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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
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Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Beautiful!

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Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh my goodness I wondered every since book one if Paul would make a reappearance. How will Mr. Grey react? Not well I imagine I'm so waiting for the next update. Oh btw love the lemons.



Author's Response:

Good. Because this book willhave lots of lemons. Happy Greys are active Greys. 

E.

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Tissue alert, the wedding was so touching and sweet the vows were Amazing, I loved every minute of it. Little miss Grace "Fuck" Funnnneeee, I had a suspicion she may have Anna's ring. Poor Kate I wonder if Elliot's Manwhore ways have returned and if so will Christian really be okay with turning over the surveillance tapes of his brothers activities. Well written just as every other chapter you've ever posted. Thank you for the continuation of this beautiful story I just cannot get enough.

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Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Teddy what a little charmer he so adorable. Love the update thank you.

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update always excited when you post another chapter.

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Excellent as always, you are just so amazing I love your writting so much. Yet again you allow so many different emotions to be experienced in your stories laughter, suspense, joy, love, hurt, comfort, and romance to name a few. Please continue to spoil us by continuing to write. Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

Sorry this is so late, again. For some reason some of the reviews weren't coming to my mailbox. But thanks again.

E.

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Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thank you for the Ray visit he's such an important part of Anna's life it was nice to have some Daddy Grandpa time. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for following and reviewing. I thought it was about time for some Ray.

E.

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh no yikes what will they do Anna handcuffed Christian having a heart attack this is wow uhh nail bitting. Thank you for the fabulous chapter and Happy Thanksgiving.

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Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Thank you for the wonderful update. I laughed out loud at the Oreos comment. 

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Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I just love Grace the way you write her little words brings out her spunky personality. Super happy for Ray he needs some loving in his life too. Dun dun dun dun hope Christian does blow a gasket and right before their Anniversary, Anna should have fessed up already to the meeting with Christian's Grandmother. Thanks for the update you never disappoint.

 

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Thank you so much for the update, I'm so glad Christian came home for their anniversary.

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Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I'm so happy Christian came home, forgave Anna, and met his Grandmother. Beautiful chapter thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a comment. I appreciate it.

E.

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Thank you for the update.

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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Thank you for the update.

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Great chapter thanks for the update.

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Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Hot chapter, I hope Tommy is okay. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Thank you for the update.

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Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Oh know I hope there has not been another kidnapping or hostage situation. Thank you for the update.

 

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I love Tommy poor little baby must be scared in a new environment especially when he doesn't appear to have had much stability in his life and as for Lorna what a piece of work hitting on Christian after all Anna has done for her and her son I don't care if she was high at the time or not so uncool. Lorna doesn't seem to be all that interested in Tommy or concerned for his well being I wonder if she will follow through with treatment and if she doesn't will Christian and Anna continue to take care of him. Great chapter thank you for the update.

 

 

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Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

How sad Tommy didn't know what daddy means & Christian and Anna grieving Sam. Thank you for the update looking forward to the next one.

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Well I thought Helen was inappropriate and crossed the line bringing up the Paterson lady and by prying and asking the wife of your boss personal questions and discussing his sex appeal, um can you say elevator beat down. Will Christian be upset with Helen for crossing the line?  I'm glad Lorna not only realized that Anna's intentions are looking after Tommy's best interest but she also appreciates it. Thank you for the great chapter.

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Great chapter thank you for the update.

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Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Weapon of ass destruction hillarious, sexy chapter thank you for the update.

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Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

 I hope your trip is going well, thank you so much for the wonderful update.

 

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Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I had a weird feeling Mia may have bought the trolls house can you say awkward, especially after what happened to sweet baby Sam. Renee is such a shit mom it just goes to show that biology is not always all that its cracked up to be because Ray is ten times a better parent than Renee. Has Lorna relapsed, overdosed, run off or decided not to parent Tommy? I have a feeling the late night Saturday phone call has something to do with her. I'm glad this story has continued I still love it as much as ever. Thank you so much for the update 

 

 

 

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Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

I'm sorry to hear about what you have been going through. I love this story and appreciate the updates, first and foremost please take care of yourself. Your health and well being comes first. 

Every part of this chapter was fantastic, Christian and Tommy at breakfast was beyond precious with the coffee and newspaper, but most of all Tommy calling him daddy and their hug was so touching and heart warming.

Thank you again for the update, get well soon.

Fefe :)

 

 

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Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Thank you for the excellent chapter :)

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Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Yes I think Ana will need to be brought in line as well. Thank you or the lovely update :)

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Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Oh my, nothing gets past Mr. Grey. I'm looking forward on this playing out. Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Thank you for the update <3

 

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Oh no, I really hope Mia pulls through.

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Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Loved the update, thank you :)

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Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

Thank you for the update <3

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Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

I'm glad peep is on the mend. Thank you for the update and congrats on your new job :)

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Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

I hope he's really going to Taiwan, but have a feeling he's not. Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

What a lovely tea party. It seams Grace may be the hardest to convince when it comes to adding to the family. Thank you for the lovely update :)

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Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

I hope Peep gets better. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 28 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Great chapter :) 

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Date: 28 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

Ana was wonderful with the wives, wining them over just like she did with Christian and everyone else. Love the sexy time ;)

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Date: 21 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

Love the cuteness of the kiddos😀

Summary:

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Bella has been lusting after Edward Cullen, VP at Providence Medical Center in Portland, for years. Too bad he's married, and her boss. Rated for language and lemons. Entry for the Taste of the Forbidden Contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10656 Read Count: 3364
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Break Room

Excellent story I'm super thrilled you're continuing i'll be adding this to my favorites.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Glad to hear you know about the continuation and that you're reading "Beyond the Break Room".  Another chapter should go up soon.  I'll look forward to hearing your thoughts over there!  Thanks for the nice review.

You Own Me by bee1982, too_cute_24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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You Own Me banner made by the talented Ellen. 

The continuation of Bee1982's  one shot 'One Wild Night'

written with toocute24. 

At the roll of the dice, Edward wins what he has been dreaming of for the last two years. A night with his mob boss's son's girlfriend, sexy pole dancer Isabella Swan. What will happen in one night full of passion and lust?

What dangers will follow after their one wild night


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 241001
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
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Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: You Own Me

Edward has to do a better job at keeping his feelings in check in the presence of Aro & Alec. Great chapter :)

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Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: You Own Me

I really hope that Emmett is the person that walked in on Edward and Bella.

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Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: You Own Me

I think Alec set it up so that Edward and his men would be ambushed and killed.

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Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: You Own Me

Hot :)

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Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: You Own Me

Oh my I'm so loving this story and thoroughly enjoyed their steamy night together. I don't see how Bella and Edward are going to be able to stay away from each other moving forward which means trouble ahead. 

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Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: You Own Me

Edward putting space between himself and Bella is a great idea, however the distance could make there feelings for one another grow even stronger. 

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Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: You Own Me

Edward and Bella were quite lucky that Angela was the one to see their near kiss instead of someone else like Jane.

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Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: You Own Me

Great chapter :)

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Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: You Own Me

It seems our star crossed lovers are becoming quite brazen and it's getting harder for them to hide their feelings for one another. I'm so glad Bella turned down Alec's marriage proposal which was far from romantic. 

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: You Own Me

How scary, I'm glad Bella and Angela got away and made it safely to the mansion. 

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: You Own Me

Hmm I wonder what Bella and Edward will do to pass the time locked in the house together with Alec and Aro out of town, looks promising :)

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: You Own Me

Edward showed up in the nick of time.

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: You Own Me

Wow who knew my dislike for Alec could grow even stronger, what a d bag using Bella as a shield. On the bright side of things Bella should no longer doubt that Edward has real feelings for her that go beyond just sex.

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: You Own Me

Yay :)

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Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: You Own Me

Yummy citrus filled goodness :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Adult Content: BDSM When Isabella’s contract with Master Jasper Whitlock is ending. Master introduces her to his friend, Edward Cullen. Will Isabella be the perfect submissive for Master Cullen? Will Edward be the perfect Master for Isabella?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181505 Read Count: 281178
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2012 Updated: 01 Sep 2013
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Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Sunday Kind Of Love

I'm sure Victoria is still involved with James what are the chances that she just so happen to rent a home in Bella's gated community not very likely. That would be a nightmare scenario having Victoria/James as neighbors. Thank you for the amazing chapter.



Author's Response:

Yep, your right she is. I just haven't figured out if she is a willing participate or if she is being forced. In chapter, Easy, Peaceful... James's pov talks about moving into the gated community, and then Victoria shows up. So, yeah...Bella struggles with them being so close. She just knows about Vic at the moment. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Do You Wanna Play?

I'm glad I found your story and am very intrigued great start.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you found it too. I can always use more reviews. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Play With Me

You write playroom beyond well excellent in fact. I say definetely yes to an outake from Jasper and Alice POV.

Author's Response:

Then by all mean see Outtakes and Extras under my name. Thanks by the way, that makes me feel good. I have had people ask "Are you sure you don't participate in the lifestyle?" My answer is always Yes, I'm sure, just have read alot of fan fictions with it in it, or books. I have also researched a lot, and I have a very, very active imagination.  Very vanilla.

If my brain was a computer in the sense it was constantly spitting out stories. I would have a hundred of them, unfortunely, I can only write so many at a time. LOL Keep reading I'm glad you enjoyed.

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Hit Me Baby One More Time

That was incredible!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, and keep reading.

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: I Touch Myself

That was beyond steamy and unlike anything I've ever read before it was hot.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked, was that a good 'unlike anything you've ever read before'. **wringging hands** I worry a lot thinking that maybe, just maybe it's a little much.

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....

Um you really do have a way with words great visualizing the scene whew is all I can say.

Author's Response:

Some times I worry about my words, and think I need to clean them up some. I figure the story being what it is could use a lot more color. Thanks for the review

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: But Whips and Chains....

Excellent chapter thanks for the update

Author's Response:

Your welcome, and I am glad that you liked. Keep reading thanks for the review.

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Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Excite Me

Definetely a lemontastic chapter

Author's Response:

Yes, we all like our lemons... thanks for the review.

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Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Moving On Up

Even though Charlie is understanding of Bella's choices it would still be so awkward to have to vet your daughters Dom, but necessary with everything she's been through.



Author's Response:

Yes, I so agree...I think it hard to begin with just being around a man that you know will be having sex with your daughter. Let alone add the fact that he found out in the worst of ways by James throwing that information in his face. I think given the circumstances Charlie has been very caring for his daughter even though he doesn't agree with her lifestyle. My dad would hit the fan, and probably wouldn't speak to me. LOL Thanks for the review.

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: You've Got A Friend In Me

On my way to pick up Luna beads stat! Thanks for the amazing chapter



Author's Response:

LOL yeah, while researching I come across them, and thought strongly about ordering me some. Hahaha Thanks for the review.

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Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Prisoner of Love

She pushed for a punishment and got one she should not try to top from the bottom to get it she should communicate with her master and boyfriend. Cannot wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review as always love to know what you think. Update will be a long soon, still writing the next one.

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Every Day of the Week

Thank you for the update, glad Bella finally knows James is near by she needs to know to be alert. Great chapter and as always you rock.

Author's Response:

**blushing** thanks. Soon we will see more, a lot of people wanted Edward to come clean about seeing James, and I knew he needed too. So, I figure this was one way. He could have just told her but what fun would that be. Thanks for the review as always.

Who am I? by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 364]
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Banner made by  vamp_luvor

My life drastically changed after I saw an ad online; I still cannot believe that I answered it!  I never expected it to turn out like this, but anything was better than before. When the pain became too much to bear; I realized that love heals.

This is a BDSM story A/H E/B HEA

Beta'd by: RAH070890


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21554 Read Count: 112978
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 24 Mar 2015
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Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Can I do this?


 

Intriguing, excited for the next chapter.

Summary:

On her way to start her life over in Chicago, Bella listens to Charlie and decides to take Amtrak for 45 hours of scenic travel, but when a mix up with the booking of her sleeper car is discovered, she finds the best scenery will be inside her room in the form of Edward Cullen, the man who will sleeping below her on the trip. Hijinks ensue.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10558 Read Count: 1913
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2013 Updated: 20 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is one of the best stories I've read and I've read a large quantity on this and other sites. Thank you for the great story, I couldld so see you continuing on with it.

Summary:

Isabella's stepsister is a royal pain in the ass and has taken something she wants back. She is bounded and determined to make what Rosalie has her own. The questions is does he want her?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Mpreg, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Forbidden Series, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9914 Read Count: 2396
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2013 Updated: 14 Mar 2013
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Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Little Sister Don't You Dare

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, wow Rosalie is so horrible to Bella and Edward. Thank you for another great one

Author's Response:

Your welcome ... Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

He Didn't Know by msbullcullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]
Summary:

Edward and Bella thought they would be together forever. They didn't know that fate would pull them apart. Edward didn't know many things. He didn't know people could be so cruel. He didn't know that one night at work would change his life forever. However, he DID know that he loved Bella with all of his heart and they belonged together. He didn't know how but they would be together.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35786 Read Count: 41109
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2013 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
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Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Beautiful chapter, moving to the next one to find out what news they received.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Noooo, poor ExB.

Author's Response: Missed it agaiThank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Renee says no but what about Charlie he should stand up for Bella.

Author's Response: Stay with me. We will get there.

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great intriguing start :)



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Prom night nice :)



Author's Response: I know a little cliche' but I thinks it's totally E/B. thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes, let's see what happens :)



Author's Response: Thank you got reading and reviewing. Hope you like what happens. :)

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm nervous about what is ahead for these two. Thank you for the update. 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow Renee is a complete lunatic Bitch to seek unhappiness for her own child, poor Bella. Thank you fr the update. 



Author's Response: My extreme apologies. I missed all you reviews and I am so very sorry. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm so relieved Charlie had not participated in absusing and mistreating Bella. Initially I had the impression he was aware of and an active participant in the bad parenting, with that being said Charlie still should have been a more observant parent. I'm really enjoying the story, thanks for the update :)

 



Author's Response: So so so sorry I missed your review. Obviously I lost my mind when school started. I am so glad you are enjoying it. Charlie is blinded by love. All will come to light Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Renee is so bitter. Thank you for the update.

 



Author's Response: Sorry I missed your review. Thank you for reviewing. I have updated with 6 new chapters. Hope you enjoy.

Higher by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summer of 1994: Dial-up internet. Pagers. Walkmans. AOL chat rooms. O.J in a white Bronco. And blazingly hot weather in Brooklyn where eighteen-year-old Bella Swan is filling her days making ice cream sundaes before she starts college. But one long night – full of Ecstasy, subway rides, dark dance clubs, and a boy she doesn't want to stay away from – may change everything. ExB, mostly canon. AH. HEA. 

Banners by KrisMkyStitch and Deebelle1

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155380 Read Count: 127034
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2013 Updated: 01 May 2013
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Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Day Six

Wow very well written explosive chapter, I felt like a fly on the wall in the room.  Bella really let Renee have it for sure. I almost felt sorry for Renee a bit, but she totally had it coming and probably deserved a bit more. I wonder just how long Phil was actully lingering in the apartment watching Bella, to long I imagine. Thank you for the fantastic early update:)

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Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Just Bella

I'm so loving this story and Edward is oozing sexiness:)

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Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Dial Up

Yippee they're there cannot wait will be checking my email for updates:)

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Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Breaking the Ice

Oh yeah he should definitely keep doing what he's doing. It seems as though Emmett prefers Bella to Rose or perhaps he wants a little sandwich for the fantastic update:)

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Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: The Tunnel

Yeah super hot, lmao when they started singing and dancing to tootsie roll that song was the shit and always played in the club. Thanks for the update you rock.

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Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Swan: Ice Cream Scooper

I knew I would love this story and you didn't disappoint, even though I grew up in Cali reading this story makes me feel like I'm actually in New York. Oh the 90's good times for sure and I agree Ace of Base is good happy feel good music and Walkman was a damn near necessity back in the day. Thank you for the amazing story, super excited for updates:)

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Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Numb

Edward is going to freak out when Bella doesn't show up at his dad's house and she won't be able to answer the phone at her mothers because she's knocked out from the valium. What are we going to do with these two crazy kids both thinking they know what's best for the other good intentions or not. Thank you for the update, sad that its almost over.

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Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Ceiling Effect

Wow for being Edwards cousin Emmett is a huge back bitter and cockblocker and Rose is a terrible friend I mean Damn who lies to there friend for money. I think Rose and Em are perfect for one another. Thanks for the update.

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Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 12: E Bomb

Simply perfect and beautiful sigh:) and I love that that Phill got two black eyes out of the deal. You Rock, thank you for the update.

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Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 16: End of the Day

Oh so good from start to finish. I've been waiting for an update for Higher all day, checking my email like a complete psycho when I woke up this morning, in the car on the way to work, at work throughout the day, in the car on the way home from work and then numerous times after I arrived home. Yeah I guess you can say I love this story. Thank you for the fantastic update:)

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Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: A New Day

Oh no their first fight, Edward is furious he can't really want her to leave. Please please please update soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285576
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 short but sweet

Edward finally asked her out, clapping hands and excited to see what you have planned for their date. Thank you for the excellent update :)

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Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 my secret recipe

 I so loved Bella putting skanky Tanya in her place and Vicky kicking dirty James to the curb. Thank you for the fantastic update :)

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Date: 20 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss

That was a delicious kiss indeed, thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

i hope they have more yummy kisses on their next date.

thanks for your review.