Reviews by bronzeandbeautiful
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514751
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

love your story its like a roller coster that chuggs to the top, free falls, then goes in to loops and twist and turns!!! awssome

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

I miss you just reread the whole story still awesome

Solar Lives by may of rose 2 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Come with Sailor Moon Bella and the rest of the Sailor Scouts as they battle the evil nag a verse monsters and have a little Cullen fun on the side! Short, fun, action-packed chapters with weekly updates!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe, Crossover, Sailor Moon
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15572 Read Count: 1377
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2012 Updated: 01 Jul 2012
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 17 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ok so english 101 never start a sentence with "hello my name is". try to keep "i" out of sentences as much as possible. doing these two things will entice a reader to be even more drawn into your story; also it may challege you to come up with more indepth ways of writing. i do hope you take this adavice constructively and not matiously.

Double Imprint by Sassymami Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 32]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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I thought I had it all. The girl, the job and the family but I still felt empty until I saw him. He had the most captivating eyes I ever saw. Hazel with golden flakes and a smile to die for, but how does he fit in? Bella/Paul/Leah

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Paul/Leah
Genre: Drama, Femme Slash, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41023 Read Count: 25962
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2013 Updated: 07 Dec 2014
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I dont understand why kim is seen to be ignorant and closed minded just because she doesn't believe in the same thing as bella or Emily the way I see it kim gas choose not to accept the concept of unnatural relationships and everyone can have choice to accept or to not accept right? Why does it seem like there is the force that she must accept or she is ignorant and close minded. I dont like beef, am I ignorant and closed minded because I refuse to eat beef or believe that everyone shouldnt eat it?



Author's Response:

You are the second person that has an issue with this. Let me ask you something do you look down at others that eat meat? Do you make it your mission to preach at them saying that meat is not good for them, that your way is better than theirs and that you are right no matter how others feel about it? This is what Kim is doing. She doesnt have to accept it, shit she doesnt even have to like it but that doesnt mean that she should throw her belief onto others. Leah and Bella are happy, the others dont mind their relationship, all they see is a happy couple. Kim doesnt seem to see that, all she see are her beliefs and how she was taught and that Leah and Bella are wrong.

Being open minded is being able to accept that not everythign is as you like it to be, that there are differences in the world and with time everything changes. If we were to meet and go out to eat would you look down at me for ordering steak? or would you just accept the fact that I eat diffferent than you but in no way, shape or form it changes the type of person I am.

Do Leah and Bella have to act like a couple not in love because Kim is uncomfortable at their relationship? Why should Kim be comforted and be put above everyone else? If she doesnt like it then she can either leave or just deal with it. She already made her dislike made no need to keep pushing the issue.

If you dont like the story hun then dont read. The pairing is a Leah and Bella pairing, if you are not comfortable with that pairing why read. Are you going to have a problem when Paul gets involved?

Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think kim does have something there same sex lovin is unnatural but in todays world we have natural and unnatural concepts not judging just stating a fact



Author's Response:

You said you are not judging but then you call it unnatural. How is it two people being in loving comitted relationship unnatural. It doent matter if they the same sex or not, they have a right to love whomever they want.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You are brave and you are strong. I love your stories I count the days til next Sunday.  Sometimes I think about not reading for like two weeks so I can read more of the story but then I get curious about what you wrote for the next chapter. Lol 

                                                       B&B



Author's Response:

Hello everyone!  Thanks for all your kind words.  We want to start off by addressing some of the frequent questions.  This quote (“I know they love me, really ... I know but, it’s strange, maybe it’s just me. You know that I see and hear things differently from the rest of the world, but thank you for doing this and answering my questions.”) from chapter five had someone ask, what Bella meant.   Bella is referring to how she perceives her family versus the way others do.  Jacob is not a card we are showing yet, you’ll have to be patient to see what he has up his sleeve.  Did Bella hear him in the shower?  We have yet to hear that answer from Bella ourselves, but in my thoughts she surely did.  Will there be any chapters in Bella’s POV?  She is talking a little here and there, but nothing’s set in stone as of yet.  Shouldn’t Edward as a good Dom cancel the scene?  The scene is not canceled, but it has been modified from the original way it was written.  This was for several reasons.  We have sixteen chapters written, yet we still continue to makes tweaks and changes here and there before posting.  When we started making him have hard feelings about the upcoming scene, or feel nervous about it, we started discussing it more.  We found a way to appease us, our readers and yet still show what we wanted to show.  So trust us—please.  I’m glad we haven’t fallen into the pleads for more chapters to post faster, because in the last week we haven’t gotten another one done.  Of course WeeKittyAndTAT, JessAndTAT and TeamAllTwilight all submitted pieces of work into the Fandom Fights LLS.  WeeKittyAndTAT did an Epilogue of sorts for Ropin’ A Sitter.  JessAndTAT did a future take on Bases Loaded.  I wrote a new fan fiction novella, it’s called, The Things That Make You Click.  All of these will post to our FFN and TWCS accounts, but not until after December first.  Watch for two one-shots to post soon to our account, the winners will be announced tomorrow in the More is MORE contest.  Think that brings you all up to speed.  Feel free to PM us and ask questions if you have them.  Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  “Felix, my father is coming in tonight. Please have him come straight to my office.  Keep everyone else out until I’m done. If there are any problems, I trust you to deal with them accordingly.”

Felix nods at me, but doesn’t say anything. I carry on, walking toward Jenks, when I’m stopped by Tanya.

“Sir, I have some news that I would like to share with you.”

I turn and face Tanya who looks like the cat who got the cream. “Tanya, I’m very busy, it’ll have to wait until tomorrow.” 

I move away from her, but she grabs my wrist pulling me back. “It’s very important, Sir.”

I yank my arm away from her, turning to face her once more. “Tanya, don’t you tell me when I will speak with you. I’m busy, so unless you’re going to die in the next five minutes and need me to call an EMT for you, I don’t want to know. And never touch me again without my consent!”

I walk away without waiting for her response. As I approach Jenks, he shakes his head, looking behind me at Tanya.

“Ah, still trying to get your attention then?”

I nod at him, opening up my office.

“I’d stay away from that one; she’s clearly after money, fame and quite frankly, has ‘whore’ written all over her.”

I chuckle a little at his quite accurate synopsis of Tanya. “Yes, I know. Those are the main reasons I have always refused her, that, and she makes me lose brain cells every time she opens her mouth. But enough about her, what did you find out.”

Jenks looks at me sadly and I can clearly see the worry on his face. “This is not going to be easy to read. Even harder for you I’d say, because you’ve become somewhat involved with the girl.”

I nod at him in understanding. “Just show me.”

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98299
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Im so confused.......This whole story has me do I like it or do I hate it?

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272402
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am loving everything you do can't wait to see what you come up with next! Your amazing :)

The Devil In Me by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

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Banner made by Fallingsnow Winter 

 

The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.

 

And StillDreaming85

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52216
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2014 Updated: 19 Apr 2015
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Your story reminds me of the story of Presphone and Hades. Really intriguing. Im not sure if that is your motivation but its seems cool so far.

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Lol you said it all I know about Devonshire is that it was mentioned in the book pride and prejudice and thats my book! Keep on writing and should you change from north to south to west to anrtica I shall follow along happily knowing its just a story that's really well written. 

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

When will they admit they have feelings for eachother....I feel like a two year old on Christ-mas waiting to see whats gonna happen between them.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. They will admit it, but I haven't written that part yet. It's very clear in my head, though. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Summary:

Three families, all intertwined by a crime. The Hales, Swans and Cullens. The Swan sisters just lost their father and all of their money. The Hales run the most important car manufacturer in the east coast. The Cullens are paying off a debt. 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46869 Read Count: 3736
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2014 Updated: 18 Oct 2014
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

is there a plot anywhere in this story ...i feel like its just random things happening



Author's Response:

Yeah, sorry about that. Mainly it's to keep all of the readers confused and later on everything starts making sense and random events actually aren't quite as random as they seem. Thanks for reviewing!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 4 (part 3)

a longer chapter?

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99350
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Bella's Background

I understand that this is a work of fiction but homosexuality is addressed in the Bible. You did say you were trying to be realistic. (which is my reason for posting)

Genesis 19:1-13; Leviticus 18:22; 20:13; Romans 1:26-27; 1 Corinthians 6:9

Sin is sin and we all do it but please know God is not pleased with any of it and will judge sin the same.

 1 Corinthians 6:11; 2 Corinthians 5:17; Philippians 4:13   

Im not trying to force you to believe in anything you don't want to and I won't be offended if you choose not to change" the Bible NEVER said anything about gays". I just wanted you to know that Gods Word does touch on homosexuality but does not make it a higher or lower offense of sin.

I like your story and can't wait to read more.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  I guess I should change it slightly.

Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The Whole World Stops

Don't forget to cite! ;)



Author's Response:

Done :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He could have chosen any female wolf in the room. Why did he have to choose me, the lone half-breed?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32608 Read Count: 178532
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2016 Updated: 06 May 2017
Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

*suggestion than an order...