Reviews by tigger5600
Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 Happenings

Great chapter... and I know that Jessica is horrible and all... but I hope that she is ok and Tyler didn't do something to her

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77 Tyler

uh oh :(

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78 Toy

Loved this chapter!

Hope your day gets better :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 Nursery

Great chapter.... hopefully someone will realize something happened to Charlie soon :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Babies

great chapter!

congrats on the job even if it is hard... but RL always comes first.... I am trying to get a job now too... but haven't had any luck yet :(

Excited to see more next week!

Cougar Town by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 451]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Never underestimate the appeal of a seventeen year old boy. Bella Swan is Emmett's mom and Edward's teacher. What happens when she crosses the line with her son's best friend? E&B, AH, OOC.

Banner by vbvf1


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74678 Read Count: 72986
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2011 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 The Letter

Yay for his dad helping him :) Can't wait to read the next one!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Statuses

Loved it!! :) Can't wait to read more... hopefully Emmett listens to her, but I am going to guess he isn't.

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 Letting Go

:( Poor Bella and Edward.... can't wait to read the next one! :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out

wow ... so Emmett got a big shock and dumped as well, Such a hard situation for all of them, Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting

Great chapter... I am thinking that we haven't seen the last of Scumbanner.... don't think he would give up that easily.... also I think that Esme might be thinking something is up... well you never know :) Can't wait to see how their week goes!! :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 Wednesday

wow! Amazing story so far... can't wait to see the next one :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 Thursday

Great chapter... death for the poor cupcake LOL

I am thinking that their plans might not work out so well for this weekend... I believe that the cockblocking son will play a part in that...

Can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 Friday

gah that was sooo evil to just leave it there! :) I hope you get some time to update again this weekend!! :) Can't wait to see it!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 First Time

gah 2 weeks!? :(

Amazing chapter though!! :) Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings

AH HA! so it was just role playing... LOL well at least what they are doing is just kinda frowned upon and maybe a little illegal... but at least he is 18! Can't wait to read the next one!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications

Great chapter... and I had a feeling that Emmett was with Rose.... hopefully that will help when Bella and Edward's relationship comes out, though I doubt it.... and I would assume that they are eating with Alice and Jasper and I really hope that Edward didn't lie and is only 17 cuz that would really mess up some stuff! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 Date Night

Great chapter!!! Gotta love the bluntness that is Alice! LOL Can't wait to read the next one!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances

Great chapter... poor Bella and all those unwanted date opportunities... and yeah it's not like she can tell them, "sorry I am into younger men, and actually have one, you might know him as one of the students here" LOL yeah that isn't gonna work, but hopefully now that Edward knows about Scumbanner and told Emmett they will keep him away from her.  Sorry to hear about your night in the bathroom, I can't drink tequila, but I was pretty hungover yesterday as well! LOL Can't wait till the next chapter!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams

wow... poor Edward about to get his ass kicked! LOL I love that conspiracy theory... but that might mess things up with Bella the cougar :) ... hopefully if that is the truth, he is still a bit younger than her... either that or she will be too far gone at that point to care about his age :) Can't wait to read the next one!!!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 Thanksgiving

you gotta love the courage that and alcohol induced daze will give you!! :) Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul

Loved this chapter.... Can't wait to read the next one... even if Scumbanner will be back.... hopefully Bella can put him in his place and he will back off.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 Still Holding On

LOVED IT!!! :)

Summary:

Getting the Hell Out of Dodge

Banner by LunarEclipse1

Immediately following the battle with Victoria's newborns, Bella learns that the Cullens were using her in a most malicious way.  With the Volturi wanting her to be dead or changed, time is ticking for poor Bella.  Will someone get her the hell out of Dodge?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9423 Read Count: 3778
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 25 Aug 2011
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this! :)



Author's Response:

Yay!  I'm so happy!  XOXO

Intensity by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 299]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Intensity

Twelve years have gone by since Paul and Bella walked away from La Push and reached for success. When they unexpectedly run into each other, the pack suddenly comes trickling back into their lives. Time changes people but can it change traditions? AU/OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 325149 Read Count: 64988
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2011 Updated: 23 Feb 2024
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved this chapter!! :) So glad that Colin was brought up to speed and knows everything that is going on now..... Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Collin knows and he's smarter than Jake so this is a good thing.  More coming.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

great chapter! Charlie and Sue were funny... LOL yelling at them about having kids! Can't wait to see the reunion with the pack! :)



Author's Response:

Charlie and Sue are typical parents who want grandchildren while they can still be an active part of their lives.  There are plenty of kids to keep them busy on the reservation, though.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter... Bella and Paul helping everyone out! :) LOL at Ryan! Can't wait to read more! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Bella and Paul truly have great hearts.  Ryan is a typical teenager.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter! Loved it... LOL at the kids all talking about Bella :) Loved the adult's night out to dinner .... and yeah the pack owes her big time now! I really do think that she kicked Jake on purpose! :) Can't wait to see the next one



Author's Response:

Oh, those kids are a hoot.  Bella needed to catch up with Emily and Paul needed to catch up with Jared and Sam.  And yes, Leah did kick Jacob twice on purpose.  *winks*  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter.... glad that all the wolves got the whole Paul-is-the-alpha thing handled!!! OMG them all running and being out of shape was hilarious!! :) and then stupid Jake at the end... can't wait to see his reaction to everything that is going on!!! ha!



Author's Response:

Oh, yes, the wolves forced the alpha on Paul.  Fortunately he accepted it.

As for the out of shape wolves, that idea came from the movie version of Eclipse.  The guy that played Taha Aki wasn't exactly buff so I thought, why not have the pack become out of shape--except for Paul, he works out--and makes good coffee.

 Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I Love it!!! Can't wait to see the next one :)



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks for taking the time to review.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter... I am glad that Paul helped Jared and Sam out :) Hopefully he will be able to help them get their schooling done so they can make a better life for themselves and their families :)

And wow about what everyone told them! So happy that they got on the first flight out of there!

Can't wait to see the next one :)



Author's Response:

Paul's a really good guy and he will help his friends out as much as he can without enabling them.  As you can see, everyone except for Jake and Angela has P and B's back.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ugh stupid jacob... and the other 2 that came with him... but at least Paul and Bella handled them well... love the cop that showed up!! I really hope that Sue and Billy listen to the recording and do something! :) Can't wait to see the next one!!



Author's Response:

Paul and Bella are intelligent, they knew exactly how to handle the elders and Jake.  The cop, Lieutenant Blackfoot, will be back in the story.  Sue, Billy, and Josh Uley (Sam's father, I made him a good guy in this story) will be let into the loop.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO



Author's Response:

Paul and Bella are intelligent, they knew exactly how to handle the elders and Jake.  The cop, Lieutenant Blackfoot, will be back in the story.  Sue, Billy, and Josh Uley (Sam's father, I made him a good guy in this story) will be let into the loop.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO



Author's Response:

Paul and Bella are intelligent, they knew exactly how to handle the elders and Jake.  The cop, Lieutenant Blackfoot, will be back in the story.  Sue, Billy, and Josh Uley (Sam's father, I made him a good guy in this story) will be let into the loop.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter!! Love that Paul and Bella are helping them out :) I am so excited to see more and what happens when they all recognize Paul as the true alpha! Jake is gonna loose it! LMAO I really like that whole prophecy thing too! And I will take a Vanilla Latte! :)

-Kate



Author's Response:

Hi Kate, Paul and Bella are generous in providing their friends with opportunities.  You'll see how the rest of the pack takes Jared's observations.  As soon as I can find Paul in a green apron, I'll have him do up a vanilla latte for you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG They are all coyotes! (btw I love that they are coyotes and not wolves gives us something different!)  Can't wait to see the rest of the pack's reaction! :)



Author's Response:

Yep, coyotes with luscious bodies!  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I truly Loved this whole chapter... just too much good stuff to list! :) Sorry to hear everyone was sick... glad that you are all better though! Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I hate being sick more than anything.  It really throws a wrench into things.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

wow! Loved this chapter! Paul at the mansion was great! I loved their punishment for the boys and that there were more kids that had to do it as well... see the boys should be thankful they made friends now! LOL and OMG the whole scene with Jake and Angela trying to Alpha order everyone was great! Can't wait to read the next one!

Author's Response:

Paul is smooth in both business and with the pack.  He punished the boys because he, himself, had to struggle to get an education.  As for Jake and Angela--reality will hit them soon.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter... and I guess Jake has redeemed himself a bit.... and I guess I can understand Angela's attitude toward Bella a bit now too.... still don't like them though LOL :) Can't wait to read the next one!



Author's Response:

Jake is a follower that can't think for himself--Angela needs to grow up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter!! Loved Leah's little party LOL :) and all the insight that she got from Linda... ugh stupid Angela needs to get her ass kicked! and omg poor will :( at least he knew where to go ... and that he will be helped now... Tony and Kurt and the rest of those kids all need to go to jail.... maybe they will learn some respect there.... and then we have Charlie! I love Charlie and I love whenever we get to hear from him... hopefully him and Quil recover soon! too funny! Can't wait to read the next one!



Author's Response:

Ah, Leah, she is a wonder mama, isn't she?  I've taken to creating a slick, sassy Leah that is no longer angry, but confident in her abilities.  Linda will surprise you in this fic--she is a genuinely nice girl that was manipulated by Angela because she was so young.  Keep in mind that Collin, Brady, and their imprints were five grade levels younger than Angela and Bella when they phased.  Imagine how someone as selfish as Angela would use their innocence to her advantage.  Now, Linda doesn't know enough about Tony Fuller, but she knows enough to raise even more suspicions about him.


Poor Will, he had to run out of state for help and he ran to Paul and Bella because, for some reason, he knew Bella could be trusted.  This is due in large part to the role Charlie has taken in his life.  He's also a bit like his father and has a crush on Bella and his heart was warmed when Bella sent the Arizona Diamondbacks baseball jersey and cap to him when he gave his photo to her--way back when Jared and Kim visited our favorite couple.  Paul knew instinctively how to handle Will because he, himself, had been abused as a child.  I wanted to highlight how unstable things have gotten in La Push. It's so unstable that children can no longer feel safe in school anymore and the school is ruled by three bullies with fathers that are pretty high up in the tribal government.


Will's tragedy also highlighted very deep flaws in Jacob and Angela's parenting skills.  While Jacob may not have physically been in La Push because he was recovering in Arizona from his injuries, Angela was supposed to be watching the kids. She, however, was flaunting her 'status' at Leah's Pampered Chef Party when Will took the opportunity to escape.  Now, I believe that if Jake were there, he would have seen his son's physical injuries and finally taken immediate action against Fuller's son and gang.  However, it still is no excuse for the fact that they had so little faith in Will when he had gone to them.


As for Charlie and his workout.  Come on, he's a cop--he needs to be in better shape to serve and protect the public.  We are going somewhere with this theme too.  Just watch how Billy is handled by Bella and the devastatingly handsome Dr. Randall Kayani next.

 
Thank you for your awesome feedback.  I truly appreciate it.  XOXO  mama4dukes    

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

great chapter!!! Linda is great.... love her character :) Old Quil... lets hope he doesn't cause any issues with Tony and is on track and believes everything he was told today.... LOL at all the coyote dads, gramps and great-gramps!  Paul really needs to be chief.. and Billy was right he doesn't have to live in La Push to do it either.... Kim and Emily well what can you say overprotective much?? LOL too funny though... and then Babs and Bella being all crazy,.. and at least they were all smart enough to throw out the business cards before they left the mall.... Can't wait to read more!! :)



Author's Response:

Linda is an example of someone who was too young when the imprint happened, but came into her own as she grew up.  If you noticed, she comes from a supportive family and a successful one to boot.  She also has Fainting Wolf who loves her with everything he has in him.  And now that they're thoroughly on Paul's side, there will be more eyes to keep an eye on La Push.


I didn't want to paint Old Quil as a bad character, just as a stubborn and lonely old man who needed a dose of reality. I gave him someone to love by bringing Tolinka into the picture.  Let's see how things pan out between the two AARP eligible shamans.  Oh, and just to let you know, the coyote fathers, grandfathers, and great grandfathers are just minor characters and will not play a big role in this story at all.


Jake needed a punishment and Billy eventually passing on the chiefdom to Paul only made sense to me.  How it'll work long distance is difficult to tell, but this is neither here nor there and a long way off.  However, Billy is correct in one thing, Paul is the only one that can successfully bring the tribe back from the abyss.


Ah, the mall...Kim and Emily spying on their sons?  Guilty!  The two women competing for military logo freebies?  I got that idea from my oldest son.  Once a year, an Army recruiter shows up at his high school to talk about the benefits of joining the US Military.  Last year, he did a hundred push-ups and came away with an Army t-shirt, water bottle, and back pack.  This year, he did a hundred and fifty something push-ups and came away with an Army t-shirt, water bottle, one of those draw string gym bags, a key chain, a flash light, and a lanyard.  I swear, he has some sort of a freebie homing beacon.  I wish he'd put as much energy into mowing the lawn as he does on those push-ups.  Sighs. Anyway, I thought that it would be a fun idea to work that in.

 
Thank you for taking the time to read my story and chime in with a review.  XOXO  mama4dukes    

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

LOVED IT!! LOL garage sex.. gonna have to try that ;) Ah Charlie and the duct tape.... someone needs to take it all away... Linda and the pushups! they are all crazy! great that he is getting some training around the rez... stupid Fuller... Can't wait to see him go down!

-Kate



Author's Response:

I would, but I need my husband to clear the garage of all the junk stored in there first.  Charlie should be a representative for duct tape.  Linda will be a wonderful addition to the group and Fuller...yep...he'll be going down.   Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Summary:

daes

People can't eat people alive, and frozen men don't exist. Bella's secret knowledge of vampires is inadvertently brought to surface when she & her friends are all thrown in the path of fate.

Banner by the awesome LunarEclipse1

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90817 Read Count: 20309
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2012
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved this chapter! and it is so fitting that you put the 2 preacher's kids together! :) So excited to read more!



Author's Response:

Don't Carlisle and Angela make the perfect pair? They're very close in age, too.  Carlisle's just a year older than Angela.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

wow!!! So much happened... Too funny with their talk about the books :) Can't wait to read more!!! So happy that you are back to writing :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Loved it!! Great idea in singling out Chelsea.... she was the key to swaying everyone.  Loved Charlie's fighting skills :) Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Yes, singling out Chelsea was a necessity.  Remember though, Charlie has already proven to be much more powerful than any of the Volturi vampires.   Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter! Don't blame Bella at all for getting out of there... she had alot to process after that night out.... with everything that went on and the whole Mate thing! LOL :) at least Peter told her because I don't think that Jasper would have had the guts to tell her for a bit and she needed to know :) and OMG Loved Jess' ride!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Bella absolutely needed some time to process everything, the question is, will Jasper give her the time to do so.  As for the mate thing, Bella doesn't understand it yet.  Remember she was with Edward who told her nothing significant about vampirism.  Oh, and you're right, Peter told Bella because Jasper would have danced around the issue.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter! Charlie knew all along! so awesome... and now he is going to be a vampire and can deal with Edward and Alice!!! Can't wait to see more! :)



Author's Response:

Of course Charlie knew.  I always figured that he was too close to the Quileutes not to know.  More to come.   Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start!!! wow! I am excited to see more :)



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed it.  I'm glad you're joining me for this one, too.  Thanks for your review.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved this chapter... at least Bella and Jasper made some progress and she knows everything now :) LOL at the backwash beer they served the guys.... they so deserved that!

 Can't wait to see what happens at the steakhouse!



Author's Response:

B and J made a lot of progress.  Jasper has learned not to come on too strong with her and Bella has learned to trust him a little.  The backwash beer...yes...gee, I don't know where that came from..*smirks*

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter! wow I didn't think that Carlisle would be the one to lose control! Love how Bella and Jasper took charge :) Can't wait to see the next one!



Author's Response:

It's about time Carlisle lost control.  He's been too perfect all along.  And Bella and Jasper took charge because, well, one is the Major and the other one is the only one who can keep her head well enough to be his mate.  Thanks for reading and reviewing  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved this... and yay for a nice Victoria again! :)  OMG the halloween part was just too funny and then the end with Bella getting scared reading all the BDSM books! LMAO!

-Kate



Author's Response:

Hi Kate,

I love making Victoria a good character.  I thought that she was dealt a raw deal when James was killed.  Bella should never read a BDSM novel.   Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG Loved Angela and Carlisle's wedding and the fact that in the end she married someone that her parents would have wanted!! LMAO too funny and Peter's proposal was just so him.... Jasper's was so sweet!

Hello kitty wedding and bridesmaid dresses! WOW I think even Alice would have an problem with those! LOL

Alice and Eddie Pooh are just disturbing and crazy ..............

Can't wait to read the next one! :)



Author's Response:

The irony that Angela married the type of guy that her parents would have wanted is too funny.  I tried to get the proposals as close to their personalities as possible.  

Yep, I do declare that Alice would have definite issues with Hello Kitty wedding dresses.  Check out this link:  http://jezebel.com/5069998/hello-kitty-wedding-gowns-for-the-childish-bride

Alice is consumed with pleasing Eddie Pooh--that's it.  More coming soon.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter! ... I think that Jessica's reservations are good ones :)

Stupid Edward and Alice... hope that they are caught soon! Cant' wait to see that!

 



Author's Response:

Jessica's reservations are the ones that Bella should have had in the original Twilight series.  It always irked me that she only thought of herself.  

Edward and Alice need to die.  

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved this chapter.... and OMG loved that they took all the guys form of money! and no they should never be allowed to make a deal.... but the girls... if they can manage a deal like that while human imagine what they will be able to do once they are changed! :) Bella's reaction was great... finally she had some self preservation.... Can't wait to read the next one!



Author's Response:

I wish I could make a car deal like the girls did.  Bella was terrified because...well...she saw her two friends literally lose their lives in a snap.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved her day of pampering and junk food before her change... and then those Swan's are just freaks of nature huh?! LOL :) Can't wait to read the next one!



Author's Response:

Yes, those Swans are a bit odd.  Bella deserved the pampering, she watched her two best friends get murdered before her very eyes.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

wow... ok so I have finally got all caught up on all 3 stories... for some strange reason I didn't get the last update email :( .... Loved the last 2 chapters! Bella cleaning her kill first! too funny! .... and then this one.. Peter is such a perv with the hot dog! LOL ... and then Charlie's powers! wow! Can't wait to read the next one!



Author's Response:

One of my other readers didn't get an update for the last chapter either--it must have been some sort of technical glitch.  :)  

Bella was always a bit OCD about food...

As for Peter and the hot dog?  Did you notice that none of the other guys said a word.  I'm sure Charlie and Emmett knew how hot dogs are to be masticated.

XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG poor Demitri... I can't believe he did that!! Great chapter.... So they are going to over throw the Volturi....Can't wait to read the next one!!



Author's Response:

Ouch!  Yep, Demetri was in some serious pain.  They really do have to overthrow the Volturi.   Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Love the chapter! Creepy succubus house wow.... Love the empath lesson! Can't wait to read more !



Author's Response:

Yes, the love shack was a bit much for most normal folk, but perfect for the succubi sisters.  Jasper and Bella were simply to nice to tell them off.  t

Jasper is a Dartmouth educated teacher, of course he'll be *talented*...ahem.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes   

Summary:

Aro was uncharacteristically lenient when he allowed Bella to leave Volterra and unchanged whilst spouting about happy endings. Were you fooled? 

When Aro couldn't penetrate Bella's mind in Volterra, he knew Bella would be a powerful shield once she was changed - a talent he had to add to the Volturi's collection.  Armed with the information he took from Alice and Edward's minds, Aro recruits Gainna and a young American, Dominic, to get what he wants. 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47178 Read Count: 2017
[Report This] Published: 16 Sep 2011 Updated: 13 Jan 2012
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Violet Hour

Great chapter! and wow... wonder what will happen when he phases after being in close proximity to the vamps :) Can't wait to see more! (oh and do we know his father? or is it just a random person?)



Author's Response:

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Done All Wrong

Great chapter... and so the change has started :)

I loved Cauis' backstory that you wrote... I haven't read the guide so I don't know what SM wrote, but yours is creative and pretty awesome! :)

Can't wait to see the next one!

Selfish by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella left everything behind for her husband the moment she married young. Now, as the years have gone by and her life has become a cycle of regret, she decides to finally be selfish and love herself instead. Drabble fic. Rated NC-17 cause you never really know. E/B

Banner done by Christine: 

@Christag_banner
christag_banners@yahoo.com
www.christagbanners.blogspot.com


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32975 Read Count: 63661
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2011 Updated: 07 Dec 2011
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

LOVED THIS!!! :) Such a great story!

-Kate

Summary:

Jasper missed his chance in college, but when Bella and Edward's marriage falls apart 15 years later and he helps pick up the pieces, will Jasper finally get the chance at happiness he always longed for? J&B Eventually.  Fair warning, this is major heartfail in the beginning, but will end up with a typical ACW ending.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42200 Read Count: 16464
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2011
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

amazing ending!!! :) Thanks so much for this journey! :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow! Just found this story and it is amazing!!! Can't wait to see the next one :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter!!! wow... Edward has just lost it.... Can't wait to see more!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter! :) I agree with Jasper I don't think that Edward's condition excuses everything he did.... I am glad that Edward let her go because I really think she would have gone back to him if he didn't.  Can't wait to see the next one!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

aww :) Jasper is just so sweet! Loved this chapter so much! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved this chapter!!! Can't wait to read the next one! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

A Fanging Howl-o-Ween to Remember

Banner by the awesomely creative LunarEclipse1

Summary:  Halloween night?  A full moon? With Billy Black volunteering his babysitting services, what could possibly happen?  Find out in A Fanging Howl-O-Ween to Remember.

fs

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Paul, Jacob/OC
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12224 Read Count: 1874
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Oct 2011
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Fanging Howl-O-Ween to Remember

Loved this!!! :)



Author's Response:

Hurray!  I'm happy you enjoyed it.   Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77471
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Parting

Can't wait to read the next one!! :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Memories

Great chapter... Can't wait to read more :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Conform

great story so far! Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you...good to hear

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Enraptured

Amazing chapter!!! Cant' wait to see more! :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Surprises

Loved this... and they are married! :) Can't wait to read the next one! :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Battle

Amazing chapter!! Glad that Jacob is dead and that there will be no problems from the pack for it either... Can't wait till the next one... even if it will be the end :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, I've enjoyed the journey. Jacob had to die, there are some pretty strong feelings towards Jacob....not many, good!

Summary:

daw

All Bella is looking for is a quick drink after a bad day at work, but when she runs into Edward Cullen--her high school crush--she decides to play a game with him. If she can keep herself from falling for him, she can walk away and leave him wanting more.  But Bella might find that losing the game is the best thing that ever happened to her...

Rated for lemons/language.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6739 Read Count: 2234
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2011 Updated: 13 Nov 2011
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Drinks After Work

Loved this!!! :) would you ever think of expanding it??



Author's Response:

Hey you! So very sorry I didn't respond sooner. I have been crazy busy.  I am working on another full length story and it's definitely taking up my time right now.  Once it's over, I will definitely think about expanding this, it just won't happen any time soon.  :)

Thanks for the review!

Summary:

step

After Bella saves Leah from the clutches of Victoria, Paul inadvertently imprints on Bella. Not wanting to stand in their way, Bella steps aside for the sake of their love. Did she make the right decision for herself and for Paul though?

 

Banner by the awesome LunarEclipse1.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Paul, Paul/Leah
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16609 Read Count: 2404
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2011 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aww :) Loved the ending! Amazing story... stupid, stupid Leah.

Summary:

For Better or For Worse banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward Cullen has a perfect life. A dream come true career as a superstar shortstop for the Seattle Mariners, true friends, a great house, and most of all, the perfect, loving wife. Can one moment destroy it all? Or will she stick by him for better or for worse?

**Edward & Bella, AH, OOC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78676 Read Count: 37302
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Prayers

amazing story so far :( (and personally I don't care to read all the medical jargon.... I don't understand half of it anyway!) So I applaud you for just telling their story the way you choose to! :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 07 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Faith

wow! Great chapter... big blow up there... hopefully Esme will be able to make peace with her fears and put them aside to support her son.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 26 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Footsteps

so hard for them :(

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Sorry

Great chapter... so heartbreaking for both of them...:(

Sorry about your computer :( That sucks, hope that you will be able to be back up as soon as you can!

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing

wow :( So hard for them.... So happy that she has Emmett there on the outside to help her.  Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Questions and Answers

Great chapter... gah wanna just slap Rose.... but oh well... Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken

Amazing! Poor Edward, he is dealing with so much :(

 

So glad that you are still writing, sometime RL just gets crazy!

would love to see that FB page if you want to share... I am Kate McCarty-Lutz :) you can find me!

 

Excited to read more when you can write some more and update again :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Now

amazing!!! FINALLY he is going to get out of there! :) and I love that Esme sort of redeemed herself!  Can't wait to read more!

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Home

Great chapter!! So glad that he is home, even though it is hard on them, they will find a rhythm and everything will work out, I am sure of it! :) Can't wait to read more!

-Kate

Thump by chartwilightmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 94]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU OCC A drabble involving one vampire, one human, and one heartbeat. M for mature subjects.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9381 Read Count: 14589
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2012 Updated: 06 Mar 2012
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Eighteen

:) Love it! Stay in control Bella :)



Author's Response:

we hope she does!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen

love commando :)

 



Author's Response:

me too! ;)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen

:) go to the island!



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Twenty-Six

lets hope he keeps that no-self preservation thing going and doesn't bolt on her now :)

 



Author's Response:

ha, like he could outrun her

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Two

oh loving this! Can't wait to read more!

-Kate



Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Three

Loved it! :)



Author's Response:

thanks! see you tomorrow for another update

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Four

ohh :) so good!



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Five

ohh! :) Can't wait till the next one!

Author's Response:

thanks! definitely more to come

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Six

oh! :)

Author's Response:

keep reading

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Seven

oh poor bella :(



Author's Response:

have no fear, she will survive

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Eight

uh oh.... she better get back to Edward quickly! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

she might just do that

thanks for reading

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Nine

stupid Tanya.... well at least she got there and made her leave... let's just hope she doesn't come back :)

 



Author's Response:

very stupid

nope, don't think she will, doesn't stand a chance against bella

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Ten

yes walk! :) (maybe a little more) :)



Author's Response:

yes, maybe a little more ;)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Eleven

uh oh... playing with fire there Bella :)



Author's Response:

indeed!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Twelve

:) excited to see the next one!



Author's Response:

good! thanks for reading

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Twenty-One

uh oh



Author's Response:

i know right

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Twenty-Four

oooohhhh!!! Can't wait to read his reaction to that!! :)

 



Author's Response:

at least he's not running away

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Twenty-Five

yeah... roles reversed here huh... no sense of self-preservation LOL :) Excited for the next one!

 



Author's Response:

exactly, no sense, either of them, see you tomorrow!