Reviews by Fefe
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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285576
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
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Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: pour ma douce

He's so thoughtful and a true gentleman:) Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

That is what he's aiming for.  He's had shallow and dysfunctional relationships and he's made the decision that he wants more and he's doing his best to get it.

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Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: cherry surprise

Fantastic chapter, love the v card cliffy at the end. Thank for the update please update soon I need in on that date :)



Author's Response:

I love his complete shock.  she already had his head in a spin by looking so sexy and then to tell him she's a virgin... it was just too much for our boy.

I hope he recovers quickly.

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Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 scallops and crab puffs

Fantastic update for this fantastic story. It was great how you explored their emotional connection as well as their physical connection. I felt teary when Bella discussed Charlie, Renee and Phill. Then you moved on effortlessly to their steamy elevator makeout session. Great job butterfly, keep the updates coming :)

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Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 virgin margarita

The dancing in the club and their time in the limo was super sexy, I also look forward to their more intimate dancing. Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 chocolate croissant as well as brioche

Oh no, poor Edward is so traumatized from his past relationships that he immedietly thought the worst of Bella.  I think he's jumping the gun and poor Bella must be devasted with Edward running out on her. I hope it's all a misunderstanding and these two can get back to dancing soon. I'm glad Aro and Marcus were not apart of their son's schemes  Thank you for the wonderful update :)

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Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 cup cake

Thanks for the excellent chapter I will be on pins and needles until the next update.



Author's Response:

thanks for your support of my story.

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Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie

Beautiful chapter, thank you butterfly :)



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Thanks sweets.

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Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 a hint of spice

I love these two together as well. Thank you for the update 



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They are adorable aren't they.

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Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

Thank you for another fantastic chapter :)

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Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 a baker's dozen

Thank you for the beautiful chapter Aileen :)

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Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

I loved all the backstory details in this chapter. I also love how Lil Bit and Edwards mother share a name. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

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Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

I love Victoria with her loud over the top personality. The nerve of Tanya is that you Edward honey, did she forget he dropped kicked her out of his life. I look forward to boardroom Bella putting Tanya in her place. Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

Jasper stepped right into the Lioness Den. I'm glad the confusion has been cleared up and our southern gentlemen was not there to harm Bella or Elizabeth. Thank you for the wonderful update :)

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Date: 28 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

This story always warms my heart and puts a smile on my face. Thank you for the wonderful update :)

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Date: 07 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I so did not see this coming and I'm in desperate need for the next chapter. Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

yeah that was a surprise alright.  Dear Edward, so much for him to deal with but i think he's up for it. 

I'll be posting the next chapter today.

thanks for your comments and support. 

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Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry

Love love the growing family, beautiful chapter <3

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98299
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
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Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward's being a big meanie, I hope Isabella gets to continue visiting her family and doesn't have to drop out of school. Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thank you for the update, I love th progression of the story. :)

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Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Great start, I love the story and I'm looking forward to reading more :)

 

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm really enjoying the story, glad we got to also see the gentle loving side of Edward. Thanks for the update and for the lemony goodness :)

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Date: 21 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward might be a tad pissed about Bella's smoke time, but good for her she's bonding with her brother in their own way :)

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Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm sure Edward is pissed off about Jake showing up, I hope he doesn't prevent Bella from seeing her family. Thank you for the update, looking forward to the next one.

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Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I like that Edward and Bella's brothers are getting along at the moment. Thank you for another fantastic chapter.

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I love the story, write it as you see fit if someone doesn't like they are more than free to read something else or write their own. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Let me just say I have been enjoying the story, I look forward to the updates and love the twist I didn't see coming. Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Love the update ladies :)

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Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thank your for the beautiful chapter ladies. I've really enjoyed the story and hope there's a baby or babies in the epi :)

How to Forget by Shadow Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Where do you go if you don't know who you are, and what if you find you don't want to remember?  Edward finds himself in Forks under suspicious circumstances, can Bella help him discover who he truly is?  BxE AH  NC-17 for lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131184 Read Count: 54714
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2013 Updated: 16 Dec 2014
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Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Edward has come a long way by excepting Bella's love and learning to except who he his now.

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Sexy sexy :)

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

No atonement needed, Edward has been struggling with his feelings of not being good enough with his returning unpleasant memories. I so happy they finally admitted their feelings for one another and were able to physically express it. I really hope Edward has put leaving to rest, he and Bella belong together. 

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Edward is so hard on himself, he could just as easily be in law enforcement or ex military with his knowledge of weapons, but he automatically assumes he was on the wrong side of the law. I love the near kiss and feel like the actual kiss us just around the corner. Fantastic chapter :)

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Fabulous heartwarming chapter <3

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Love Edward the protector :)

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Johnnie Walker may have clockblocked but he also got the party started :)

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I'm happy Bella offered to let Edward stay with her and glad he excepted. I'm not so sure Charlie will be thrilled about his daughters choice of roommate.

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Having a job bad being able to contribute will do wonders for Edward.

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I'm truly enjoying this story. I love the developing closeness Edward and Bella are experiencing. The two are obviously quite drawn to one another even if they cannot see it for themselves.

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I empathize with Edward/John as it has to be incredibly frustrating not having any memories or knowing who you are while being surrounded by complete strangers. Then on the other hand his former companions certainly didn't have his wellbeing in mind when they left him for dead. Maybe a blank slate and fresh start is just what he actually needs.

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Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Poor Bella being able to be there when Edward wakes up and for him to be in a different state. I know there's no way Edward will stay away from Bella. I look forward to their reunion.

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Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

It was only a matter of time before his past came looking for him. I hope Edward and Bella will overcome this new challenge.

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Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Thank you for sharing this beautiful story, I loved every minute of it <3



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much for reading, and for reviewing!  :)