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Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married. During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.
Jasper/Bella Pairing. Humor/Romance. AU/OOC.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 145022
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
oh shit that was funny! I guess after centuries of being a doc he just needed a little change of pace :) and the boys will never learn! LOL ... Can't wait to see more... and the visit from their friends from india :)
Author's Response:
Nope, those boys are just as dense as ever when it comes to hunting. You'll hear more about Carlisle in three chapters XOXO
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
wow!!! OMG I have been reading only this for 2 days trying to catch up!!! I LOVE THIS!!! and OMG this last chapter tops all of them....Edward calling and asking for every detail was hilarious!!! Can't wait to see more!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you're enjoying the story. Yeah, Edward needed help, desperately. He doesn't like to fail. XOXO
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
great chapter! I love the couple that helped Bella out :) they were so sweet. I am glad that her and Jasper are sorta back on track now.... and OMG that party was hilarious... and then Carlisle agreeing that the master's bite was a good thing wow! LOL ... Can't wait to see more... wonder what will happen with Maria now ?!
Author's Response:
J and B will be completely back on track by the upcoming chapter. Those vamps were crazy inviting humans to the toga party. As for the master's bite, we needed to tone down our favorite mama vamp. As for Maria, she's still on her vacay right now. You'll start getting hints as to what's happening in three chapters. XOXO
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
great chapter... wow Jasper's excuses were all pretty lame :( Excited to see more! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. Jasper has a lot of explaining to do. Hopefully, Bella will give him the chance to do so. XOXO
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Great chapter! are we going to have another time jump? Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Not now. Our vamps still have issues to get through. They basically have five years to become mentally and emotionally strong and united. XOXO
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Great couple of chapters!!! Can't wait to see the next one ! :)
Author's Response:
We're going to delve a bit into Rose next chapter and we go to Irina's benefit ball. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. XOXO
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
wow!! So much happened and I totally agree with Carlisle, his midlife crisis is long over do! Poor Emmett :( at least him and Rose took some big steps forward in helping their relationship :) Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Carlisle's mid-life crisis is long overdue and it will be long too. Em and Rose will pull through. XOXO
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Life Happens, So Just Roll With It
wow!! So much happened here!
I don't think that Vicky should return Amber's pinky.. she should keep it for a few more decades! LOL
The Volturi are horrible, but we kinda already knew that. Felix and Gianna are right though they are lucky that they got away alive.
Rex, well who would have thought that an Incubus could be so insecure! the stripper class oops! I mean exotic dancing class was funny! poor Jasper though, so much restraint to not go and rip her from that class!
Amrita, poor woman having to spend that much time in a confined place with her singer! at least she got some presents and lots of love when she got to the states!
Char, well what are we going to do with her! LOL
Can't wait to see the next one! :)
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Amazing chapter!! Can't wait to see the next one! :)
Author's Response:
Aw...thank you. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. More on Esme next. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
wow!!! Amazing chapter!
I for one am happy that Riley flipped out on her!!! Someone really needed to, hopefully Vicky can keep her in check for a bit LOL :)
Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Riley was due for a flip out. Esme crossed the line, unfortunately, she's not done lying to herself yet. You'll see in a couple of chapters. XOXO
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Amazing chapter!!! :) Can't wait to see the next one!! :)
Author's Response:
I'm so happy that you enjoyed the chapter. This chapter is actually one of my favorite ones. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Great chapter!!!! wow!!! Can't wait for the next one.... :)
Author's Response:
Aww...glad you enjoyed it. More coming soon. We'll start with Rex's POV. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
wow... great chapter.. so sad... are Bella and Jasper really gone? :(
Please don't make us wait too long for the next one.
Author's Response:
I can't answer if Bella and Jasper are really gone--that'll defeat the purpose of the cliffhanger. *wink* I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
Great chapter!!! Can't wait to see the last few chapters :)
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you liked the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
Great chapter!!!! wow... so much good stuff...yay for making chocolate!!! That was my favorite part.... Can't wait to see the next one!!!
Author's Response:
Those women needed chocolate--especially Vicky and Rose. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
Loved this chapter... wow I can't believe how crazy Alice was... and is getting again..... Glad that they moved away... and they really all did need to go to Law School.... Can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response:
Alice is mentally ill and really needs help that Riley can no longer provide. Hopefully there's something out there for her.
Law School--yes, they absolutely need to go and you'll see why in the next chapter.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Great chapter!!! I love that there is so many that have helped them realize there is a better way to live.... and someone who can help Alice because poor Riley can't do it anymore.... I am so happy that him and Vicky are gonna take off for awhile... they deserve it!!! Can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response:
You're absolutely correct, Riley cannot help Alice anymore. It won't do either of them any good. And Riley does need to fly free for a bit. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Amazing chapter!! I am happy for Riley and Vicky that they got their own 10yr break :) So excited to see the next one... even though it is almost over... but it has been an amazing journey!
Excited for your next project... and as far as writing 2 stories...I think you should do whatever you feel you can.... I will be reading whatever you write either way! :)
Author's Response:
I apologize for the delay in posting the last chapter. 98 percent of my town was without power since Sunday (8- 28) due to Hurricane Irene. We just got our power back last night and right now I'm trying to get caught up with things that I couldn't do without electricity such as laundry, grocery shopping, etc. I will post chapter 63 as soon as possible--hopefully in the next two days, but please understand that I absolutely must catch up with home issues. Thank you for understanding the situation I am in.
Riley needed a ten year hiatus from life. He was run amuck by his family having to come home and counsel them through true disorders. Part of it was his fault for being unable to say no. This is where his personality is very similar to Bella's. Both of them were unable to say no because they didn't want to hurt anyone's feelings. Now, the two have realized the importance of boundaries.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
AMAZING ending :) I loved how it ended with Charlie and how we saw how everyone met up there! Even Kenny and Randy and Lauren is with Jenks! wow! I haven't had a chance to read the new stories yet... I was out of town all weekend but I am going to try to get to them tonite or tomorrow! :) Thank you for an amazing story, I have enjoyed it so much! :)
When Bella and Edward hook up at a party their lives quickly become complicated, causing a rift in their close knit circle of friends. Despite the fallout, they can’t stay away from each other. Neither of them are able to admit the depths of their feelings for the other and when Edward has to leave for Italy and Bella realizes she’s attracted to her friend Claire, their already shaky relationship is in danger of falling apart.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297314 Read Count: 33531
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 - Winter In My Heart
great chapter! wow... so heartbreaking for them... :(
I am kinda happy with Bella for lashing out at him as he left though .... really what did he expect?
Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it, but it was definitely rough.
He really should have expected that she'd be upset, but in his mind it makes sense for him to tell her to see other people. When they're together again, he will explain why.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - You Look Like Rain
wow! Edward is back... at least he got to the party before Claire or that could have been more awkward than it already was! Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! It's funny, I never thought about that scenario. It definitely could have made for quite an awkward scene.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Deleted Chapter - Down
Great outtake!! .... and I understand why you cut the chapter... kinda made their relationship go further than it needed to with the flow of the original storyline.
Author's Response:
Thanks! That's exactly why I cut the chapter. It just didn't quite ever feel right. Thanks for the review.
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - Magdalena
Great chapter!!! Loved Mike's comment!! LMAO! Can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response:
I KNEW you'd get a kick out of that. Mike is such a funny side character to me (in the actual Twilight books/movies and this story). Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the review!
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - I Don't Understand Anything
great chapter!!! ha ... poor mike just figured out one of the reasons Bella wasn't interested in him LOL ... So excited to see the next one!!
I think that Alice had good points to her conversation, but was a bit harsh in voicing them.... It isn't like Bella is doing this behind Edward's back, he knows about it and gave his blessing so to speak. but oh well....until next time.
Author's Response:
(laughs) yeah, Mike is a little slow! It's funny, that is one of the parts of this story based on real life and oh man, the poor guy was so baffled as to why I wanted his sister and not him. It was hilarious.
Alice did have some good pointes, but being Alice, wasn't as tactful about it as she could have been. I can understand why it's hard for her to wrap her brain around what Bella's struggling with, and it's hard to find the right balance between being a supportive friend and telling them they are making the wrong decisions.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Love Me Two Times
ok first I must apoligize for not reviewing every chapter... but I just had to keep clicking next to get the next chapter! :)
This story is AMAZING!!!! I am loving it soooo much.. can't wait to see more!! How long until Clarie comes into the picture and Edward leaves for Italy?
Kate :)
Author's Response:
It's okay that you didn't review each chapter, I know I do that when I get really into a story and just want to see what happens. I am so glad you're enjoying it.
To answer your questions about Claire and Edward, the next chapter is going to be Halloween. Edward leaves just after New Years, and Bella meets Claire that next week. So, that's about 10 more chapters!
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Three Doors
great chapter... and I don't think she forgave too easily... they had been friends for so long and she apoligized and was sincere about it :) Can't wait to see more!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - I've Fallen In Love With You
good chapter... gah I think that she would be surprised by his reaction if she told him... but then he is leaving and we still need to see what happens with Clarie right?! LOL Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it.
Yeah, I agree, she'd be totally shocked if they actually sat down and talked about their feelings. But they're kind of being idiots right now. His trip and her meeting Claire are really going to shake them up.
I just posted ch. 24, hope you like it!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Somethin' Stupid
I think that his feelings are changing... but without seeing his side... don't know if he is actually in love with her yet... but I am sure he is well on his wayt there too.... Can't wait to see more! :)
Author's Response:
I am so sorry, I apparently somehow missed replying to this review! Thanks for the review, I really do appreciate it.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - What Are We Gonna Do
gah! sorry I haven't been reviewing... all the updates got shuffled to the spam box in my email and I didn't get them... so I just read from Chapter 18 to this one :)
Can't wait to see the next one.... seems like they are both getting in a little deeper than they intented to :)
Author's Response:
That's okay! I'm not always great with reviews either, but I'm working on it!
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - You and I
Great chapter! Can't wait to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! It shouldn't long before the next one is out.
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Song For A Winter's Night
great chapter.... but yeah I agree he looses some points for not making sure she knew this was a date.... and I totally think he was trying to tell her something! Can't wait to see the rest of the date :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, he really should have told her! The rest of the date should be up soon!
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Clementine
another amazing chapter!! So excited to see more even though with each chapter we get closer to him going back to Italy... hopefully one of them will find the guts to have the coversation that they need to have :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
Thank you. I know, it's hard to know that they have just a few days left. Thanks for the review!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Wish I Had An Angel
great chapter!!! Can't wait to see more... and as far as seeing something from EPOV... either the last night before he left for Italy or the valentines's day chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I love hearing what people want to see from Edward's POV, I'll keep both of those in mind!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Flames
wow! Great chapter! Loved it... and that necklace/stone are so unique and beautiful and I loved the song... very fitting for the chapter :) Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I actually have a really similar necklace and I thought it was the perfect thing for him to give her.
I am so glad you listened to the song, it was what inspired the chapter. :)
Thanks for the review!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Wintersong
great chapter! I do think that Charlie knows! LOL
Possesiveward! and jeez did that Jack guy really think that line would work!
Can't wait to see the next one... even though it means Edward leaving.
Author's Response:
I am SO glad you said something! I messed up and posted chapter 29 in 28's place, so go back and read 28. They should be correctly labeled now. So sorry!
Did you like Possesiveward? I've had some requests for him!
Clearly...boys are dumb, especially Jack if he thought it would work.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - I Don't Have Anything
:( poor Bella and Edward....Loved this chapter even if it was sad. Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it, it was a really rought chapter to write.
I really appreciate the review, it means so much.
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Claire
Great chapter! I love that you gave us alot of time into their growing friendship and not just the meeting! :)
I love Claire!!
Can't wait to see more! :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked the chapter and Claire. I wanted to show it evolve slowly, and I'm glad that you liked that!
I always appreciate the reviews!
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - I Kissed A Girl
great chapter!!! I think that the way Bella is dealing with everything is good, and yeah Edward is mad at himself now thinking that he should have said something and made sure they were a couple before he left! Can't wait to see more! :)
Kate
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I am glad you like the way Bella is dealing with everything. You''re definitely right that he's regretting not telling her he wanted a relationship!
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - It's About You
great chapter! poor bella and edward :( Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, glad you liked it! Yeah, it's definitely rough for them. The next chapter should be up tomorrow I think!
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Everybody Here Wants You
great chapter! So sweet that he remembered to send her some flowers on VDAY! :) and I think that she is just taking his tone wrong, he is probably upset that she spent VDAY with Claire and he wasn't there again .... such a hard thing for them, just like all long distance relationships are :(
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the chapter. Long distance relationships can be really rough, it's so easy to misinterpret things.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Confusion
great chapter! good discussion they had about Claire at least they are talking about the mutual attraction.
So excited to see the next one!!
-Kate
Author's Response:
They're both trying! The next chapter will go up in a couple of hours, so you won't have long to wait!
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - With All That I Am
wow!! crazy couple of chapters... I think that Edward knows how she feels, between what she has told him over email and phone and Skype, and what little he actually saw of Claire while he was home, I am pretty sure he has a good idea of what she wants to do, and gave her the "permission" to pursue it without feeling guilty about it. Can't wait to see more!!! :)
Author's Response:
So sorry I didn't reply sooner. It's been a little crazy for me lately. Yes, he has a very good idea of Bella's feelings for Claire, I think in some ways he sees it clearer than she does actually.
Yes, he gave her permission, but that doesn't necessarily mean she won't still feel guilty about it...
Thanks for the review!
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - Be Kind To My Mistakes
great chapter ... glad that Bella has sorted these things out in her head....and that she told Edward as soon as it happened. Hopefully Claire will understand and not be too hard on Bella. Can't wait to see the next one! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I am glad you enjoyed it and thought she did the right thing with telling Edward. Thanks for the review!
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 - Cup of Coffee
wow! Great chapter.... I know it was hard for Bella, but maybe better that Claire ended it, because maybe if Claire had put up a fight for them Bella might have backed out. Love the movie afternoon and popcorn fight! Can't wait to see the next one.... Edward will be home soon right!?
Author's Response:
Thanks! I don't think she would have backed out, she loves Edward too much to do that. But in a way it did help her with some of the "what ifs". She knows Claire is happy with someone else, and she's glad of that, even if it hurts to end it.
I am glad you liked the movies and popcorn fight. I thought it was cute too. Edward will be back next chapter!
Thanks for the review!
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 - Llorando (Crying)
great chapter... I think her realizations are spot on...and will be helpful to her in the long run.... Loved that Jasper was there to help her! Can't wait to see more!!
Author's Response:
I loved the conversation with Jasper too. It really was something she needed.
Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review!
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 - I Never Thought I'd Break
great chapter... loved girls night dishing about all the dates, and then the talk and breakfast with Charlie was awesome! I think that she is ready now.... let's just hope that Edward believes her :) Can't wait to see the next one! :)
Author's Response:
Edward has always had more faith in her than she's had in herself in the past.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the review!
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 - Amado Mio
great ending :) excited to see the epi and and the outtakes!!
Their reunion was great... loved that they talked about everything. They now have a great basis for a long relationship as long as they communicate!
Bella grew so much in this last year!!
Thanks for writing this ... loved the journey you took us on with your Bella and Edward :)
Author's Response:
I am so glad you liked it.
I really wanted it to be realistic and healthy, and I am glad you think Bella grew a lot in the last year. I tried so hard to show that.
I think you'll really enjoy the epilogue and outtakes.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue - Let's Never Stop Falling in Love
wow!!! Loved this!!! So great hearing from Edward! Can't believe it is over :( at least we will still have some outtakes to read. :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. There will be several outtakes and another chapter of Epilogue! We're not quite done with them yet. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Outtake - B!tch (Rosalie's POV)
WOW!!! I loved hearing from Rose! This really helps us understand her side of things... and it was good for her that Emmett was so patient with her and brought her back from what could have been a horrible life or maybe even an early death with the path that she was on.
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it so much! I had a great time writing it. I am glad that he was there for her and that she finally had the courage to reach out to him.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Outtake - The New Year (Edward's POV)
great to see Edward's side of New Year's! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Outtake - Under My Skin (Claire's POV)
I understand her a little better... John is her Edward ... but I still think that she forgave John too fast... she should have made him work for it! LOL :)
Author's Response:
Honestly, I agree. I would have been PISSED if a guy treated me like that and then expected me to jump into a relationship right away.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Outtake - Burnin' For You (EPOV)
Great chapter!! and if you want to post that deleted chapter... I would love to read it!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! The deleted chapter is posted, hope you enjoy! Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Outtake: Lover (Edward’s POV)
yay for another outtake! :) Loved seeing his take on that weekend!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! The next outtake is also Edward's POV, and I think you'll really like it. Thanks for the review!
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Outtake - Help Yourself (Edward's POV)
Great outtake..... :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue Part II - Night and Day
amazing ending to an incredible story!!! Can't wait to see more! :)
Author's Response:
Thank so much for the review. I am sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I am actually writing like crazy, so don't worry, there willl be plenty more to read from me!
I am glad you enjoyed the story so much, thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it!
When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.
MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 51167
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
great story so far... so emotional. So well written :) I can't wait to see the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm posting the next chapter now.
AH, OOC, femslash/slash Rosalie hears some upsetting news and goes home to confront her lover and submissive Bella. What happens when her ire is too much to administer punishment? She calls in reinforcements of course. Written for the Squeeze My Lemon pic prompt. A collab between luvrofink and Chartwilightmom. BDSM themes and graphic lemons.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Rose
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4212 Read Count: 4994
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Delicate Thin Lace
wow! Loved this! would love to see it expanded :)
With just weeks before the wedding, Bella and Edward's lives will be forever altered by one unwanted event. One event will change everything for everyone. Can witnessing one thing really ruin the lives of so many? Slash/Poly and everything in between.
with a lot pushing I mean helping from my friends I started this dark tale. It will not be what you think, So hold on to your booties its a bumpy ride with a lot of twists. Don't believe everything you read.
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13496 Read Count: 4100
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Great story! wow! Can't wait to see more :)
Rosalie Hale had it all; Brains, Beauty and Brawn. When a group of siblings join the school she finds herself smitten by the youngest one, Emmett Cullen. As they grow closer and explore their feelings for each other, they face complications in the form of a small mysterious gang and Rosalie's former friend Jacob Black.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: Action, Romance, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45540 Read Count: 2969
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Worry and Relief
great chapter!! Can't wait to see more! ;)
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Port Angeles
great story so far :) Can't wait to see more!
Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives. But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl. Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family. Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124856
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
great chapter! Loving Rose in this one! Can't wait to see more :)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
great start... can't wait to see more :)
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
:( poor Bella guess Rose didn't really think that would happen to her for the truck not working..... I think that when she finds out she is going to feel horrible :(
Author's Response:
Hi, and thanks for your sweet review! No, I don't think Rose didn't think that through quite well. But I promise a happy ending!
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
great few chapters!!! Can't wait to see more :)
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
great chapter!! So excited to see more!! So happy that Edward was there to help her and get her out of there! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I heart caring Edward so much!
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
great chapter!! Glad that she is at their house and safe for now :)
Can't wait to see the next one!
What happens when a lonely and betrayed vampire meets his mate at Walmart? He claims her, of course. Join Peter and Bella as they band together with their ragtag team of friends to creatively exact revenge on those who did them wrong. Peter x Bella pairing.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 301749 Read Count: 81723
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Great chapter! Loving everything.. LOL at Paul's transformation..... So excited to read more when you have time :)
Author's Response:
Paul transformed where he felt the warmest. More coming from our gang. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Loved the chapter! Can't believe that Billy is changing! wow! :) LOL at Riley and Jared in walmart! so hilarious! :) and ugh stupid Carlisle ... Can't wait to see more! :)
Author's Response:
Billy is a warrior, and what Carlisle did in Bella's room fueled his anger enough to want him to fight. And the only way that he could was to become a vampire.
Riley and Jared did society a favor in Walmart. LOL.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
amazing chapter!!! Can't wait to see more :) Can't believe how horrible Carlisle is! wow!
Author's Response:
More on Carlisle next. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great start!!!! Loving this Can't wait to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you liked it. It's going to be a wild and crazy ride. A bit different from Life Happens--the characters are edgier. XOXO
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
great chapter!!! So excited to see more :) I can't wait to see the fight between Char and Vicky! :)
Author's Response:
More coming. Char and Vicky's fight won't be for a while yet, though. XOXO
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
great chapter!!! Can't wait to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
great chapter!! Love that Leah and Paul are there... and imprinting on vamps LOL love it! I also am happy that Jasper and Vicky are mated! I really can't wait to see what happens when Garrett and Leah meet up with Carlisle in LA!! He really needs a good ass kicking... either literally or just by them taking all his money! :) So excited to see more! :)
Author's Response:
Garrett and Leah will be meeting with Carlisle in a couple of chapters. The two Volturi vampires and shifters will be great accomplices to our family's escapades. For now, we'll have surprise a surprise visitor next. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Great chapter!!! Can't wait to see the next one! :) Love that Emmett and Rose are there!!! :)
Author's Response:
I couldn't possibly keep Rose and Emmett out of the loop. Well, I could have, but I love Emmett too much. LOL> Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
great chapter! Loved the B/J bonding time!! Excited to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
Now, I know the B and J could have had the horse and buggy delivered to the house, but they needed to bond, didn't they? XOXO
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
wow!!! I am just blown away by this chapter so much happened!!! I LOVED ALL OF IT!!!! :) I am so excited to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! I wanted to give you an inside look of Alice and Jane's psyches and the huge contrast between the two of them. XOXO
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
wow!!! Amazing chapter... Loved it... can't believe some of the stuff they found out here... it just gets crazier and crazier! Glad that they helped Jenks and his wife and secretary though... oh and that Esme is safe and dressing her age! :) Can't wait to see more!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Carlisle is a creep. You'll get more insight when you hear from Eddie boy. We had to help Jenks and his wife and the secretary. We can't have them killed or tortured unnecessarily. Esme will start acting her age or possibly younger soon, too. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your review. XOXO
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
wow!!! Loved the whole scene about the cars and that Seth is boring cuz he wasnt' concieved in or on a car! LMAO!!!! :) Love Tanya... yay that she is Embry's imprint.... Can't wait to see the next one.
Author's Response:
Well, you know...Seth was planned.
As for Tanya, isn't she perfect for Embry?
Next chapter features more insanity. XOXO
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Great chapter... OMG Bella and Peter singing I'm a little teapot... and acting it out too funny!! LOL.... and then to find out all the wolves and poor Emily... yeah I would not want my husband in my head... I think he would be surprised at what goes on in there! and then the poor Hoh boys grandmother.... stupid Carlisle. Loved Peter's valentines day surprise.... they needed a little time to get away... hopefully they are able to gather ranks with all the vampires around the world! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Hi Kate,
Yes Bella and Peter reached deep down and summoned their inner thespians during their life or death ordeal. Yes, Emily is absolutely not in a good place. Not only is her husband in her brain, so is her brother. Carlisle's treachery knows no bounds. As for Peter, he needed to reassure himself and Bella that their love was secure. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Loved this chapter... LOL Esme and Marcus together.. yay! Glad that Embry is ok :) Loved the trip to walmart... my hubby is a manager at walmart so every time they visit the store is funny for me!!! Can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response:
I think Esme and Marcus will be perfect for each other. They both deserve it after the raw hand they were dealt in the past. Of course Embry was going to be okay. He was my test pilot for my new breed of hybrid wolf/vampire.
Your hubby is a manager at Walmart? How awesome! it's my favorite store, I do all of my shopping there including my groceries. It's so much more economical than other places. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
wow!!! Loved this chapter... you would think he would not have even blinked at the bill at the nightclub, but I guess he is a cheap bastard too! LOL Loved that the girls pushed Alice in the cart and then ran! and I loved the little Aro pov we got! Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Carlisle doesn't mind spending money on his family, but not on anyone else.
Jane has a bit of a temper, that's why she went a bit overboard with Alice. She deserved it though.
Aro will be extremely OOC in this story. *wink*
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
wow!!! AMAZING CHAPTER!!!! Can't wait to see the next one.... crazy twist that Sue is a succubus!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. I had planned Sue becoming a succubus even before I had Peter as Bella's mate. This was originally supposed to be a Jasper/Bella story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
wow!!! Amazing chapter!! :) Aro and Paul in jail... LMAO! that was awesome... Loved the whole chapter.... Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Yes, but even jail is a new experience. *wink*
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Loved this chapter!!! and I am loving Charlie right now!!!! :) Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Charlie's the absolute best vamp-daddy ever! XOXO
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!! Can't wait to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
OMG so much craziness! I loved this chapter... hopefully they get everyone out before the crazy clan gets there!
Can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response:
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
wow so much happened here! Like dominating Peter :) And finally someone put those crazy old ladies in their place! jeez! LOL and OMG a siren! and I love that Maria will be good :) Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Peter can be very dominating, but he also feels an incredible amount of guilt when he is that way. He's a pretty sensitive vampire. Maria will be a huge surprise. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Great chapter!! :) WOW! I love that you made Maria nice :) and I think it is funny that Fernando is an Incubus and he was changed by the sisters :) and OMG he knew all of the bad ones in Romania :( Poor Didyme :(..... and Holy Crap about the tunnel! I love Sue's idea about rebuilding and having the trap door go into the fireplace that they will keep going 24/7!! Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Oh, yes, Fernando, he was changed by the succubus sisters. As for Maria, she needed female companionship, and finally found a friend in Bella.
Sue is pretty smart too, I love the trap door leading to the fireplace as well. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Author's Response:
Oh, yes, Fernando, he was changed by the succubus sisters. As for Maria, she needed female companionship, and finally found a friend in Bella.
Sue is pretty smart too, I love the trap door leading to the fireplace as well. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Great chapter! OMG totallly crazy Carlisle just gets worse and worse :( And then the wolves at the end! oh no... hopefully someone will come talk to them! :) Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Carlisle is horrific. He is becoming sicker and sicker by the hour. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
wow... crazy chapter! So many new supernatural species showed up! Carlisle and Alice and the rest of the evil vamps are in for a really rude awakening!!! Can't wait to see the next one....
p.s.
(spongebob in spanish LMAO!)
Author's Response:
Yes they really are in for a rude awakening. And Bob Esponja is cool! XOXO
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
well Alice knows.... I guess that proves that they really were true mates, I don't think she would have known any other way..... Stupid Edward ...ugh can't wait to see him go down.... and I can't believe (well maybe I can because they are so evil) that they were going to kill Tia and blame it on the quileute wolves. Loved hearing from Uncle Quil :) So glad that Tiffany knows everything.... (oh and I think that Joshua is gonna imprint on her!) Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Alice knows and that can work either in favor of the good or the bad guys. Her instability makes her a liabitlity to one or both sides. Only time will tell. Edward is selfish, but we all knew that. Yes, Tia was going to be killed--now you have an explanation for Amun suddenly letting Tia and Benjamin go. His plan backfired though and they've lost, possibly, their greatest asset. Tiffany deserved to know everything. I've always felt this way. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
OMG that had to be the best chapter yet!!! As I kept laughing my husband kept asking me what was so funny! Can't wait to see the next one!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you got a good laugh. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Loved this chapter!! :) yay for Emily's new car and as great as it would be for Edward to find his precious VOLVO all destroyed, let's hope he is dead before that happens :) Loved his phone call with Victoria! she is a wonderful actress! :) glad that some of the bad vamps are dead and at least they got a lot of info from them before they killed them........but I wonder what everyone back in Romania will think when they don't return... especially Alice since both of her mates are dead now. Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
The Volvo died honorably. Victoria deserved an Oscar. Two down, but bear in mind that Alice's mate is gone. She won't be a happy camper. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
wow!! Amazing chapter!! Can't wait to read the next one :)
Author's Response:
More to come. We're sending Petey over the rainbow. XOXO
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
wow!! Amazing.... I can't believe the cruelty that Bella had to go through :(
Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Karma will hit those who doled out the cruelty. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Well first I am sorry to hear about this story being stolen :(
Loved this chapter... gotta love how great men babysit LOL .... Love that Ben is acting more his age... Can't wait to see Cauis' punishment! I knew that Josh would imprint on Tiffany!!! :) yay for them! :) and finally some alone time for Bella and Peter... long overdue :) Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
These men fight, babysit, and sing karaoke. Charlie's a good dad--he's brought Ben back to life. Ah, Caius...naughty, naughty. Josh has been meant for Tiffany from the get go. Bella and Peter deserved some alone time. More coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
LOVED IT!!! :) Poor Embry... remember no mercy for the enemy.... Loved that Charlie was there helping Benjamin with his powers. Bella and Picia... awesome! Aunt Molly gotta love her :) both Amun and Kebi have been brainwashed so badly... Can't wait to read more.... hope your muse stays with you and the chapters come out the way you are comfortable with... :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
Amun and Kebi have been terribly brainwashed, but Amun is also responsible for Kebi's state. Bella and Picia have become awesome fighters. Charlie is a phenomenal father. Embry's a kind soul and his reaction is typical of someone who has never been to war. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
AMAZING!!! Finally another group of the Evils down. I can understand why they decided to kill him so quickly, but also understand Jasper's frustration at not getting a bit more information before ending him. Can't wait to read more and see what Crazy Alice is up to! :) So glad that RL is getting a bit easier and you have time to write again I have missed your updates!! :)
-Kate
Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on. Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree. She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.
Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her. Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited. What roll will each of these men play in her life?
Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored. Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with living a life once her secrets are reveled.
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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter Forty Two
Amazing chapter!! Molly is just feeling like all kids do when a new baby comes along, especially when her friend's parents are having problems..... it makes her curious. PPD is not easy, I know from personal experience, with my 2nd child I had it. Having babies does alot to your body and your hormones and everything.... Can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commetning. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter.
I'm hoping to post the next chapter tonight or tomorrow ar some point.
Thansk again,
-Lisa