen year old . teens are not known for thinking clearly,please do help him with that. i would like more e/b interaction either through letters or personal.please update soon.xo,lavanya.



Author's Response:

You said exactly what I think most people forget.  Even for all his nearly 100 years as a vampire, Edward is still very much only 17-years-old, and when he comes to girls, he is completely inexperienced.  He made a mistake.  Teenagers are known for doing that.  Chapter 26 will be up on Saturday, in the meantime a teaser is available on A Different Forest's Monday Sneak Peak campfire.  The campfire is a little old, so it's maybe four or five down on the second page.  I submitted the same teaser to Twi Fic Central, but when I just looked, it doesn't look like they've posted teaers since the 8th. (???)  I also usually submit the next week's teaser to Fictionators, but I screwed up and forgot this week.  But anyway, I think you'll like the teaser!

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

please update soon, i can hardly stand the waiting. i love iry n i'll always be eagerly waiting..

xo, lavanya.

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i absolutely love this story, i want to say thanks for writing it...can't wait to see what happens next. even if you had copied it from 'the lakehouse' , i would have loved it as i loved it very much. xoxo,lavanya.



Author's Response:

It's very definately not copied from "The Lakehouse."  It's just the basic premise of two people living in different times somehow able to communicate with each other.  I hope you'll like it, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

love the chapter, don't make us wait long with this cliffie,update asap,love you.xo,lavanya.



Author's Response:

Should be next Saturday like normal.  Chapter 31 is still being betad, bit I'm sure it will be done by then. 

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

thanks for updating, i love this story n am always eagerly waiting for updates. moreover, thanks for writing..xo,lavanya. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

loved the scene with tanya, n the last scene in the restaurant. thanks for writing such a lovely story. pls update soon,xo. lavanya.

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

hi, nice to see an update n hear from from you, i loved both, update asap please, eagerly waiting,xo.

 

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104536
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14- Part of his world

oh...i absolutely love this story...so much that i did not stop to review...

cant wait for the nxt chapter, pls update soon.xo,lavanya.

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17- Confrontation

ah, i loved it. please update soon,can't wait.xo,lavanya.

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

award


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Wake Up Call

oh, thank god n thank you, i have been waitin forever to read this chappie n shall i say ,"well done".

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Mea Culpa

thank u, thank u, thank u, amazing as always... definitely page-turning now.. tc, keep it up.

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Consequences

thanks for writin,xoxo

xoxo

pinky

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Another Brick in the Wall

lovely as usual................ 

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Life Goes On

please update soon or asap, eagerly waitin for the next chapter, thanks for writin, luv ya, xoxo



Author's Response:

I know... I need to get an update out, I've got the next chapter started, have just been super busy.  Thank you for all the lovely reviews and I hope to have more for ya'll soon.

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: In Clear Sight

pls,pretty pls update soon,with a cherry on top. i wanna know what happens next with edward and with jasper n bella.

Snape's Story by Tbird1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 144]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Dark Lord is dead and the magical world is struggling to return back to normal. Severus Snape's past has finally caught up to him and his life is in a downworld spiral. Can one caring woman save him before he destroys himself? This story contains adult themes, situations and language.


Categories: Harry Potter, After Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75584 Read Count: 28977
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 08 Feb 2013
Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i love the story, can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon, xo,lavanya.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Is right now soon enough?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407819
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

hi, i want you to know that i love the story...so much that i did not stop to review... sorry for that, but ,yeah, i love the story n vl be waitin for ur nxt updates,keep up the good work.xo,lavanya.

Summary: Past Featured Story

“Good heavens, boy.” Jack Sparrow drawled as he leaned back in his chair and looked at her, “Are you blushing?” he asked with narrowed eyes and Josette shifted in her chair while fixing the hat upon her head. “No.” she mumbled as she avoided looking at her captain and his latest conquest. Jack studied her face before he smirked, “You’re not a virgin, are you?” his eyes danced with mirth and she scowled.
No, I am. But what I certainly am not is a boy. She thought as she remained silent.

 

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Categories: Pirates of the Caribbean, Alternate Universe
Characters: Captain Jack Sparrow/Other Character
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113819 Read Count: 12215
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2012 Updated: 01 Nov 2012
Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

lile is definitely an understatement, i loved it so far. so much that i did not stop to review.....sorry.. ;-P jack is fascinating, n so is joossette.... pls update soon, eagerly waiting, xoxo, lavanya...

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

loved it! waitin for the next..dunno, greg, hope so.... in the order to your qs.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

hey lina, i love the story....n jack's character in it, jossette s pretty mature n is handling herself well, in the circumstances. i cant wait for the next chapter,pls update soon.xo,lavanya.

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

hey robsessed, i like the story ,pls update soon, xo,lavanya.



Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"

Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

hi, robsessed, i love how bella puts mike and lauren in their places... can't wait for the next chapter...

pls update soon,xo.lavanya.



Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248525
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: September 22nd 1843

yes, i have, they are tangy, can be used as a mouth freshener, they can be sliced, dried n eaten with a sprinkle of fruit or table salt n bit of pepper... helps maintaining healthy skin, helps in digestion, can be made into oil used for lustrous hair..  

  i don't think she will....

  when are edward n bella going to meet?

u have a good story going on, keep it that way...

                                                             ciao,lavanya.xo.

Serenity's Prayer by ladylibre Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward takes Bella into the forest to dump her, her reaction completely surprises him. Will this be the end of B&E or will they find a new path to forever? A canon-based yet very different AU approach to New Moon. Some OOC and OC.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242771 Read Count: 26820
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Mar 2014
Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Turnabout

i love this bella.... i hated that part of bella in the book where she just gave up, laid down n took it..

 



Author's Response:

I love this Bella too! She's the girl who told Edward in Twilight, "I don't like double-standards." It was that line which inspired me to write this story. I wondered what that Bella would have done had she met Edward in the forest.

Thanks for the review!!

555-TALK by LegendaryDiamond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 92]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when Bella dials the wrong number one night and instead of getting her Mom she gets an erotic radio station's hotline? "Hello, this is Edward speaking, tell us your deepest fantasies or real life sexy stories."555-Talk banner by ysar




THANK YOU SO MUCH YSAR FOR THE BANNER! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44950 Read Count: 31096
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2016
Reviewer: labelleamie Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Falling

i like it....