Reviews by franmasen
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Isabella is a magazine writer, whose life is thrown into disarray when her husband leaves her for another woman. To escape her routine life, she accepts an assignment to interview a Parisian Madame, whom she believes is running a brothel. But Isabella will soon discover that there are more facets to love and romance, especially when Madame Esme selects her as her next project.

WRITTEN FOR THE 2013 JANUARY DRABBLE WARS

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83682 Read Count: 124964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 26 Sep 2013
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Southern Comfort

Just the preview for the next chapter got me excited all over again, I liked very much to hear Jasper story. This story has a way of make me hope to find that 'happily ever after'.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Shopping Spree

I have to find a Madame Esme to help me, kkkkkk 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 62: EPILOGUE

I loved your entire story, and you gave the perfect end to it, congratulations. I know that this has nothing to do with it, but Justine made me remember chefgirl, from The other side of the fence...



Author's Response:

I don't know what The Other Side of the Fence is... is it a TV Show? I don't get many american tv shows here, so i don't know if it was. Or is it a fic? PM me, I wanna find out!

I'm glad you enjoyed the epilogue, I wanted to give a HEA that was beleivable, and I based Isabella's of regnancy slightly on my aunt's.

Thank you for all your reviews.

xoxo

Mina

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Game Over

Yay, I'm just so glad with the things that happened with Peter, he deserved every single one of them!!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Saying Goodbye

Just the kind of almost end that makes me happy!!!! 



Author's Response:

thank you for reviewing and liking this story, there are pictures on my blog for the chapters you can go check out, just go to the blog and click on the tab LL&ME Extras. Hope you like the Epi! xo Mina

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Last Stand

HAHAHAHA, that was so good, better than his death, it was perfect, the perfect end for the cheating bastard!!!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Amusing Surprise

He's just so cute!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Choosing Battles

What? What dirty secret Peter has??? Thank god the story's finished!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Je t'aime

Ohhhh, I just love this kind of sappy moment!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Adieu Paris

Whyyy???? That's so unfair, I'm crying for them....

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Little Casanova

Alex's a sweet boy, hopefully he'll be a good stepson, YaY Bella

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Enchanting Soir้e

Maybe Edward has the same instincts as his aunt, but I think Bella didn't let go of Peter yet, the man that she thought she had a perfect marriage with!!! Sometimes it's difficult to think that another other man won't live you too!!!

She needs to realize that Peter was a scumbag for cheating on her inside her house, and for being a liar of the worst species, and that didn't deserve her love. And like Esme told her, the best revenge is to show him that she's happy and don't miss the boring life that he gave her one bit, because if she was boring, so was he, and changing of woman wouldn't change that!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Missing You

I can't wait to see what Jasper'll say about Madame...

And I want to see what Peter'll think when he sees how happy Bella is without him and that she finally found a real man!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Learning Experience

Ahhh, kiss Edward, Bella, rsrsrsrs, I had to laugh with Madame making fun of Bella, rsrsrs 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: The List

In the end I think Esme does a lot for the girls for them to never suffer the way she suffered when her husband left her, and I obviously supposing that she really loved her husband, but hopefully he wasn't Carlisle and he'll appear any time sweeping her out of feet!!! 



Author's Response:

You are absolutely correct on Esme's motivation, you really get her! And as for Carlisle... well, let's just say that he IS part of her past, but no, he isn't the cheating ex-husband.

Thank you for reading and reviewng, next chapter will be up in an hour. xoxo Mina

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 46: The Wedding

I loved the last chapter and this one too, but I really thought about killing Jasper for letting Alice at the altar!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Honestly Charming

 

Hope you get better, dengue isn't something that we should take it lightly, I live in Brazil and thank god, my city most of the time has a cold weather, so at least I never heard of a case of dengue in here, but we can't never be to cautions, take care...

 

I thought it was impossible to love Frenchward more, but he's so cute, can I have him????

 Uhhh Bella posing to sexy pics... go Bella, show yourself that Peter didn't know anything about you!!!

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Selfless Father

Thank God it wasn't his wife, now I can live at peace!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 29: The assistant

*Gasp* Madame failed??? How is that possible???

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Different Choices

Have to find a Madame Esme for me, desperately!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Final Touches

It's not really a mistake, but in this phrase: "... but somewhere along the way his career started to come fist and our marriage second.", is missing a R in the first.

Finally, Bella saw that Peter was the boring one and never deserved her time!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for pointing that out! I'll fix it right away. xo ~Mina

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 32: First Lesson

Madame Esme can seduce even a rock or a dead person, kkkkkk, the poor man didn't stand a chance, I just love her!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Monsieur Charmant

So Edward has a son??? Please, don't tell me that Alex mother decided that she liked women more than she liked Edward, kkkkkk

 

I loved the way he feels about Bella, finally she found a real man!!!

I just love CaraNo, her stories are the best, love them all!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Beautifully Honest

Poor Bella, when she thinks that things are going great, something like this happens! kkkkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Golden Surprise

Ohhh, Bella caught Edward... Thank god that I already know that he's not married otherwise I would want to kill him!!!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 40: D๎ner Romantique

Go for it, Bella, you need to forget Peter, the jerk don't deserve anything from you!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Brazen Love

I cried for Madame, for what she lost, and for the future that she still hopes for!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Unpleasant News

I wish I could enter in this story and go after Peter to cut of his head, what a jerk. I would love to see him being humiliated in a court room for being a greedy and unfaithful bastard, that don't deserve anything for the work of someone else!!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Thoughtful Gift

I just ask for the death of Peter and Charlotte, and would love to see Carlisle appearing for Madame!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Come Closer

I love to think that Bella finally has found someone that really likes her for who she is!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Close Up

I just love the idea of what a camera can capture that we can't see, it shows amazing things!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Crossing Lines

Things are starting to fall in the right place, now I just need to see how you'll make Peter die :-)

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 52: The Best

Ohhh, I hope Carlisle's the man!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Second Chances

I'm crying happy tears of joy for Esme!!! She deserves to be happy too!!!

Stay by CuteMommas by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

When Edward enlisted, he never expected to meet the woman of his dreams right before he deployed. In order to save her from the heartache of losing him, Bella receives a letter from Edward, telling her not to wait and to find love. Never one to give up, Bella vows that when Edward returns home, hers will be the first face he sees. After an injury that almost claims his life, Edward returns home, only to find himself on her porch, praying for the nerve to knock when the door swings open…stories/42758/images/Stay.jpg


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11550 Read Count: 3064
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2013 Updated: 03 Feb 2013
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, Charlie should have realized that his daughter didn't have anything from her mother!!!!

Kidnap101 by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 626]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has just one mission; to save her childhood best friend from the clutches of Hollywood. She's got her work cut out for her, but she'll do it, even if she has to do things that she really doesn't want to. Written purely for laughs.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11080 Read Count: 119831
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2013 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

hahaha, Edward's a jerk, hahaha, but I think that Bella'll teach him a lesson or two!!!!

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What????

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Charlie's helping???

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Uhmmmmmm

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Can't wait to see what Edward'll thing about his kidnapper!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

HAHAHA, Bella'll get out of this situation hating Edward, kkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ohhhhhhhhh, he's getting afraid!!! Poor Edward

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Crazy people everywhere!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Apparently Edward likes tough love... kkkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Bella, is maybe a little delusional!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Bella needs to stop forgetting him, kkkkk, he'll just be angrier!!!! kkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yes, yes I want!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG, crazy people everywhere!!! kkkk

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

hahahaha, poor Edward's disgusting, maybe a shower would be a good idea!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

They were crazy kids, poor sheets!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

(SVM Canon; spoilers/all books) On Christmas Eve, more than seven years after the events of Dead Ever After, Sookie gets a surprise visitor: Eric Northman. He’s brought her a present. Will she accept it? And—if she doesn’t—will she and her family make it to the New Year with their freedom intact?

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Canon
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The "Gift Horse" Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17232 Read Count: 614
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2013 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Gift Horse

I loved this story, I didn't even read the last book after I read a piece written about it, poor Eric, and poor Sookie, but you made it all better, lol, I finally have a perfect end.

 

Ohhhhh, I would love to read the continuation, and especially the part about Bill's death, that's long overdue.

Valentine's Night by Meridian Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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So…what happens three years after Eric’s marital incarceration? Read and see. A two-, possibly three-chapter short story. Anti-canon (read the A/N), HEA GUARANTEED.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42912 Read Count: 3077
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2014 Updated: 26 Dec 2014
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Epilogue, Part 1

I loved the changes that you made, Jason was not a good brother, he would always be selfish and wouldn't change.

I'm almost regretting having started reading the 10º book, it feels just wrong, I can almost see CH changing everything.

 

Even Meg Cabot in the last book of the Mediator series was able to change everything and make her fans happy, and Jesse was dead, talk about a great author ¬¬.



Author's Response:

*pfft*  I stopped after book 9, and BARELY skimmed 10.  I've got the plot points from friends who (unfortunately for them, fortunately for me) read that trash, but read it myself?  Hell no - I like my brain too much to stuff it w/ illbegotten tripe!  :D

Thanks - very glad you liked it!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Okay, I started reading Dead in the Family, and I could see where you came from in the Amelia aspect, she was acting strange, and Sookie suspicion about her feelings for Eric, he should have done what your Eric did, killed everybody, o/, but the thing is, she didn't trust him at all, CH made Sookie trust everybody, but the man that always tried to help and be there for her she just couldn't. Eric always was truthful, he liked the power, he didn't want to be a king, but he still wanted to be a Sherif, he never lied!!!  CH ruined everything, now I understand the threats that she received. 



Author's Response:

Exactly!!  While I definitely don't support the death threats (it's just a story when it all comes down to it), I do most fervently understand the outrage.  She basically fucked her own character - her most BELOVED character - over with a hot poker. 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhhh, I still haven't read the last book, I'm afraid, I rereading Dead and Gone, so until I get there I'll read your story and be happy that Eric always gets away from his problems, love him!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm pretending that 90% of the last 3 books never existed.  ;)  Glad you like the story! 

 

~Mer

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I always thought that Eric and Sookie were perfect for each other, their sense of humor, a little twisted sometimes, always made me laugh. Even though he had to maintain his place in the vampire community, he tried to be there for her when everybody had let her down, her brother, Bill, the bastard, Alcide, Quinn, and even Sam sometimes, because he couldn't agree with her opinions.    



Author's Response:

Exactly!  No matter what CH tried to claim in later books or what the trolls at HBO are trying to force down our throats, Eric and Sookie absolutely *were* written to be together.

Great minds think alike!

~Mer

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well, apparently the last book was a big fiasco, what the hell was CH thinking??? ¬¬



Author's Response:

Short answer?  She wasn't.  I didn't bother with the last 2.5 books.  Wasn't worth the effort.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I could see Eric doing the kneeling thing, but the part that Sookie never once felt the need to procreate herself, sound a little weird, her dream always was to have a husband, children and the insurance his job would give, lol, she could always adopt with Eric, awwwwww. That would be nice, lol.



Author's Response:

Huh, I always understood that she didn't want to risk passing her telepathy along to the next generation, that she would have liked to have had the traditional family, but that she didn't want to risk it.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ohh, I miss Pam, she was weird in a nice way, and Bubba, what can I say about him, the guy always did things, like kill someone and stock in a closet, and nobody ever suspected him!!!



Author's Response:

I loved book Pam!  She was snarky and fun, and while she was understandably wary of Sookie at first, she really did grow to care a lot about her.  And Bubba?  Ohhh, he was a blast!  I loved him!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ohhh come on, how CH didn't see that they would never be happy without each other?!?!?!



Author's Response:

Totally.  Agree.  UGH!!

Beholden by Elfchef Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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It's hard being a telepathic barmaid but Sookie Stackhouse can't complain. She has a nice life in her small town. It all goes up in smoke when a fairy blackmails her onto marrying a vampire. A vampire that could care less who she is or what she feels. Watch their unlikely story unfold. This isn't an easy love story but then again love and life seldom are

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105322 Read Count: 8332
[Report This] Published: 10 Apr 2014 Updated: 10 Apr 2014
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I always hated Nial, he always is so mean, not my favorite character.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well, Jason's so selfish that it makes my teeth hurt.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I still don't like Nial, but Quinn became my least favorite character, so hateful, I love what Sookie let her Shadow Wraiths do with him. Bastard.

Summary:

This is my first fanfiction – complete (for now, sequel planned in the future):

Sookie is widow with two young children, Eric is a movie star/producer coming to check out her Bed and Breakfast as a possible filming location. Romance/mild angst. E/S All Human.

Beta: shellsfantasea


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, All Human
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177844 Read Count: 6028
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2014 Updated: 14 Apr 2014
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 – I want to be where you are

Well, I just have to say that I'm so sorry for not reviewing every single chapter, after Eric stopped acting as a jerk the story was just amazing. This was my first human Eric, and I loved, and Pam with her teacups, awwwww, so sweet.

 

I hated Bill, I don't like him normally, but here he was just another level on the crazy scale ¬¬. 

You deserve so many reviews for this story. Thanks for sharing.  

Make a Wish by magsmacdonald Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Eric receives a request from a dying boy (Hunter) to take his mother (Sookie) on a date. He decides to give the request a chance in the hopes it will alleviate some of his boredom with life. AU / OOC! Rated M for language and later chapters. E/S. Mild angst/drama.

 

If you have aversions to: Eric as a family man or romance bordering on sappy, this is not the story for you. I have some very mild drama planned, stuff that starts and resolves in the course of one chapter (one situation may take two chapters – I haven’t written that far out yet).

 


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223237 Read Count: 20861
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Jul 2014
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 – Familiar Faces

Awwwwww, Eric you big vampire viking, you're such a softy....

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 – Smitten

Ohhh, Eric, you charmer, I always knew you were a sweet man.

 

And after almost 3 years without reading Souther Vampires I read about his maker again, ohhh, I always hated that part, it took away something from Eric. 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Genny

Awww, that's nice, not what happened with Genny, lol, but that Eric sees her as a mother figure. Now Jason and Rene need to be drained by some starving vampires, the bastards, hate Jason, the arrogant idiot!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 – Something you should know

Eric's so sweet, hahaha, always loved him!!!



Author's Response:

Yes - this is a sweetie-pie Eric for sure.  Glad you're liking it.

 

M

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 – Remote Wooing

Pam's so fake that not even pretending Eric believes her!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 – Brotherly love

I'm hating some many people in this chapter that I can't even talk, I really want Eric to kill Jason, he won't stop till he does something worse with Sookie!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi there -welcome to the story and thanks for reviewing.

 

Hope you like where I take it.

 

Jason sucks - you learn more about why in upcoming chapters.

 

Mags

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 – How many last goodbyes?

Pam's getting on my nerves, she's so self-centered, Eric'll be so mad if she messes things with Sookie, but Pam's asking for trouble!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 – Why would she do that?

Great start for Pam, she needs to grow up and maybe this punishment is her opportunity.

 

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 – Love at First Sight

OMG, I love Eric as this family man, a dream man, that's what he is, minus the long hair... lol



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Busted

Hahahaha, yeah, babies are only cute and polite in stories, I don't know any, so I'll keep dreaming with perfect and polite Hunter and sweet and non crying Celia. The children of my dreams!!! lol.

 

And obviously Eric as a family man is just perfect, so that would be something that I would love to have!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 – Blood Healing

Horrible houses, just horrible *cue to sarcasm*. ¬¬

 

Too bad that in real life a billionaire vampire doesn't appear for me, it didn't need to be a vampire, just billionaire, lol. 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 – The Keystone State

Hahahaha, nobody knows how to act close to Eric with a baby.

 

Awwww poor Hunter, please, don't let him die, he's such a sweet boy!!! :-(

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 – No Ordinary Miracle

Sookie's a mess, lol, crying all the time, but I understand her motives, and she has plenty of motives to cry of happiness!!

 

Loved the chapter and seeing the picture of little Hunter just made me more happy!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 – Moving Forward

lo, Eric's such a big sweet vampire viking, lol, impossible not to love him.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 – See Daddy Marry Mommy

Lol, Hunter's a weird little guy...

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Nick of Time

Ohhhh, I hate Bill, he's always a bastard...

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Yeah

The pet probably is Hadley, and maybe Jason was taken by Bill to the queen, ohh, so many people to dislike. ¬¬ 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - So Deserved

Love, love, love all you need is love!!!! Yeah, everything that Eric needed was love, and Sookie, too. 

Amazing story, I loved Eric and Hunter and everybody, thanks for sharing our gorgeous Viking and this sweet tale with us. 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - Epilogue

Ohhhhh, I loved this last chapter, even though I'm not happy that it came to an end, that's just sad :-(. 

You made the end just perfect, the part of the day walkers was simply amazing, couldn't be better than that!

Summary:

This is the a re-telling of Dead to the World from Eric's POV with a happier ending for Eric and Sookie.  Contains language, violence, and sexual content.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26199 Read Count: 1651
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2014 Updated: 28 Apr 2014
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

After everything that Sookie had to endure because of vampires, she needs at least money for all the beating!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can see Eric thinking this, I was reading the 4 book, Dead to the World and remembered that I hadn't finished this story, and I had to see what Eric was thinking. Eric normally is selfish, but Bill was way worse. Love my Eric <3

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if when Sookie’s parents died, she didn’t go live with Gran? What if Fintan showed up to assign a guardian to Sookie? It’s not who you think. This the story of how Sookie Stackhouse grows up within the supernatural community, and takes her rightful place among the Supes. All your favorite characters will show up. Contains violence, explicit sexual content, and vulgar language.

Banner by the lovely Sephrina

Nominated for the following 2014 The Fanatic Fanfics Multifandom Awards:

Favorite Romance Fic

Favorite Supernatural Fic

Favorite Work In-Progress Fic

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie/Godric
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB, The ADL and Choices Universe
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130768 Read Count: 40704
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2014 Updated: 28 May 2014
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Yeah, Nial deserved his end, what a bastard, he destroyed so many lives just for greed of power.

I loved all the chapters of your story, sorry for not reviewing in all of them, but you made it hard to wait until the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this story.  This was my second attempt at fanfiction.  I appreciate that you reviewed when you could.  I must admit, I'm terrible when it comes to reviewing other people's stories.  I'm usually reading the stories on my phone and it's not the easiest way to comment on a story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

tcwm

 

Banner by Sephrenia

This continues the story from A Different Life.  Our story picks up several years after the conclusion of ADL.  Where will we find Eric, Sookie, Godric, and others?  Every choice has a consequence. . .

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie/Godric
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25045 Read Count: 3377
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2014 Updated: 13 Oct 2014
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG, they never have peace.

What a bunch of sick people, and they have the courage to say that vampires are monsters!!!!!

Loved to see Godric with Hadley, he and Pam were the only loners, now someone has to appear for her!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Alcide loves everybody, lol, the man has no problems loving everyone. 

 



Author's Response:

Well, he is a dog . . . hehehehehehe

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well, I'm always happy with the death of Appius.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, free from an abusive ex and his controlling family, takes her son and moves away from the life she knew. Opening a Bakery, she meets Edward, a fireman, when her partially deaf son runs off. Can Edward be the Baker’s Man, and Irina’s daddy too? What baggage does he have?

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Banner by: Chandrakanta


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15651 Read Count: 3430
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2014 Updated: 01 Jun 2014
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the story, except for the Jacob and Billy part, those guys were sick bastards, but the other parts were great.

Chastity by mistressjessica1028 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Chastity

chastity

Alexander Skarsgard as Eric

Candice Swanepoel as Chastity/Sookie

Allan Hyde as Godric

This story is Rated NC-17.  That means, NSFW, children, and any other situation where you would feel embarrassed to have this on your screen.  There are visual aids to help enhance the story.  You have been warned . . .

 

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie/Godric
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28615 Read Count: 13728
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2014 Updated: 13 Oct 2014
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This girl would be the perfect Sookie in the Tv show, the one that they chose had nothing of Sookie in her!!!!



Author's Response:

Chastity is actually a Victoria's Secret model her name is Candice.  I can't spell her last name, so I won't even bother trying.

Summary: Past Featured Story

etdcs

 

Starts after the Maenad attacks Sookie and she’s been healed.  An unlikely confidant will help Sookie realize that Bill has been manipulating her but before that can be explored, Eric needs her in Dallas. The story progresses through some challenges then onto time for Eric and Sookie to heal and grow closer.  E/S HEA is a guarantee.  Tissues may be required for some.  Rated M.  AU and OOC

 

Based on:  A combination of SVM and TB:  Picking and choosing what I want, throwing out the crap I don’t and adding whatever else makes sense to me and the story.  SeeCanon and not for details.

 

If you have aversions to certain story themes – I have created a separate TRIGGER warnings page.  It’s somewhat spoilerish – but for folks upset at certain topics, please read before you start the story.  I’m being up-front – don’t yell later.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161055 Read Count: 27143
[Report This] Published: 28 Jul 2014 Updated: 07 May 2015
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Brave

I prefer Godric as Eric's good maker, because Appius is just horrible.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 – Traitor

Now I loved Sookie's attitude, at least now I know that she'll fight against anything that Bill'll try to do with her, the bastard. 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 – Eyes wide open

Bill's such a jerk, I hate him.

Eric only gives me more reason to love him.

It's so strange to see Sookie acting like a puppy, ¬¬.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 – Friends

Sookie, stop acting like an idiot, and get the hell out of Bill way!!! 



Author's Response:

Hi! 

Thanks for all your reviews.

 

Help me out though - how is Sookie a puppy - and what do you want her to do with Bill?  I can't promise changes but I am always willing to listen - I just need more details!

 

M

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 – Dawn

Will Sookie get the hell out of Dallas? won't Bill send her with Lorena for "training"? That sick bastard ¬¬

 

Well, Eric was stupid, fool, I hope that when he wakes up Sookie is still in Dallas, or at least free.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 – Rescue Me

Now Sookie'll have to be very careful, Bill'll not give up!!!! 

Sharp Left Turn by fyrebyrd89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 295]
Summary: Past Featured Story

slt

 

In an instant your life can take a sharp left turn. Can you find the strength to lose it all and gain the unknown? Lives will be shattered, including your own.  

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155558 Read Count: 62544
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2016
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 05 May 2016 Title: Chapter 41: Changes Ahead

I like your story very much and I really sorry for not leaving a comment in the other chapters, the only thing that bothers me in this story is the way Edward's speaks and his talks with Jay, the swear words he or they use seems unnecessary, it looks very forced and very irritating, this is the only thing I would change in the story. I don't mean to offend you as the writer, just give you an insight, just because he's a man doesn't mean he has to say a swear word in every phrase.   



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I am good with your feelings on this matter, but it's not because he s a man that he spoke that way, it is simply who he is. I have many stories, including a Christian Rocker Edward, who do not use this language, but this Edward is that man. I made him that man becuase I love a swearing Edward honestly, and it fits who he is. I am very happy to hear that you enjoyed the story otherwise though, and even more happier that you chose to stop in and let me know your thoughts. Some people are so afraid of offending an author that they choose to say nothing. I'm not that author who gets offended. There are a few things I would change if I were going back and starting over, but that aspect isn't one of them. Thank you :)

Fyre