Reviews by tigger5600
Cast Off's by Sassymami Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 163]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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It’s been ten years since them. Her parents are dead because of their loose end, but she has moved on with her life. Still dealing with the supernatural in a daily basis but she never thought she would hear from them again so soon. Now two of the Cullen men need her assistant but only one wants more. Will she let them in her life again or cast them off like they did her. Hum/Vamp—Jas/Belle

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Read & Enjoyed, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56116 Read Count: 47263
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Jan 2013
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter! :) Moving can be stressful and time consuming... I just did it 5 months ago :) Hope everything goes well!

hmm.... parings... would depend do you like the wolves? I love Bella with Paul! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

I love Paul and Bella and it works with how the story starts.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter! I am thinking that her reaction can be somewhere in the middle? not too freaked out, but not totally ok with it right away.  Would love to see what happened with her parents and how Peter ended Victoria, either in an outtake or future chapter :)  Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter!!! So excited to see the next one... the meeting with Garrett, and Calvin!! :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter!! Can't wait till next week! :) 

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter! Loved how she saw through Garrett's plan :) Can't wait to read more!

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter.... poor kids :( that just breaks my heart... hopefully they can not only get him full custody, but get her some jail time for child abuse.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter!!! Can't wait to read more! :) With Esme, who I am gonna guess that her mate is maybe Marcus? and then with Edward!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter... can't wait to see Cassie's reaction to everything and see what happens with Edward and Ashley and Anna! :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one! :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

LOVED IT... hopefully they find her quickly! :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Great chapter!! Looking forward to all these new stories!!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

LOVED IT!!! :) excited for the sequel when you post it! :)

 

-Kate

Love Life Family by Carliec Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Summary:

Bella has her hands full being a single mom, her career, her son's deadbeat father and interfering parents. How will she cope when her high school crush reappears in her life?

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Banner by femme cullen

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83389 Read Count: 64139
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2012 Updated: 27 Jun 2012
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wow! I just found this and it is amazing! Can't wait to read more! :)

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

wow! So Emily has lost her mind... hopefully Bella will wake up soon and tell them that Sam had nothing to do with it and that Emily killed Brady.  Can't wait to read more! :)

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Loved this!! Excited to see the sequel! :)

-Kate

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407945
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

LOVING it so far! Can't wait to read more! ;)

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

lol oh Poor Edward it is going to be a long couple of weeks, especially if Jasper keeps bailing on him!

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

oh bella! LOL

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

lol poor Edward :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

lol gotta love Charlie! :) That is what he gets for sending his daughter off to strangers for 2 weeks! LOL

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Sticks and Stones

would love to see more from this... however you choose to write it! :)

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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No one ever said parenting was easy. But, when you have a spoiled brat of a teenage daughter,  a little boy who thrives for attention, and immature parents, you could say that there family is a little more chaotic than some families, and in need of some help. It doesn't help that the town likes to gossip about them, and Mrs. Weber  is out to get Bella and little Masen.

Banner made by TwistedinMasen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64080 Read Count: 11750
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Jan 2013
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Poor Bella :( So glad that Edward was there to help her! Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter! :) Poor Bella just needs some peace and quiet LOL :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

 

(teaser please?? oh and quick question, how old is Angela?)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Sorry for not having a teaser.

Angela is 17 almost 18

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter! :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

:) Great chapter

  (just a quick question though, are Tanya and Demetri back together?)

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Yes, they are back together.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great story so far! Jeez Tanya.... well she is a teenage girl, and see that is why I don't have girls! LOL :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I really want to smack Tanya, hopefully Vanessa is right and in the future she will regret how she treated her parents. Excited to see the epilogues and how the story ends!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well I guess Tanya realizes how right Bella was about everything, at least she is not pregnant, and jeez with Masen, that is gonna be a fun conversation! LOL

Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So glad that she finally seems to have changed and went back home :) Thanks for writing and sharing this amazing story!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing ;)

Falling by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is just divorced when she meets Edward in a club. Can he help her heal?

 

Can she get over the past and fall in love with this amazing man?

 

falling

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124179 Read Count: 55214
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 13 Aug 2013
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

wow! An amazing story! :) Loved it!

 

-Kate

Summary: Past Featured Story

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*BANNER BY READERGOOF*

The residents of Bennett Circle are being terrorized, and none of them have been able to catch the culprits.  When they take aim at Edward Masen, he makes it his mission to find them and bring them to justice.  What he finds and who he finds isn’t anything he ever expected.  Oh, and their mother…she’s not anyone he ever expected either.

AU/AH.  OOC.  Canon couples with a few surprises.  NC-17 (as usual).  There’s language and there’s a lot of fun…well, I hope you have fun.

SMeyer owns all Twilight characters.  No copyright infringement intended.  This story and the way in which I’ve fashioned the characters…yeah, that’s all me.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159192 Read Count: 39313
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2012 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

wow!!! Just found this story and I LOVE it.... stupid Sam, but in the long run the boys are better off without him in their lives.  Edward has been so good to them.  Can't wait to read more!!

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

oh yeah she is prego again and probably told him and he has no idea cuz he wasn't listening LOL that and she probably told him about the accident too! :) Can't wait for more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter... so happy that they are engaged, and yeah it might be soon, but like you said it is fiction :) Love that Alice and Seth will get together!  Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter!! Let's hope that Edward has a good influence on him and he doesn't turn out like his sperm donor....(that is what i choose to call Sam now) Can't wait to read more!!!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

wow!!! Amazing chapter.... and I am so glad that you made this more real, no teenager that has been through what they have would take the news well right away.... I just hope that the case worker doesn't mess up the chances of the boys getting adopted :(

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

amazing ending!!! LOVED how you wrapped it up! :)

 

-Kate

Second Chances by melloncollie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

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Edward and Bella parted ways after high school and never spoke again. 5 years later, when Edward dies in a car crash, Bella gets the chance to live out what could have been if she made a different decision 5 years ago. AH, HEA. contains adult themes and language.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100196 Read Count: 12206
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2015
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Layla

So I just found this story and I am LOVING it!!! Can't wait to read more! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

ahh, thank you! I promise to update as soon as I can!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: The Zoo

Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more.. oh and thanks for the visual on all the outfits! So great! :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: ...And A Happy New Year

wow!!! Loved it, Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 15: She's Havin' My Baby

Great chapter... Love that Emmett did the nursery as a surprise! :) Hope Riley will be ok :(

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Keep Me In Your Heart

:( so hard for all of them... excited to read more!

 

-Kate

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167465
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Great chapter!! Ugh stupid Edward, Can't wait to read more when you get back! Have a great vacation!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

wow! Great story so far!!! Can't wait to read more!!!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Great chapter... and yeah Alice really should have told her right away.  Can't wait to read more when you get back from vacation!

 

-Kate



Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.

Summary:

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Bella has been lusting after Edward Cullen, VP at Providence Medical Center in Portland, for years. Too bad he's married, and her boss. Rated for language and lemons. Entry for the Taste of the Forbidden Contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10656 Read Count: 3365
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Break Room

should have known this was yours because I LOVED IT!! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Your reviews always give me warm fuzzies!  You're so sweet.  Glad you enjoyed it so much.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Esme Cullen's matchmaking leads to her son Edward dating fledging wedding photographer, Bella Swan. Falling for each other is effortless and soon Bella's career begins to take off. However, not everyone is quite so thrilled about Bella's happiness and success. A continuation of "The Wedding Photographer".


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139889 Read Count: 63284
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2012 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Fortunate

Aww :) Such a sweet proposal!!!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  I had fun writing the proposal.  <3  Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - The Final Puzzle Piece

oh poor Bree, kinda feel bad for her :( Hopefully she can get some help now.  Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

It is sad about Bree, but at least now she has to chance to get the help she needs. 

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Happy Birthday

amazing!!! LOVED his Bday! :) Can't wait for more!

 

-Kate

 

(oh and I think now that gets me all caught up with your stories at least! :) besides the new one!)



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Yeah, I had fun with the birthday.  The Cullens are so much fun. 

Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

Loved it, and just some more little snippets of Bree, wonder how she knew that.. hmm... off to the next one! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  And yes, that was a bit suspicious, wasn't it? 

Thanks for the review, hun!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - A Little Alone Time

OH jeez.... both Bree and and James are both just as creepy.... Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Yeah, I have you guys questioning everyone, don't I?  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Meeting Chief Swan

wow! Glad that the parental meeting went well, but really with everything that Edward has done for Bella they couldn't find too many flaws.  Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Exactly!  And really, what's not to like about Edward?  He clearly cares about her and is doing everything he can to help support her and take care of her.  So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

hmmm..... so weird! Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more and see what happens with Bree and if they find out who messed with her car, maybe they should have checked her place and see if everything was ok there as well! :)

-Kate



Author's Response:

They probably should have, although if there was a problem, Alice would have let them know. 

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - The Wedding Photographer

OH!! Another quite amazing story from you to look forward to!! Can't wait to read more! :)

-Kate



Author's Response:

You're going to be sick of me by the time you're done reading all of my stories!  You're such a lovely, faithful reviewer and I'm really exicited to hear what you think of the rest of the story.

Thanks, hun!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Brunch

Loved hearing from Edward :) I really think it went well, even if they are doing things a little backwards :) Can't wait to read more!!!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, yay!  Glad you enjoyed it.  Yeah, it went well.  Everyone loves Bella already. 

Thanks for the reivew!  I love hearing from you.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Question and Answer

Loved the chapter, always love having a bit more inbetween time, especially since their beginning was so quick!! :) Love Victoria! Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Yeah, they kind of jumped into bed immediately, I thought a slightly slower pace after that would be good.  Of course, they're only going to be able to keep their hands off of each other for so long...

I am glad you liked Victoria!  She was a lot of fun to write.  :)

Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it, and I always look forward to hearing from you!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Anticipation

Great chapter!! So good to see inside what is going on with Edward as well! :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Edward's POV is fun to write in this one.  :)  He's pretty smitten with her.  Thanks for the review, hun!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

Great chapter!!! I am so excited for their date, and weekend :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks, hun!  Not to worry, the next chapter is their date and I think you'll really enjoy it!  :)

As always, I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Finally

Great chapter! Loved the date and extra dessert! :) Can't wait to see the rest of their weekend!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

So sorry I am bit behind on review replies!  But I am doing my best to get caught up.  So glad you liked the date and extra dessert.  Edward is pretty yummy!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - The Morning After

Great chapter!!! Such a exhausting weekend! LOL :) LOVED Mei! :) Can't wait for more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Glad you enjoyed it.  It would be exhausting, but totalllllly worth it.  I am glad you liked Mei!  I could totally see this Edward charming women of every age, no matter where he went.  :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Still Distracted

aww I love Esme!!! Can't wait to read more! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm having a blast writing her!  :)  I appreciate the nice review.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Girl Talk

Love Alice and Jasper's story! :) So cruel she was, but at least he didn't give up!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, glad you liked it! I had a lot of fun telling it! She was, but Jasper was tough.  Would you like an outtake of that? I am considering writing one, if anyone is interested.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - So Much

Love it! :) And I love that they are keeping communication open! That is sooooo important!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Yes.  Open communication is key.  They're doing really well together I think!  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Soon

great chapter! Yeah something is going on with Bree :( Hopefully they can get her to open up and figure out what it is and help her :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Yeah, they'll slowly start to put some pieces together as they go.  Just remember, you haven't seen everything yet!  :)  Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Exes and Embarrassment

LOVED this one! :) Meeting with the ex can be awkward, I can say that I am not friends with any of my ex's but that is mostly because I dated them all in high school.  Her reaction to his portfolio was priceless! Can't wait for more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, glad you enjoyed it.  I'm definitely friends with a few of mine.  We don't necessarily hang out much anymore, but we still chat online occasionally.  I dated some awesome guys, even if they're weren't the ones I wanted to be with for the rest of my life, they were amazing people.  I'd have a hard time totally losing contact with them, you know?

My husband and I hung out with my ex and some friends of his a few times and I was so pleased that they got along well.  No jealousy, no weirdness, and they really had fun together.  It was awesome.  If he didn't live all the way across the country I am sure the guys would be friends and hang out without me!

Yes, I had a blast with the portfolio and Bella's reaction!  I've been dying to post that scene for a while now.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Meddling

would LOVE to see that! 



Author's Response:

Awesome, I'll keep that in mind!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Much Needed Distraction

Great chapter!!! :) So HOT! They defintely needed a night out! Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thank you! So glad you liked it.  And yes,the night out really helped distract both of them  Thanks for the review, I always love hearing from you!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Fourth of July

wow! I LOVED this chapter... I think after all the drama with her car they needed a day to just relax and unwind a bit :) Can't wait to read more!!! So excited to see more details unfold with her car and what is going on with Bree! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it! And yes, the day to relax was very much needed.  Glad you enjoyed it.  And trust me, there's more to come about what happened with her car and Bree!  Thanks for the nice review, hun!  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 31: A&J Outtake - Nipples of the Virgin

amazing ending to this story and LOVED the outtake for A and J! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

I don't know how I missed replying to this!  I am thrilled that you enjoyed the ending to the story.  Glad you liked A&J's outtake.  I had a lot of fun writing it.  Thank you for all your sweet reviews, I always appreciate them.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - On Edge

wow!!! So yeah, I am thinking it has to be Bree, because there is just too much there... but I can't wait to read more!!!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Love hearing your thoughts on it.  Thanks for the review, hun!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Getting Her Attention

omg! so excited for the next few chapters to find out everything! 

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

I really think you're going to love them!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Destruction and Hope

wow Poor Bella :( So excited to read more!!! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Yeah, she's having a rough time, isn't she?  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - Answers

I knew there was something wrong with her... Can't wait to read more! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Yeah, Bree is a bit of a mess.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - Peace in the Aftermath

So I have had a rought couple of weeks in RL but I am still here reading and trying to catch back up slowly. 

 

Great chapter.... Bella really needed this time with everyone to sort out all of her feelings.  I loved the part with James :) Off to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, I am so sorry to hear about your RL being rough.  I hope it turns around.  This story will still be here if you need a little more time.  NO Rush.  :)

Glad you likd the chapter.  And yes, having the time to sort out her feelings was a huge help.  She has a great support system.  So glad you liked the part with James. 

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Double Dating

Loved it, So happy that Jessica and Mike seem to have had a great start! :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Yep, Jessica and Mike are off to a good start and B&E can finally enjoy their life together.  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Coming Together

LOVED it! The letter coming from Bree I agree gave Bella the closure that she needed.  :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Yay, glad to hear it.  I'm glad you liked the letter from Bree, and thought it was something she needed.  I really wanted to give Bella that closure. Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94882
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Entryway

wow! Poor Maggie :( Hopefully Heidi will realize that all she would be doing is hurting Maggie more if everything comes out... Can't wait to read more!!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's a rough time for Maggie.  And Heidi has seen how devastated Maggie is, she knows she needs to keep her mouth shut.  Thanks for the review! I appreciate it.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

Amazing!! I was so pleased to see that Heidi has learned from her past.  Can't wait to read more :) 

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Yeah, Heidi really has come a long way, hasn’t she?  Glad you liked it.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk

they are lucky! Good job on them keeping to themselves at work, but it was only really 1 week, will they be able to keep it up? Only time will tell! :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Yes, things could have been muuuuch worse.  They're certainly going to try to be on their best behavior.  You're right though, only time will tell if they manage to pull it off.  Thanks for te review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - Silverton, Oregon

Great chapter!! Can't wait to see the rest of their weekend :) 



Author's Response: So glad you liked it. I think you'll really love the rest of the weekend. Thanks for the review, I appreciate your feedback so much!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Break Room

so excited to see the next part of this one now!!!!

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  I am sorry the updates can't be faster, I'm trying to keep everything in sync with Twilighted.  Glad you enjoying it!  And thanks for the review.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center

:) excited to see this one expanded!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

I'm really excited to continue it.  It's going to be a fun one.  And of course I'm thrilled to have you on board! Always love your reviews, hun!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Thirst Wine Bar

Great chapter!! I think it was great that Edward ended up being distracted and Bella was able to approach Jasper on her own, looks much better down the line! :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  And yes, it worked out much better for Bella to approach Jasper.  It makes her look great!  I think you'll love the next chapter!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - The Swan's House

Great chapter, Poor Bella, but really I think that Charlie's reaction is normal for any father finding out what he just did, he may not have handled it well, but hopefully he can realize that she is being careful and they can work it out.  Can't wait to read more.

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

I think his concerns were normal, the way he expressed them was definitely bad.  He will come around, it's just going to take some time.  Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom

Great chapter!!! UH oh ... well you knew that was gonna happen, they really haven't been too careful! :) Can't wait for more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  And yep, they've been being really risky.  It's hard to keep a secret like that, even when you're being on your best behavior, and they definitely haven't been.  Thanks for the review, hun!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

Amazing as usual!!! :) Such a steamy weekend they had, and now the ice cold bucket of water is being dumped on them in the form of Edward's daughter :) Can't wait to read more!!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks, hun!  Glad you liked it.  The steamy weekend was so fun to write.  And yep, reality is here and it's not a fun one for them.  The next chapter will post soon!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen

Great chapter! and I love that she is thinking about things rationally now, (even if she should have done that before)  Can't wait to read more!!!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Yeah, generally speaking, Bella is pretty mature.  She just lost her head there for a bit.  But now she's trying to make sure she doesn't make another rash decision without considering the conequences.  Thanks for the nice review as always!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office

I think that Bella is being very smart about everything, but as hot as it is, they probably should cool it down at work before someone sees something and it all blows up :( Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

She knows she was a bit reckless before, and she's trying to be more cautious now.  And yes, they definitely need to avoid any more situations like that while at work.  It's not going to be easy for either of them, either.  Thanks for the nice review hun!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Living Room

Well I guess they could have gone more in depth but they do have a good portion of things worked out.  I wonder if they will actually be able to keep it secret though and if there were any cameras that caught them.  Can't wait to read more!!!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

It's certainly not the last conversation about this they'll be having!  It's going to be difficult for them to keep it a secret, but they are going to try.  Thanks for the nice review as always.  :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - Home

I am loving how much progress they are making! I am just hoping that they don't have too many bumps ahead :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for the nice review!  It was a very memorable Christmas for them, wasn't it?  And nope, the bumps are over, they have a lot of wonderful things coming their way.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Shower

Great chapter!!! :) Poor Edward, he just needs to work out the mess in his head, but that won't be easy.

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  And yeah, he's certainly trying to work out the mess in his head.  It will take time, but he'll get there.  He wants to be with Bella, and that'll be a great motivator.  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Past

Great chapter...loved seeing what happened to bring him to the point he was at! Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

I thought you would like this!  Back to Bella's POV for the next chapter, but I might do another EPOV or two for the story.  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Terrace

Great chapter! Love the flowers :) And yeah they needed to come up with a cover story, because it will be obvious that she is seeing someone, hopefully it won't cause any problems, but I am sure they will handle it if there is any! :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked the flowers, I've been eager to post this chapter for a while.  And yes, it's a tricky situation, but they're trying to make it work.  And they will be able to handle anything that gets thrown at them.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library

LOVED it! :) And yeah Maggie is a charmer, but aren't all 16 year old girls? LOL

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  And yes, you do have a point.  :)  Plus, Maggie has had more to deal with than many girls that age.  She'll come around.  Eventually.

Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Bella's Living Room

Great chapter.... and Well Alice's reaction was justified, but a bit harsh, she probably could have voiced all of her concerns a bit nicer, but I think that Bella is right her break-up with James is part of why it came out the way it did.  Edward's visit to her apartment was risky.... probably not a good idea for them to make a habit of that one.  Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks, hun!  And yeah, Alice was pretty harsh.  Bella certainly would have listened better if Alice had approached it differently. They will work it out, it's just going to take some time and effort on both their parts.

Edward's visit could have been risky, but I think they needed it.  And it was certainly better than doing something at work. 

Thanks for the review, hun!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - The Dining Room

So happy that the dinner went well! Love Rose as the voice of reason! :) Can't wait for more.

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Glad you liked dinner! It did go well.  Rose is definitely the voice of reason, and it's great that Bella has someone like that to turn to.  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Cafe

I am so happy that her and Alice were able to really talk and patch things up, and Alice really had some good advice now that it didn't come out so harsh.  Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Yep, it's good progress.  They haven't worked it through completely, but it's a good start for them.  And yes, Alice's advice, when worded more politely, was easier for her to take.  Thanks gor the great rview, as always!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Front Porch

Amazing!!! LOVED IT!!! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, yay! So glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the nice review hun.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: EPOV Outtake - Maggie's Room

wow!! I LOVE how Edward handled everything! Looking forward to see how the dinner goes! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Glad you enjoyed the way he handled the conversation with Maggie.  It was difficult, but necessary.  And the dinner is actually 2 chapters a way, but I think you'll like it a lot!  Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Bella's Bedroom

wow!!! So much happened in these last 3 chapters! I was wondering how long it would be before everything became to much for Bella to handle..... So glad that Edward was there for her and put her first and that Maggie understood as well.  Excited for their trip to Forks! 

-Kate



Author's Response:

It as been an eventful last few chapters, hasn't it?  Yeah, Bella was bound to hit that breaking point eventually and all things considered, she did really well for a long time. 

Glad you liked that Edward was there for her and put her first.  Now that she's getting to know Bella, Maggie's going to be a whole lot more understanding about things.  I think you'll like the trip to Silverton.  Remember E&B are in Portland, Oregon, and her parents live an hour South of there in Silverton.  They aren't in Forks, WA!

Thanks for the review, I love hearing your thoughts on the story!